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Title |
The Best Woman |
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Author |
E. Z. Riter |
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Length |
3,300 words |
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Main Character |
Male |
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Combination(s) |
Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male) |
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Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
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Relationship(s) |
Husband, Wife & His High School Sweetheart |
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Kink(s) |
-- |
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Setting(s) |
High School Reunion |
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Genre(s) |
-- |
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Caution(s) |
-- |
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Summary |
Jason's wife surprises him after she invites Sharon, his old flame, to spend the evening with them, in bed. |
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Commentary |
This story is somewhat arousing. As the narrator
intimates at one point, "this story isn't about my sexual
escapades." There are a few parts that I found arousing. Some
involved sex and some only the hint of things to come. This is a well written story. It is intelligently written and does not center around sex, but rather a relationship. The story flows, but at the same time the author seems to be trying to fit quite a bit into a rather short story. The characters remain a bit mysterious. They did not seem unrealistic, but I did not get the feeling that I knew them all that well by the end of the story. This is an interesting read. It is well written and somewhat arousing. I wasn't too sexually aroused by it, but it did make me think. I have given it a Good. |
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Arousal |
3 out of 5 |
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Editing |
5 out of 5 |
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Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
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Objective |
7.5 out of 10 |
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Subjective |
Good |
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