Love and Family During the Great Death

Crumbly Writer’s Stories


Chapter 06:  Making Sure Everyone Is OK

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“You know, you could have stayed inside, talked with Linda and gotten everyone ready to leave later,” David told Ellen as he helped her over a steeper section of the trail in the dim pre-dawn light. “I figured the two of you would have had plenty to talk about this morning.”

She scrambled up beside him and they both looked back at Alice, who seemed to be having problems. David assumed it was because she stayed up too late kibitzing with her friends. He’d warned her, and she was normally pretty good about things like that, but he knew she was different with her friends than she was when she was visiting him, so he wasn’t overly surprised.

“Ha, you may get a lot of things with me, but don’t expect a Happy Suzie Homemaker,” Ellen responded. Her face was the opposite of Alice’s, positively beaming in the predawn glow, whereas Alice’s was stuck in a persistent scowl. “I’m not exactly a terrible cook, but I’ve never spent a lot of time in the kitchen. Being on my own for so long, I’ve always focused on other things than cooking and cleaning. I can make do, but all things being considered I’d just rather not bother.”

David laughed; he could understand such an attitude. Ellen really seemed to enjoy the outdoors, and having gotten used to the climb to the wind turbine, she was keeping up with them. In fact she was doing better than Alice, since she seemed to be dragging so much that morning.

“Well, if the other kids are like Alice is this morning, I’m sure Linda could use all the help she can get. Those girls are going to be hard to get moving today.”

“Oh, I wouldn’t worry about it. She’s got plenty of help, and the girls are excited. They’re glad to be out of danger and are interested in what’s happening.”

“Then why was Alice up all night?” David asked, not quite comprehending the supposedly clear signals his daughter was sending him.

“Actually, that’s the main reason I came along with you this morning. I was hoping to protect you.”

“Protect me? From what? I know this route like the back of my hand and the meteors shouldn’t start until this afternoon.”

Ellen smiled at him. For as wonderful as he was, sometimes he could be a little slow. She took his arm in hers and turned back so they could both watch Alice slowly walk up behind them, glaring at her father the entire way.

“From her,” she told him.

David shook his head. “Huh? What do you … Wait, what am I missing? What’s she angry about?”

Alice was almost up to them and Ellen didn’t want to make anything worse by saying the wrong thing, so she just added, “Think about it.”

David did. Alice stopped before she reached them, still staring at her father. He shrugged and started up the hill, trying to figure out what was going on. He climbed for a couple of minutes before he stopped dead, turning around to glance between Alice and Ellen.

“She didn’t?” he asked, hoping to not hear the response he expected.

“She did,” she answered him simply.

“Alice, were you sitting outside our room again last night?” he called, concerned that Alice might still be too troubled to sleep at night.

“She didn’t hear you last night. Well, technically she did, but she didn’t put it together then. She followed me downstairs after I left the girls alone, and confronted me.”

“And you told her?” David asked, astounded at how Ellen reacted around children.

“She figured it out herself,” she told him.

David turned and regarded his daughter again. She’d caught up to them again and was currently standing there watching him.

“Alice, it’s not what you think,” he tried to tell her.

“No, it’s not what you think,” she told him with venom to her voice. “This has got to be the stupidest thing you’ve ever done.”

“Stupidest?” he asked in confusion. He’d been sure she was going to get her hopes up about his reconciling with his ex-wife.

“Yes, the stupidest. You’ve been miserable for years now. You’ve lived as a solitary emotional cripple, and just when I think you may be getting back on your feet, you backslide right back where you were years ago.”

“I … I don’t understand,” he replied, glancing back and forth between Ellen and Alice.

“She’s not fond of the idea of the two of you being together,” Ellen informed him.

“But I thought—”

“Yes, we figured that much out,” she told him, holding his cheek like he was a slow remedial student trying to figure out an algebra equation.

“You and Mom are a mistake,” Alice insisted. “You were an emotional cripple for years after the two of you broke up. I figured getting you and Ellen together might help you adjust finally, but like they say, you take one step forward then run crying to your mother. Or rather my mother,” Alice replied angrily.

“Alice, it isn’t like that,” he tried to argue, using the same argument despite having found himself in a different battle.

“No? Then what’s it like? You and Mom slept together, didn’t you? Mom spent all night flirting with you, didn’t she? You’ve been acting like you’re walking on a cloud all morning, haven’t you?”

“No, no, that’s not what I meant. I mean that your mom and I aren’t getting back together.”

“You aren’t?” Alice asked, surprised.

“No. It isn’t like I don’t like her,” he hurried to add. “After all, we had fun, but we got together just because she was feeling lost and wanted some comfort. Some physical comfort,” he said, trying to get her to understand what happened without having to spell it out for her. “Like when you came to our bed the other night. She was doing the same thing. It didn’t mean anything. She just wanted to be held, and I, well….”

“I actually arranged it,” Ellen explained. “She asked me if she could, telling me it would only be a onetime thing, and I agreed thinking it might be good for your father, possibly helping him get over his hang-up over her once and for all.”

“Really?” Alice asked, smiling for the first time that morning.

“Really,” David assured her. “We’re not getting back together. You’re stuck with Ellen and me, because I’m not about to give her up now that I’ve found her.”

“Now that’s good news,” Alice replied, wrapping an arm around them both and pushing them up the hill so they could finish their project and get back before the morning got too late. “Wait a minute,” she asked, pulling up short. “What about Mom? Does she know this was only a onetime thing?”

“I just said she only asked me for a single visit with your father,” Ellen reminded her.

“That doesn’t mean she isn’t assuming something else,” Alice countered.

“I’m sure she’s not planning anything,” David insisted.

“Well, we hope so anyway,” Ellen added. “We were planning to get together and hash it out this morning. We figured we’d do it when we left today, the three of us in a car together with no way out until we get to where we’re going. I figured that way we’d figure out if anyone is harboring any resentment over what happened last night.”

“If you weren’t getting together, then why risk it?” Alice asked. Not an unreasonable question.

“It’s one of those weird adult things,” David replied unconvincingly. “Frankly, I’m not sure I understand it myself.”

“Well, I still think it’s a stupid idea, and I hope you’re correct, but I’ll be anxious until this is over. Now let’s finish up here so you two can get back and talk to Mom,” Alice replied, pushing them back uphill.



Everyone seemed to be having a good time when they returned. The girls were giggling and talking a mile-a-minute, the women were busy keeping the food fresh and removing used plates, while Bobby was cleaning up the dirty dishes, earning the respect and gratitude of the women.

