Rogue Review No. 317 - February 23, 1999

Eight is Enough: And Two's Not Bad, Either by Uncle Mike

M/F, Teen, Inc

Length: 8,900 words

Rating: Excellent

Arousal Factor: High
Story Factor: High


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Tommy is fourteen years old and Elizabeth, his sister, is fifteen 
years old.  What begins with a fairly innocent kiss develops into 
much more.

  COMMENTARY

This is stroke material, but it is well written stroke material.  The
story is based on the television program "Eight is Enough".  Unlike 
Tommy and Elizabeth, the other characters from the show only make 
token appearances.

What makes this story work for me is that the author seems to have 
injected a bit of reality into it.  Tommy and Elizabeth do not have 
tons of opportunities to get together; their large family tends to 
get in the way.  I also like the pace of the story.  It does not 
begin with brother and sister in the sack, but rather works up to it.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19930.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=444527814&fmt=raw



