"One Afternoon" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). Let me tell you two things that really piss me off. One: I come up with a really great rating system that's practically guaranteed to end my problem of too many 10's; and then the first time I try to use it I give not one but TWO stories perfect ratings in all three of my new categories! Two: I hate mindless sex; this story is mindless sex; yet I loved this story! This story is very hard to describe. Just try to imagine, "What kind of story filled with mindless sex - almost literally, mindless sex - could possibly thrill Celeste? If you can answer this question correctly, you may already know the plot of this story. Otherwise, you'll have to read it and find out.