Rogue Review No. 378 - May 25, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: What Cape?
AUTHOR: The Cat
LENGTH: 3,000 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Male, Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Married Couple
KINK(S): Role Playing
SETTING(S): Home
            Outdoors
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Allen enjoys the games Sandy, his wife, comes up with.  
Her latest creation involves him dressing up as Batman and her as
Catwoman.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The way Sandy and 
Allen dress while playing their game was one reason I found this 
story arousing.  Considering how much they were showing off when 
they dressed up, I was tempted to list Exhibitionism under kinks.
The other reason I found this story so arousing is the fun both 
characters seem to have playing the game.  They really get into 
it.

I like what the author does with the characters.  The dialogue 
and narration, by Allen, seem realistic.  The plot on the other 
hand did not seem to be quite as well handled.  It seemed as 
though the author got a bit tangled in the details.  It is worth 
mentioning that there are a number of spelling errors in this 
story.

I enjoyed this story; it is a fun read.  I enjoyed it because I 
found it very arousing and to a lesser to degree because of the 
way the author handled the characters.  If you are looking for 
looking for something with a lot of plot twists or can't stand 
something that should have been run through a spell checker, then
you might want to skip this one, otherwise I recommend it.  It is
not great, but it is a fun read.  I have given it a Very Good.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 3/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

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