Rogue Review No. 327 - March 10, 1999

Mowing the Lawn by OddManOut

M/f, Teen

Length: 5,700 words

Objective Analysis: 8 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Brad, 36, hates mowing the lawn, but then he meets his 17-year-old 
neighbor Katie, while returning her father's lawnmower.


  COMMENTARY

I found this story to be very arousing.  The author takes his time.  
The story begins with the rather mundane activity of mowing the lawn 
but quickly heats up.  There is some tension in the sexual encounter 
that Katie and Brad share.  It seemed realistic and served to 
increase my arousal.

This is a stroke story.  The plot is well placed, but after a point 
revolves around nothing other than sex.  The characters seem 
life-like enough, though it would have been nice if there had been 
another side to Katie.  This is a stroke story though, maybe I'm 
asking too much.

On the whole I enjoyed this story.  It is rather vanilla, but it is 
well written and arousing enough to make my B-list.  That's why I 
gave it a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis.


  LINKS

Mowing the Lawn

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19948.txt [1/2]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19949.txt [2/2]

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=444536297&fmt=raw [1/2]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=444540683&fmt=raw [2/2]



