Rogue Review No. 480 - December 18, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Reluctant Bride
AUTHOR: Mike Hunt
LENGTH: 6,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Church
            Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Gail is nervous about getting married to Brian.  
Unlike her husband-to-be, she has never sown any wild oats, 
so to speak.  In other words, the only man she has ever 
slept with is Brian, and if she remains faithful and married 
then he will be the only man she ever sleeps with.  So, she 
calls up Mike, one of Brian's friends, and invites him over 
for a little tête-à-tête, so to speak.

COMMENTARY: This is a very well written story.  It happens 
to be both arousing and amusing.  On the whole I would say 
that it is more arousing than amusing, but the humor is 
definitely there.  The author does a very nice job setting 
the scene and then carrying through with the plot.  The 
narrator's sarcastic asides brought a smile to my face on 
more than one occasion.  The sex had a slightly different 
effect on me.  

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): The Reluctant Bride

         - http://assm.asstr.org/assm/Year97/4185.txt

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=273370989&fmt=raw

         Mike Hunt's Sexy Stories

         - http://baird.pair.com/mrm1ke.htm

