"Fantasy 1.0" by Wiley06 (reposted by Mr. Double (mrdouble@ix.netcom.com)). This author has run the gamut of my ratings. I have rated his stories as low as 1 and as high as 10. I suspect he would agree with my ratings: he knows how to write exceedingly well; it's just that sometimes he doesn't bother to develop his stories as fully as possible.

Another thing about this author is that he makes me nervous. I think he would be proud of that fact. When I read his stories I feel someone leering at me; I don't quite feel safe. Wiley doesn't write romances.

A final thing about Wiley is that he changes his number every year. When I first found his stories he was Wiley03. Last year he was Wiley05. By now he's probably Wiley07. My theory is that at the turn of the millennium he'll change his name to Smiley01 and write romances.

In this story the narrator spots a cute, wholesome teenager at a bus stop with her mother and fantasizes about all the neat things that he and his friends could do to her at a fraternity gangbang. Like I said, Wiley0x makes me nervous, and he's not writing romances yet.