STORY: Annie Sits -----------------------------------------
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IT!
CODES:
m/F, mm/F, anal, blackmail, humiliation, oral, male-dominant,
voyeur, teen
REVIEW:
***FIRST!*** I don't know who wrote this!
I tried to find the author but, so far, to no avail... I think it was written
a looong time ago and he may no longer be around. His name isn't even on
the story! If anyone knows who wrote it please let
me know!
***
Gosh gosh gosh... Hmmm, how I love babysitter stories! As I've said
elsewhere, *I* used to babysit and fantasize about some of my older wards,
so these stories are just tailor-made for me! In this one, a young woman
named Anne Marie finds herself blackmailed by two younger boys into being
thier little sex slave... neat! :)
One of the best things about this story (besides the very arousing scenes)
is its "point-of-view". The story is told by Anne's boyfriend, who spies
on all the event and acts Anne is forced to undergo, unbeknowest to her
(or the boys). This adds to the sexual-energy of the story, I think!
The only problem I have with the story is how unoriginal it gets in
some parts. That, combined with the occasional spelling/grammar problem,
takes away from the flow of an otherwise excellent piece of work! However,
it's worth ignoring these minor problems in order to enjoy an otherwise
sexy, fun, and interesting tale! I give it three and a half Li'l Toons!
STORY: Basketball Terror ----------------------------------
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IT!
CODES:
M/f, M/F, F/f, Mmm+/f, anal, beastiality, f-masturbation,
humiliation,
male-dominant, rape, teen
REVIEW:
This story begins as it continues throughout: roughly written,
crude, unpolished. There's something about this style, however, which fits
the story itself and makes its reading more enjoyable. After all, it is
a tale of rape in its crudest form.
When a stuck-up high school basketball team faces their biggest game
yet, the coach decides to hedge her bets by bribing certain officials with
both money and body. When the opposing team, a less economically-fortunate
one from the "ghetto" finds out about this, they plot revenge. This is
the basic plot of the story, although it leads into too many different
scenarios to count and/or comment on here.
One of the main problems with this story is the first scene in which
the all-female suburban team is captured. The author, whoever she is, would
have done well to focus more on the girls' terror. Instead, she leads us
quickly into one fast-paced fuck-scene to the next. It isn't until later
in the story that things slow down enough for us to enjoy them.
This story certatinly could have been done better, but once you weigh
through the first quarter of the story you find yourself engrossed in a
rather exhilarating ride. Nonetheless, the dialogue is rather forced and
uninspired and the sex-scenes rarely arouse. I give this decent tale two
and half Li'l Toons.
TITLE: Batgirl and Catwoman ----
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here, or scroll down, to find out where this story can be acquired!
DATE:
Sometime in 1997, approximately
CODES:
F/F, MM+/F, anal, bondage, female-dominant, oral, parody,
male-dominant, rape, superhero
REVIEW:
I don't know about you all, but I absolutely *love* the old
'60's Batman series (which the Sci-fi channel just started showing!). It's
campy, trite, and at times frustrating in how cheesy it is, but Adam West
was *so* sexy back then! And the show is so funny in how bad it is I just
can't help but watch....!
As far as this story goes, I've read a couple erotic stories on the
Net based on Batman, Batgirl, Catwoman, and more... lol, there are *lots*
of them out there, after all! The thing that makes this one so good is
the fact that it's based on the TV show, which lends itself towards eroticism
better than say the comic-books or movies. Also, it's written *exactly*
like the TV show!!!
It also leaves out Batman almost entirely, which is a plus. This story
deals with a Batgirl who has changed her uniform (which, btw, I didn't
think was necessary... in the show she was *really* sexy looking) and her
run-in with the super-criminal Catwoman (who's costume has also changed).
They team up in an unlikely alliance to defeat the Joker, Riddler, and
Penguin, but end up being defeated themselves at more than a couple points.
As you read the sex scenes (which are graphic and excellently portrayed)
it's impossible not to picutre the TV show heroine and villian, and that
makes this story even more arousing! Batgirl boung and gagged and forced
to give BJ's; Catwoman getting raped by the Riddler... :). The best scenes,
though, are the ones where they're put into some kind of devious trap together,
like being lowered into a vat of acid while the only way to slow down their
decent is to eat each other out... shudder!
Of course, the heros of this story (Batgirl and Catwoman both) ultimately
prevail, just like the heros of the TV show always did. But it's fun and
surprisingly arousing to see them put through their paces in the meantime,
and I highly reccommend this absolutely *awesome* story to everyone!
I give it Four and a half Li'l Toons!
Finding this Story:
This story is hard to find for several reasons. First of all, no one
wants to post it since it's risky to post stories about copyrighted characters!
Secondly, lots of stories all over the 'Net have the same title as this
one... but aren't nearly as well done! And finally, it's by an "Unknown
Author" which just complicates things...
I think your best bet for finding it would have to be Kristen's Collection
(which is a good free site anyway!). Go to her page (https://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Kristen/www),
then scroll all the way down the main page to her categories and click
on "Super Hero". That will bring you to an FTP directory (you could also
simply go to the FTP directly; address given below). The file you want
is called "Catwoman-and-Batgirl.txt" and is 142k in size... don't bother
with the other Batgirl stories, they suck!!!
Here's that FTP address again:
(ftp://asstr-mirror.org/files/collections/Kristen's_Collection/Super_Hero_Archive/)
You could also try searching on Deja.Com for the story (click
here for more information) but it'll take you longer to find it...
as a last resort it'll work, though!
Here's hoping you find the story... it rocks!!!
STORY: Slut Match -----------------------------
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DATE: sometime in 2000
CODES:
f/f, m/f, mm+/f, female-dominant, humiliation, oral, teen,
rape, spanking, teen, violence
REVIEW:
When two teenaged girls get into a cat-fight, who knows what
might happen? I've been in three (two in highschool, one since) and believe
me, you never know!
But what makes this story so *cool* isn't the fight itself, but what
happens *after*! The winner (and villian) of the story (Erica), decides
to humiliate and subjugate her victim (Joy) in front of a crowd of
onlookers. She spanks her, makes her "display" herself, and then ultimately
rapes her. What's so sexy about it is the character development seen here,
rarely found in such a short story. You really feel sorry for poor young
Joy when she gets fucked with!
However, despite this author's well developed scenes and characters
the reader will most likely find his style somewhat "unarousing" in certain
places. The pain aspect is looked into almost too much at times, and the
humiliation of the protagonist is at many places unbearable, despite the
author's attempts to make the reader believe she's enjoying herself.
Over all, though, this is a great story. I wish the author wasn't so
"secretive" and all... and I hope he decides to write again! I give this
story three and a half Li'l Toons!
Quick Note:
The author of this story is a really
cool guy! When I asked him if I could archive it he agreed, but said that
he'd rather I leave his name off the piece (hence the "Unknown Author"
credit). I guess he's written a bunch of stories but quit about a year
back and tried to erase all knowledge of his existance... unlikely, since
so many of them were very popular!!! I'm in the process right now of trying
to convince him to write again, but
I can't without help
!
If you like this story e-mail me and I'll forward it on to him... maybe
together we can get him writing once more!
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