Rogue Review No. 380 - May 27, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: One for All...
AUTHOR: Ann Douglas
LENGTH: 9,000 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (3 Females)
ORIENTATION(S): Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Stephanie and friends, Penny and Rachel, spend the 
evening watching TV and talking, until a lesbian scene in a porn 
flick, they happen to be watching, pricks her curiosity.

COMMENTARY: This is a somewhat arousing story.  Other than the 
sex scenes, I did not find myself very aroused.  I think that the
flow of the story had something to do with this.

This is a well written story with one major flaw.  It does not 
flow well; stilted at best.  It felt as though the author was 
trying to force the story in the direction she wanted it to go, 
rather than letting it flow freely.  I did not have any problems 
with the characters and the plot, but unfortunately the flow of 
the story got in the way of my being able to appreciate them 
more.

I am not wild about this story, although it is somewhat arousing 
and is for the most part well conceived.  I don't recommend it 
unless you think you can overlook what I have said about how the 
pace and manner in which the story unfolds.  I have given it a 
Good.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 3/5
         - Editing: 4/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): One for All...

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=480316559&fmt=raw [1/5]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=480316581&fmt=raw [2/5]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=480316605&fmt=raw [3/5]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=480318565&fmt=raw [4/5]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=480320091&fmt=raw [5/5]

         Ann Douglas FTP Directory

         - ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/Ann_Douglas/

