Rogue Review No. 288 - December 23, 1998

Stroke Story by MichaelD38

M/F, M/F/F

Length: 8,400 words

Rating: Good

Arousal Factor: Average
Story Factor: Low


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Bret, a famous movie actor, bangs his way across the City of Angels.


  COMMENTARY

For the most part, this story is forgettable.  It does not get 
interesting until Cindy, that's girl #5 in the script, enters the 
story.  She adds some life to it.

I like to believe that where you begin it less important than where 
you finish.  Having said that, I think that the reason I did not give
this story a lower rating is for the simple fact that it got better 
as it went along.

Possibly I missed the point of the story.  The author's notes 
indicate that this is supposed to be a satire.  I guess the humor 
just went over my head.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15688.txt [1/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15686.txt [2/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15687.txt [3/3]

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=395921971&fmt=raw [1/3]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=395921962&fmt=raw [2/3]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=395921966&fmt=raw [3/3]



