Rogue Review No. 314 - February 18, 1999

Locksmiths by Uther Pendragon

M/F, Teen

Length: 9,800 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: Average
Story Factor: High


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

On Valentine's Day Dan and Lori reflect on the past while Cheryl, 
their daughter, is out on a date.


  COMMENTARY

This is an intelligently written story.  It is about the past as much
as it is about the present.  I think the author shifts back and forth
between the two, past and present, quite effectively.

Another technique that Mr. Pendragon employs is shifting the point of
view between Dan and Lori.  Most of the story consists of flashbacks,
so by alternating the point of view between husband and wife, we get 
to see not only how Dan remembers things, but also how Lori does.

If you are looking for stroke material then this might not be the 
best choice.  If you are looking for something more romantic then I 
think you should enjoy this.


  LINKS

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=443916151&fmt=raw [1/2]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=444210404&fmt=raw [2/2]

