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Title |
And the Lady Danced 'till Dawn |
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Author |
Sven the Elder |
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Story Code(s) |
M/F |
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Length |
3,800 words |
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Rating |
Excellent |
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Summary |
Mike goes to a strip club, where he meets Carrie. |
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Commentary |
This is a very well written story. It is well paced and well
plotted. The characters seem real, although they are not
complex or dynamic. I could not find any awkward
sentences or misspelled words. Maybe some of the
paragraphs could have been broken into smaller ones. This is basically a stroke story, but the author obviously put quite a bit of effort into it. |
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ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1)
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