"Her Damned Office Party" by Sean Devon (sean9696@aol.com).

This is the kind of story to which I usually give very low ratings. A guy catches his wife being fucked by another man, and he gets horny while he watches. The experience deepens their marital love for each other. Yeah, rightÉ.

The reason I hate this kind of story is that the plots are so simplistic and the characters so shallow. They leave me with either a "Yeah, right!" or "What a weirdo!" reaction.

This one is different. It's a poem that tells a story. Sort of like "Paradise Lost," only intelligible and not interminable. The poetic format gives the author the freedom to leave things unsaid and to still make sense.

I found this story to be quite arousing, largely because the emotions expressed in it made sense to me.