Rogue Review  No. 110 - July 18, 1998

Teaching the Teacher (Parts 1 & 2) by Day Dreamer

F-solo, M-solo, M/F

Length: 7,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Joey seduces his teacher, Birdie.


  COMMENTARY

I had a few problems with this story.  Number one, I would prefer a 
bit more dialogue, there is very little in this story.  Number two, 
the sex takes up a large portion of this story.  Number three, there 
did not seem to be a dilemma.

These are only the first two parts of a longer work.  I am not too 
sure where the author can take Joey and Birdie, from here, except to 
further libidinous heights in bed.

This story is very well edited.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but the sex takes up a disproportionate part of
the it and neither of the characters seemed to be challenged or face 
a personal dilemma.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12788.txt [1/2]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12789.txt [2/2]




