SUMMARY: Mike and June play a game called "slave". This somehow leads to them giving each other golden showers.

COMMENTARY: This is a nice, playful story. It is almost worth reading just for the author's humorous notes before and after the story. I'm not wild about golden showers, but for the most part I enjoyed myself. I found the game they played to be more arousing than what it led to.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S):

• Fun in the Tub - Part 1 (of 1)