Rogue Review No. 338 - March 26, 1999

The Call of Desire by DG

M/F, M/F/F

Length: 5,700 words

Objective Analysis: 10 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

DG is married to Cindy.  DG wants to have phone sex with Desire, a 
phone sex professional who liked one of his stories.  Cindy lets him,
but then insists on listening in.


  COMMENTARY

This story is extremely arousing.  There is a lot of sex in it, and 
not much build up before the sex, but I still found it extremely 
arousing.  I think it helped that the author only includes those 
graphic details that are necessary and leaves the rest to the 
reader's imagination.

This is a stroke story, but it is a very well written stroke story.  
The characters seem realistic.  I enjoyed the dialogue.  It helps to 
define the characters.  The author also uses it to inject some humor 
in the story.  The plot is well paced.  Its basically divided in two.
In the first part DG proposes that he have phone sex with Desire.  In
the second part he actually does.  This sounds awfully simple, but it
works.  I think the author's handling of his characters is what 
impressed me the most.

OK, lets see, uh, I really, really, really liked this story?  Its 
arousing and its well written?  Yeah, that about sums it up.  Does it 
make my A-list?  Ay, if you can't figure that out then look at what I 
scribbled under Subjective Analysis, above.  OK?


  LINKS

The Call of Desire

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=316371083&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/7340.txt

DG's Story Page

* http://baird.pair.com/dg.htm

