Rogue Review No. 409 - July 13, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Two Families - The Cruise
AUTHOR: Thor4U
LENGTH: 40,300 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Father-Daughter
                 Mother-Son
                 Older Female-Younger Male
                 Stepbrother-Stepsister
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): At Sea
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: 14-year-old Jason Bradford goes on a cruise with his 
37-year-old mother, his 19-year-old stepsister, and some of their
friends.  Through the course of the cruise Jason learns quite a 
bit about sex thanks to more than one older woman.

COMMENTARY: This is a rather long story.  I do not recommend 
trying to read it in one sitting.  I read it in three sittings, 
and probably could have stretched that to four or five.

Is this story arousing?  Yes, it is piping hot.  The author does 
a very nice job of not spending too much time describing the sex.
There is at least as much build up and teasing in this story as 
their is sex.

The fact that some of the characters actually express doubts 
about committing incest was nice to see.  It makes them seem more
realistic.  I wasn't as taken by the father-daughter relationship
in this story, as I was by the others.  That is probably because 
the author doesn't spend nearly as much time developing those two
characters and their relationship, as he does the others.

On a different note, the story seems to end rather abruptly.  I 
would prefer to have seen it end a bit more gradually.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 5/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Two Families - The Cruise

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490265432&fmt=raw [1/6]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490265486&fmt=raw [2/6]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490265553&fmt=raw [3/6]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490266537&fmt=raw [4/6]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490268596&fmt=raw [5/6]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490278686&fmt=raw [6/6]

