Rogue Review No. 286 - December 18, 1998

Pollywanna by Losgud

M/F, Inc

Length: 6,500 words

Rating: Good

Arousal Factor: Average
Story Factor: Low


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

On his way from New York to Miami, a poet stops in to visit his
bawdy sister, Polly.


  COMMENTARY

This story has some arousing scenes in it.  There are others scenes
that do not work for me.  In particular, the scene in the bar, went
too quickly for me.  It did not feel like the author had taken the
time to set the mood; instead he just jumped straight to the action.
It felt like the tone of the story was dictated, rather than
depicted.

I did find the sex arousing, but feel that the story left something
to be desired.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17163.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=411409170&fmt=raw



