Rogue Review No. 385 - June 2, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Tenth, Eleventh, Twelfth
AUTHOR: Baird Allen
LENGTH: 3,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Married Couple
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Rick is recuperating after having a vasectomy.  Karen, 
his wife is rather eager for proof that the operation was a 
success.

COMMENTARY: This story begins and ends with sex.  The author does
a very nice job describing the sex.  He also happens to include a
plot and take the time to flesh Rick and Karen out to the point 
that they are more than just bodies.  This is a very arousing 
story.

The story is very well edited.  The plot flows smoothly and is 
interwoven quite nicely with the sex.  The story on the whole is 
more about a series of events more than it is about the 
characters themselves.  The characters seem realistic; on the one
hand horny, on the other hand concerned with other day-to-day 
activities.  Their verbal interaction is handled quite nicely, 
although most of it does occur during sex.  This is a very well 
written story.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  It is very well written and 
very arousing.  I think that most of you should enjoy it.  I have
given it an Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Tenth, Eleventh, Twelfth

         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17140.txt

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         - http://baird.pair.com/docidx.htm