Rogue Review No. 176 - September 1, 1998

Opening at Closing by Otzchiim

M/F

Length: 2,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Paul runs into an old flame after moving back home.


  COMMENTARY

The characters in this story are reluctant to jump into bed, too 
quickly, but both of them want it.

The author takes the time to set the mood.  I like that.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINKS

http://x6.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385740988

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14779.txt


