Rogue Review No. 163 - August 24, 1998

A Roll of the Dice by Bernadette

F/F

Length: 4,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Lee travels to Las Vegas to meet Margaret, a woman she met on the 
internet.


  COMMENTARY

This story is very well put together.  I like all the little details 
that the author includes.  It is about more than just sex.

Lee is a woman who is trapped between taking a step forward and 
living in the past; living her life as someone else wants her to.

At times, it was hard to follow where the story was leading.  I think
this is because the narrator seems torn between living her life as 
she sees fit and living it for someone else, whether that be Margaret
or her mother.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14218.txt


