Rogue Review No. 377 - May 23, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Michelle
AUTHOR: MichaelD38
LENGTH: 13,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Male, Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Incest (Cousins)
                 Teenager-Twentysomething
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): Romance
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Danny, age 22, comes home from college to visit family. 
Michelle, his 16-year-old cousin, has a crush on him.  At first 
the time he spends with her is rather innocently passed, but 
eventually their hormones get the better of them.

COMMENTARY:  This is  a very arousing story.  Most of the scenes 
that I found arousing were not ones which contained sex.  For 
that matter, there isn't all that much sex in this story.  It was
pretty clear what was going to happen between Danny and Michelle 
from early on.  What made it arousing was seeing how their 
relationship develops and some of the near misses they have 
before, well, you get the idea.

This is a very well written story.  It is very well paced.  It 
is about the evolution of Danny's relationship with Michelle.  It
does not revolve around sex, but sex does play a crucial role in 
the story.  If I were to characterize this story in a word then I
would say it is a Romance.  I say that because the author takes 
it slowly, and for another reason that I do not want to reveal 
for fear of giving away part of the plot.  The author does do a 
nice job with both Danny and Michelle.  He reveals the facets of 
their personalities both through Danny's narration as well as 
their conversations. They are both rather horny, but they are 
realistically horny and that makes all the difference in the 
world.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  It is both very arousing and 
very well written.  I think most people should be able to 
appreciate it, unless of course you don't like to read stories, 
and only like to read descriptions of sex.  In retrospect I 
would say it is more touching than arousing.  I have given it an 
Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Michelle

         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17817.txt [1/3]
         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17819.txt [2/3]
         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17818.txt [3/3]

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=418557721&fmt=raw [1/3]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=418557735&fmt=raw [2/3]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=418557728&fmt=raw [3/3]

         Stories Online

         - http://www.storiesonline.net/

