Rogue Review No. 342 - April 1, 1999

A New Outlook on Life by Rosa

F/M, Exhib

Length: 2,400 words

Objective Analysis: 8 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Rosa gets a late customer as she is preparing about to close the hair
salon.  He is older, looks richer, and wants a little more than just 
a haircut.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  I enjoyed seeing Rosa experience 
conflicting emotions.  It made her seem more realistic and the story 
more arousing.

This is a well written stroke story.  Rosa wants to close the shop, 
but fate and her customer have other ideas about what she should be 
doing.  The author does take the time to set the mood.  Rosa has 
worries that don't involve her sex life.  These are the sorts of 
things that make her seem realistic, but they are not dominant enough
in the story for me to consider it not to be a stroke story.  The 
plot is well paced.

I liked this story, it is well written and very arousing, but I'm not
wild about it.  I like it, but it belongs on my B-list not my A-list.
So, if this sounds like something that interests you or you have the 
time I advise you read this.  It is a fun read.


  LINKS

A New Outlook on Life

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=445265104&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20013.txt

