Rogue Review No. 155 - August 20, 1998

A Most Unusual Afternoon by Crimson Dragon

F-solo, Bond

Length: 8,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Darlene prepares a surprise for Bradley, her lover, only to find out 
that he has fallen for someone else.


  COMMENTARY

This story is a bit too mysterious for my tastes.  The author builds 
up to a scene which ends up being somewhat anti-climactic.  This is 
not a happy story.  I was a bit aroused, at first, but did not find 
this story, on the whole, arousing.  It is well written and well 
edited.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but I feel that the author could have been a 
little more generous when it comes to filling in the details.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13099.txt

