Rogue Review No. 392 - June 10, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: My Mother, Susan
AUTHOR: Billy G
LENGTH: 12,400 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Incest (Mother-Son)
KINK(S): Voyeurism
SETTING(S): College
            Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: What starts off as a crush, leads to much more between 
Susan and her college-age son, Billy.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The author does not 
take things too fast.  By the time Billy and Susan get hot and 
heavy it seems appropriate and is arousing, which is not to say 
that the story is not arousing before that point.  The little 
games that mother and son play before they decide to get 
horizontal together are also rather arousing.

This is a very well written story.  It flows very nicely.  It is 
well paced.  Both characters seemed realistic.  The author does a
nice job describing the relationship that mother and son share 
through narration and dialogue.  One of the outstanding qualities
of this story is that it does not feel forced; it just seems to 
follow a natural course.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  It is both very arousing and 
very well written.  If you want something that has sex in it from
the first paragraph you may be a bit disappointed.  On the other 
hand if you appreciate good writing I think you should enjoy this
one.  Of course, if you cannot enjoy an incest story under any 
circumstances then you may want to skip this one.  I have given 
it an Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): My Mother, Susan

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=228075503&fmt=raw

         Stories Online

         - http://www.storiesonline.net/

