M/f, anal, bondage, male-dominant, inter-racial, oral, rape, slavery, teen

This story of sexual slavery is an excellent combination of "masturbatory story" and "interesting story"! The protagonist is a man who decides he just *has* to kidnap and rape his next-door neighbor, a 16-year-old hotty named Marsha. What leads him to this, and the act itself, is well delivered and very arousing. And he commits the perfect crime when he captures and turns the once aloof (and virgin) girl into a sexual slave-dog, ready to fulfill his every whim...

Unfortunately, despite the rather erotic build-up Mr. DePloom kind of fades his characters into a rather borish background of dominance and submission, never giving the victim time enough to really experience any genuine state of reluctance. She turns too quickly, in my opinion, into the "perfect" slave. Had DePloom dragged out the black-beauty's "initiation" longer I think this could have rivaled even Slave Sister.

All in all this story is quite good-- what else can you expect from Norm DePloom, who writes so well it sometimes hurts (literally!!!)? I just wish he'd finish it!!! The two parts I have here posted are the only ones I know to exist... let's all e-mail him and ask for a conclusion, since the cliff-hanger is just frustrating!!!

I give this story three and a half  Li'l Toons... not Norm's best, but still pretty damned good! :)

m/f, mm+/f, M/f, m/F, anal, blackmail, exhibitionism, incest, light-bondage, extreme-reluctance, male-dominant, teen, rape

I feel I must start off this review by mentioning that Slave Sister is not for the weak at heart. It contains some very rough scenes involving some very young teenagers! 

Now that that's out of the way, Slave Sister is an excellently written, highly-erotic story about a young girl named Fran and her sexual enslavement to her older brother. What begins as a forced incestual experience with him turns out to become a full-blown submission to his every depraved whim... and they are many!

What makes this story so great is the fact that every scene is so damned arousing! Literally not a paragraph goes by where you don't find yourself highly excited and, I've got to admit, this makes it hard to read this rather long story in one sitting! ;) But I'm a sucker for the "hard and long" stuff, as it were, so this story fits right up my... alley! <g>

Norm DePloom's ability to accurately describe sensations and events such that the reader can't help but become absorbed is almost unequaled. With the exception of a few minor grammarical mistakes I think this story is flawless... still, I just can't give out five toons unless a story is 100% flawless. Therefore I give Slave Sister four-and-a-half Li'l Toons! :)