Rogue Review No. 506 - April 17, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Model Release
AUTHOR: artie
LENGTH: 3,400 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Male Model-Female Artists
KINK(S): Light Bondage
SETTING(S): Studio
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Anita and Sue, with some assistance from Alex, 
prepare a very special present for his girlfriend.

COMMENTARY: I enjoyed this story. It flows quickly. It isn't 
too long or involved. The sex is kept to a minimum, but I 
still found it to be quite arousing. After all, a scene can 
be arousing with out penetration actually occurring. Right?

On the down side, the story does flow a bit too fast. Yes, I 
mentioned this as a plus in the last paragraph, but give me 
a few more sentences and I'll elaborate. I had a hard time 
following everything that was happening, as I read through 
the story for the first time. Am I expecting too much? 
Should I have been reading the story a bit more slowly? 
Maybe, but it is worth noting that this story is very 
tightly scripted. There is nothing wrong with a tightly 
scripted story, i.e., one in which every or almost every 
sentence carries vital or important information, but it 
helps to know in advance that one is reading such a story. 
Which is not say that the author should have said so in his 
notes, but that I feel the obligation to say so here.

I think that most of you should enjoy this story, male and 
female alike.  However, if you are expecting Alex to have 
his cock buried inside of either Anita or Sue by the end of 
the second paragraph, or sooner, then you may want to skip 
this story.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Model Release

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/23694 [1/1]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=611683673&fmt=raw [1/1]

         artie's stories

         - http://www.asstr.org/~artie/

