Rogue Review No. 212 - October 4, 1998

Orange County Babylon (Part 2 of 8) by MichaelD38

M/F

Length: 12,400 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  NOTES

This is my review of the second part of Orange County Babylon.

Part 1 - Rogue Review No. 201
Part 2 - Rogue Review No. 212

Since reviewing the first part I have decided not to rate the 
individual parts of this story.  I plan on reviewing a part a week, 
until I have read the entire story.  Once I have read the it all I 
will compile all the individual reviews into one big review.


  SUMMARY

Jack learns more about the women he is sleeping with.


  COMMENTARY

I find that not all the sex scenes are as arousing as I had hoped.  I
think this is because I empathize with Jack and because he has not 
completely accepted his situation by the end of Part Two.  He has 
changed some.  I found the scene at the end of this segment 
particularly arousing.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14734.txt [1/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14732.txt [2/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14733.txt [3/3]

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385724157&fmt=raw [1/3]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385724144&fmt=raw [2/3]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385724151&fmt=raw [3/3]

