Rogue Review No. 403 - June 29, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Forty-five Words
AUTHOR: Miss Behavin'
LENGTH: 17,000 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Married Couple
                 Unmarried Couple
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
            On the Town
            Outdoors
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Kate wishes her sex life was a bit more like her best 
friend Julie's.  With some assistance and advice from Julie, her 
wish comes true.

COMMENTARY: I think that what makes this story special is the 
fact that it does not feel predictable in the least bit.  The 
characters seem real.  They are not stereotypes.  They have 
feelings.  The author does a nice job putting the reader inside
the head of each of the four principal players, to varying 
degrees.  The plot has twists and turns.  Everything does not go 
as planned.  Sometimes this is because one of the characters 
change their mind and sometimes it is due to circumstances beyond
their control.  I can't think of anything else to say.  Look 
folks, it all (characters and plot) works and it is extremely 
arousing.  Need I say more?

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 10.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 5/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Miss Behavin's Bedtime Stories

         - http://www.missbehavin.com

