Rogue Review  No. 96 - July 10, 1998

The Quickie by Sue D. Nyym

M/F

Length: 2,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Sex in the bathroom of the local supermarket.


  COMMENTARY

This story started off good.  I liked the build up.  I found the sex
to be a little too detailed.

The author should either have shortened the description of the sex, 
or thrown something else in the story to liven it up.


  JUDGMENT

This was not a good story, but the build up was good.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12469.txt

