Rogue Review No. 407 - July 7, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Strip, No Tease
AUTHOR: Titmouse
LENGTH: 2,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): --
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): --
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Carrie decides that the narrator of this story has 
waited long enough and proceeds to strip for him.

COMMENTARY: Part of the beauty of this story is that the exact 
nature of the relationship between the narrator and Carrie is 
never specified.  She is a woman and he is a man, other than that
they are not explicitly identified.

I have a minor gripe with this story: there isn't much to the 
plot.  For that matter, there isn't much of a plot.  The story 
reads more like a sex scene in the middle of a longer story.  
Normally I do not care for such stories.  In this case I am 
willing to make an exception.  The author does a very nice job 
keeping the story fresh and the action dynamic.

This is more of a male fantasy than a female one, although I 
think that both men and women should be able to enjoy it equally.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 5/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Strip, No Tease

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494421912&fmt=raw


