This is a make believe story about make believe characters.  The backstory
is loosely based on the movies and comics.

My story archive: http://www.asstr.org/~brd/



Fantastic Four: A Family Affair 
(MF, anal, inc) 
by Big Red Dope (bigreddope@hotmail.com)

With a cocky grin on his face Johnny stepped from the shower and dried
off putting on his robe.  He smiled briefly at himself in the mirror before
heading towards his bedroom.  After the accident in space Reed, Susan, Ben,
and Johnny had taken up residence in Reed's top floor apartment while they
tried to get a handle on their symptoms and find a cure for them.

After they had defeated Dr.  Doom and saved the city they were heralded
as heroes and given substantial grant money to continue their research.
Once Reed and Ben returned from their trip the four of them would move into
the Baxter Building of which Reed had purchased the top five floors with
some of the grant money.  The two elder males were currently in the United
Kingdom visiting an old colleague who after examining the tests and charts
of the group thought that perhaps he had a starting place that would one
day allow Ben to control his power and be able to turn it on and off
similar to the way the rest of them could.

None of that mattered to Johnny at the moment though.  All that was on
his mind as he finished dressing was the hot date he had with a girl he had
met earlier in the day named Nikki.  Sue meanwhile was on the couch
thumbing through some catalogs taking notes and getting ideas for her and
Reed's wedding.  She only briefly looked up as Johnny walked across the
room grabbing his coat before he headed for the door.

"I know Reed and Ben are out of town, but don't bring your date home
tonight.  I really don't want to wake up again to someone screaming your
name while you're having sex."

"Once the bedroom doors are shut you can't hear a thing.  I had to take
a piss and I didn't completely shut the door.  I'm sorry, what more do you
want me to say?"

"I don't want you to say anything.  I just don't want anymore girls
coming here.  You know you wouldn't be doing this if Reed and Ben were
here."

"You really need to get out more Sue.  All you've got is your work and
Reed.  You haven't even been out since he's left.  The rest of you, you
especially, need to loosen up more and enjoy things.  Not everyone has it
as good as we do."

"And by that you mean walking down the street having your choice of a
date from girls throwing themselves at you, not having to pay for dinner
with your date, and driving a hundred miles an hour down a road in a sports
car you got a steep discount on because of who you are?"

"What exactly is your problem?  You spend all of your time with Reed
either doing research or doing something business related and do I bust
your ass about it?  I helped save the town from your former boss, the same
guy you were going to marry before the accident if I'm not mistaken, and
whenever some group related function comes up I show up and do my part.
Try pulling the stick from your ass and having some fun."

"Yeah Johnny if all of us were as reliable as you then Doom would be
taking over other cities now."

"If this kind of crap is going to continue at the Baxter Building then
I'm going to have to find some other place to live.  This ludicrous
conversation of yours has made me late so I'm leaving.  Oh and don't wait
up for me."

"I wouldn't worry too much Jonathan.  I'm pretty sure she'll still sleep
with you even if you are half an hour late."

"Go to hell Susan," Johnny grumbled slamming the door behind him.

"God damn it Johnny, why do you have to be such a bastard?" Sue mumbled
underneath her breath as she threw the catalog in her hand onto the coffee
in front of her.  She stood up walking towards one of the windows and
looked.  Sue spotted the black BMW Z4 that Johnny drove flying down the
street.  "Fine you want me to have some fun?  Alright then."

***

Handing his car keys off to the valet Johnny walked into Park Side where
he was eagerly met by the restaurant's manager.

"Good to see you again Mr.  Storm," the manager said delighted
vigorously shaking Johnny's hand.  "It's been too long since you've last
been in."

"Good to be back, Charlie.  Nikki wanted the best Italian food in the
city, and there's only one place to go."

"Thank you for your kind words.  We've prepared the same table from the
last time you were here, unless of course the two of you would like to sit
in a different spot."

"The table you have ready is fine."

"Right this way then."

"Thank you."

Unseen by everyone Sue leaned against the wall of the restaurant near
the front door.  While agreements and rules had been made about Sue using
her power of invisibility she was sure Reed and Ben wouldn't mind what she
was doing at the moment if they ever found out her brother was using the
apartment as a whorehouse.

Careful not to bump into anyone she made her way towards the table
Johnny and his date were sitting at and did a double take when she noticed,
Silvio Nicodemo, a local low level mob flunky having dinner with a woman.
Sue's thoughts returned to her brother and his date and she sat in an
unused chair sitting against a wall.  She was fascinated to hear what
Johnny could possibly be talking with the most-likely easy fangirl.

"You okay Johnny?" Nikki asked.

"I'm fine."

"You're a great guy and this is a restaurant I'd probably would never
come to if it weren't for you, but you just seemed distracted and quiet in
the car."

"Look Nikki I'm sorry about that.  It's just that I had a really
ignorant conversation with someone before I left tonight which was why I
was late picking you up."

"Oh really?  Was it with someone from the group?  What was it about?"

"Come on Johnny just skip dinner and take the girl back to her place so
you can sleep with her.  You don't need to go through the motions with this
slut," Sue thought.

"It wasn't anything important.  It's just...  You ever get into an
argument with someone where you get to a point when you realize the whole
thing is completely inane and silly?  As happy go luck and rah rah team as
everyone wants to make us out to be we have our issues and fights like
everyone else.  Disagreements aren't too uncommon for us especially since
one of the members can be quite a bitch at times."

At hearing Johnny call her a bitch Sue got up ready to deck him, but
stopped herself and in the process knocked the chair she was in into the
wall the noise it made catching Johnny's attention.  He turned and looked
in Sue's direction for a few seconds then turned back around to face his
date.

"Oh I know exactly what you mean," Nikki started.  "Like last week I got
into this huge argument with my parents about college..."

As Nikki proceeded to tell Johnny about her argument with her parents
Sue's attention was turned elsewhere as two reputed thugs walked through
the front door and sat down at Silvio Nicodemo's table.  The three men
talked before getting up and heading towards the back most likely to the
bathroom.  Sue was getting an uneasy feeling about the situation and
followed them.

Meanwhile unaware of what was going on Johnny excused himself a few
minutes later and headed for the bathroom as well.  As he neared the
restroom door he heard a commotion and quickly went in.

