Rogue Review  No. 55 - June 14, 1998

A Great Beach Day by Bioya

F/F

Length: 2,300 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Jan goes to the beach to catch some rays; after getting a bad 
burn a beautiful nurse takes care of her.


Commentary

I like the way the author gives insights, throughout the story, into 
how Jan is feeling.  She never completely accepts the situation, and 
yet at the same time she has an understanding of what is going on.  I
thought Jan was handled very well.

There is not much of a plot.  It is a simple and straight forward 
story.  The ending is not final or conclusive.  It was a nice, light,
arousing story.


Judgment

This is an excellent story.  I would not change a thing.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11805.txt



