Rogue Review No. 389 - June 7, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: My Cousin Rosanna Visits
AUTHOR: Now What, 99?
LENGTH: 3,000 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Incest (Cousins)
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Cabin
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: The nameless male narrator of this story is at his 
parents' cabin in the mountains.  His cousin Rosanna is keeping 
him company.  Flirting between the two of them leads to more than
flirting.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The author has a nice
light touch and does not push things too fast.  He also does not 
obsess over physical descriptions.  He does not go into too much 
graphic detail it comes to describing the sex.

This is a well written story.  It flows nicely.  The author does 
a nice job with the dialogue.  The main character comes off as 
realistic; Rosanna is another story.  At first she is flirtatious
and seems real, but as the story progresses she seems to become 
rather subservient without an adequate explanation.  The story 
could stand to be proofed for spelling and grammatical errors.  
In particular, there are a number of instances where words are 
not capitalized that should be.

I enjoyed this story.  It is well written and very arousing.  I 
think this story will appeal more to male readers than female 
ones.  My main reason for saying so is the frontal lobotomy that 
Rosanna seems to undergo between the beginning of the story and 
the end.  If the story had continued for much longer with her 
acting the way she does towards the end, I probably would not 
have liked it as much as I did.  I have given it an Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 3/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): My Cousin Rosanna Visits

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=448247185&fmt=raw
         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20206.txt
