Rogue Review No. 394 - June 13, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Tiffany's Lesson
AUTHOR: a.k.a. nolan
LENGTH: 9,300 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
                Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Married Couple
                 Fellow Hotel Guests
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Hotel
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Andrew and Gwen are on vacation in San Diego when they 
meet Tiffany, who has just finished her junior year of high 
school.  They wouldn't have met her if it weren't for the fact 
that they left their curtains partly open while they were 
screwing.  Tiffany wouldn't have met them if it weren't for her 
curiosity getting the better of her.  Gwen and Andrew arrange to 
spend some time with her before she heads home the next day.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  While it does begin 
and end with sex, there is enough plot and characterization 
thrown in between to make this story rather arousing.  The 
uncertainty that Andrew, who narrates the story, displays as the 
story unfolds certainly makes this story more enjoyable.

This is a well written story.  If flows nicely.  As I mentioned 
before there is a plot, although it does revolve around sex.  The
flow seems logical enough.  The characters are nicely handled.  
Most of the dialogue is between Andrew and Gwen.  Because Tiffany
was not as vocal as the other two she did not seem quite as real 
as them.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  It is well written and very 
arousing.  I think it will appeal more to male readers than to 
female readers.  I say this because what it describes seems more 
of a male fantasy than a female fantasy.  I have given it an 
Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): a.k.a. nolan's stories

         - http://members.tripod.com/akanolan/home.html

         EroticStories.com

         - http://www.eroticstories.com/

