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Stories by Maria Gonzales

English isn't Maria Gonzales'  first language, according to her. That makes her command of the language that much more impressive, if you ask me! Although I find a lot of her stories (she's been writing for A.S.S. for some time) kind of... well, hokey I guess is the word, occassionally she put out a story quiet imaginative and arousing. She's a prolific writer, and for the most part a very erotic one as well.

all stories reviewed here are links to Mz. Gonzales' site. She has not given permission for me to archive them myself. The stories retain her copyright. Clicking on a "read it!" will bring you away from "Blackmail and Reluctance".

To contact Mz. Gonzales you can e-mail her at:
maria1971@aol.com

STORY: At Home Dares ----------------------- READ IT!
CODES: m/f, f/f, M/f, blackmail, exhibitionism, male dominant, teen
REVIEW:
The idea behind this story is so simple that it hurts those of us who struggle to come up with similarly arousing ones. When Lisa goes online one night, quite horny, she ends up displaying her body out her window when she's dared to by a guy she meets online. Unfortunately for poor Lisa it ends up that the mysterious guy she just met is actually her neighbor... and he has a camera.

One can predict how this story progesses. Lisa finds herself being forced to pretend to be Adam's (the neighbor) girlfriend, which leads to a strange series of incidents. 

This story never really peaks as a work of exceptional quality, but it never drops beneath the "arousing" level, either. Although most of the sex-scenes are obvious rip-offs from other stories, there are one or two that beg attention--- the poker game scene, for instance, is exceptionally creative and arousing. 

Maria's biggest strength is her grasp of the language. The mechanics of the tale are nearly flawless, and she should be commened for that. If you're looking for a good old-fashioned "nice" teenaged-blackmail story, At Home Dares should not be missed! I give it a whopping four Li'l Toons!
 


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