Note: This story was dynamically reformatted for online reading convenience. Melissa Ch4 - Breaking Susan by NiteWriter Extreme Warning - Chapters 4 & 5 involve the extreme torture and sadistic treatment of Melissa and Susan. Don't read further if the nature of this story offends you. (mmmmmmmff,bdsm,tort,s&m,piercing,anal,fist,ws) * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * All attention was directed toward Susan now. After listening to her so many times in the lunchroom, Dan finally was going to have the opportunity to put this bitch in her place. And even now being restrained, she was resisting and adamantly voicing her 'you'll never get me to be a slut' attitude. The doorbell rang. "I'll get it," Carl commented. He whispered something to Dan before going up the stairs to answer the door. "Hey that's great," Dan replied happy to hear what Carl had to say. A couple minutes later Dan and the two girls heard more footsteps coming down the steps. Carl appeared first and then five more men entered the basement. There was an immediate reaction from them when they saw the two naked women; Susan cuffed to the pole and Melissa standing there with a tit press squeezing her breasts. "Fuck man, look at this?" Carl introduced the guys to Dan as co-workers. Carl and his buddies worked in road construction operating heavy equipment and he had told them about Melissa's ordeal from the weekend. They begged him to be a part of the next training session hoping that they could join in gangbanging a pretty woman, especially if it was defiling an uppity bitch. All these guys had encounters with someone like Melissa and nothing would please them more than to return the humiliating treatment they had received. The seven men spoke amongst themselves for a short time. The five newcomers couldn't help from time to time glancing at the two sluts to get another look at what they were going to enjoy in a short while. Dan said they would all get their chance, but for now relax and enjoy the show. They all took a seat. Dan didn't waste any time telling Susan how much he craved torturing her breasts and nipples. He explained how every day at lunch he fantasized about her the same as he did about Melissa. Dan knew that underneath Susan's daily work attire he would find a great pair of tits. And he was right. In fact, they were even more spectacular than he expected. Before Susan had a chance to react to his comments, he began tightly binding them with a rope. He wrapped each breast individually with a nylon cord by looping it around a couple times. He made sure it was snug underneath at the base of each one and made sure it was pulled tight. Then he looped the end through so it would stay in place. The rope ends he let hang down to the floor. He wanted them bound extremely tight to make her flesh bulge out. It really excited him and Carl seeing this pretty bitch's tits become so engorged sticking out from her chest. They had never done that to any woman before. After a few minutes her breasts appeared straining against the bindings. Dan started first by slapping them with his hand spanking hard and calling her, "a naughty little whore." "I'm gonna make you wish you were a cheap tramp out on the streets sucking cocks?" He remarked. Susan's wrists were still tied behind her back. She felt totally under his control and helpless as she watched Dan select a long stiff cane from the box and started lightly tapping her breasts and calling her, "a dirty slut" and commented, "you're gonna be a used fuckin' bitch when I'm done with you?" Then he struck her breasts harder and harder a couple times once impacting directly on her nipples. "You fuckin'little whore." "How's that feel?" "SLUT!!!!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh..., AAHHHHhhhhhhhhhh...AAHHHHHHHHHHHH," Susan screamed and winced from the pain when he struck her sensitive nipples. She couldn't believe how much it hurt every time the hard cane impacted her soft breasts. Dan stopped for a minute to touch them and squeeze them. "Do you like this bitch?" Then he laughed. Susan was shaking and whimpering as he touched her sore beaten nipples. "Does that hurt?" When she didn't answer he said, "I think you want more, don't you slut?" So he twisted and yanked them hard making her moan out in pain. "No, No, please... No more," Susan cried. When Dan saw how hard her nipples had become, he grabbed a couple nipple clamps from his box of toys. These were the kind that you can adjust the tension sort of like tiny tit vices. He attached one to each of her hard nipples and tightened the clamp firmly pinching her tender flesh between them. "Don't you dare scream Susan!" he demanded. "You had better hold it back." She was actually panting from the intense pain as Dan twisted the screw tighter and tighter flattening her nipples between the two small metal bars. Susan's restraint in screaming was admirable considering how mashed her nipples were becoming. Any woman would have been bellowing like crazy from the pain. But Susan certainly must have believed that Dan would have inflicted even more on her. She was breathing heavily, shaking, her whole body trembling as she tried to hold back