Rogue Review  No. 53 - June 12, 1998

by Lee Vine

Wager by Alcibade(?)

M/F, M/M/F

Length: 13,900 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Note

E. Z. Riter posted this story to ASSM.  At that time he said he was 
not the author and that he did not know who the author was.  A few 
days later in a post to ASSD he said "the author probably is 
Alcibade".


Summary

After losing a game of Scrabble to his wife, Peter lets her call the 
shots for a while.


Commentary

The first one-third of the story was great.  It was tense, 
suspenseful, and arousing.  The characters were not great, but they 
seemed realistic.  

The last two-thirds of the story, unfortunately did not measure up.  
A new character is introduced, William, and boy is he a talker.  He 
drones on and on.  Peter's narration leads me to believe that he was 
not too terribly wild about William either.

The author did such a good job with the first one-third of the story.
I was shocked by the last two-thirds.  The whole mood changed.  The 
change was a horrible choice, in my opinion.


Judgment

This was not a good story, but the first one-third of it is 
definitely worth reading.


Link

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11623.txt

