Rogue Review No. 450 - October 17, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Revealing Secrets
AUTHOR: Losgud
LENGTH: 7,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
                Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): In-Laws
                 Married Couple
                 Sisters
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Nathan and Ariel, a happily married couple move 
back to her hometown.  Sylvia, Ariel's sister, soon becomes 
a fixture in their lives.  Is it because Sylvia enjoys 
spending time with her sister or is it because she enjoys 
spending time with her brother-in-law?  Read the story and 
find out.

COMMENTARY: I liked this story a lot.  There are a few plot 
twists that made it interesting and less predictable.  I 
enjoyed the narration.  Nathan has two qualities that I 
liked.  One, he has a sense of humor.  Two, his reactions to 
the curves that are thrown his way seem spontaneous and 
unrehearsed.  There is one more thing about this story that 
impressed me.  The author has seen fit to include little 
details here and there.  These details breathe life into the 
characters and the world they live in.  This technique, that 
the author employs quite skillfully, made the plot and 
characters more interesting to me.  It also made the story 
seem more realistic.

Oh yeah, I almost forgot.  There is also some pretty hot sex 
in this story; which probably has something to do with why I 
liked the story so much.  In all honesty, though, if not for 
the other things I mentioned earlier in this review, I don't 
think that the hot sex would have seemed quite as hot.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Revealing Secrets

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=497927216&fmt=raw [1/1]

         Stories Online

         - http://www.storiesonline.net/

