Rogue Review No. 454 - October 29, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Ride
AUTHOR: Three
LENGTH: 3,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Acquaintances
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Car
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: He did not know that he would run into Jenna at the 
beach.  He did not expect that she would need a ride home, 
but after she got into an argument with her boyfriend, he 
was more than willing to oblige her.

COMMENTARY: The summary doesn't tell as much as I could, but 
that is primarily because I don't want to give too much of 
the story away.  Which is not to say that the story loses 
its appeal once you know how it turns out, because it does 
not.  I re-read this story, and enjoyed it as much the 
second time as I did the first.  It is just that I think 
that sometimes it is nice to enjoy something for the first 
time without being told too much in advance as to what to 
expect.

It is a rather short story, but you should have probably 
gotten the idea by now that I enjoyed it.  In particular I 
liked the minor dilemma that the nameless narrator finds 
himself in.  It stimulated my imagination, among other 
things.  I also like the way that the author builds up this 
story.

I certainly recommend that you read this one.  I think that 
it should appeal to the overwhelming majority of you.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): The Ride

         - http://www.eroticstories.com/story/1960

         Erotic Stories.com

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