Rogue Review  No. 46 - June 4, 1998

by Lee Vine

A Yank in the Outhouse by David Shaw

M/F/F, Voyeur

Length: 8,500 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

This story takes place in England during World War II.

Sarah is delivering a bottle of wine for the vicar.  She gets 
sidetracked by two English ladies and an American gentleman in a wash
house.

Commentary

This story had a good premise, but I did not care for the execution. 
The greatest strength of this story was its descriptions of rural 
England during World War II.

There was not much in the way of character development.  The 
characters seemed to be more types then actual people, the narrator  
included.

Possibly if this story had been better edited I would have enjoyed 
it more.  Quite a few of the sentences in this story seemed much 
too long.  It made the story seem rushed.


Judgment

This was not a good story, but the descriptions of rural England did 
give it some atmosphere.