"What the fuck?" One of the thugs grumbled as the two of them fired
their silencer enhanced guns at Silvio who was cowering on the floor.
Johnny could see the forcefield around the two gunmen that was deflecting
the bullets onto the floor.

"What the hell are you doing here Sue?" Johnny demanded.

"Have someone call the police," Susan replied making herself visible
while keeping the shield up.

"You know what?  Fuck you.  I don't care how much space we'll have at
the new place.  There's no way in hell I'm going to live there," Johnny
snarled before blowing out the bathroom.

He walked back to the table where his date sat.  "Look Nikki I'm sorry.
We're going to have to do this another time.  I have too much shit going on
to give you the attention you deserve."

"Is everything alright sir?" Charlie asked rushing over to Johnny's
table after Silvio had come out of the bathroom and spoke to him.

"Don't worry this has nothing to do with you or your restaurant.  We'll
be back another time.  There's a situation in the bathroom that requires
the police that needs to be taken care of right away."

"They've been called already.  We'll have your car pulled up right away
sir."

"Thank you."

***

"Thank you again Ms.  Storm," Charlie said relieved at the incident that
never occurred.

"You're welcome.  Glad I could be of some help," Sue replied.

Once she was done answering questions and the police were gone Susan
found herself back outside.  She hailed a cab and got in.  As it took off
Sue found herself getting frustrated with the situation involving Johnny
and wanting to give up.  All his life Johnny had always been a charismatic
ladies man and as he got older he started becoming more and more of a
playboy.  Once he became the Human Torch and part of the Fantastic Four he
became nearly unbearable.

Johnny had always been a bit cocky and arrogant and whenever the two of
them were around each other it irritated the hell out of Ben.  Reed wasn't
too bothered by it relegating Johnny's actions and attitude to his age.
After the group's battle with Doom and Johnny's actions therein Reed and
Ben seemed to not mind Johnny at all as long as he wasn't too outrageous.

Even if they couldn't see it Sue could.  She could see his personality
start to get worse.  Johnny started to drive faster cars and motorcycles
and the women he dated only got sleazier.  He could do much better.  She
just couldn't figure out why he was behaving the way he was.

***

As Susan entered Reed's top-floor apartment Johnny was busy picking up
various things and stuffing them into a duffel bag.  He went into the room
he had been staying in and returned a few minutes later with a second bag.

"Where are you going Johnny?"

"I'm not waiting until Reed and Ben come back.  I'm moving out now."

"What are you talking about?  You can't do this!"

"I said I'm moving out now.  We're all grown adults here.  I don't need
you acting like a mother and telling me what I can and can't do and who I
can date.  That shit you pulled at the restaurant was the last straw."

"Hey!  Silvio would have been dead and so would have you if it wasn't
for me!"

"And why exactly were you there?  Why were you invisible following me on
my date?  There are rules you agreed to about using your power!"

"I don't think Reed or Ben would much care if they knew you were using
the apartment as a whorehouse!"

"God damn it Susan!  What are you going to do?  Tell on me?"

"No Johnny I just think you can do better than what you are."

"Do better with what?"

"The girls you date and being a cocky bastard for starters."

"Where the hell is all of this coming from?  Did you purposely wait
until Reed and Ben were gone before you turned in a complete bitch?!?"

Johnny found himself momentarily stunned when Sue slapped him with all
her force.  He couldn't believe what she had just done, and neither could
she.  This is nothing close to what Sue wanted to do to get through to him.
Her mouth opened though nothing came out as Johnny stared at her with a
very angry look in his eyes.  He started to move his mouth to say
something, but stopped.  Instead he shook his head a few times, picked up
his bags, and headed towards the door.

"Johnny I'm sorry..."

"Sue don't start.  Look you, Reed, and Ben are the scientific bunch of
the group.  I'm just the cocky pilot into fast cars and extreme sports so
research wise you don't need me and Ben's a pretty good pilot as well.  So
before this gets any worse than it has too..."

"Johnny don't say it," Sue blubbered.  "I'm so sorry for slapping you
and for what I said."

"I don't get you Sue, I really don't," Johnny said looking back and
seeing tears starting to form in his sister's eyes.  "Who knows how long
you've had this low of an opinion of me.  Anyway, if the three of you ever
truly need my help look me up.  I quit.  I'll be back for the rest of my
stuff in a few days."

With those last two words Johnny quit the group and disappeared into the
hall.  Sue just stood there dumbstruck even as the door slammed shut.

"What the hell did I just do?" She muttered slowly turning around again
trying to figure out what just happened.  "I'm such an idiot!  I was too
hard on him!" Sue said now in a bit of a daze.  "I just wanted what was
best for him." After a few minutes Sue started for the kitchen.  "I'm so
glad you like to drink Ben," She said opening the fridge and finding an
open twelve pack of Bud Light and a closed one.  Sue took the unopened pack
and sat on the couch turning the tv on as she started on the first beer.

***

Susan was wakened by someone muttering to themself as they walked around
the apartment.  Sue opened her mouth to see if it was Johnny, but stopped
being struck hard by a massive hangover.  Slowly she struggled from bed and
made her way towards the bedroom door.

"Johnny is that you?" She moaned as the bright morning sunlight glared
through the window wrecking havoc with her senses.

"I'm only going to be here long enough to give you back my apartment key
and look for one of my credit cards.  So don't try and bother-" Johnny
stopped mid-sentence when he turned to look at his sister and found her
standing nude in her bedroom doorway leaning against the frame and
shielding her face from the sunlight with her hands.  "Oh god Sue will you
go put some clothes on?" Johnny asked turning away.

"Oh...  sorry..." Susan muttered noticing now that she was nude and
returning to her room.  A few minutes later she returned wearing a
bathrobe.

"I said clothes, not a robe."

"Shut up I'm going to take a shower in a minute," Sue replied walking
over to the couch, knocking some empty beer bottles onto the floor, then
laying down on it.

Hearing the clanking of the bottles Johnny stopped what he was doing and
walked over to where Susan was laying.  He raised an eyebrow when he saw
the empty beer bottles on the floor next to the empty case.

"How much did you drink last night?" Johnny asked sitting down on a
recliner near the couch.