“So the heroes return, having kept us protected with continuing power and other luxuries,” Linda said when they entered. “We saved you some food warming in the oven. Sit down and eat up, since I know you’re anxious to get moving.”

“Oh, are we heading out today?” Caitlyn asked excitedly.

“Yeah, we’d love to go see what things look like outside,” Julie agreed. “I was so busy trying not to throw up from the pain yesterday, that I had trouble paying attention to what was happening.”

“You can leave me out of it. I saw enough death and destruction to last me a lifetime,” Erica said.

“Well, we only have a single vehicle today since Betts and Ma are heading into town, so there really isn’t room for anyone else,” David warned them. “It’s just Ellen, Linda and me. I’d like the rest of you to look over the buildings and land outside to see how much damage we suffered last night. Maggie can help you make any repairs that are necessary, since she’s pretty capable with a hammer and a saw. Bobby, I don’t know how much you know about cars, but I figured you might be the best to see if you can make some basic repairs to the cars Linda and Betts were driving last night. I’m thinking it’ll be mostly banging out the dents and determining what works and what doesn’t.”

“Sounds good, we can manage that,” Maggie told him.

“Bob’s going to need help,” Amy said. “I’d be glad to help him. I’m fairly good with mechanical things. I’ve helped my brother fix dings he put in my dad’s car often enough to know my way around them.”

“That makes sense, especially since the others don’t know where anything is or how to deal with downed trees,” Alice said. “I figure Mom doesn’t either, so I figured I’d better go with you, too, especially since there’s enough room in the SUV for one more.”

David and Linda looked at her in shock, but Ellen just shook her head with a small smile on her face she tried to hide.

“Uh, we were hoping….” David said, not sure how to finish his objection.

“We might run into some things you really shouldn’t see,” Linda replied, thinking of something more specific than David could.

“Like dead bodies? Mom, I saw several, and I helped drag them out of a collapsed house. I can deal with it. But I’d be better at crawling through storm damaged buildings than you would be, and I’m used to working with Dad, so I’m the best person to help him with any trouble you may encounter.”

Linda looked at her, her mouth opening and closing as she tried to figure out some objection to bring up but finding none. David tried to reason with her, since he knew she was aware of why they wanted their time alone.

“We were hoping to use the time to discuss how to handle the accommodations. We only have limited supplies, so we have to figure out how to allocate things, plus your mom isn’t sure how long she wants to stay here.”

Alice looked him dead in the eyes as she replied to him. “I know what’s here plus where to find replacements, I also know what each of the girls is likely to eat, as well as their personalities and what they’ll be like after spending a week in the country locked away in a cabin. Besides,” she said with a triumphant smile, “I’ve got as much interest in what you decide as anyone. I can help with the discussion.”

David took his turn imitating a goldfish until Ellen took control for him. “That’s OK, as long as you sit quietly in the back and let the adults discuss things on their own. You don’t say anything unless you’re asked your opinion, understood?”

“Yes, ma’am,” Alice replied with a grin. Alice’s friends looked at her in confusion, figuring there was more going on here than it appeared but not sure quite what it was.

“You girls ever cut up a tree before?” David asked. “I’m sure there are a lot of downed trees that need to be cleared away.”

“Really?” Amy asked with a sparkle in her eyes. “Could we use the chain saw?”

“Maybe I’d better handle the chainsaw,” Bobby suggested.

“Over my dead body,” Ma replied. “No one’s going to let a blind man wave a chainsaw around. Those things are dangerous and people injure themselves every day.”

“She’s got a good point. If anyone uses the chainsaw it’ll be Maggie,” David informed them. “The rest of you can help by holding and moving logs for her, but make sure you stay out of the way of the blade. I’ll bet this will be an education you won’t get in school.”



Everyone climbed into the SUV but no one wanted to say anything, being aware of Alice sitting anxiously in the back seat. David put the car in gear and drove off as Alice waved to her friends who were cleaning up the scattered broken branches lying around the yard. No one said anything until the car was well beyond the tree line.

“You can talk now,” Alice said to the silent car. “I know what happened, so you’re not going to shock me.”

“This would be much easier if you weren’t listening in,” her mother replied.

“Hey, I’m here to make sure each of you don’t do anything stupid. Just consider me your advocate, I’m here to watch out for you.”

“Where did you learn about advocates?” Linda asked with amusement in her voice.

“Hey, I’m not that young. I know a lot of stuff,” she replied, then waited a while before adding, “but Caitlyn told me about it. I knew what I wanted to do but I didn’t know the right word for it.”

“Remember what I said,” Ellen reminded her. “No intruding in the conversation. Let us work this out between us. This is between us. You’re here for information purposes only. When we’re finished we’ll discuss our positions with you, but we don’t want you interrupting. We’re likely to say several things you don’t agree with, but we need the freedom to explore all the options. OK?”

“Yeah,” Alice grumbled, agreeing but not sounding happy about it.

“I take it she’s not overly fond about what we did?” Linda asked David and Ellen, looking between them. “Just how much does she know?”

Ellen turned and looked at Alice. She just looked right back, not answering. “OK, you’re allowed to respond to that. Just don’t get angry when one of us says something stupid.” That seemed to please Alice so she went ahead.

“I noticed that Ellen didn’t seem anxious to return to Dad’s bedroom, so I followed her out to ask her about it. When I stopped outside Dad’s room I heard some embarrassing sounds, but I knew she didn’t have enough time to get that far, so I went downstairs looking for her.”

“How do you know how long it takes to make ‘embarrassing sounds’?” Linda asked in her ‘concerned mother’ voice.

“Alice agreed to be reasonable about our discussion,” Ellen reminded everyone. “I think it’s only fair if we return the favor. She obviously knows enough, so let’s just leave it at that.”

Linda grunted but didn’t say anymore.

“I didn’t think much of it, thinking it was just random noise or maybe the TV, so I went downstairs looking for Ellen.”

David thought about reminding her that he never really watched television at night, but he didn’t think that was a good point to bring up at the moment.

“When I found her, we started talking. She said she was ‘giving Dad some space’, which I thought was suspicious. But it was only when we’d been talking for a while that I put it all together. That was when she admitted that you were sleeping with Dad. I got upset at all of you, her mostly because I thought she was throwing away a good thing, but she told me to wait until today and that you’d explain it all to me. So now I’m waiting for you to convince me you didn’t screw up a great thing.”

“That wasn’t the response I was expecting from her,” David told his ex. “I’d thought she was upset we weren’t moving in together right away.”

“That’s not why—” she started to argue before Ellen’s glare warned her to be quiet.

