Rogue Review No. 346 - April 7, 1999

High-Heeled Tease by Philippe Richard

M/F

Length: 2,600 words

Objective Analysis: 7 {out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 2 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Philip meets Jessica in a Paris nightclub.  She loves to tease men.  
He becomes her latest victim.


  COMMENTARY

This story is extremely arousing.  Despite the fact there is no 
actual intercourse, of any sort, this story really got me going.

The story could use some work.  In particular, the paragraphs are a 
bit too long.  My advice to the author is to break most of the 
paragraphs down into shorter ones.  An occasional long paragraph is 
one thing.  A story that has almost nothing but very long paragraphs 
is another.  There isn't much to the plot, but then it is stroke 
material and it is rather short.  There is nothing special about the 
characters, but there is nothing seriously lacking in them either.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  It is extremely arousing.  I wish 
the paragraphs were shorter.  It belongs on my B-list.


  LINKS

High-Heeled Tease

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=409247649&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17025.txt