"Whatever is on the floor.  Twelve I think." Susan adjusted a couch
pillow underneath her head and closed her eyes.

"You drank a twelve pack of beer last night?  You hardly drink on the
weekends let alone during the week.  What the hell were you thinking?"

"Johnny please shouting and stop trying to be a mother.  We're both
grown adults here.  Besides you told me to have some fun last night," Susan
replied with her eyes still closed.

"I didn't mean for you to go out and get shitfaced.  You remember what
happened on your twenty-first birthday?  I still occasionally hear stories
from people I run into that I haven't met before that were at that party."

"I was alone last night.  That wasn't going to happen.  Besides why do
you care?  You quit the group last night, remember?"

"Give me a little credit Sue.  I may hate you right now, but you're
still my sister."

"And that's why I give you shit about the girls you date."

"I still have control of my bodily functions when I'm on a date though."

"Yeah one night of getting drunk is so much worse than living the rest
of your life with HIV or Herpes," Susan replied opening her eyes and
sitting up.

"Now you're just talking paranoid."

"So are you."

"Anyway, why were you drinking last night?"

"None of your business"

"Alright fine.  I couldn't find the card I came to get so I'm going to
have to call and cancel it.  If anything comes up and you need to get into
contact with me for some reason I'm staying at the Hilton New York for the
next few days.  In case you do need something I'm going to leave you a key
at the front desk."

"I'll be fine.  I've got a million things to do today so I won't be
drinking."

"I didn't say you would be.  Just--- Ah forget it," Johnny threw his key
to Reed's apartment onto the coffee table and got up to leave.

"Johnny wait."

"Yes?" He replied not bothering to turn and face his sister.

"You were right.  There was some truth to what you said yesterday and
I'm sorry.  We're both adults and how you live your life is up to you.
I'll stay out of your personal life."

"Thank you, but I want to know one thing.  Why the little boozefest last
night?" Johnny asked turning to face Sue.

"I don't know.  It was something stupid having to deal with our fight
last night.  I'll be fine though, once this hangover is gone."

"That's good to hear.  I've got some things I need to do myself so I'm
gonna go.

"Just one more thing.  Are you going to tell Reed and Ben that you quit
the group or should I?"

"I really haven't thought about it since our argument yesterday.  Let me
think about things first and I'll get back to you ok?"

"Sure."

"Take care of that hangover okay?" Johnny said before leaving the
apartment and heading down the hall towards the elevator.

Relieved Sue smiled briefly to herself before walking to the front door
and peering out into the hallway.  She caught a brief glimpse of Johnny as
he stepped onto the elevator and disappeared.  The smile never leaving her
face Sue returned inside the apartment and shut the door.

***

Sue's hangover had taken most of the day to dissipate.  Being the light
drinker that she was it was no big surprise to her that it had taken so
long and shortly after Johnny left early in the morning Sue realized how
dumb drinking the twelve pack the night before was.

Susan decided she would stay in again, though this time she wouldn't be
drinking.  She was just going to stop by the rental store and pick up a few
movies.  Before she did that though Sue needed to stop by the Baxter
Building to drop off a check for the security deposit.

As she sat in her car idling by at a red light Sue happened to glance to
her right into the parking lot of a bank.  For some unknown reason a black
s.u.v.  caught her eye and she watched.  A few minutes later as her light
was turning green two men in long coats climbed out of the vehicle and
walked inside the bank.  Susan quickly turned into the parking lot.  She
got out of her car and cautiously walked up to the double-doors.  Just then
she heard shots being fire and people start screaming.

With the briefest of thoughts to her own safety Sue went inside with a
plan in mind.  The bank's customers and all of it's employees except for
one were laying on the floor in front of the teller windows.  There were
two dead security guards and the gunmen had their weapons pointed to the
heads of two different people as a lone employee emptied money from drawers
and threw it into a bag.

"Come on guys that's no way to treat fellow citizens is it?" Sue asked.

"Lookie what we have here," one of the gunmen said as they both turned
to face Susan.

She slightly nodded her head to the two hostages who quickly crawled
away.  In the same fashion as she had done in the restaurant the night
before Susan quickly enclosed the two criminals inside a forcefield.
Furious they fired several shots at her, but they only fell to the floor
harmlessly.  With safety suddenly at hand everyone in the bank started
cheering for Susan.

"It's not over yet people.  Everyone outside and someone notify the
police."

"I don't think so," a gruff voice said from behind Susan as a gun muzzle
was pushed into the back of her head.  "Let them go." People started
screaming and panicking at the appearance of the third gunmen.

"Everyone get into an office now!  And lock the doors!" Sue screamed.
Within minutes everyone was in an office with the doors locked.  In the
middle of the bank stood Sue with the three gunmen

"Let them go now or I'll break into one of the offices and started
killing people.  Now's not the time to play hero," the third man said.

Sue momentarily considered her options then acted.  She quickly kicked
her leg back striking the man in the groin.  Sue dropped the shield and
dashed across the lobby towards a desk.  "Kill the bitch!" She heard one of
the men scream as she leapt over the desk and shots started to ring.  Sue
crashed to the floor and the shots stopped.  She could hear the mean
scowling and walking towards her so she quickly turned invisible.  It was
then that a new problem rose.

Not expecting to have to use her powers today Sue left her suit at the
apartment and was dressed in a pair of blue jeans and a white long-sleeved
button up shirt and they were still visible.  She might be able to trap two
unexpected gunmen, but three that had guns were and were out to kill her
was a bit trickier.  Needing to survive long enough for the police to
arrive and rectify situation Sue saw no other option than to strip off the
clothes she was wearing and hide.

"Come here girl!" One of the men snarled jumping on top of the desk and
pointing his gun down where Sue should have been.  "What the?"

"What's the matter?  Can't find a little girl like me?" Sue mocked.
"The police are on the way.  Why don't you leave now while you can and try
to run?"

"I don't mind going to jail if it means I'm famous for killing the
Invisible Girl and making your group the Fantastic Three."

"You've got to find me first."

"That won't be a problem.  Ghost go lock the doors so nobody can come in
and bring a trashcan full of paper.  Ranger turn all the desks over.  As
for you girl this is a one time offer.  Make yourself visible again and
let's work out our differences.  I won't let the guys get too rough with
you."