“I’m curious about why she’s upset about it?” Linda said as she turned to look back at Ellen, who’d given her the passenger seat mostly so she could run interference between her and her daughter.

Ellen could see Alice getting ready to respond so she put her hand on her arm to calm her.

“She thinks you’re getting involved would hurt David,” Ellen responded. “That it took him years to get over the breakup and that I was the first girl he ever took seriously and that you stepping in now is likely to put him into a tailspin.”

Linda looked thoughtful before she responded. “I can see that, I guess. I hadn’t realized he hadn’t wanted the divorce until he mentioned it last night. I always assumed since he didn’t object to it that he was fine with it.”

“Would you have changed anything if I had?” David asked her honestly. She frowned.

“No, I guess I wouldn’t have.” David simply grunted, showing that was exactly what he’d thought and why he hadn’t said anything at the time.

“I’d just like to take this opportunity to apologize, and to say that I’m sorry for all the things I may have said about you.” David waved her off, though whether in forgiveness or simply because he didn’t want to listen to it no one was sure.

“Did you say many bad things about him?” Ellen asked, simply because she thought someone should ask it. Alice harrumphed in the back seat, establishing her position but the others ignored her interruption.

“I’m embarrassed to say that I did. I complained about him to everyone I knew. To my friends, to our friends, to both our families and to Alice as well.” She took a moment to gather herself. “But now that I see how you’ve adapted and how much you’ve accomplished, I think I’ve changed my mind. I’m also beginning to see your position now that I’m away from everyone that echoed my own.”

“All right, before we get maudlin, let’s address Alice’s question,” Ellen said, interrupting her. “What are your feelings about David after you’ve had some time to think about it?”

“Gee, it’s embarrassing to say this in front of your daughter, especially when you know she already disapproves,” she replied.

“You’ll get over it. I told her she couldn’t interrupt so just ignore her. We won’t make any progress unless we can be honest with each other,” Ellen reminded them.

“You’re right,” Linda responded. “OK, here goes. First, let me just say that last night was wonderful,” she said, to which David blushed, but she went on. “It reminded me of everything we had that we’ve lost, and I’ll admit that I hadn’t realized just how much I’ve missed it.” Alice groaned in the back but no one called her on it.

“I’ll also admit that if things were different, if you weren’t already involved and if I was meeting him again for the first time, that I just may decide to see where things went.”

Alice leaned forward as if to say something but Ellen held her in place.

“She’s got to be free to be honest. She’s just telling us how she felt, not what she plans to do, so let her speak her mind.” Alice nodded and sat back again, placated for the moment.

“So do you have any plans to pursue a relationship with David?” Ellen asked, mainly to calm Alice more than anything else, even though she was dying to hear the answer. But she knew the initial answer would be mainly directed at appeasing everyone, and wouldn’t likely be an honest answer anyway.

“No, absolutely not. I think too much of you, David and Alice to step into the middle of everything and screw up everyone’s life, but….” she answered before hesitating, letting her unspoken words hang in the silence of the car.

“But…?” Ellen prompted her.

“Well, I hope you don’t mind, but I wouldn’t object to being able to flirt with him some more. Speaking honestly, he’s still pretty damn sexy, and I figure some innocent teasing won’t hurt anyone too much.”

“That sounds fair,” Ellen said noncommittally.

“So we haven’t heard from you, yet, David,” Linda reminded him. “What was your response to last night?”

“Well, I was surprised by how strong my feelings were towards her, something I never would have realized if Ellen hadn’t pushed us together. But the important thing is, as wonderfully as we get along, I’m not about to abandon Ellen for you, especially if I don’t trust how long this new attitude of yours is likely to last.” Alice gave a silent thumbs up in the back seat, but no one beside Ellen noticed it.

“OK, so you won’t ‘abandon me’, but that doesn’t really answer the question,” Ellen pushed him for a clearer answer. “How do you feel about what happened last night?”

“It was insightful, and I think ultimately it was healing. What’s more Linda seemed like a completely different person, like the woman I first married.” Linda smiled at that confession and reached over and held his hand on the steering wheel.

“I was hardly a woman when we first married,” she reminded him. “We were both young and carefree before I got obsessed with status and position.”

“You’ll always be….” David started to respond before catching himself. Considering the reaction of the other passengers in the car he didn’t finish the sentiment. But Linda smiled in acknowledgement of the unsaid compliment, so he was satisfied she at least knew what he was thinking.

“OK, but again, ignoring what you feel obligated to say, what did you take away from last night?” Ellen prompted.

“That as nice as it was, and as much as I continue to love my ex-wife, that I’m still committed to this new relationship, and that I’m not going to jeopardize it in any way.” David thought he was in the clear with that response. And he was until Ellen asked her next question.

“And if I wasn’t in the picture? What would you do if we got in a fight and I stormed off on you?”

David didn’t look pleased. He ground his teeth and thought about how best to reply but he was saved by a fallen tree lying across the road. So he stopped the car and got out without answering.

He climbed out, walking around the tree examining it while the others got out. While Ellen and Linda looked on, Alice went into the back of the car and extracted the spare chainsaw and a couple of bow saws she knew he’d have there. As she carried them to him Linda spoke up.

“You’re not getting out of this so easily, buster. What’s your answer?”

David looked back pleadingly, as if asking Alice whether she couldn’t have been faster, but he knew it would take a few minutes to ensure the chainsaw was ready. ‘Damn chainsaw,’ he thought to himself, but he stopped to consider how he’d respond as he set about preparing it.

“That’s not an easy nor a fair question,” he responded.

“Maybe not, but it’s the only sensible one,” Linda reminded him. “So what would you do if Ellen wasn’t here to influence you?”

David looked up at Linda and looked her full in the eyes. “I still wouldn’t do it. We’ve lost our trust in each other, and I couldn’t be sure you’d feel any differently once you got back home. You seem different now, but there’s no guaranteeing you’ll feel any more kindly to me once things return to normal in your life.” With that he stood up and started the chainsaw, effectively ending the conversation for the next twenty minutes.



Once they got back underway Linda turned back to regard Ellen. “OK, we’ve heard from David and I, what about you, Ellen? What would you have done if I had said that I was still interested in David?” She asked this with a smile on her face, intending it mainly as a way of allowing Ellen a chance to reconfirm her new commitment to her ex. She figured that was just a small payback for the favor that Ellen had allowed her.

Ellen didn’t have to think about her response before she responded. “Frankly I’d fight like hell to keep David to myself. I’m not about to give him up at this point. The only reason why I agreed to our arrangement was because I could commiserate with what you were going through and you convinced me this was a onetime only thing.”

“What does ‘commiserate’ mean?” Alice asked.

