Rogue Review No. 410 - July 14, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Getting Hubby's Attention
AUTHOR: Eighteen and Innocent
LENGTH: 3,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Solo (Female)
                Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Married Couple
KINK(S): Toys
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Crystal isn't getting enough sex from her husband, so 
she does something about it.

COMMENTARY: This is a fun story.  Its length definitely works in 
its favor.  I say that because this is a stroke story, ergo, 
there isn't much to the plot.  It revolves around Crystal getting
her husband to perform.

I did like the main character.  She seemed realistic to me.  It 
is a shame that her husband isn't as fully fleshed out.

There is a bit more narration and a bit less dialogue than I like
to see in a story.  The paragraphs are also a bit long.  They 
probably should have been chopped up into smaller ones.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 4/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Getting Hubby's Attention

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=501088018&fmt=raw

