Rogue Review  No. 83 - July 1, 1998

The Restaurant by Mel

F/F, Teen

Length: 2,100 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A woman experiences lesbian love for the first time.


  COMMENTARY

This is a stroke story.  The descriptions are well handled, but the 
story is short on both characterization and plot.  It would have been
nice to have seen a little more dialogue.  The author did do a good 
job of building up to the inevitable sex scene.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but a little more dialogue would have helped.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12385.txt