losing control completely as her nipples were tortured. Dan simply let her endure the tit pain while he moved on and spread her legs apart. Dan held her while Carl attached two plastic spring type clothespins to the folds of her pussy. Carl enjoyed teasing Susan by pulling on the clips to open her cunt so he could see inside her pink hole. Then he attached a third clothespin right on her clit. Susan shuddered in pain as it clamped down on one of the most sensitive parts of her body. "Now just kneel there," he ordered releasing the cuffs from around the beam. She was almost beside herself she hurt so badly feeling her cunt lips and clit pinched within the claws of the tight plastic clothespins. And her nipples were literally numb from being mashed by the steel clamps. Despite the intense pain she obeyed and carefully knelt in front of the men keeping her legs apart. Dan proceeded to place a leather collar around her neck and fastened a dog leash to it. Susan had never before felt so humiliated and dehumanized in her entire life. Dan's cock was rock hard seeing her nipples pinched with the tight presses and the clothespins hanging from between her legs. "Look at you? What a filthy little slut.... You're going to learn to be good obedient whore." Dan began sucking on her sore breasts and biting around her clamped nipples. Carl stuffed two fingers in her cunt, deep, and played with the clothespin on her clit. Dan yanked the leash pulling her face close to his and called her "SLUT"... right in her face. Then he ordered her to look up and open her mouth. Both Dan and Carl began spitting in it... yelling "WHORE"... "FILTHY CUNT. The five other men joined in too. Each one faced Susan and spit in her mouth or on her face, then slapped her. It continued to be the most humiliating and debasing night she's ever experienced. Are you ready to submit to us?" Dan asked. Dan and Carl heard no answer from Susan. Dan pulled the leash making her crawl across the floor to the pool table. Susan was ordered, "kneel up straight." Dan removed the clamps from her tits. Susan breathed a sigh of relief as the pain began to subside. If she only knew what the two men had in mind she wouldn't have relaxed so quickly. She actually thought her torture was over. Instead Carl grabbed the two loose ends of the nylon cords that were still tightly binding her swollen breasts. He pulled on them forcing Susan to crawl a bit more forward until her engorged breasts were above the top edge of the pool table. "Rest them on the edge," Carl ordered. Susan's facial expression was filled with fear as she wondered what they were up to next. What devious method of torture did they have planned for her now? "Please... what are going to do? I'll do what you ask." "She's gettin' there Carl," Dan commented. She's beginning to know her place." "Please don't hurt me anymore!" Susan cried out. Susan's swollen breasts were resting on the wooden edge of the pool table. Carl was pulling them with the cord making them bulge way out. Susan was completely panic-stricken realizing what they had in mind next. Dan had picked up a long three-foot plastic crop. This one was very thin and flexible similar to a switch you might cut from a tree branch. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!" Susan screamed when she saw what he was going to do. Dan waved it quickly through the air a couple times so Susan could hear the high pitched swishing sound. Then, "Smmmmaaaaccckkkkkkkk!!!!!" The crop struck across the top of her breasts. With her tits supported from underneath they took the full blow of the thin crop. The pain was so intense that Susan became flushed and thought she might pass out. Her loud scream filled the room. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! STOPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!" A bright red welt appeared across both breasts. Then Dan let her feel it again. "Smmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaccccccckkkkkkk!!!!!" and again "Smmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaccccccckkkkkkk!!!!!" and again "Smmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaccccccckkkkkkk!!!!!" Dan walloped her over and over impacting repeatedly with the plastic switch across both of Susan's swollen breasts. She wailed out in pain. A couple times the crop impacted on her already sore nipples making her try to back away. But Carl simply pulled harder on the rope to keep her bulging tits in place on the table. Her breasts were already sensitive from being so tightly bound. And their swollen condition amplified the pain being inflicted by the beating. Every stroke left another thin red mark on her gorgeous mounds. Somehow Dan knew exactly how hard to swing. The welts were not severe enough to do permanent damage, but certainly sufficient to keep her tits hurting for days. Dan stopped to let Susan catch her breath. She was screaming hysterically. He didn't want her passing out because he still had more planned. She begged, "Please!... Stop!..." She cried out, "No more... Please!..." All of the men were enjoying her groveling and begging. Carl loosened his grip on the rope. Susan was moved back and handcuffed again