“It means she can relate to it, that she can understand how she feels,” David explained to his daughter.

Linda’s smile grew bigger as she delivered her next response. “And what if I didn’t plan to steal him away? What about if I just wanted to share him?”

“Share him?” Ellen asked, clearly thrown off her game.

“Yeah, what if I wasn’t interested in keeping him for myself. I wouldn’t want to displace you, you’d still be the top dog, as it were, but what if I was willing to pick up your crumbs?”

“Eww!” Alice said with a gagging motion.

“I didn’t mean anything kinky, young lady,” Linda informed her daughter. “I’m just curious how Ellen would respond if it wasn’t so cut and dried?”

Ellen had to think about this one a little more carefully. “I really can’t answer that easily. It would depend on a lot of things. I wouldn’t even consider it if I suspected that you weren’t serious, or that you might change your mind at some point. I only agreed to it because you seemed to be serious about not wanting to come between us.”

“Fair enough,” Linda replied, not really interested in pursuing the matter. She’d asked the question just to be difficult. Although she was now seeing her ex in a new light, she wasn’t sure she was ready to change her entire life in pursuit of something that hadn’t worked the last time.

At this point they’d left David’s private drive and reentered the local road that led to it. There were several houses located here. Not a lot, but a few grouped together. David and Alice looked over them to see just how much damage they’d suffered during the two days of meteor storms. It didn’t look good. One house was completely gone, burned so badly that only the blacked framework was left standing, the other two looked damaged but were still standing, but David was sure there’d been a fourth. He was proved right when he saw at the end of the block the crumpled remains of a house that had collapsed in on itself. He was so busy watching the house that he was shocked when someone ran directly in front of the car.

Linda screamed and David quickly slammed on his brakes, glad he’d noticed the person in time to respond. The tires squealed, but it was kept to a minimum by the antilock brakes, but the car broke to the side as David yanked the steering wheel to avoid a collision. Everyone was a bit stunned, having had to brace themselves unexpectedly, but at least they hadn’t hit anything.

The figure that had run in front of them, a young woman, had been waving her arms to get their attention. Now she ran around the car to David’s window where she proceeded to knock repeatedly on the window. David didn’t have long to consider her, but she looked a bit of a mess. She was wearing a nightgown, but one that was badly torn and covered in smeared blood across the front. Her hair was a mess too, with long straight red hair strung out all around her, but that was understandable given the rest of her look.

Despite his tendency to respond cautiously to someone who looked so out of it demanding something from him, David rolled his window down to see what the problem was.

“You’ve got to help me,” she said, speaking excitedly, hardly pausing to take a breath. “My parents are dead, my sister died in my arms and I can’t find my brother. Everything we had is gone, the house is a mess and I can’t find anything.”

David heard the other doors of the vehicle open as he tried to calm the woman. “Take a deep breath and relax. Lead us to the house and we’ll take a look around,” he instructed her as Ellen and Linda gathered around her, getting her to step back from David’s door so he could get out of the car.

“I doubt you’ll find anything,” she told them. “As I said, most everyone is dead and my brother is simply gone. What I really need is assistance. I have no money, no food or clothing, and I’ve got nowhere to go. I figure the banks are closed so I can’t get any money, and I couldn’t find the car keys to go anywhere. Besides, I’ve really got nowhere else to go. I’m lost and out of options,” she said, starting to break down now that her initial panic seemed to be fading.

“Look, let’s see if we can help you locate your brother, then we’ll discuss helping you. We were on our way to the police station anyway, so we can—”

“No, I don’t need that kind of help. The police haven’t been by, so I doubt they’ll have the time to help, and I’m too old to worry about custody. What I need is someone to help me survive until the banks and stores open. I figure it will take weeks before they can confirm that my family is dead and issue a death certificate, so I’m not going to be able to gain access to my money, so I need—”

“Look, we’ll work all that out, but right now let’s concentrate on your family. Can you show us where everyone was?”

The woman, a girl really, led them to the scattered remains of the house that had once stood there. David noted that the woman had no shoes, stepping carefully around the various obstructions. He also noticed the torn nightgown she had, and the fact that it revealed she was only wearing a slim pair of panties under it. He tried to keep his eyes forward, though, not wanting to be accused of leering at someone who’d suffered so much.

“I was downstairs when there was a loud crack and the whole thing came down,” she explained, as she pointed to one corner of the mass of broken timbers and jumbled belongings. “I was in the kitchen getting a drink, we were all downstairs because we were so worried about the storm. I guess the kitchen was a little safer than the rest of the house. It looks like the whole house fell away from the kitchen, because I escaped relatively unscathed. I dug and dug and I found my mom and dad, but it looked like they’d died instantly. My sister was a mess and she died in my arms. I’ve been looking for my little brother ever since, but I haven’t been able to find him.”

“When did this happen?” David asked, just so he could calculate the likelihood of anyone’s still remaining alive.

“Yesterday evening sometime,” she surmised, looking about wildly. “I’d left my watch and jewelry in my bedroom, so I have no idea what time it is or how long it’s been, but it must have been around seven in the evening.”

“Where was your brother when the house collapsed?” David asked. He noticed that Alice was returning from having gotten some supplies from the back of the car. He wasn’t sure he had the proper tools for this, but they’d give it a try at least.

“I’m not sure. He might have gone into the basement, or he might have gone upstairs. I really don’t know.”

David looked around. The new woman’s feet were already a bloody mess and Linda’s shoes were little better. Luckily Linda had been smart enough to have left her high heels behind, but her only other shoes had been her jogging sneakers, which were way too lightweight to be any good in this environment. They’d tried to find her something else that she could wear, but there was a shortage of women’s hiking books around the house, so they were stuck with what was available.

“Alice, you and I will start searching the debris for any signs of her brother,” David said, switching into organizational mode as he started issuing instructions. “Ellen, see if you can find her anything she can wear or can scavenge from the remains. Linda, you stay back and watch out for her. You can bring us anything we may need, but keep her off her feet. You’ll probably want to clean and wrap them somehow.”

David worked to pry a decent length of two-by-four loose so he could use it to lever the heavy debris aside. He and Alice worked out a system where he’d lift heavy obstacles aside and she’d quickly examine whatever was exposed. The girl, whose name turned out to be Flora Elmsford, directed them to where her parents’ bodies were. It took a bit, but David and Alice managed to dig them both out. Flora’s sister, Blossum’s, body was already lying out in the open so they could access it easily. None of them looked very comforting, already beginning to bloat and smell.

“What about friends, relatives or neighbors? Isn’t there anyone who can help?” Ellen asked.

