Rogue Review No. 445 - October 5, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Take Your Daughter To Work Day
AUTHOR: Schulzie
LENGTH: 10,000 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (2 Females, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Doctor-Patient
KINK(S): Voyeurism
SETTING(S): Doctor's Office
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): See COMMENTARY

SUMMARY: Carl is traveling on business when he starts 
feeling sick.  The doctor, he ends up going to, has brought 
her teenage daughter, Courtney, with her to work for the 
day.  With Carl's consent, Courtney takes part in Carl's 
examination and the diagnosis of his condition.

COMMENTARY: What a story!  The author does a wonderful job, 
especially with the main character.  Most of the story is 
told from his point of view.  Throughout the story he has to 
deal with, on the one hand, being aroused by the attention 
he receives and, on the other hand, knowing that he is just 
a patient.  This is done in such a wonderful manner that I 
couldn't help but "feel his pain" and be aroused at the same 
time.  The story isn't about getting laid as much as it is 
about arousal.

I'm not too sure whether this story will naturally appeal 
readers of either the male or female persuasion.  I think 
that I enjoyed it because (a) I found it arousing and (b) I 
was intrigued by Carl's dilemma.  He enjoys what he's 
getting but he wants more and doesn't know how to get what 
he really wants.  At the same time he isn't exactly in 
control of the situation.  I'm not sure if most men would 
find this arousing.  Is that really all that important?  
Probably not.  Actually, it will probably appeal more to 
readers that want more than just vanilla sex, regardless of 
their gender.

One last note.  Courtney's age is never explicitly revealed, 
but Carl guesses that she is thirteen or fourteen.  This, 
Courtney's age, not Carl's guessing, would probably have 
bothered me if Carl had ended up in the sack with her.  
Because of the manner in which the story proceeds, I did not 
have a problem with Courtney being as young as she is.  On 
the other hand, if she had been any younger I probably would 
not have enjoyed the story quite as much.  A thirteen- or 
fourteen-year-old girl being interested in male anatomy is 
plausible.  Which brings me to an important point, this 
story isn't about Courtney as much as it is about Carl.  Her 
experiences are an integral part of the story, but they are 
not the focus of the story; his experiences are.  Maybe I'm 
just trying to rationalize why I enjoyed this story, despite 
the fact that I usually don't care for stories that involve 
thirteen- or fourteen-year-old characters in sexual 
situations.  Blah, blah, blah.  Anyhow, I enjoyed the story.  
I recommend it, but at the same time I won't hold it against 
you if it turns you off or sickens you.  I'm still not sure 
how I can justify enjoying this story, despite my usual 
stance on pedophilic stories.  The bottom line is that I 
wanted to warn you that one of the characters is in her 
early teens.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Take Your Daughter to Work Day

         - http://assm.asstr.org/erotica/assm/Year98/16155.txt [1/2]
         - http://assm.asstr.org/erotica/assm/Year98/16158.txt [2/2]

         Stories by Schulzie

         - http://www.mrdouble.com/htm/authors/schulzie.htm
