Rogue Review No. 431 - August 28, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: New Beginnings
AUTHOR: Pami
LENGTH: 4,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Unmarried Couple
KINK(S): Dom/Sub
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: A woman and man explore their relationship by 
playing a dominance and submission game, in which he submits 
to her whims.

COMMENTARY: The author does a nice job setting the scene and 
a wonderful job following through.  The story isn't 
overloaded with details.  The ones that are included, are 
more than enough to fire the imagination of the reader, so 
that she or he may fill in the details.  It would have been 
nice if there was a bit more to the story.  By that I mean a 
little more detail on the characters or a little more to the 
plot.  The amount of sex is well suited to a story of this 
length.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): New Beginnings

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=465237609&fmt=raw




