Rogue Review No. 464 - November 16, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Watch Where You Put Your Hands
AUTHOR: DrSpin
LENGTH: 2,800 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Older Man-Younger Woman
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: 40-something Mike "accidentally" makes a move on 
19-year-old Judy.  His attempt to extricate himself from the 
situation is less than successful; and somehow the situation 
gets more complicated.

COMMENTARY: On the one hand I feel that the author has done 
a very nice job just presenting characters without mixing in 
too much plot.  On the other hand I think that I would have 
liked it if there had been a little more to the story.  It 
was compelling, in some ways, but it also left me thinking, 
"aren't there other angles or details that author could have 
included?"  Still, this is a first rate effort.  It isn't 
too predictable, nor too focused on sex.  The ending wasn't 
quite what I expected, but it was credible.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Watch Where You Put Your Hands

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/21259

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=548670241&fmt=raw

