Rogue Review No. 160 - August 23, 1998

Waiting by Marc D.

F-solo

Length: 5,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Jake bets Lisa that she cannot go for a week without pleasuring
herself.  Lisa does her utmost to prove him wrong.


  COMMENTARY

This is an arousing story.  I like both the idea behind it and the
execution.  I like the way the author shows us how Lisa deals with
her "ordeal".

Considering the length of the story, it would have been nice if there
was more to it than just the bet.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story, but there is not much to it, other than
the bet between Lisa and Jake.

  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14437.txt

