Rogue Review  No. 51 - June 11, 1998

by Lee Vine

Last Night Together by Inkubus

M/F

Length: 3,500 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Dominic has one last night with Byronee, his demonic lover.


Commentary

I liked the idea behind this story.  I really think it could have 
been done better.  There was a plot, but the sex took center stage.  
The characters were adequate, but nothing impressive.  If the sex had
not played such a prominent role, in the text of the story, then I 
might have liked this story.


Judgment

This was not a good story, but it did have a plot.

