Rogue Review No. 386 - June 3, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Bonnie McBride
AUTHOR: Sidney Durham
LENGTH: 9,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Adult Female-Teenage Male
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: The year is 1961.  Billy is getting ready to take off 
for college.  Before he goes he decides to take one last stab at 
losing his virginity.  Bonnie McBride is supposed to be an easy 
lay, so Billy sneaks into her house and...

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The author does a 
nice job drawing out the sex.  It wasn't predictable and there 
is a nice mix of physical and verbal interaction between Billy 
and Bonnie.

This is a well written story.  The plot doesn't seem to flow, but
the characters make up for that.  Both Bonnie and Billy have a 
realistic feel to them.  They both have desires and fears.  They 
both express doubts.  They both let themselves get caught up in 
the moment.  The plot is another matter.  The beginning is a bit 
weird.  It seems out of place, unless the author is either (a) 
trying to show how Billy changes, or (b) mislead the reader as to
the true nature of the story.  The rest of the story is about 
Billy and Bonnie interacting, and what they actually do seems 
secondary.

I enjoyed this story.  It is well written and very arousing.  I 
am afraid that I may have marked it down, in part, because the 
author's intentions were unclear to me.  I have given it a Very 
Good.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): Bonnie McBride

         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20289.txt

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=449925045&fmt=raw

