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Title |
Bringing Home the Boss |
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Author |
Lambchop |
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Length |
3,700 words |
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Main Character |
Female |
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Combination(s) |
Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male) |
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Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Homosexual (Female) |
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Relationship(s) |
Married Couple Employer-Employee |
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Kink(s) |
-- |
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Setting(s) |
Home |
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Caution(s) |
-- |
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Summary |
Leslie has become a workaholic. John, her husband, has become a couch potato. Sharon, her boss, comes up with a plan to resolve her employee's marital problems. |
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Commentary |
This is a rather direct story, but I still found myself aroused
by it. The author does a great job showing the evolution of
Leslie's feelings as she goes from despair to shock to arousal at
the proposal her boss makes. This is a very arousing story. This is a well paced story. It is obvious where the story is going from early on, but it is still a fun ride. The characters are more than adequate for this sort of story. Each was clearly defined and more than just a body. It would have been nice if there was a little more to the plot, but over all this is a well written story. I enjoyed reading this story. It is both well written and very arousing. This is more of a male fantasy than a female one, so I may be somewhat biased. This is an Excellent story. |
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Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
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Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
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Editing |
5 out of 5 |
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Objective |
8.5 out of 10 |
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Subjective |
Excellent |
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ASSM |
Bringing Home the Boss |
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Other |
Lambchop's Erotic Stories |