"Not a chance."

"Fine have it your way."

The leader picked up Sue's clothes and threw them into the trashcan
Ghost brought him.  He then took several pieces of paper and crumpled them
together into a stick shape.  He took a lighter out of his pocket lit the
paper and threw it into the trashcan.

"Oh shit," Susan muttered as the lead gunman placed the burning trashcan
on the ground underneath one of the sprinkler heads on the ceiling.  It
wasn't long before all the sprinklers in the bank were pouring down water.

"There she is!" The leader shouted as a human form started to take shape
under the falling water.

Ghost fired several shots at Sue who quickly dove out of the way.  With
the water giving away her position and nothing to hide under Sue was an
animal being chased after by hunters.  All she could do at the moment was
dodge bullets and hope she could figure out something fast.

***

"Hey Johnny, good to see you again," a woman behind a Chinese restaurant
counter greeted him as he walked through the front.

"Looking as gorgeous as ever Cindy," Johnny replied with a smile.  "My
order ready yet?"

"Yeah it is, but no date tonight?  You only ordered for one."

"Nah, I'm staying in.  I've got some stuff at home to take care."

"The girls are running you ragged huh?  You need to settle down with
someone.  Trust me, I've known plenty of guys who've tried to live the
playboy life and it can wear you down."

"That doesn't have anything to do with it," Johnny laughed.

"Right, let me go get your order," Cindy smiled disappearing behind a
door.  A few minutes later a middle-aged man appeared with a bag in his
hand.

"Hey Chan, what's going on?  Still working sixty hour weeks here to
avoid the wife?"

"Once you're married not much every happens.  Anyway what are you doing
here?" Chan asked with a bit of confusion.  "I was going to hold your order
until after you had everything taken care of and make you something fresh
if you still came by."

"What are you talking about?  Why wouldn't I be getting my order now?"

"You haven't heard what's going at that bank?"

"What bank?  What's going on?"

"Oh man I would've thought they would have told you before the news
broadcast it.  A few minutes ago they said on tv that there was a robbery
at First New York Bank on seventh street.  There are some customers and
bank employees trapped in offices and your sister was involved in some kind
of altercation with the bank robbers."

"Oh damn it!  I'll be back later!"

Johnny ran to his car and raced through the city to get to the bank.
When he finally pulled up there were a number of cops cars and even
S.W.A.T. outside the bank, but nothing seemed to being going on.  As Johnny
got out and headed towards the crime scene he was met by a police officer.

"Mr.  Storm good to see you here."

"What's going on?  Why's everyone sitting around and what's S.W.A.T.
doing here?"

"S.W.A.T.'s only here if we absolutely need them.  From what we've been
told from someone inside with a cell phone two men came in with the
intention to rob the bank.  Susan showed up and subdued them, but not
before they killed the security guards.  A third gunmen who we suspect was
the get away driver saw your sister enter the bank and followed.  There was
a bit of a standoff at which point the customers and bank employees locked
themselves in offices, then the sprinkler system came on and shots were
fired and at this point that's all we've heard.  The glass is tinted so we
can't see inside and the doors are locked.  We've been told to wait until
we receive some kind of communication from the inside before we act since
Sue is in there."

"Get me inside and I'll do the rest."

"Here the keys to the door.  We got lucky and found one of the off-duty
bank managers."

Johnny took the keys from officer and cautiously made his way to the
door.  He managed to unlock and open the door wide enough so he could slip
inside unnoticed due mostly in part to the fact that the gunmen were all
screaming at each other paying little attention to much else.  The inside
of the bank was soaked and everything was turned over.

"Where the fuck is she???" The leader screamed.

"The sprinkler's turned off and we can't see her anymore," Ghost feebly
explained.

"But she's wet!  She's only invisible when she's fucking dry!  God damn
it!"

"The cops are here!  We have no money and the Invisible Girl is
invisible!  What're we going to do?" Ranger asked.

"You know what?  This is simple.  We'll blow the locks off the office
door and starting shooting people one by one," the leader replied.

"Now guys why would you want to do that?  Just let the people do their
business and be on their way okay?" Johnny interrupted.

"Isn't this nice?" the leader mocked Johnny turning to face him.  "Both
brother and sister are here now.  Double the kill double the fame."

"Flame on!" Johnny screamed as the leader raised his gun to shoot him.
Johnny's body was engulfed in flames and he blasted a fireball striking the
leader's hands burning it.  He dropped his gun falling to the floor in pain
as the skin on his hand started to bubble.

Ghost and Ranger both started firing at Johnny who easily dodged their
initial shots by flying up towards the ceiling.  As Ghost raised his gun to
fire again he was suddenly struck in the back of the head.  Ranger started
panic not knowing what to do as he had the Human Torch on one side and a
thick wooden desk leg floating in the air on the other side.

"It looks like you have two choices," Sue's voice told Ranger.  "One you
get burned or two you get hit in the head." Ranger dropped his gun with a
defeated look.

"Good, now take off your coat and set it on the counter by the teller
windows." Ranger did as he was told and Johnny flew over to the coat
landing on the floor and flaming off.

"Damn," Sue said to herself catching a glimpse of her brother's backside
through his charred clothes as he quickly put on the long coat and closed
it.

"Now go outside and let the police do their job," Johnny ordered.

"Wait a sec Johnny, I need a coat too."

"Where are you at?"

"Just put it on the counter."

"Help your friend outside and talk to the police," Johnny said as he
pulled the coat off an unconscious Ghost and set it on the counter where
Ranger had set his.  "I'm going to tell everyone in the office it's over
and they can come out."

"Ok," Sue said as she purposely became visible again before putting on
the coat.

Looking back to make sure she was dressed before he knocked on the
office door Johnny caught a three-quarters angle view of his nude sister's
front.  He caught himself staring for a few seconds more than he would have
liked and though he couldn't be sure since she wasn't looking directly at
him Johnny thought he caught a smile on Sue's face.  He turned his head
away and a second later Sue let him know she was ready.

***

Once the police had done their jobs, the Storm siblings had talked to
the media, and everything at the bank was back in it's proper place Sue
found herself back at the apartment and Johnny back at the hotel.

