Rogue Review No. 221 - October 12, 1998

Orange County Babylon (Part 3 of 8) by MichaelD38

M/F/F

Length: 8,700 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  NOTES

This is my review of the third part of Orange County Babylon.

Part 1 - Rogue Review No. 201
Part 2 - Rogue Review No. 212
Part 3 - Rogue Review No. 221

Since reviewing the first part I have decided not to rate the 
individual parts of this story.  I plan on reviewing a part a week, 
until I have read the entire story.  Once I have read the it all I 
will compile all the individual reviews into one big review.


  SUMMARY

Summer and Becky get into a fight over Jack.


  COMMENTARY

There is not much sex in this part, until the end.

This part seems to be here to advance the plot.

I like the way the author has developed the characters to this point.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14763.txt [1/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14764.txt [2/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14765.txt [3/3]

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385735558&fmt=raw [1/3]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385735563&fmt=raw [2/3]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=385735567&fmt=raw [3/3]

