Rogue Review  No. 88 - July 4, 1998

The Punishment Fits The Crime by E. Z. Riter

M/F, D&S

Length: 4,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Charlie punishes his wife, Becky, for cheating on him with her tennis
instructor, Harry.


  COMMENTARY

This story did not flow for me.  It seemed rather episodic.  It felt 
like something was missing.  Aside from that it was a good story.

The descriptions are great.  The story seems to be well paced.  I 
liked the plot.  There is tension in this story, and I liked it.

I guess what bothers me is the fact that in the end it seems like 
Charlie forgives Becky simply because she is a sexpot and he cannot 
get enough of that thang.  In retrospect, Charlie's dilemma does not 
seem to be either, whether or not to forgive Becky, or why he should 
forgive her, but how long to wait before forgiving her.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but Charlie's dilemma did not seem compelling 
enough.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12514.txt