After returning home Sue took a quick shower throwing on a black pair of
plain unassuming panties and a t-shirt one size too big for her.  After the
events of today she was going to stay in and with Johnny staying at a hotel
she could wear whatever she wanted to wear or not.  Being honest with
herself though Sue found the prospect of showing off and prancing around in
as little as possible for Johnny to be an exciting thought.  After all she
did purposely materialize at the bank before putting on the coat and the
smile she had then was for seeing her brother check her out.

Susan sat down on the couch turning on the t.v.  and channel surfed.
She stopped when she reached CNN and saw that they had picked up the bank
story and were running a recap of it.  It was then that Susan realized why
she had her sudden outburst of her disapproval of Johnny's date selection
and way of life.  She knew why her big fight with her brother led her to
downing a twelve pack of beer when she was the farthest thing from a
regular drinker.

Sue loved Johnny.  She loved him much more than just in a bloodlines
family type of way, though that factor certainly helped in intensifying her
feelings toward him.  Sue felt a very deep heavy bond wanting to develop
with him, though she was concerned it would be one-sided.  She couldn't
help but smile as Johnny's comments to the local news crew were replayed.
Then the brief glimpse she got of Johnny's ass replayed in her head.

"It was very nice," Sue thought as she closed her eyes and had visions
of nothing but his butt play in her head.

Susan leaned back on the couch and her hand made a slow trek down into
her panties.  She slid her fingers through her bush and let them slowly rub
back and forth over her slit.  Sue felt excitement creep into her body.
She let out a soft moan as two of her fingers pushed into her slit.  As Sue
began pushing her fingers back and forth into her pussy she began to wonder
what Johnny's front side looked like.  She wondered how thick and long his
cock was and how she'd feel as it was thrust into her vagina.

Sue began to really work her fingers in and out of her pussy her cream
starting to lather them up.  She slid her other hand down into her panties
and began to finger her clit coaxing it out of the hood.  Slowly, but
surely it started to emerge.  Sue felt a small surge of excitement run
through her body as her fingers continually bottomed out in her wet pussy
getting a fresh coat of her cream and her index finger began to teasing her
emerging clit.  Just as Sue felt she was getting close to an orgasm she was
rudely interrupted as the phone rang.

"Damn it, whoever's calling can leave a message," Susan mumbled as she
continued to finger herself.

After four rings the answering machine came on, played it's message, and
started recording somebody's message.

"Hey Sue it's me."

"Johnny!" Susan thought hearing his voice.  She immediately stopped what
she was doing and ran into the kitchen to get the cordless phone.  "Hey I'm
here," Sue said answering the phone.  "I was just busy with something when
you called.  What's up?"

"Not much.  I hard ordered some Chinese food before the thing at the
bank happened.  When I finally got around to getting it Chan threw in
enough extra food to feed two people.  After everything that's happened the
last two days I decided to stay in tonight and if you weren't doing
anything I was going to see if you wanted some."

"What did you get?"

"General Tso's chicken."

"Did you have them make it extra spicy?"

"Of course."

"Huh..." Sue said playing around like she was deciding whether or not
she was going to have dinner with Johnny.

"Look Sue, I know you're not a big fan of spicy food, but I kind of felt
bad about the argument and calling you a bitch so I just figured I'd offer.
Just say no if you don't want any.  It's no big deal."

"No that's fine.  I haven't had Chinese food in awhile and to be honest
I've been wanting to talk to you about yesterday."

"Alright then, I'll be over there in about half an hour.  See you then."

"See you later Johnny," Sue said.

Susan brought the phone with her to the living room and set it down on
the coffee table as she returned to the couch.  As Sue sat down her hand
inadvertently brushed against her panties.  She smiled standing as she went
to change the wet piece of clothing.

***

Sue laid stretched out on the couch watching Paparazzi as HBO played it
for the hundredth time in the last two weeks.  She perked up when she heard
a knock at the door.  "Ok Sue just be calm and find out what Johnny's
feelings for you are," she said to herself as she unlocked the door and
opened.

"Hey Sue can you give me a..." Johnny began as he looked as his sister
wearing a large t-shirt with her panties barely peeking out the bottom of
it.  "Can you give me a hand here?" In both hands Johnny had one duffel bag
and one bag with Chinese food in it.

"You okay?" Susan asked taking the bags from his left hand.

"I'm fine," Johnny replied walking in and shutting the door behind him.
"I guess I was just dumb in expecting you to have more clothes on when I
got here."

"You've seen me in less you know." Susan set the Chinese food on the
table and dropped the duffel bag to the floor.

"Yeah I was five and that was an accident," Johnny replied doing the
same.

"No, I mean earlier today at the bank."

"About that, see I just found it kind of weird that you'd materialize
before putting the jacket on letting anyone in the immediate area see you
nude."

"You're the only one who saw me and it wasn't like you quickly looked
away.  It was a good three or four seconds before you did."

"Do you remember that day on the bridge when you were taking your
clothes off after becoming invisible and I mentioned needing therapy?
We're about five words and a shirt lift away from there."

"Well I take it by your bags that you're coming back?" Sue asked
needlessly bending over to pick up the duffel bags and take them into
Johnny's old makeshift room.

"Ye-Yeah I am," Johnny stuttered as Sue's shirt rode up on her as she
was bent over flashing her panty-clad butt.  "After this afternoon I got to
thinking some things were said and done out of anger and though I still
don't understand your reasoning for any of the things you've done in the
last few days.  Today with Reed and Ben gone I guess I realized that really
we're all we've got.  When I found out what was happening at the bank I
guess I was a little more concerned about you than I normally would have
been if everyone was here."

"I knew there was more to you than just driving fast cars and being a
playboy," Sue smiled.  "Let me take these to your room then let's eat."

As Sue was busy putting away his bags Johnny took out the two big
styrofoam containers holding the General Tso's chicken and retrieved some
silverware from the kitchen to use instead of the plastic utensils the
restaurant provided takeout with.  He took one of Ben's few remaining beers
and sat down at the table.  As he began to eat Susan reappeared.

"You know Ben's going to throw a shit fit when he gets back and all of
his beer is gone?" Sue said taking one as well before sitting at the table.

