Rogue Review No. 201 - September 27, 1998

Orange County Babylon (Part 1 of 8) by MichaelD38

M/F, M/F/F, M/F/F/F/F/F/F

Length: 15,500 words

Rating: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  NOTE

I will be reviewing one part a week, until I have read and reviewed 
it all.


  SUMMARY

Jack discovers sex, after moving in with Karen and her mother.


  COMMENTARY

I found this, the first installment, both arousing and disturbing.  
On the one hand Jack is aroused by the situation, on the other he is 
convinced that what he is doing is wrong.  I take this as an 
indication that he has a sense of responsibility; how refreshing.

I did not give this part of the story a higher rating because there 
is not enough character or plot development.  On the other hand, it 
does show a lot of promise.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14649.txt [1/4]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14650.txt [2/4]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14653.txt [3/4]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14651.txt [4/4]

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383797472&fmt=raw [1/4]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383797476&fmt=raw [2/4]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383797497&fmt=raw [3/4]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383797483&fmt=raw [4/4]



