Rogue Review No. 364 - April 29, 1999

San Gimignano by Gordie

M/F

Length: 6,400 words

Objective Analysis: 8.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4/5
  Plot and Characters: 3/5
  Editing: 5/5

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Themes: older woman/younger man

Tim, a college student, lusts for Mrs. Antonelli, the fifty-something
widow that owns the restaurant where he waits on tables.  One night 
she asks him to stay late and...


  COMMENTARY

The author makes it clear that there is a sexual attraction between 
Tim and Mrs. Antonelli from early on, but does not have them come 
close to playing hide the salami, until much later.  This helps make 
the story more arousing.  The authors descriptions of sex also do not
focus too much on the physical elements.  This is a very arousing 
story.

The story is very well edited for grammar and spelling, but the story
does feel a bit forced.  I think this is due to the fact that the 
characters are more types than they are flesh and blood.  It's not 
that they seemed unfeeling, but rather that they did not have any 
quirks.  You know, those things that make each one of us unique.  I 
didn't see them.  The plot does flow nicely.

I liked this story.  Why?  Number one, because the author did a good 
job plotting the story, and number two, because I like the older 
woman/younger man theme.  It isn't as taboo a theme as say incest, 
but it is one that society still is not completely accepting of.  If 
you like this sort of theme or like a little plot with your sex story
then I think you may enjoy this one.  I have given it a Very Good.


  LINKS

San Gimignano

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=468480425&fmt=raw [1/2]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=468480431&fmt=raw [2/2]

