Rogue Review  No. 99 - July 11, 1998

Hooked on a Feeling by Terry Jones

F/M

Length: 4,200 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Kate, a young woman from west Texas, runs into her old flame.


  COMMENTARY

This story is well put together.  It is well paced.  There is more to
the plot than just sex.

I liked Kate, her willfulness was very becoming.  The other 
characters were much less complex.

The editing leaves something to be desired.  There was a number of 
sentences that could have been chopped up into smaller ones.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but some of the sentences seemed too long.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12575.txt
