Rogue Review No. 320 - February 27, 1999

Wildlife by Lee Bido

M-solo, F-solo

Length: 4,200 words

Objective Analysis: 7 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Theo and Susan, coincidentally, decide to masturbate in the great 
outdoors.


  COMMENTARY

I like the idea behind this story, but I think that the author missed
something in the execution.  It alternates between Susan and Theo, 
describing first what one is up to and then the other.  It provides a
certain amount of symmetry.  I like that.

Where I think the story falls short is that Theo and Susan seem to 
have no other function in life other than to masturbate.  Believe it 
or not I think it would have made the story more arousing if the 
author had worked up to the sex, instead of more or less beginning 
with it.

I gave this story a Good, under Subjective Analysis, because while it
is a nice story, it is also a bit lacking.  If there had been more to
the plot or some build up before revealing why Susan and Theo were 
hiking in the hills of southern Indiana, then I might have given this
story a Very Good.


  LINKS

Wildlife

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=430807319&fmt=raw

