Rogue Review No. 520 - June 14, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Paybacks Are a Bitch
AUTHOR: Pami
LENGTH: 3,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Lovers
KINK(S): BDSM
SETTING(S): Home
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Pami punishes Bob, her boyfriend, although he seems 
to writhe in pleasure, under her touch, much more often than 
he does in pain.

COMMENTARY: I was definitely drawn into this story by the 
subject matter, but I like to think that there is more to 
recommend this tale than just a little BDSM. For instance, 
the manner in which the author opens the story. She gives 
enough details to set the scene but not so that the story 
bogs down as a result. In addition, it is much more than 
just the kinks that make this story an intense experience; 
it is also the manner in which Pami and Bob interact with 
and react to one another.

This story probably will not appeal to those who are 
squeamish about anything more than a little light bondage. 
Some men may also find some of the happenings in this story 
to be a bit threatening. I enjoyed it. I recommend it.

LINK(S): Paybacks Are a Bitch

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/24641

         Pami's Archive

         - http://www.asstr.org/~Pami/
