A Review by Lee Vine

Scenery by Nick

M/F

Length: 1,700 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Nick and Lee sit in a park and take in the "scenery".

Commentary

I did not see how Nick could improve on what LeAnna wrote in "Ten".  He
did not try to.  He wrote a different story that just seemed to be the 
same story written from a different point of view.

It was very well done, although there was not much plot to it.  Its 
basically just two people goofing off in the park and having fun doing 
it.

I preferred "Ten" to "Scenery, because it was more of a story.  
"Scenery" was more of a vignette.

Rating

I give this story a 9 on a scale of 10.





