Rogue Review No. 444 - October 4, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Sheer Luck
AUTHOR: Motionman
LENGTH: 6,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Classmates (University)
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jason didn't care much for his 'stuck-up' lab 
partner, Rita, until one day...

COMMENTARY: This is a well written piece.  It is a bit too 
soft and romantic for my tastes, but the author has 
obviously put some effort into it.  The sex is somewhat 
arousing.  My real gripe with the story is that there 
doesn't seem to be much (if any) conflict in it.  Everything 
goes too smoothly.

If you like soft, gooey, romantic stories then you may like 
this one.  Personally, I prefer stories where the characters 
have to struggle a little more.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 3/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): Sheer Luck

        - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=531738910&fmt=raw [1/2]
        - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=531738915&fmt=raw [2/2]