"I see we learned nothing from last night," Johnny smirked.

"Shut up, it's just one."

"Speaking of last night," Johnny began as the two of them started
eating, "What's going on?  Yeah I know you don't like some of the things I
do, but it wasn't until Reed and Ben left last week that you decided to go
apeshit on me."

"Before I get into that can I ask you something that might sound a
little weird?"

Johnny stopped eating, his fork still in mid-air, and looked at Susan
for a second.  "Okay."

"At the bank why didn't you quickly look away when you saw me?"

"Like I said I was a bit surprised you'd materialize before putting on
the jacket."

"Can I ask you another question?"

"I can feel it," Johnny laughed shaking his head.  "Therapy here I come.
What Sue?"

"What did you think?"

"What did I think of what?"

"How I looked?"

"I think you might look better as a dark brunette."

"Come on Johnny you were looking at me for more than a split second."

"I really didn't get a good look at you because your body was angled,
though the smile on your face was a bit disconcerting."

"So you did get a good look at me," Sue grinned.

"All right fine.  If it'll make you happy you've got a great looking
body and if I wasn't your brother I'd be like every other guy who sees
you."

"Uh huh.  Are you just saying that to get me to be quiet or do you mean
that?"

"As creepy as this whole conversation is becoming I mean it."

"Thanks," Sue smiled

"Now can we just eat now and talk about something a little less weird?"

"You've got a cute ass you know what?" Johnny nearly choked on his food
when Sue said that.

"What do you want Susan?" Johnny asked after recovering.  "Why are we
having this conversation?"

"I love you Johnny."

"And I love you too."

"That's not what I meant."

Johnny stopped eating and looked at Sue for a moment.  With a small grin
and a certain look of disbelief he set his fork down.  "You're kidding me
right?  You're getting me back for the night I brought what's her face home
and didn't shut the door while we were having sex."

"That's not it.  The reason I waited until Ben and Reed were gone to say
anything was I didn't know how this whole thing would play out or how you'd
react."

"This can't happen Sue.  Let's end this now and forget about it."

"Ok..." Sue said disappointed.

For the next few minutes Johnny and Sue ate in an awkward silence.  Then
suddenly Johnny dropped his fork and nearly fell out of his chair trying to
get out of it.  Sue was now rubbing his crotch with her foot.

"Geez Sue no."

"Why not?"

"Besides the obvious brother/sister thing you're also engaged to Reed!"

"The love I have for Reed is different from what I have for you.  I'm
still going to marry him.  This'll be something special between us when the
others aren't around."

"Sue I don't feel the same way about you that you do me."

"Yes you do.  You just don't realize it yet.  Why do you think you
looked at my naked body at the bank when I offered it to you?  Why haven't
you said anything else about me wearing just a shirt and my panties since
you've gotten here?" Sue then stood up and removed her shirt exposing her
breasts to Johnny.  "To put it in superficial terms you understand do you
know how many guys would kill to be with me?  You said so yourself, I've
got a great looking body."

"I'm so not ready for this," Johnny stammered as he looked at his
sister's naked chest.  "Don't take this the wrong way, but I'm sleeping at
hotels until Reed and Ben get back."

Nervous and uncomfortable Johnny quickly left the apartment and hopped
into the elevator before Sue could say anything else.  The thought of his
sister having such affectionate and sexual feelings towards him creeped him
out.  The fact he had an extreme hard-on after afterwards didn't sit well
with him either.

***

Johnny tossed and turned as a rather vivid dream began to swirl in his
head.  It took place at a bachelor party for an old friend, Rick.  They
were in a strip-club and a gorgeous blond stripper caught Johnny's eye.  He
couldn't quite see her face because of the lighting and distance between
them, but she had a killer body so he went up to the stage and laid out a
few large bills in front of him.  The stripper then came over and began
dancing just for him getting up close and personal.  One of the partygoers
was hooting and hollering and shouted Johnny's name.  Johnny proceeded to
look at the man who gave him a thumbs up.  When he turned back around and
looked at the stripper it was Sue.  Johnny's eye bulged and his jaw dropped
as his sister shook her ass and flaunted her tits for him.  Johnny quickly
got up and walked outside.  A few minutes Rick joined him.

"Hey Johnny you okay?" he asked.

"Yeah I'm fine.  I just needed some air.  I thought I was
hallucinating."

"If you don't mind me saying so I knew how hot Sue was, but damn I
didn't know she was smokin' like that!  Why didn't you tell me she worked
here?  Go in there and let her finish her dance and maybe if you get lucky
the two of you can head over to the motel next door."

"Are you out of your mind?  That's my sister in there!  If you want to
watch her shake her goodies then go ahead.  I'm getting a cab and going
home."

"Come on man don't be a party pooper.  We'll be leaving here pretty soon
anyway.  Just get a lapdance from someone else."

"...Okay, alright, I'll be inside in a minute."

"Cool man.  See you inside."

As Rick disappeared back inside the club Johnny paced back and forth
outside.  Was he really going to go back in he wondered?  Granted from a
purely superficial guy perspective, taking out any notion that she was
related to him, Johnny could easily see how guys saw her as attractive.
Sue's hotness aside Johnny considered what Rick said and decided he didn't
want to be a downer so he went back inside.

Johnny looked around for a moment and taking Rick's advice found a new
stripper to watch.  As he started towards her Johnny was tapped on the
shoulder by someone and he turned to see who it was.

"I want to talk to you," Sue said to him.

"Since when did you work here?  It's a bit embarrassing to have a sister
who strips.  Reed and Ben aren't going to be too happy."

"Nobody seems to mind and Reed and Ben already know.  This is something
I like to do for fun and they don't care."

"Therapy won't even begin to fix this."

"Let's go into the break room to talk."

***

As Johnny slept in his hotel room, Sue was walking up to the front desk.
"Johnny Storm should have left a key for me down here.  I'm his sister
Sue."

"I know who you are Ms.  Storm.  Here you go," the receptionist smiled.

"Thanks.  How long have you been here at the desk?"

"For a few hours.  Is there something I can help you with?"

"Do you know if he's in his room or not?"

"I think so.  I saw him come into the building, but I haven't see him
leave.  I did leave the desk for about ten minutes though."

