Rogue Review No. 466 - November 19, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Laura
AUTHOR: JennTill
LENGTH: 8,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (2 Females)
                Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Hotel
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jen has an internet chat buddy, Laura, whom she has 
never met in person.  Laura isn't completely satisfied in 
her marriage.  She wants to experiment.  Jen is more than 
willing to be of assistance.

COMMENTARY: There isn't any one thing about this story that 
sticks out in my mind.  It is just very well written and 
extremely arousing.  It is well executed, not too 
predictable, and does not cut to the chase too quickly.  At 
the same time the author does a nice job of hinting at what 
is to come without being too explicit.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Laura

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/21340

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=550523905&fmt=raw

         Erotic Love Stories by JennTill

         - http://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/jenn/

