Rogue Review No. 421 - August 5, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Early In, Early Out
AUTHOR: Titmouse
LENGTH: 3,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): --
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Office
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: One good favor deserves another.  The nameless 
narrator of this story offers to reduce the amount of time 
that Susan has to work in his office, if she does him a 
favor in return.  He isn't specific, but Susan comes up with 
a favor that they both are agreeable to.

COMMENTARY: The story is a little short on plot, but the 
author does a nice job setting it up.  The sex is very 
arousing.  This is a quickie, not a full blown story, but 
the author has done a very nice job with it.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Early In, Early Out

        - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494421916&fmt=raw



