Rogue Review No. 321 - February 28, 1999

A Quick Bite to Eat by B. Peale

M/F, M/F/F, Exhib

Length: 3,700 words

Objective Analysis: 9 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Sara's husband talks about how she likes to "show him off" for other 
women to see.


  COMMENTARY

Exhibitionism, if handled properly, is a wonderful element to have in
a story.  I think this author has done a great job with it.  This is 
still just a stroke story, in my mind, but it is a very arousing 
stroke story.

One thing in particular that I like about this story is the tension. 
The narrator gets a sexual thrill from being showed off, but at the 
same time he seems a bit apprehensive.  Possibly this is because he 
is letting his wife decide how much he will be shown off.  Another 
thing about this story that I like is that the plot has a few twists.
It isn't too direct.

I gave this story an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis, because I 
enjoyed it a lot.  It was not special enough to rate an Outstanding, 
but I would definitely put it on my A-list of stories.  I recommend 
that you read it.


  LINKS

A Quick Bite to Eat

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19327.txt

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=436623692&fmt=raw

