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{ASSM}{REVIEW} - Goodbye Letter (MF-1st)
The writer says he's trying to get the impression of a scribbled note
done as she leaves the man who never loved her. It doesn't come
across that way at all, more as a calculated and still loving
goodbye. And an extemely well done one as well. A woman who still
cannot bear to hurt her love and wants him to know what he has lost.
Overall a brilliant failure!
Scores (of 10) 1234567890
Reading enjoyment *******
Style ********
Spelling/Grammar ********
Storyline ******
Originality *******
Wood Factor ***
All the best,
Mark
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