A Review by Lee Vine

Dandelions by Matt Twassel

M/F/F

Length: 1,600 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Mark, Pat, and Julie are taking a walk of a nice spring day.  Pat and 
Julie spend some time comparing Mark's tool to a dandelion.

Commentary

This was a nice little vignette.  It had a surrealistic feel to it.  It
also had a very naturalistic feel to it.  It was sex in the outdoors.

Like any vignette this was not really story, but I liked it a lot.  The
whole thing was very understated; no sudden orgasms or violent 
eruptions.  A very nice piece.

Rating

I give this story an 8.5 on a scale of 10.





