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Title |
A Quick Bite to Eat |
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Author |
Bob Peale |
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Story Code(s) |
M/F, M/F/F, Exhib |
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Length |
3,700 words |
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Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
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Story |
4 out of 5 |
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Objective Analysis |
9 out of 10 |
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Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
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Summary |
Sara's husband talks about how she likes to "show him off" for other women to see. |
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Commentary |
Exhibitionism, if handled properly, is a
wonderful element to have in a story. I
think this author has done a great job with
it. This is still just a stroke story, in my
mind, but it is a very arousing stroke story. One thing in particular that I like about this story is the tension. The narrator gets a sexual thrill from being showed off, but at the same time he seems a bit apprehensive. Possibly this is because he is letting his wife decide how much he will be shown off. Another thing about this story that I like is that the plot has a few twists. It isn't too direct. I gave this story an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis, because I enjoyed it a lot. It was not special enough to rate an Outstanding, but I would definitely put it on my A-list of stories. I recommend that you read it. |
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