Rogue Review No. 401 - June 24, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: The Garden
AUTHOR: E. Z. Riter
LENGTH: 2,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): --
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jack gets some help in the garden and elsewhere from 
Beth, his 21-year-old stepdaughter's best friend.

COMMENTARY: This is a very nicely written story.  In particular, 
I enjoyed the descriptions.  They are lush and sensual.  The 
author includes just the right amount of detail.  This allows the
reader to fill in the rest with her or his own imagination.

The only other thing that occurs to me is that there aren't any 
graphic descriptions of sex in this story.  That will probably 
turn some of you off and others of you on.  I found the story to 
be somewhat arousing.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 3/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): The Garden

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=479847320&fmt=raw