“No, I have friends, but none near here, and there wasn’t any electricity or phone service anyway. I tried reaching the neighbors, but the one left yesterday morning as soon as it was light outside. They just packed up and left. The other house burned down during the initial storm, so they left as well. I tried the other neighbor, the Williams, but they haven’t responded. Their light was on last night, which I remember thinking was odd since all the power on the block was out, but I couldn’t figure out where they went to.”

David didn’t have a good feeling about that little tidbit of information.

“Stay here, I’ll check them out,” he told the others, but it was like he’d invited them to tag along, as they all followed him like a bunch of young puppies looking to play.

When he reached the neighbor’s house he issued more instructions to ensure no one else would be endangered.

“Everyone stay outside. Don’t come inside. If I’m gone for more than twenty or thirty seconds then start breaking all the windows in the house.” With that he tried the door and wasn’t surprised to find it unlocked. Entering, he didn’t bother looking around, instead taking a big breath of fresh air and holding it as he ran into the living room just off the front door. Gaining a window he flung it open, taking a gasp of air since the one he’d taken before was exhausted. Refreshed, he proceeded to open all the other nearby windows. Once he thought the room had a chance to air out a little he finally took in his surrounds.

Exactly as he’d anticipate, he saw a man and woman, probably in their late 30s or early 40s lying motionless in their chairs. Just to be sure he checked them, but as he expected, they were both dead. Most likely from carbon monoxide poisoning. Just to be sure, he made his way to the garage, opening more windows as he went. As he’d thought, there was a generator sitting motionless in the garage, having run out of gasoline a long time ago, the garage door opened to allow the electrical cords to run from the garage into the house. He sighed in frustration how people could overlook something that could, and did, end up costing them their lives.

He finally opened the garage door, where he faced the others waiting to see what had happened and whether he was alright.

“They died from running their generator inside the house without any carbon monoxide detector. They were overwhelmed by the fumes from the generator. They probably never even knew what happened to them, just quickly falling asleep never to awaken.”

Turning to the others he again started issuing instructions. “Ellen, you take Flora upstairs to see if she can find anything she can wear. Focus on decent shoes if you can find them, and also try to disinfect her feet. All she needs now is an infection. We’ll have to give her a tetanus shot later, since I’m sure she’d stepped on several nails while she was looking for her family.

“Linda, see if there’s anything in the kitchen worth saving. Flora will need anything she can scavenge. Alice, make sure the windows are all open upstairs, then when you’re done we’ll start closing them again to protect the house from the elements.”

The women all started moving to their assigned tasks when Flora stopped. “They had a daughter, Melissa, did you see her?”

David swore under his breath. He hadn’t counted on that. “Ellen, you go in first with Alice. While Alice opens the windows check the bedrooms upstairs for the girl. Frankly, if you haven’t seen her since last night I can’t see how she could have survived.”

The girls ran upstairs then while David stayed to talk to Flora and Linda went into the kitchen to see what she could grab. It was there she encountered Melissa, probably only seven or eight-years-old, lying peacefully on the floor looking like she was just taking a quick nap on the cool floor. Linda reached out and tried to get her to wake up, and failing that she called out for some reinforcements.

“David, I found her!” David came running in, with Flora following him. He knelt down by the girl and checked for her carotid pulse, but sadly shook his head and picked her up, taking her in to lay with her parents. Linda and Flora just watched him disappear. Flora got Linda moving again, pushing her towards the refrigerator.

“Aren’t you disturbed by that?” Linda asked.

“Frankly, I’m a little past being shocked,” Flora responded. “I’m just overwhelmed. I’m overwhelmed by death, by destruction, and by everything I’ve lost. I’ve got to keep moving now, because if I stop I may never start again. So let’s get busy so I can keep from thinking of everyone I’ve lost.”

Linda just shook her head, unable to fathom such immense sadness, but she followed Flora’s advice and checked the refrigerator to see what was salvageable. As she expected, most of the stuff in there was already spoiling due to the lack of electricity, but she grabbed the bottled water and sodas she saw. Next she turned to the counter and started to reach for the cookie jar when she paused.

“Are cookies and bread OK?” she called out.

“Only if they’re securely wrapped,” David called back from the other room. “If they’re exposed I wouldn’t trust them. I’m not sure what effect carbon monoxide has on food, but I wouldn’t trust it just on principle.”

Flora was collecting all the canned goods and unopened packages until David called them again.

“Flora, you’d better get upstairs and see if you can find some clothes. That’s the most important thing you’ll be needing now. Try not to disturb too much, as I’m sure their family wouldn’t appreciate seeing the house torn up by us.”

As Flora headed upstairs Alice came down and looked nervously at her father before entering the living room with the three dead bodies. Linda, initially motivated by a sense of trying to shield her daughter moved in front of her, but she kept moving based on something else, and she ended up wrapping her arms around her ex-husband seeking comfort from him once again as she tried to absorb some of his strength from her physical connection to him.

David didn’t say anything, just holding her for several minutes until it got to be too much for him.

“Don’t worry, Alice, there’s nothing beside basic human compassion happening here, but we need to get started. I want to move Flora’s family here so they’ll be protected from the elements and any wandering wildlife. I think it would be better if Ellen and I did that, so see if you can take over for her upstairs.”

“I can do that,” Alice responded. “I mean, it’s a shock seeing them, but I already know they’re dead, and I’d rather be doing something than just sitting around thinking about it.”

David considered that for a moment. “Are you sure? I’m not sure exposing you to this much death is the healthiest way to raise someone.”

Alice waved him off. “Yeah, I’m sure. I don’t think Mom is up for it, since she’s not used to this kind of thing. I’ve dealt with death in the woods near your house, so I’m a little better equipped for it. Besides, unlike Mom, I have you to help me over any difficulties, and I know you’ll watch out for me.”

“It sounds like you’ve already given this a lot of thought. I’m still not convinced it’s a very smart move, but you’re probably right about Ellen and your mother. Are you sure you wouldn’t rather help Flora instead?”

Alice simply shook her head. “No one else here is better equipped to help you than I am,” she answered.

“OK, Linda, why don’t you take over for Ellen and tell Flora to stay upstairs until we ask her to come down?”

Linda nodded and, once again, they each set off in their own directions, Linda heading upstairs while David and Alice headed next door.

Linda entered the master bedroom where Ellen was looking through the open closet, handing out various things to Flora.

“Nope, I’m telling you, she’s bigger than I am,” Flora said, regarding one outfit she handed back while she took the next that Ellen handed her. “Now that might work,” she responded, as Linda entered the closet and without saying a word gave Ellen a hug as well.

