Rogue Review  No. 52 - June 11, 1998

by Lee Vine

Gifts by fcp

M/F

Length: 4,800 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Note

This is the sequel to Marie's Gift (Rogue Review No. 39).


Summary

James and Donna expand their repertoire.


Commentary

I had trouble getting into the mood of this story.  It seemed kind of
forced.  I was not impressed with the dialogue or the characters.

The story was too straight forward and did not seem to have a 
particular feel or any nuances.  It seemed too regimented.  I only 
felt a spark or two of life within it, and that was not enough for 
me.

I did enjoy the part where they get caught by George.  


Judgment

This was not a good story.


