Rogue Review No. 501 - March 31, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Ad [Chapter 1]
AUTHOR: Dino Dave
LENGTH: 18,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Unmarried Couple
KINK(S): Bondage and Discipline
SETTING(S): Club
            Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jim replies to a classified ad placed by Samantha, 
who is looking for a "firm but gentle male to dominate" her.

COMMENTARY: This story builds up quite nicely. I like both 
the characters they seem realistic enough. I enjoyed the sex 
play. The characters came across as active participants in 
the action and not just actors playing their respective 
parts. 

On the down side it is worth noting that this is a *long* 
first chapter.  The author probably should have broken it 
down into three or four shorter chapters.

One last thing, I have to admit that while I enjoyed this 
story I may be a biased towards it.  I say this primarily 
because I tend to enjoy tales of bondage and discipline that 
have a romantic twist to them. This story certainly falls 
into that category.

I will probably be reading and reviewing chapter two at some 
time in the near future.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): The Ad [Chapter 1]

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/22964 [1/2]
         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/22965 [2/2]