“I may need to borrow David again,” she said simply. “Seeing all this death and thinking of Alice and the other girls has me completely unnerved. He held me for a little while and it helps, but I’m sure I’m going to need more.”

“I understand,” Ellen responded, not saying anything else. Linda quickly responded, pushing her out of the closet.

“They need you. Something about shuffling bodies. We girlie-girls will stay up here where we can avoid such things, while focusing on fashion and accessories,” she laughed uneasily. Ellen gave her a last glance, trying to determine if she’d be OK on her own or if she’d return to find two hysterical women crying when she returned, but both seemed to be OK for now.

Everyone worked as quickly as they could. No one took the time to find a makeshift stretcher or body bag, so they simply carried the bodies by grabbing them under the arms or by their feet and walking as rapidly as they could before they had to put them down to avoid dropping them. It wasn’t pretty, but it got the job done. Although carrying the bodies was more of a two person job, Alice concentrated on digging the bodies loose and preparing them, while her father and Ellen carried them. She carefully closed their eyes and said a brief prayer for them, despite not having anything personal to say about them.

In order to protect her a little, David assigned Ellen to carrying the bodies by their feet, meaning she’d have to face away from them as they carried them, which meant that David had to watch them the entire trip. He was glad he hadn’t given Alice or Ellen that role, but he also knew he’d have to take time to talk the issues raised with both of them later. It’s one thing to see someone in the distance die, but it’s another to confront death head on by watching its aftermath in the cold lifeless eyes of the dead up close.

When they finished, they found Linda and Flora putting various supplies from the house into the SUV, having ignored David’s warning to stay upstairs to avoid seeing what they were doing. But Flora seemed appreciative, and thanked David herself with her own hug when they came back to the car.

“Thanks for doing that for them,” she told him.

“I’m sorry we couldn’t find your brother, but he could be anywhere. I hate to say it, but I don’t think he made it. If he had, he’d have tried to make some noise by now to let us know where he was. Unfortunately there’s just too much shit to move to find him, and we only have so much time before the meteors are going to start up again.”

“What about me?” she asked, pulling back to look him in the eyes as he considered her request. “Linda told me your house is secure and seems to be safe from the meteors. She also said that although it’s crowded that you have spare floor space, and that’s a heck of a lot better than I have right now.”

David looked hesitant, but eventually sighed and nodded. “We still have to see the sheriff, so we’ll tell them about everyone here when we do. We’ll also see if we can pick you up any supplies when we pass some stores, but I doubt any of them will be open.”

Her smile was all the response he needed, as she enfolded him in a tight hug once again, this time tight enough for him to confirm that she was, in fact, dressed in nothing more than a torn nightgown and panties.

“I’ll do anything you want for this,” she promised him in a quiet whisper. “Anything at all.”

He was going to try to disabuse her of that notion, but thought better of it as he saw everyone watching them. Better not to call attention to it than to cause a fight amongst the women. Hopefully she’d get the message when he simply didn’t respond to her during the day.



It didn’t take them long to get out of there or to make it to the nearby town. They stopped at the local clothing store but found no one around. Flora asked about breaking in, since this was a bit of an emergency and there wasn’t anyone around, but David felt conflicted since that would put him in a similar position to the men he’d stopped the other day. None of the others felt it was a similar circumstance, but no one wanted to debate the point.

None of the other businesses seemed to have anyone in them, except for the local grocery store, which has a hive of activity with everyone who’d been holed up for the last couple of days trying to stock up quickly and get out again before the meteor shower began again. Everyone rushed inside, each going in a different direction in order to grab as much stuff as they could so they could finish as soon as possible. Linda and Ellen focused on the extra food needed by so many people, while Alice and David looked for extra supplies like crates, empty boxes and several extra bottles of wine, which David was sure would be needed in a house filled with anxious women. Flora went looking for anything she could find to cover herself with, though the selection was abysmal.

When they finished they headed over to the local police headquarters, only to find it battered down. It turned out there was a single deputy there, but the building had taken a beating and they didn’t want to risk damaging the building further by overusing it. He told them the various officers were trying to roam the territory, looking for anyone needing help but they couldn’t spend too long looking because of the small window of opportunity open to them. He thanked them for the information on the people they’d found and told them they’d see about picking the bodies up as soon as they could, but told them it wouldn’t be anytime soon as their tiny morgue was already over full, and without any electricity they had no other options.

He was glad to get the ham radio, telling David that the sheriff would appreciate it and that he’d already told them to look out for him, which David appreciated. Normally the police cars came equipped with similar radios tuned to the police channels, but the station didn’t have electricity for their base unit, and so many of the police cars had been damaged that only a couple still had their police radios intact. Luckily they had a generator hooked up to the building, but they were only using it judiciously, turning it on for short periods then turning it off again to conserve as much gasoline as they could, since the pumps at the gas stations weren’t working any longer. David showed him what he’d need to do to communicate with Bobby, who was monitoring the news from back at the house. He told the officer that it was best to simply use Bobby to relay the information rather than trying to learn how to use the device and waste that much time himself. The officer agreed that made the most sense.

Finally the officer, one Samuel Riggins, asked if they needed anything. David assured him they were set, but Samuel took him aside and handed him a spare pistol and a pump action shotgun.

“The Sheriff told me you were helping us to handle certain supplies, and it looks like you’re making yourself helpful in other ways as well. This is just to make sure you stay safe, and can take care of anyone else that needs help as well.”

“Well, thanks, I guess, though I hope I won’t need it,” David replied. Samuel then proceeded to swear David in as a temporary officer of the law. David didn’t know if such an informal procedure would hold up in court, but such things were not a big priority at the moment.

“Oh, and here, take this as well,” Samuel said, handing him a small battery powered walkie-talkie. We ‘borrowed’ a couple from the local camping store. It’s got a good range on it, effective for up to 15 to 20 miles if you’re in a good position. That’s what we’ve been using to communicate between us, though that means we have to drive within range in order to check in. If you need anything give us a call. Likewise, if we need anything we’ll ring Bobby when we check in roughly every two hours.”

David nodded, shaking Samuel’s hand before they bid their farewells, wishing each other continued good luck. Soon they were back on the road, hurrying to get back before the peace ended when the meteors started falling again.

Since none of them wanted to air their dirty laundry before a virtual stranger, and since they’d effectively settled the discussion before they encountered her, they spent the time getting to know her and what she was like. David commented that he knew her enough to wave as he drove by, although he’d never gotten to know her parents.

