Rogue Review No. 309 - February 11, 1999

Theresa the Elder by Al Steiner

m/F, Teen

Length: 6,400 words

Rating: Excellent

Arousal Factor: High
Story Factor: High


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mark helps Theresa, his older brother's girlfriend, take care of 
Greg, his older brother, after he has passed out drunk.  This good 
deed does not go unrewarded.


  COMMENTARY

This story is about how Mark got to boink his older brother's 
girlfriend.  It is easy enough to botch a story such as this.  All 
you have to do is begin the story with Mark and Theresa in bed, or at
the very least have them in the sack by the beginning of the third 
sentence.

I am happy to report that Mr. Steiner has taken a different approach.
He lets the story develop on its own and does not seem to force it at
all.  The personalities of the characters seem plausible.  The plot 
is well paced.  The sex is arousing.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19733.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=441305056&fmt=raw

