Rogue Review  No. 74 - June 27, 1998

Porch by Crimson Dragon

F/F

Length: 5,100 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Michelle worries about a kiss.  Lara comes round and shows Michelle 
that everything is all right.


Commentary

A good deal of this story is told through dreams and flashbacks.  The
author used these techniques quite effectively.

This story has plot.  Its characters are not cut-outs, but quite 
real.

The main character is faced with a dilemma.  The author does a good 
job of showing how Michelle copes with her dilemma.


Judgment

This is an excellent story.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12213.txt