around the center beam. She slumped down on the floor and both Dan and Carl sat in front of her. When Susan looked up she saw both men holding a small container. The other seven men had huddled around her too waiting to see the torture of this pretty little slut continue. Dan and Carl each grabbed one of her swollen sore breasts in their hands and untied the nylon cord. Her tits were engorged like two huge overripe melons and covered with welted red marks from the breast whipping. Her darkened areola nipple area was stretched to about two inches in diameter. She whimpered just from their touch. Susan watched as they each retrieved from the container a three-inch long needle with a red plastic pearl-sized tip. Susan begged desperately, "No!...., No!.... Oh My God No!!.... No!!... Please don't!!.... Please!!!!" Dan held her right tit in one hand and then placed the tip of the needle on the outside edge of the dark areola of her nipple. Disregarding her pleas Dan looked at Susan saying, "you're a fuckin' whore," and then quickly pushed the needle puncturing her delicate flesh. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, "Susan twisted her body and screamed as the sharp point entered her breast. Then Dan continued inserting the needle forcing it into her tit meat until the red tip was fully seated at the outer edge of her nipple. The sharp needle was buried in her breast. Susan was thrashing about her body in pain as she sat on the floor moaning. Carl picked up another needle, placed it to her left breast and did the same thing; shoved it completely into her tit while he listened to her scream. Susan was groaning, her body shaking. Dan and Carl's cocks were growing rock hard while they watched her in so much agony. The other men were stroking their shafts too. Once she had a needle in each tit, Dan selected another and placed it a slight distance apart from the first, again on the outside edge of her nipple. He pushed it in. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh," Susan cried out again as the point dug into her breast meat and once more was forced completely in. She could feel the extreme pain throughout her breasts. She was already exhausted from the tit whipping and at this point all she could do was allow them their fun torturing her breasts, even though the pain was more than she could bear. Dan let the others have a turn too. Each guy selected a needle and jammed it into Susan's tits until she had seven completely inserted around her nipple fully buried in each breast. Some enjoyed slowly gouging the needle into her flesh and hearing her beg and scream. Others simply grabbed her tit and stabbed it in. One guy shoved the needle into her breast, decided he didn't like the location, then proceeded to yank it out and insert it back in several times using her breast like a pin cushion. Susan was delirious from the pain crying and whimpering, "it hurts... it hurts... Stop... Stop Please!!!" But the men paid no attention to her. "So are you going to be a whore for us, like Melissa?" Dan asked. "Yes... Yes... Yes.. anything... anything you want." "Then you won't mind if we all fuck you right now, will you? Think you can handle seven cocks; a seven man gangbang?" "I'll do anything," she answered. "Anything." "And you'll suck cock too?" Dan continued. "Yes... Yes... I'll suck everyone." "And balls?... How about sucking on my balls?... and cleaning my asshole?" Dan questioned to see if there was a limit to her submission. "Yes... Yes... anything." She insisted. Even Melissa couldn't believe how cruel the men were to her friend. When Dan was convinced of Susan's absolute submission to his whims she was untied from the beam and ordered to kneel so they could fuck her. All seven men quickly stripped down and mounted her from behind fucking her cunt and her ass. She screamed nearly the whole time as each man drove his cock deep into her cunt and then changed holes forcing their hard shafts up her ass. While doing so they grabbed her needle ridden breasts, squeezed them, pulled them and literally used them as handles to hold while fucking their whore. The needles dug deeper into her flesh as she was savagely manhandled deliberately inflicting more pain on her. She screamed and begged for them to stop, but each man kept fucking her ass and mauling her breasts until he was ready to cum. Each guy pulled out and shot his load either in her mouth or all over her face. Susan never had sperm in her mouth or on her before. It felt so thick and slimy as it dripped down her cheeks. Two of the men stuffed their erupting dirty cocks between her lips sending this torrent of thick jizz across her tongue and to the back of her mouth. Instinctively she swallowed to keep from choking and then realized what a disgusting thing she had done. Well, it was disgusting Susan that is. The men loved the fact that this stuck up bitch was eating their cum. Aside from the extreme pain she felt in her massively swollen breasts, her rape and torture kept becoming more and more humiliating and degrading. To be naked in front of seven men was bad enough. But she knew her lovely body was being used for nothing more than an object to satisfy