Rogue Review No. 367 - May 5, 1999

Realizing Nicole by a.k.a Nolan

Code(s): M/F/F

Theme(s): Husband/Wife/Wife's Friend

Length: 5,600 words

Objective Analysis: 8.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4/5
  Plot and Characters: 3/5
  Editing: 5/5

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Nolan and Kristen are supposed to be going away for a weekend with 
Nicole, Kristen's college roommate, and Mark, her husband.  When Mark
is temporarily taken out of the picture Nolan, Kristen and Nicole get
nice and cozy.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  Though the characters go at the sex 
with some enthusiasm, the story does begin with them showing some 
restraint.  They seem like people, not automatons, and that always 
makes sex scenes more enjoyable.

This is a well paced story.  It has a story line, but most of it 
involves sex.  I like Nolan.  He enjoys himself and at the same time 
seems to have some human concerns.  The two women were hard to 
distinguish, at times; they weren't different enough.  While the 
story is well executed, I did have a couple problems with it.

On the whole I enjoyed this story.  The plot and characters are a bit
lacking, but unless you don't care for being aroused and only want to
read well extremely written stories, then I advise you read this.  I 
have given it an Excellent.


  LINKS

EroticStories.com

* http://www.eroticstories.com/

