Rogue Review No. 287 - December 19, 1998

Nicki by Nightshade

M/f, Teen, Inc, Light Bond, Cons?

Length: 8,500 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: High
Story Factor: Average


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Fifteen-year-old Nicki spends the summer with her Uncle Steve, at his
cabin in the mountains.


  COMMENTARY

What I like about this story is the way the author fleshes out the
characters by putting the reader first inside the head of one and
then inside the head of the other.  I also like the way the story
begins.  The author seems to be taking things slowly, and building up
to the sex.

I do not care for the way the story ends.  In particular, the scene
where Nicki passes out and her uncle ties her up.  She seems to enjoy
herself when she wakes up, but something rubbed me the wrong way
about this scene.  There is also a mention of Steve having slept with
several 12-year-old girls.  It is not described, so I did not include
the appropriate coding above.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/18062.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=423560241&fmt=raw



