SUMMARY: Marcee remembers how she finally lost it, her virginity that is.

COMMENTARY: This story is well put together, but it has a mechanical feel to it. What I mean by that is that I have no problem with the way the story is set up, but most of the descriptions seem to be more graphical than emotional. There are some scenes that I found arousing, but the story isn't overflowing with them. There are more scenes that have sex in them than there are scenes that turned me on.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 6.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 2/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S):

• Losing It - Part 1 of 1