Rogue Review  No. 150 - August 16, 1998

A Slave to Capitalism (Chapter 1) by sfmaster

F/F, B&D

Length: 4,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Doris suffers the consequences of stealing from Andrea, her boss.


  COMMENTARY

This is a good start.  I liked the way the story develops through 
the first chapter.  I am curious to see where the story will go in 
future chapters.

The story would probably squick some people.  Not everyone likes B&D 
sex stories.

This is a good beginning, but what comes next?


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent beginning.


  LINK(S)

http://x11.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381699030


