"Our Special Moment" by Ojo de Ella

"Our Special Moment" by Ojo de Ella (Voracious Reader repost). This story describes a hot lovemaking session during which the woman tells the man to just relax and enjoy it. And he does. Twice. This is a very hot story. It reminds me of Dulcinea's work, and that's a real compliment.

I suspect that this story started out as one of those second-person (you) narratives that people often write for their cyberlovers. This is an excellent example of the value of changing to the third person before posting the story. Try reading this story with "you" mentally inserted for "him." On second thought, don't. It's not nearly as hot or intense that way.