Rogue Review  No. 48 - June 10, 1998

by Lee Vine

A City Situation by Watcher

No Sex

Length: 2,700 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

On an August afternoon Peter braves the heat and humidity of the city
to return Kelly's dress and shoes.


Commentary

This is the sort of story that leaves a lot to the reader's 
imagination.  Peter's inner dialogue was very well done.  The images 
of buildings and carriage rides were also well crafted.

Peter, as a character, was much more fleshed out than Kelly.  The 
author told the story from Peter's perspective, so that is not 
surprising.  It would have been nice if this story had been a little 
more explicit.


Judgment

This was a good story, but a few more details would have helped.

