Rogue Review  No. 145 - August 12, 1998

More Than Friends by Sue D. Nyym

F/F, Teen

Length: 6,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Kim and Amanda, two 14-year-old girls, have a sleep-over and explore 
each other's body.


  COMMENTARY

There was just a bit too much sex in this story.  It does not begin 
with the first sentence, but it does dominate the story.

This is a well written stroke story, but I prefer a story that has 
more than just sex.  


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but there was too much sex and not enough plot 
or character development.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13436.txt [1/2]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13437.txt [2/2]

