Rogue Review  No. 81 - June 30, 1998

The Massage by Sue D. Nyym

F/F

Length: 3,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Penny goes to the spa and gets some special attention from Lynn, a 
beautiful masseuse.


  COMMENTARY

The story centers around Penny and is more about her life than it is 
about her relationship with another woman.  The narration is 
beautifully done.  Lynn is not as much a fleshed out character as she
is a convenient one.

I like the build-up in this story.  The author does a lovely job 
of showing how badly Penny needed to be HANDled the way Lynn HANDles 
her. [Cough, cough.]

I am not completely satisfied with the ending.  It seems to be an 
attempt to wrap things up, neatly.  I do not think the story needs 
it.  I do not care for the ending, but at the same time I do not feel
that it takes too much away from the story.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12368.txt


