Rogue Review No. 412 - July 16, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Sandra Jiminez: ¡Mi Esposa Caliente!
AUTHOR: Losgud
LENGTH: 18,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Coworkers
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
            Work
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Sandra gets the narrator's attention, despite the fact 
that she doesn't speak English, while they are both working at a 
corn canning plant.

COMMENTARY: I am a bit torn when it comes to this story.  On the 
one hand, the sex is very hot.  On the other, the story, other 
than the sex scenes, was a bit hard to follow.  Considering that 
I have never been in a corn canning factory and know nothing 
about the business, I felt left out.  It comes down to a matter 
of accessibility, and I did not find this story very accessible 
for the casual reader who knows little about the sort of 
environment that a sizable chunk of this story takes place in.

The fact that I actually finished the story can be accredited to 
the fact that I have read most of this author's works and have 
enjoyed them all to a greater or lesser degree.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): Sandra Jiminez: ¡Mi Esposa Caliente!

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=497927170&fmt=raw

         Stories Online

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