"Ok thanks."

Sue headed to the elevator and went up to the twelfth floor.  She got
off the elevator and found his room 1215.  This definitely wasn't a suite
and Sue was a bit surprised Johnny didn't get something more than just a
regular room.  She slid the cardkey into the door and carefully opened it
up.  All the lights in the room were off save for the lamp on the
nightstand.

Johnny was wearing a Fantastic Four t-shirt that he bought from a street
vendor that had his Human Torch form on it and a pair of boxers.  He was
also talking in his sleep so Sue sat down on the bed next to him to listen.

"Sue...  stop that...  Don't care...  Reed said...  You're my sister...
Oooh..."

Sue smiled at the last part and heard all she needed to hear.  She
leaned over and began to shake her brother.  "Johnny wake up.  Wake up."

"Hmm?" Johnny murmured as his eyes slowly opened.  "Sue what are you
doing here?" He asked sitting up.

"You left a key for me at the front desk remember?"

"Right...  So what do you want?"

"What were you dreaming about?  I heard you talking in your sleep."

"It was nothing."

"I heard you mention my name."

"Sue it's two in the morning," Johnny said picking up his watch from the
nightstand then putting it back down.  "I know I left you a key downstairs,
but it was meant more for emergencies like if the apartment got blown up or
something.  Why are you here?"

"Johnny you know how I feel about you and though I got a bit of a laugh
with the way you reacted when I showed you my breasts at dinner I wasn't
able to get to sleep tonight, because I don't know how you feel."

"You know you could have just called."

"Yeah, but it would have been easier for you to dodge the issue and lie
on the phone than if I was here in person.  Just tell me how you feel for
real, and after tonight I won't bring any of this up ever again."

"Sue I love you as a sister and that's it.  Even if I wanted to get
together with you there are numerous other things to take into account like
you're engaged to Reed and Victor Von Doom isn't exactly dead.  If he ever
gets mobile again or someone else decides to pick up where he left off and
we're too busy fighting with each other because your and my relationship
came to light then things can get ugly real fast."

"I see.  This is a one-sided relationship and those can't work," Sue
said disappointed as she headed for the door.  "I'll see you later."

As his sister disappeared into the hall Johnny turned off the lamp on
the nightstand and fell back to the bed.  "Sue what are you trying to do to
me?" he thought.

***

Sue woke to sounds of someone working in the kitchen.  She got out of
bed and carefully peaked out the bedroom door.  It was Johnny and it looked
like he was getting ready to make breakfast.  Sue grabbed her robe from off
the door hanger and left the room.

"Hey Johnny what're you doing here?" Sue asked.

"Looking good as always Sue," Johnny replied turning his head
momentarily to greet her.  His sister was wearing the same basic outfit as
the night before when he came over for dinner, a t-shirt and panties.  "I
decided to make myself some breakfast.  I don't like the way the hotel I
was at made breakfast the other day.  Want some?"

"Sure, just give me a few minutes to take a shower.  And thanks for the
compliment."

Susan smiled at Johnny's comment as she walked into the bathroom to
shower.  This was the only time in the last few days when he's said
anything nice to her about her looks without also mentioning the compliment
being gross or weird.  She might have to ask him about that she thought as
she turned the water on and stepped into the shower.

When Sue finished showering she slipped on her robe and returned to the
bedroom she and Reed shared.  She dressed very casually putting on an old
pair of blue jeans and a navy blue t-shirt she bought at American Eagle
that said "All I Need Is Love" in gold lettering.  Returning to the kitchen
Sue found Johnny already sitting at the table eating.  The breakfast he
made were two giant omelets consisting of eggs, cheese, ham, and assorted
other items added for flavoring.

"Ugh, if I'd know you were making these I would have passed," Susan
joked.

"Right, like you've ever turned down one of my omelets before.  Nice
shirt by the way.  Very subtle."

"Don't kid yourself Johnny.  I didn't put this one for you," Sue replied
taking a bite from her breakfast.

"Uh huh.  That's good to hear then.  So you're done chasing me I
assume?"

"Sure."

"Huh.  Okay then, never mind."

Sue stopped eating for a moment.  "Never mind what?"

"Just never mind.  It's not important," Johnny grinned.

"Oh come on!  Now you're being an ass!" Susan moaned.

"Yes I am," Johnny replied proudly.  "Do you really want to know?"

"Not anymore no.  I've lost interest," Sue said acting like she was
blowing him off.

"Alright then," Johnny said getting up.  "I'll leave the dishes here for
you to do while I check out of the hotel."

"God Johnny I hate you," Susan replied getting up as well.  "Just tell
me or leave will you?"

"Alright then.  What I was going to say was that we're going to have to
agree on a few rules.  First and foremost you will marry Reed.  I'm not
going to be the reason you two fail."

"Rules for what?  What are you," Susan said stopping in mid-sentence as
she thought for a moment.  "Are you serious?" She asked with a huge smile
crossing her face.

"Second, obviously we make no mention of this to anyone and we don't
have any contact with each other beyond normal day to day and group stuff.
Third-"

"Johnny you're killing the mood," Sue said walking up to him and kissing
him square on the lips.  "If we just use common sense about this we'll be
fine.  Can I ask what brought this change though?"

"A number of things did.  Too many to list and too complicated to
explain without sitting down and taking some time to talk.  I'm not
completely a hundred percent about all of this, but you're my sister and
you seem determined to follow this through so what the hell I figure."

Susan kissed Johnny again this time wrestling her tongue into his mouth
to meet with his.  With a big smile on each of their faces their heads
pulled apart.

"Why so forward?"

"Just because," Sue said taking Johnny's hand and leading him towards
her bedroom.  "Besides with Reed having been gone it's been too long for
me."

"Please let's keep the sex life between you two to yourself."

"You know what's really great about him?" Sue asked as the two of them
stumbled into the bedroom and she pushed Johnny on the bed.

"What's that?" Her brother replied taking off his shirt.

"He can make his cock any shape and any size."

"Ok that was just a little too much info," Johnny said getting up, but
Sue just pushed him down and took off her shirt.  She then took his hands
and pressed them against her breasts that were hiding behind a bra.

