Rogue Review No. 200 - September 26, 1998

Illusion of Love by LeAnna

M/F

Length: 7,000 words

Rating: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Ray tricks Costello into having virtual sex with him, but things do 
not turn out quite as he planned.


  COMMENTARY

This story is a little disturbing.  There is something about it that 
rubs me wrong and I cannot figure out what it is.  The ending is 
appropriate, but somewhere in the story something felt out of place 
or missing.

Possibly it is the fact that a female author wrote a story from the 
male point of view and I think she did a damn good job of it.  I am 
not sure.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14709.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=384056029&fmt=raw

