Rogue Review  No. 71 - June 23, 1998

Need A Lift? by Munawaruddin Ali

M/F/F

Length: 5,000 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Mohammad's car breaks down, but two beautiful, eighteen-year-olds 
give him a lift.


Commentary

This was a very well paced stroke story.  Boy meets girls.  Boy fucks
girls.  What makes it work is that the author does not rush the plot.
The sex is left for the end.  The author fills the intervening time 
with diversions that seems appropriate for this sort of story.

The plot is pretty simple and the characters are not too complex, but
this story works because the author leads the reader on a little
chase before getting to the one part that we all know will be there.


Judgment

This is a good story, but definite stroke material.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11870.txt

