Rogue Review  No. 106 - July 17, 1998

The Housesitter by Steve

M/F, Teen

Length: 7,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Brian's mother hires a 19-year-old woman to look after a 17-year-old 
boy.


  COMMENTARY

I thought the author did a good job with describing things from 
Brian's point of view.  There is a plot.  He builds up to the sex and
does not have too much of it.

If I wanted to find fault with this story I would say that the 
dialogue left something to be desired.  It lacked emotions.  The 
characters did not seem to be feeling anything, emotionally, when 
they spoke.  It was like actors who read their lines without 
communicating any feeling.

I should not complain about the dialogue, it's stilted nature did 
make me laugh.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12696.txt [1/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12697.txt [2/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12698.txt [3/3]
