Rogue Review No. 430 - August 27, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Potential
AUTHOR: Three
LENGTH: 9,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Solo (Female, Male)
                Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Strangers
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Car
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Susie is working in the local library, the summer 
before her senior year of high school.  One day she 
accidentally exposes herself to Chad, a guy whom she has the 
hots for.  She manages to get over her initial shame.  When 
the opportunity presents itself she gets to know him a 
little better.  In time, her accidental exhibitionism leads 
to intentional exhibitionism, by both of them.

COMMENTARY: I am a sucker for well written dialogue.  I can 
appreciate well written narration, but almost always prefer 
dialogue over narration.  The author of this story does a 
nice job with both.  Susie isn't omniscient.  Chad is able 
to hold up his end of an intelligent conversation.  Even 
without exposing their bodies, Susie and Chad manage to heat 
this story up very quickly.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 10.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Potential

         - http://www.eroticstories.com/story/3458

         Erotic Stories.com

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