Rogue Review No. 274 - November 29, 1998

Beachbum by Losgud

M/F

Length: 2,200 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: High
Story Factor: Average


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A man tells his wife about their trip to the beach.


  COMMENTARY

This story is told in the second person.  It is longer on arousal 
than it is on story.

There is a certain amount of tenderness to this story.  I really 
enjoyed the intimacy the author has created between the narrator and 
his wife.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/16916.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=408988215&fmt=raw



