Rogue Review No. 303 - January 26, 1999

New Year's Eve by Al Steiner

M/F

Length: 6,600 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: Average
Story Factor: High


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Two couples swap partners on New Years Eve.


  COMMENTARY

This is a well written story.  The author has taken the time to set 
up the story properly.  If you do not like plot or background then 
you may want to skip the first half of this story.

Considering all the work that the author put into setting the story 
up, I found the action to be a bit disappointing.  It is not there 
was not enough of it, but that after taking the time to describe the 
world that his characters live in he more or less isolates them from 
it.

I'm not saying that I don't like buildup, because I do.  I'm not 
saying that I didn't enjoy this story, because I did.  I just think 
that I might have enjoyed this story more if the buildup had either 
been shorter, or more directly related to the action in the story.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19293.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=435943118&fmt=raw