“I’m attending college and only came home for holidays and, of course, over the summer. My brother and sister both still lived at home. They hadn’t even decided what they wanted to do with their lives,” she replied with a sniffle, as she lamented the lives they’d never get to lead.

“So just to avoid that for a little while,” Linda suggested, “what is it you were studying?”

“Actually I was studying Engineering. If it wasn’t so horrendous, this would be a great opportunity to put my training to use, going around and examining houses and bridges to see which ones were likely to collapse.”

“Damn, you should have told us sooner,” David commented from the driver’s seat. “I could have told police you could do that for them. I’m sure they’d be interested in knowing where any potential trouble might lie.”

“They said they’d call in, so you can tell them after we get home,” Ellen reminded him.

“Still, we could have stopped and examined a couple of places if we’d have thought of it,” he replied.

“Not if you plan on getting us home before something happens to us,” Linda added. “I’ve already spent hours riding in a car in the middle of raining debris, I’d rather not do it a second time.”

That of course led to a discussion about what everyone had suffered through, which only led to Flora being impressed that David had such foresight to build his retreat.

“It wasn’t really foresight, it was just blind luck to build it facing the right direction,” he countered, but it was really no use. She was obviously infatuated, and she wasn’t about to believe he wasn’t right about everything he did. As much as he liked having his ego boosted, he knew having a house full of women all vying for his attention was just a recipe for disaster.



They managed to make it back just as the meteor shower resumed. They were delayed getting back by someone else who broke down going over a large pothole in the road. Luckily they got in and got everything put away without incident. Everyone was relieved they’d made it back. It seemed the girls had worried something would happen and they wouldn’t be able to make it back, leaving them on their own. It seemed that everyone had come to rely on David, if not to rescue them then at least to reassure them.

The girls were happy to see Flora. They were impressed that a college student would spend time with them, plus she regaled them with the stories of what had happened to them, and how she’d be rescued by David. David tried to stress that he’d hardly been the only one involved, but no one seemed convinced by his argument.

It turns out that Betts had returned from her trip alone and with a fair amount of supplies plus some clothes she’d managed to scrounge up. Despite the fact all the stores were shut up tight, she’d found a second hand store that was full of people who’d lost everything that were looking for anything they could find. She’d only picked up what she thought they needed, as she hadn’t wanted to take anything that those in need would require, but she’d gotten some more appropriate apparel for most of the girls.

Ma had, as she’d predicted, decided to stay over at the hospital. She’d called her husband to let him know what was happening. It seems the hospital was a mess. Since the hospital was a modern marvel of glass and steel, it had turned into a blizzard of shattered windows. They’d had to move everyone in the hospital to either the emergency room or down into the morgue to shelter them, which made things quite crowded. People managed to stream in throughout the day, most of them managing to drive themselves, since the ambulances were having so much trouble due to the meteor storm and their own lack of communications.

The majority of cases were from shrapnel, though there were many from falls or from collapsing buildings. The emergency room was kept busy all day, and the delivery ward, while less crowded, was also kept busy, as most of the pregnant women ended up delivering early due to the stress they were suffering.

Ma had established a schedule where she’d work for two hours then check what was happening on the radio, keeping the hospital staff informed as to what was happening around them. Bobby was working as a central clearing house of information he collected from his many associates across the country and the world. Ma told Bobby that she’d be staying at the hospital indefinitely and that she was safe there. They had plenty of spare gurneys and cots to sleep on so she’d be fine, but she’d call him if anything changed.

Betts reported that both the trip down and back had been harrowing due to the damages she saw, those hurt or killed along the road, and the terrible shape of the road. She had been anxious to get back to the security of the house.

Bobby also gave them a review of what had been happening across the country. It seems that despite the widespread destruction, most of the damage was physical. There didn’t seem to be that many deaths. Sure, there were a fair amount due to people caught by the forest fires, or those who fell victim to collapsing buildings or bridges, but so far the calamity had mostly been small scale but widespread physical damage. The biggest problem would be the repair effort afterwards.

Actually, the general consensus seemed to be that this would actually boost the economy. While it had suffered from the widespread shift of American businesses overseas, most of the shipments of supplies to and from those other countries were curtailed, either by container ships sunk at sea, or the grounding of most of the planes across the world. Thus most of the business efforts would be local, centralized on the needs of each country, rather than on competing for scarce resources with each other. What’s more, everyone was likely to hire virtually anyone willing to work to clean up the mess they were all suffering from.

The recovery effort would be substantial, but it would benefit those who were doing the work, as opposed to their efforts and their money being shipped overseas. Most economists thought that would benefit everyone and return the global economy to a more regional basis. It would take a long time to repair the basic infrastructure, and the shipping and airline industries would only be repaired once everyone else was finally settled enough for large scale production of planes and ships could resume.

He also explained the troubles ahead with the financial markets. While the major banks in New York City were secure because the electrical and telephone wires were all laid underground, most of the banks around the world reported their results electronically using older communication technology. Telephone poles, communication towers and switching stations had been damaged all over, meaning the banks couldn’t transfer loans to the Central Bank to cover minimal balances, loan payments or scheduled transfers. About the only thing that had saved the world financial market was the fact that everything had happened over the weekend when the markets were closed. The only way they could avoid bank failures would be to keep the banks closed, so it was unlikely anyone would be able to access their money for the indefinite future, which, if they couldn’t figure out how to get things started again, would be likely to cause a run on any banks remaining open. The potential for a widespread bank failure was large.

But cities like New York hadn’t escaped unscathed either. The older buildings built with small windows and constructed out of stone were fairly secure, but the more modern buildings, with their large windows and exteriors consisting of panels of polished stone, were susceptible to the this kind of assault. Every window became a source of dangerous projectiles, while wandering outside was dangerous as well due to the falling fractured stone facades. It seemed that most people had abandoned the upper floors of the office towers and congregated in the interiors near the elevator shafts, which were the farthest from the exposed windows.

Once the meteor shower had begun and everyone was restricted to the house again, the women had set to work organizing the supplies and preparing dinner, so no one had to wait long to eat. Dinner was accompanied by tales of the amazing things that David had done in rescuing Flora and taking care of both her family and her neighbors. Everyone ate up everything they said about it. David just tried to bury himself in his gravy and mashed potatoes.

After dinner the girls ran up to their room with Flora to gossip about David. She asked the girls what the deal with him was. It seems she was a little confused who he was with, since he seemed to be flirting with practically everyone. Several of the girls opined that they wouldn’t mind entertaining him, but Alice objected to that line of discussion. Finally David decided it wasn’t good leaving them alone talking about him, so he interrupted them and forced everyone downstairs so they could play some board games together. The girls didn’t mind, they could flirt and tease just as easily with him present as they could gossip in their room.