their sexual whims. She felt so dirty every time a cock entered her ass. She couldn't imagine that other women liked that. It made her feel so cheap. And it was so painful too the way they kept stuffing their cocks brutally up her virgin anal hole while squeezing her tortured breasts. Their deliberate insensitivity reinforced in Susan's mind how little they respected her as an intelligent pretty woman. Her treatment made her feel like a whore and every second that went by solidified that feeling. When all seven men finished, Susan thought finally it was over. But Dan, being relentless in his quest to completely break these types of stuck up bitches, suggested for Carl to bite her nipples while slowly removing the needles. At the same time Dan started shoving his fingers into her well-fucked loose pussy twisting them and gouging deeper and deeper. Dan kept stretching her fuckhole despite Susan's obvious moans of discomfort. He knew what he wanted to do and he didn't care how much pain he caused her. He twisted his hand into Susan's cunt and pushed hard until his whole fist disappeared up into her body. Susan was gasping at that point, not from exhaustion, which she was, but from the combination of the needles being extracted from her tits and Dan's fist being shoved so deep into her pussy. Simply penetrating her body wasn't sufficient for Dan either. He wanted Susan to know who was in control of her body from now on. So he brutally fisted her tight fuckhole savagely yanking his clenched fist out and then ramming it back in going deeper and deeper up into her body until she started shaking and quivering from the violent repeated entries. Dan couldn't quite tell if she was having an orgasm or was completely overcome with pain. He yelled at her. "Hope you like this, bitch? Because you're going to be nothing but a filthy used slut from now on." And he kept stuffing her pussy until Carl had removed every needle. "You're a fuckin' cheap whore, Susan." Her trembling seemed to last forever as she half knelt, half slumped toward the floor with most of Dan's foreman buried between her legs. Finally Dan withdrew his fist and Susan fell all the way down exhausted. "Get her back up," Dan ordered Melissa to help her friend. Melissa quickly assisted Susan back up to a kneeling position. "Please don't get him mad, Susan. He'll torture you until you surrender to him. "Hear that Susan?" Dan asked. "You're friend Melissa understands her place. Do you?" Susan was scared. In the beginning she didn't know Dan could be so brutal. Now she did. "Yes... Yes... I'll do anything. Anything you ask." "Okay, let's see if you really do understand what you are," Dan commented obviously with an idea to test her willingness. Dan walked over to the wet bar area on the other side of the recreation room to retrieve a large beer mug. Then returning to Susan he held the glass down to his cock and started pissing in it, filling it almost to the top with his hot amber colored urine. He handed the glass to Susan. "Drink up whore." Susan grabbed the glass looking at the vile secretion. Her immediate internal instinct was of total disgust and she wanted to dump it out on the floor rather than drink it. The odor alone was turning her stomach and drinking it would certainly make her sick. But she knew if she didn't Dan would certainly torture her even more. She literally had to force herself to bring the glass to her lips. Then in one motion began tipping it and swallowing, "gulp" after "gulp," drinking Dan's hot salty piss. When she finished she gagged and choked from the horrible taste. She was holding her stomach as she could feel it gushing down her throat and into her belly. Dan gave the glass to Carl. "I think she needs some more." Carl proceeded to urinate and a minute later Susan was holding another glassful. "Gulp!!! Gulp!!! Gulp!!!" Susan drank his bladderful of hot yellow piss too. "Good," Dan answered satisfied he had broken her spirit. "She's going to be a good little whore and piss slut. Can't you just see her at work in the men's room swallowing piss right from her boss's cock?" Susan was feeling sick to her stomach. All that urine burned her throat and she still had the taste of the vile fluid in her mouth. She sat there dazed listening to Dan and contemplating how she would be able to live her life obeying his wishes. Would he really make her do that at work? "Tomorrow you're going to be just like Melissa, an office whore," Dan started instructing Susan. "You wear a short skirt, no panties and a blouse with no bra. You submit to any man that wants you and do whatever he asks. Then you'll fill us in at lunch how dirty you've been. I'll be there to help you along like I did with Melissa. And you had better do as I said. If not, then watch Melissa's punishment for her poor memory. Maybe you'll think twice before resisting what I want." Susan began to think how she would keep her slut activities from her husband? What would they think of her at work? Is this what her life would be from now on? And what was going to happen to Melissa? ___________________________________ continued in Melissa Ch5 - Melissa's Punishment NiteWriterMelissaCh4 - Breaking Susan