Rogue Review  No. 57 - June 14, 1998

On Her Leg by LeAnna

M/F

Length: 1,300 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

A woman sits in a park and thinks of the badge she wears for her 
boyfriend.


Commentary

There is not much to this story, but I liked what there was.

LeAnna does a masterful job of switching back and forth between the 
present and past in such a short story.  She breathes life into all 
the characters, even the minor ones.

The ending was delightful.  It was not what I expected.


Judgment

This is an outstanding story.  I would not change a thing.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11540.txt



