Rogue Review No. 513 - May 9, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Making the Grade
AUTHOR: Jack Handee
LENGTH: 7,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): High School Teacher/Student
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): School
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jamie, with some encouragement and direct 
assistance from her friend Tori, convinces one of her 
teachers that there is more to life than academic integrity.

COMMENTARY: Okay, so maybe they don't actually discuss 
academic integrity in this story, but they certainly could 
have, given the setting.

What do I like about this story? I like the fact that Jamie 
isn't deadset on seducing her teacher from the get-go. She 
actually seems quite reluctant and nervous throughout the 
story. In addition, the plot is very well paced. The action 
progresses at a nice clip. I also enjoyed the author's use 
of dialogue, it, as much if not more than the narration, 
made the characters seem realistic.

From a technical point of view, I do not perceive any flaws 
in the story. From a personal point of view, I don't 
perceive any flaws either, although there is a moment in the 
story that made me cringe when I first read it.  
Specifically, about two-thirds of the way in Jamie begins to 
experience serious doubts. Considering what she is actually 
doing, seducing one of her teachers, it doesn't seem all 
that unrealistic. I felt better once I saw how the story 
turns out, but that still doesn't erase my memory of how I 
felt when I first read it.

Do I recommend that you read this story? Yes, I do, provided 
that the idea of eighteen-year-old female high school 
students seducing their thirty-year-old male teacher doesn't 
bother you.

LINK(S): Jack Handee's Website

         - http://www.asstr.org/~jack_handee
