Rogue Review No. 325 - March 7, 1999

Sharing a Bed for the Night by J. Boswell

F/M, Inc

Length: 5,200 words

Objective Analysis: 9 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Rocky, Roxanne Chase, visits Denny, her son, on his 21st birthday.  


  COMMENTARY

I found this story to be very arousing.  The author does a wonderful 
job building up to the sex.  He does not jump into it from the 
get-go.  Instead he has written a story which ends with sex, instead 
of being nothing but sex.  Its not that hard to see where the story 
is leading, which can be bad, but the author nudges it along, rather 
than shove it in the reader's face, which is good.

I think this is a very well written story.  There was an occasional 
misspelled word.  There were also three places in the text where a 
sentence is repeated for no apparent reason.  While these errors 
could have been avoided, they occurred infrequently enough that they 
did not detract from my reading pleasure.

I like how the author plotted the story.  It has a nice, natural 
feeling flow.  I like the main character, who is the only one you 
really get to know, and the tone the author has given her.  This is 
definitely an A-list story, and I have given it an Excellent.


  LINKS

Sharing a Bed for the Night

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=204037811&fmt=raw

J. Boswell's Bibliography

* http://www.bitbard.pair.com/library/boswell/

