Rogue Review No. 331 - March 16, 1999

Raga by Taria

M/F

Length: 5,500 words

Objective Analysis: 9 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A man and a woman have sex.  A prince and a servant girl make love.


  COMMENTARY

This is a well composed story.  It consists of a sexual fantasy that 
has been framed with snippets from a more realistic sex scene.  I 
think this is an excellent trick to use and that the author uses it 
quite effectively.

The sex in the fantasy story is very arousing.  In particular I 
enjoyed the servant girl's transformation from innocent to 
passionate.  The author uses some Indian terms in this story.  I 
think that they made my imagination work a little harder and, 
considering their placement, made the story a little more arousing.

I enjoyed this story, and it is well written, but I am not wild about
it.  It is for that reason that I am placing it on my B-list, rather 
than my A-list.  This is not a knock against the author's writing 
abilities.  You may enjoy the story even more than I did, so please 
do not let my subjective opinion carry too much weight.  Consider 
what I have said and the objective scores that I gave this story.


  LINKS

Raga

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/8404.txt [1/2]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/8405.txt [2/2]

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=324572676&fmt=raw [1/2]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=324568020&fmt=raw [2/2]

Taria's Bibliography

* http://www.bitbard.pair.com/library/tariat/

