A Review by Lee Vine

The Bedpost by Michael K. Smith

M/F, Con?

Length: 1,600+ words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Man impales woman on bedpost; first her cunt then her ass. 

Commentary

Let me begin by saying what I liked about this story.  I could feel
her pain/excitement, but maybe that's because I am a sensitive guy. 
Aside from that I cannot recommend this story.

To be honest this does not really deserve to be called a story. It is
more like an interlude.  I do not like stories that involve non-
consensual sex and I think this came close.  Some people would 
definitely call it non-consensual, but I'll leave that up to the courts.

Considering the fact that it isn't really a story, but an interlude, 
it may be asking a bit much to actually expect character development 
and plot.  I have read shorter pieces by other authors that conveyed 
more than what was going on at the moment.

We all have our moods and it's better to get them out in a story then
on someone else.  I know this author has written great stuff in the 
past.  I look forward to seeing more of his stories in future (that
do not resemble this one).

Rating

I give this story a 1 on a scale of 10.

-- Lee Vine <santiago@switchboardmail.com>
