Rogue Review  No. 127 - July 31, 1998

Crazy Tomas by Hawk Richards

M/F

Length: 1,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Tomas picks a flower and gets laid.


  COMMENTARY

After reading this story I feel like I missed something.  It is well 
written, but it seems as though the author left something out.

I had trouble making the transition from the first part of the story 
to the second part.  The connection between the beginning and ending 
was a bit tenuous.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but I had trouble understanding how the 
beginning and ending fit together.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13196.txt