Amy told David she wasn’t much into playing a game and asked him if he had anything she could read. David took her cartoon character t-shirt as a clue, and they set out to search for his stored collection of his comic books from when he was a kid, most about twenty years old. Amy was overjoyed, telling him she could only deal with the girl-talk for so long, as she was really a big geek and preferred spending her evenings in her own make believe world. Since he’d spent many years there himself he could appreciate the sentiment, so he got her settled and returned to the board game that was already underway in the other room.

Ellen and Linda busied themselves keeping everyone fed and entertained, so they spent a fair amount of time in the kitchen. After a while David noticed Linda heading upstairs, unannounced and apparently unnoticed by anyone else except for him and Alice. Ellen came into the room a short time later and whispered in his ear. His head shot up in response and his eyes got big.

“You’re shi… are you serious?” he asked, managing to rephrase his question. Ellen simply nodded her head, smiling widely at him.

“You’re sure about this. I mean, if you have any—”

“I don’t have any doubts, but I’d suggest you get up there and get busy before you lose much time,” she responded.

“Excuse me everyone,” he told the girls sitting around the game board, “but I’ve been told that … that I need to go through my supplies stored in the back of my room. Everyone wants to make sure of what we have, just in case anyone else seeks refuge with us.”

“Ah, do you have to?” Caitlyn asked in a singsong pleading voice.

“We’ll miss you,” Flora told him. “Be sure to hurry back.”

He assured them he’d finish as soon as he could, but he figured it would take a fair amount of time. However Alice noticed that both he and Ellen were grinning broadly as he headed upstairs.



David knocked timidly on his own door, and hearing no response hesitantly entered. The lights were dimmed so he couldn’t see much, but he saw a figure on his bed so he hurriedly entered, closing and locking the door.

“It’s about time you get here,” Linda told him. “I was beginning to think maybe someone managed to grab you on the way.”

“I had to make sure that Ellen was serious about this. I mean, having your girlfriend ask you to sleep with your ex is shocking enough the first time, but after today I figured it was a onetime thing.”

“It was,” Linda replied. “But after what we experienced today, I told Ellen I needed a little more reassurance. But I don’t think you have anything to worry about. Although she’s crazy about you, we’ve managed to actually get along quite well. The only thing she asked is that we don’t try for a double tonight, as she’s not sure you’ll be able to make it home before you putter out, to mix my metaphors a little.”

As David entered, his eyes adjusted to the dim light and he saw that Linda wasn’t wearing anything, covered in only the thin sheet she had draped over herself, revealing a still shapely leg and a bit of breast. He couldn’t help himself, and smiled the entire time he raced through stripping his clothes off. That was his initial reaction anyway, but once he started, he realized how silly he was being. They had all night, and he didn’t want Linda to feel cheated because he was in a rush. So he slowed down just so he wouldn’t scare her off.

“You’re sure the two of you are OK with this?” he asked, just to be sure. “After all, I can imagine how uncomfortable it’s going to be if the two of you decide it isn’t working out like you’d hoped and we’re all stuck inside the house with nothing to do and no way to avoid one another.”

“No, we spent a lot of time talking about it, both about what we felt about it and about how we saw ourselves fitting into your life.”

“And just how do you see yourself fitting into my life?” he asked as he lay down beside her and slid his hand up her leg under the sheet that was hiding her charms.

“Well, I don’t see myself as getting in the way. As I said, I’m really more interested in spending time with you since you make me feel so safe and secure, but if we happen to have some hot and steamy sex while we’re doing that, I’m not about to object. But I also don’t see myself as moving in here with you. I know I’ve got my life in the city and you have yours out here. Once this damn storm stops and everyone gets everything straightened out again, we’ll both have to get on with our lives.”

“Well, I’m glad you aren’t setting yourself up for disappointment, because while I’m sure you know that I still love you and enjoy spending time with you, my future lies with Ellen and the life I’m building here.”

“I understand that perfectly,” Linda cooed, as David refocused his mouth from discussing relationships to working on her breast. She caressed his head as she nestled it against her breast, quietly humming a song David slowly realized was ‘their’ love song from when they were first dating.

“It’s been a long time since we’ve danced to that,” David reminded her as he smiled around his mouthful of tit.

“Well, we’re restricted to a horizontal mambo for now. We don’t want to alert anyone with the sound of our heels clicking on your hard wood floors.”

“Yeah, that would surely be embarrassing for everyone involved,” David agreed, as he sought to distract her from this mindless banter by assaulting her citadel. She giggled and proceeded to kiss him, and they kissed and enjoyed each other for several long moments, even as their hands roamed far and wide in an effort to bring more pleasure in the other than they were receiving themselves. It was a fight that neither one could win, just as neither would lose.

They spent quite a while making slow and passionate love, as they both rediscovered just how well they functioned together, each knowing just how the other responded, playing each other like a fine fiddle. As David began strumming her bow repeatedly, she hummed her appreciation as her whole being vibrated, slowly rising to a resounding crescendo as she interspersed her tune with assurances of how much she appreciated and loved his efforts as much as she loved him. After they finished they both hummed their long song duo as they both cuddled each other in their afterglow.



David made it back downstairs after the girls had started on a movie they’d found in his library. He didn’t really watch many, but he’d stocked up a fair amount of them for Alice to enjoy during their nights together. Mostly they consisted of Disney animations and romantic comedies. That had been David’s compromise, since he refused to allow any other Disney channel selections to be shown, believing them to set a bad example for the teenagers and preteens of the world.

Alice was glaring at him as he came into the room, but he was too busy grinning like a peacock to notice. Ellen gave him a big hug and thanked him for putting in such an effort to make sure everyone was comfortable, and he gave her a heartfelt minty kiss, demonstrating he knew enough to erase any evidence of what he’d been up to.

The girls insisted he join them, so he ended up sitting between Flora and Sara with little Erica sitting on his lap, though she seemed to take an inordinate amount of time settling herself into his lap. Linda wandered down a short time later, but the movie was already playing so the only people who noticed were Ellen, Alice and Maggie. They were all enjoying the insipid movie when suddenly Julie sat up and turned to the others.

“Is it my imagination, or is it a lot quieter outside than it was earlier?”

Instantly all eyes turned to the grand window overlooking the valley below the cliff in which the house resided, and they all agreed that the amount of meteor trails seemed to be dwindling. In fact, it fell off dramatically as they stood there watching it.

“I can’t believe it,” Flora said awestruck. “It’s over. The meteor storm is finally over!”



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