Rogue Review No. 323 - March 6, 1999

StepSis with the Devilish Hands by Schulzie

m/F/F, Teen, Exhib, Inc, Pedo

Length: 3,200 words

Objective Analysis: 6 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A man reflects on the first hand job he ever got.  He was thirteen at
the time.  He got it from his sister.  She was eighteen.


  COMMENTARY

I found this story to be somewhat arousing.  The buildup was better 
than the ending.  The ending left me feeling a bit unsatisfied.

For the most part this is a well written story.  The only problem I 
had was with the flow of the plot.  Everything seemed to be rolling 
along smoothly until the transition to the last scene.  It was not 
smooth enough for me.  There is also a character introduced in the 
last scene for no apparent reason.  I think the story would have been
better with out her.  It left me wondering why she was even in the 
story in the first place.

I did like the two main characters.  They both seemed realistic, at 
least to the extent that the author described them.

Due to what I felt was a let down at the end of this story I did not 
enjoy it enough to consider it A- or B-list material.  It is still 
well enough written and has enough that I do like for me to say that 
it is a Good story.


  LINKS

StepSis with the Devilish Hands

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15335.txt

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=391325070&fmt=raw

Stories Written by Schulzie

* http://www.mrdouble.com/htm/authors/schulzie.htm

