Rogue Review  No. 132 - August 3, 1998

The Tease (Chapters 1-5) by J. B. Mast

M/F

Length: 9,600 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Steve meets Mary on the North Shore of Oahu.  She teases him 
mercilessly.


  COMMENTARY

The first five chapters of this incomplete story read like the title.
Poor Steve never gets to dip his wick or cum, except for the one time
when he jerks himself off.  Mary, on the other hand, comes at least 
three times; with Steve's assistance, of course.  I felt teased right
along with Steve.  I kept on waiting for the moment when Mary would 
give Steve what she literally has him begging for, but it never 
comes (and neither does he).

This story is very arousing and very well written.  Steve is a putz, 
who lets his cock do all the thinking, and Mary is a tease, who 
manipulates Steve masterfully (or would that be mistress-fully).  
They are not deep characters, but I like the way the author uses 
them.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story (so far).


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13324.txt [1/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13325.txt [2/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13326.txt [3/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13327.txt [4/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13329.txt [5/5]
