Rogue Review  No. 129 - August 1, 1998

Janey's June by Janey

M/F

Length: 3,900 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Janey visits Abe's bookstore on what otherwise would have been a 
quiet, uneventful morning.


  COMMENTARY

I like this story.  Despite the fact that I like it, I am not 
completely satisfied with it.  It feels a bit distant and cold at 
times, especially in the beginning.

I like Abe's reactions to Janey.  I think the author does a good job 
showing how the characters feel, when they are having sex, without 
explicitly saying how they feel.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story, but it feels as though something is 
missing.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13273.txt


