Rogue Review  No. 131 - August 2, 1998

Summer Rain by Vickie Morgan

Voy, F-solo, M-solo

Length: 700 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A man watches a woman masturbate in the rain.


  COMMENTARY

This story is more action than feeling.  There is no dialogue.  It 
reads like a polished rough draft.

The author tells us a little about the two characters, but not 
enough for me to feel satisfied.

This might work as part of a longer story, but it does not work 
standing on its own.


  JUDGMENT

This is a not good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13004.txt
