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Title |
On Her Leg |
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Author |
LeAnna |
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Story Code(s) |
F/M |
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Length |
1,300 words |
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Rating |
Outstanding |
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Summary |
A woman sits in a park and thinks of the badge she wears for her boyfriend. |
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Commentary |
There is not much to this story, but I liked what there was. LeAnna does a masterful job of switching back and forth between the present and past in such a short story. She breathes life into all the characters, even the minor ones. The ending was delightful. It was not what I expected. |
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ASSM |
On Her Leg |