Rogue Review No. 351 - April 11, 1999

How the Frog became a Frog by The Writer

M/F, M/F/F

Length: 2,300 words

Objective Analysis: 6 {out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)
  Stroke: No

Subjective Analysis: Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

This is the story of how the frog became a frog.  He once was a 
human.  It involves sex.


  COMMENTARY

This is a somewhat arousing story.  There are sex scenes in this 
story, but my impression was that the author is trying to tell a 
story that involves sex.  The story seems to come first and the sex 
second.  In other words, it is not a stroke story.

This is a good effort.  It has a plot, which flows a bit too quickly.
It felt rushed.  The characters are nothing exceptional.  They are 
the stock type characters one usually finds in fairy tale.  There is 
a queen, a king, a jester, a witch, etc.  Still, all in all, it is a 
creative story.  The sex serves the plot and not the other way 
around.

This was a fun read for me.  I found myself somewhat aroused, but I 
was more taken in by the plot.  If you are looking for something that
is not a stroke story and enjoy fairy tales, then you might like this
one.  I have given this story a Good under Subjective Analysis.


  LINKS

How the Frog became a Frog

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=461110607&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20887.txt

Fantasy Erotic Fiction

* http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Capsule/3646/

