Rogue Review No. 183 - September 7, 1998

Ornery by Lost Girl

F/M/M, Light B&D

Length: 4,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Meg entertains Tommy, her lover, and Brian, a friend of his, after 
returning from a visit with her parents.


  COMMENTARY

There is much more to this story than just sex.  There is a 
beautifully written paragraph about a quarter of the way into the 
story in which Meg reflects on how she feels about her family.  The 
thoughts are not happy ones, but I love the imagery.

The characters all seem very real.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINKS

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383768547&fmt=raw

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14603.txt


