Rogue Review No. 341 - April 1, 1999

Tease by Hawk Richards

M/F

Length: 1,200 words

Objective Analysis: 8 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A man describes how he was teased by his date.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  On the other hand it is not very 
long or involved.  The ending was not completely satisfying, but the 
author does a good job leading up to it.

The story is well written.  I was impressed by the descriptions and 
the narrator's tone.  The plot and characters are a bit lacking, but 
they are adequate considering the length of the story.  The action is
well paced.

So, in summation, this is a well written story that I found to be 
very arousing.  I wish it had been longer.  It belongs on my B-list, 
in other words I have given it a Very Good, under Subjective 
Analysis.


  LINKS

Tease

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=444219286&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19888.txt

Hawk's Nest

* http://hawksnest.pair.com/
