A Review by Lee Vine

Ten by Leanna

M/F/F

Length: 4,500+ words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

A woman and a man, Lee and Nick respectively, sit outside a bar. 
They are getting sauced on vodka while they evaluate the talent of 
the women walking into the bar.  After some unsuccessful attempts at 
picking one up, Lee and Nick are picked up themselves by Denise. 
Denise takes them home to her place.  She and Lee tie up Nick and 
then all three have some fun. 

Commentary

Good story.  Very good.  I liked the banter back and forth between 
Lee and Nick.  It was sexy without being coarse or vulgar.  The 
susceptibility of Nick to Lee and Denise's manipulation was very 
believable.

This story was just the right length.  It was not long, but if it had 
gone any longer I don't know where it could have gone other than to 
catalog acts of passion.

This is the first story I have read by Leanna.  I am sure it will not 
be the last.

I give this story a 9.5 on a scale of 10.

-- Lee Vine <santiago@switchboardmail.com>
