Rogue Review  No. 107 - July 18, 1998

Lover's Desire by J. R. Parz

TG, Transform, F/F, Cons, F/F/F, MC

Length: 5,900 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Jess buys a magic potion that transforms him into a woman.


  COMMENTARY

This story was too straight forward.  There was no real tension or 
build up, leading to the sex.  The sex itself was a jumble of bodies 
with no real emotions.  The characters were rather thin.  There was 
not much to them.

What I like to see in a transgender story is a man or woman getting 
transformed into a member of the opposite sex and then see how the 
transformation affects their sexual orientation.  The main character 
in this story seemed to have no problem adjusting.  He went from 
being a heterosexual man to a homosexual woman.  His tastes did not 
change.  I found this boring.


  JUDGMENT

This is not a good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12714.txt

