A Review by Lee Vine

Sordid Conception by Chili Peeler

M/F, M/F/F, Inc

Length: 30,300 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Brenda is 23.  She has been married to Chris for a year.  They have 
been trying to get her pregnant for some time with no success.  Brenda 
goes to her widowed mother-in-law, Sharon, for advice.  Sharon suggests
that Brenda let Brad, Chris' 19-year-old brother, impregnate her, 
without telling Chris.  Brenda agrees.  What Brenda does not know is 
that Brad has been fucking his mother for the past eighteen months.

Commentary

This was an enjoyable story.  The conversations and asides were witty. 
The author got into the minds of the three main characters. He did a 
decent job of showing their apprehension at getting involved in the way
they do.  There was a plot and there were breaks between the sucking 
and fucking so that the plot could be advanced.

This was not a great story, but I liked it.  It qualifies as an "And 
They Lived Happily Ever After" story in my book.  This is not a 
disastrous fact, but I cannot give it as high a rating as I would have 
other wise.  Another factor which lowered my rating was the ratio of 
sex to plot.  Neither of these facts lowered the rating all that much, 
because I did enjoy the story.

Rating

I give this story an 8 on a scale of 10.



