Rogue Review No. 336 - March 23, 1999

The Shaver by Al Steiner

F/F

Length: 7,100 words

Objective Analysis: 8 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Jen gets her pussy shaved by Charlie, her sister-in-law.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  It was the combination of Jen's 
horniness, which is evident before her sister-in-law enters the 
story, and her trepidation, which becomes a factor once Charlie 
offers to shave her cunt, that made this story very arousing for me. 
I think it also helped that the author took the time to set the story
up.

The story is well written.  Both characters seem realistic enough.  
They aren't extremely deep, but the author does do a good job of 
showing the internal turmoil that Jen experiences when she finds 
herself aroused by Charlie's handiwork.  The plot follows a logical 
course and flows smoothly.  Having said all this, I should also 
mention that this is a stroke story.  Jen's life does not seem to 
revolve around sex, but the story certainly does.

I really enjoyed this story.  It is well put together and rather 
arousing.  It definitely makes my A-list.


  LINKS

The Shaver

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=455161572&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20583.txt

