Rogue Review  No. 119 - July 25, 1998

Chosen by Crimson Dragon

F/F, Exhib

Length: 7,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Bree is ready to go to bed with Dave, but ends up in bed with 
Natasha.


  COMMENTARY

This is a well written story.  There are no misspelled words or 
careless grammatical errors.  It has a plot.  The characters seem 
realistic.

I am disappointed with the ending; it is anti-climactic.  The author 
introduces the reader to Chet and Dave, but does not include them in 
the denouement.  Natasha plays a pivotal role in the story, but the 
most the reader is told about her is what she looks like.

I do not think this is a bad story, but I feel a little let down.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but the ending leaves something to be desired.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12619.txt

