Rogue Review No. 168 - August 27, 1998

Builders by Nick

Voy

Length: 2,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Kevin is a construction worker.  He enjoys watching attractive women 
walk by the site, and showing off for them, as well.


  COMMENTARY

This is a nice little story.  Unfortunately I did not find anything 
particularly compelling about it.  Maybe it is unfair of me to expect
all stories to involve some sort of a dilemma, but these are sex 
stories, after all.  I expect to be titillated.  This one did not 
titillate me, but it is well written and coherent.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14386.txt


