A Review by Lee Vine

Georgetta: The Bet by The Dolphin

MF, bd , cons

Length: 15,500 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Georgetta has lost a bet with her boyfriend Chris.  Part of the bet
was that she would do whatever he wanted for one night.  She comes 
home to find a box containing clothes, instructions, and paraphernalia
(hmmm...).  She goes  through with her lover's demands despite the
fact that in his directions he explicitly states she does not have to.

Eventually Chris comes out of the closet. 

(Gnarf, Brain.  Does this mean...)
(Don't be ridiculous.  He was merely hiding there.)
(But Brain, doesn't that mean that he is a Homo...)
(Sapien?  Yes, Pinky.  Now if you don't shutup I shall have to hurt
you.)

Chris takes his time.  He continues to toy with her even after she 
knows he is in the room.  Eventually he releases her.

Commentary

I liked this story.  The bondage was real without being violent or 
forcing one person do things that turn my stomach.  I liked Georgetta
but felt that Chris was a bit lacking as a character.  There was an 
occasional misspelled word or incomplete sentence. There was not much 
of a plot, but the story was paced accordingly.

Rating

I give this story an 8.5 on a scale of 10.

-- Lee Vine <santiago@switchboardmail.com>