"They seem nice," Johnny said giving Sue's tits a slight squeeze, "But
this damn thing is in the way." Johnny removed Sue's bra and dropped it to
the floor.  He then placed his hands back on her breasts and gave them a
slight squeeze feeling them up for a moment.  "You've got some great tits
Sue."

"I know," She said kneeling down on her knees.  She unzipped Johnny's
pants and pulled them down with his boxers.  A semi-hard seven-inch penis
came into view and she smiled.

Johnny smiled too as Sue took his member into her hand and began
stroking it back and forth.  As her soft gentle hands slowly slid back and
forth across his shaft both of the Storm's smiled as Johnny's dick started
to harden in Sue's hand.

"You like that don't you Johnny?" Sue teased.

"Absolutely," he smiled.

"What about this then?"

Sue flicked her tongue across the head of Johnny's cock.  She watched it
jump several times as she licked it before she took him into her mouth.

"Mmm...  This is nice," Johnny moaned as his sister started sucking him
off.

Her lips were wrapped firmly around his dick and her tongue slithered
along the shaft as Sue began to bob her head back and forth sliding
Johnny's cock between her lips.  Johnny could tell Sue was eagerly taking
to the task at hand and enjoying it as she started pushing her mouth all
the way down on his dick getting him to bottom and poke her in the back of
the throat.

Several minutes later Sue brought her head back and stood up.  "If you
think my tits are nice," Sue began as she climbed onto the bed and started
pulling down her pants, "Then check out this."

Sue got onto all fours wiggling her ass in the air for her brother to
see.  With a smile he placed a hand on both buttchecks and began to squeeze
them.  "Damn she's got a nice ass too," Johnny thought as he spread it
apart and went in.

He flicked his tongue along Sue's ass crack before zeroing in on her
asshole.  Johnny eagerly began eating his sister's ass pushing his tongue
into her anus.  She gasped as the wet appendage darted about her butthole
lubing it up with saliva.  Sue gasped even louder as Johnny pushed his
index finger into her rectum.

"That's not what I mean Johnny," Sue thought moaning as Johnny began
pumping his finger in and out of her butt with a steady rhythm.  "Johnny!"
Sue gasped out load as a second finger was pushed into her rectum and began
working it's way in and out as well.

There was a time many years ago in college when Sue let herself be
talked into assplay by her then boyfriend.  It felt pretty nice, but just
was something she wasn't really interested in so she hadn't experimented
with it anymore until now.

Johnny now began to pump his fingers into Sue's backside several times
before pulling them out and lathering up her sphincter with his spit.  He
slid his fingers back into his sister's ass and began finger fucking it for
several more minutes before tonguing it again.  This went on several more
times before finally Sue felt Johnny pull his fingers out and push his
hardened cock in.

"Johnny!" Sue moaned as he started to push his prick into her backside
causing her to almost squirt herself right there on the spot.

She didn't come, but Susan's pussy was feeling very wet as she reached
back with her hand and rubbed her fingers over her opening.  Sue slipped
two fingers into her slit wiggling them around to wipe up some of her
cream. She pulled them out and brought them to her lips licking her sweet
wetness from them.

Johnny felt his cock twitch as he continued to thrust his manhood deep
into his sister's ass as he watched Sue continue to finger herself and eat
her own wetness.  Having his dick fill her tight ass and get squeezed down
on felt great to Johnny, but he wanted some of what she was having.  Johnny
slid himself out of Sue's ass and turned her over onto her back.

"About time," Susan teased.  "I thought I was going to have to eat
alone."

Johnny immediately buried his face between his sister's legs and began
eagerly to lick up her honey.  Somehow one of them had coaxed Sue's clit to
rise from it's hood.  He couldn't tell if Sue was coming or was just a very
wet girl when she got excited, but each time Johnny flicked his tongue
across her clit a new wave of wetness spilled from Sue's cunt and he got
more cream to eat up.

A bit later with his mouth wet and his sister's pussy on his breath
Johnny rose to his feet and climbed on the bed as Sue moved back a bit
herself.  Johnny then pushed her legs up in the air and she held them there
while he took his cock in hand and pushed it towards her moist pussy.
Susan groaned as her brother's cockhead slowly pushed it's way inside
followed by it's shaft before bottoming inside with his balls pressed
against her ass.  Johnny and Sue both sat in one place for a moment as they
each looked at each other.

"I still don't exactly know why I'm giving in to your desires, but this
feels so fucking good right now," Johnny said with a smile.

"Don't try and figure anything out.  Just be here with me, be inside me,
just fuck me.  I love you Johnny."

"I love you too Sue," Johnny replied as he started pulling out.

Susan waited with baited breath as Johnny slowly worked up a nice pace
and rhythm.  It wasn't much at first once he got some nice deep thrusting
going Sue felt her body start to charge up.  Her legs were up in the air
and her brother's penis was pounding away at her pussy which welcomed it
with more and more of her cream.

With his member lubed up with her sister's cream Johnny got a quick hard
thrusting going.  Sue's privates welcomed him in with each push and his
balls continued to pound against her curvy round ass.  A short while later
Johnny was the first to come his seed squirting deep into Sue's body as he
literally laid on top of her with his dick holding it's place buried deep
in her cunt.  Even as his orgasm slowed down several seconds later he
remained hard and continued fucking her.  It wasn't Johnny hitting the
g-spot or doing any tricky moves that sent Sue over the edge several
minutes later.  It was the dirty slurping sound of Johnny's cream and her
own mixing and oozing back out as he continued to ride her wet sticky cunt.

Perhaps it was due to a buildup within her body or maybe it was finally
being able to consummate her relationship with her brother, but Sue it
turned out was quite the gusher.  As both of the Storm siblings laid in bed
next to each Johnny's penis finally started to go limp after several
minutes of non-use a large round wetspot began to form underneath Sue's
privates.

"Looks like we'll both have to take showers," Johnny spoke after a few
minutes of silence.  "And you'll have to wash the sheets on this bed."

"Not before I get this," Sue smiled seductively.  She climbed back onto
all fours and taking Johnny's cock into her hand sucking on it licking his
cum and hers from it and swallowing.  She then laid back on the bed and
snuggled close to him.  "Before we shower and clean up why don't you tell
me about this dream you had about me?"


