Rogue Review No. 505 - April 17, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Camping with the In-laws
AUTHOR: Snake
LENGTH: 15,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Husband/Wife
                 Brother/Sister-in-law
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Outdoors
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Mike and Natalie have more fun, wearing less 
clothes, than they expected when they go camping with Kellie 
and Steve.

COMMENTARY: I enjoyed this story. It is not short, but it 
isn't terribly long either. The author keeps the plot 
rolling and the story fresh. The ending is predictable, but 
I like the route that the characters take in getting there.

There is one thing that nagged at me as I read this story. 
Mike seems to get very turned on watching his wife and his 
brother-in-law have sex. That wasn't the part that nagged at 
me. It was the manner in which the author reveals Mike's 
arousal at his wife's infidelity which leaves something to 
be desired, in my opinion. Instead of showing us how it 
makes him feel, Mike, who doubles as the narrator, tells us 
how it makes him feel. Explicitly revealing facts isn't 
always the most effective method for communicating 
information. 

There isn't anything to really warn you about in this story, 
other than the infidelity. Although I have to wonder if it 
can real be considered infidelity if it is done with the 
implied consent of one's spouse. Oh well, I enjoyed the 
story and believe that some of you should as well.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Camping with the In-laws

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/23572 [1/1]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=608144911&fmt=raw [1/1]

