Rogue Review No. 483 - December 29, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Pink Bow
AUTHOR: Ink
LENGTH: 3,600 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Older Male-Younger Female
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jack, 26 and fresh out of law school, is stuck at a 
Christmas party that he really doesn't want to be at.  The 
hostess asks him to look after Sarah, her 16-year-old 
daughter.

COMMENTARY: I found this story to be both well written and 
arousing.  I enjoyed the narration and the approach that the 
author takes.  He draws the story out and does not rush 
things, despite its length.  The only negative thing I can 
think of, to say about this story, is that there are quite a 
few typographical errors.

I would not refer to this story as romantic, but at the same 
time there is some give and take between Jack and Sarah.  I 
this that this story should appeal to most of you, male and 
female alike.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 3/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): The Pink Bow

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/22037

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=566074584&fmt=raw

