Rogue Review No. 366 - May 4, 1999

Five Hours by John A

Code(s): M/F

Theme(s): Infidelity

Length: 5,500 words

Objective Analysis: 10.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5/5
  Plot and Characters: 5/5
  Editing: 5/5

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

John gets paired with Sarah when he goes golfing, while his wife and 
children are at a nearby beach park.  He enjoys Sarah's company so 
much, through 18 holes and lunch afterwards, that he finds it hard to
resist when she makes him an indecent proposal.


  COMMENTARY

No bones about it, this story is extremely arousing.  It isn't so 
much that the story is filled with graphic sex, which it isn't, as 
much as it is the attraction that John feels for Sarah, which, by the
way, she reciprocates.  The chemistry between the two of them, which 
the author does a beautiful job describing, makes this story really 
special.  I think it also helps that the story is about a 
relationship more than it is about sex.

Well, other than having a beautifully depicted relationship between 
two characters that are both attractive and realistic, this story is 
also very nicely plotted.  It flows smoothly.  There is a nice 
balance struck between dialogue and narration.  Even though John 
tells the story, it seems to be about Sarah almost as much as it is 
about him.

If you didn't read the last two paragraphs then maybe you haven't 
figured it out yet, so let me spell it out for you: I really enjoyed 
this story quite a bit.  It is extremely arousing, very well written 
and very well edited.  One thing that makes this story worth reading 
is that it is both entertaining and touching at the same time.  I 
have given it an Excellent.


  LINKS

Five Hours

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=473236447&fmt=raw [1/2]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=473236453&fmt=raw [2/2]



