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Title |
Barley Legal Teens |
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Author |
Bronwen |
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Story Code(s) |
F/M, Teen |
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Length |
2,400 words |
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Rating |
Excellent |
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Summary |
Laura fondly remembers the summer she was eighteen, Joe, and a field of barley. |
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Commentary |
The story is well paced. It is both arousing and romantic. I like the way the author transitions from the present to the past, and then back again. |
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ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1)
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