A Review by Lee Vine

The Sisters, Sally and Gerry by BillyG

M/F/F

Length: 3,800 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Billy is dating Sally.  They fuck like bunnies.  Billy is also 
attracted to Sally's older sisters, in particular Gerry.  Gerry, Billy 
and Sally share a bed one night.

Commentary

This is a subtle story.  In my book that makes it a good story.  Sure, 
Billy likes to finger Sally while her sister Gerry is walking by, but 
so what, Sally's a nymphomaniac, right?  I digress.  Mr. G did not 
force half the sex onto the reader that he could have, given the setup.

The characters felt real.  The plot is simple and builds up to the one 
scene, with the three of them in bed.  The pivotal scene is a little 
anticlimactic, but was arousing enough on the one hand and realistic 
enough on the other that I could not help but like this story.

Rating

I give this story an 8.5 on a scale of 10.


