Rogue Review No. 472 - December 4, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Trust
AUTHOR: E. Z. Riter
LENGTH: 6,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Husband-Wife
                 Employer-Employee
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
            Office
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Danny's wife, Denise, works for a very powerful 
man, Mr. Chase.  Her boss wants her to become his mistress 
and bear his children.  The catch is that she wants to 
remain married to Danny.  Mr. Chase complicates things by 
agreeing to financially support the couple and the children.  
What will Danny decide to do?

COMMENTARY: This is an interesting story, to say the least.  
The opportunity that is presented to Denise and Danny isn't 
exactly run-of-the-mill, and that's putting it mildly.  For 
the first two-thirds of the story I found myself both 
disturbed and aroused by Danny's situation.  While reading 
the last one-third, I felt more comfortable identifying with 
Danny and much more comfortable with the level of arousal 
that I achieved.

On the whole, this story is different.  If you are looking 
for something romantic, you might want to look elsewhere.  
There are elements within this story that I believe will 
appeal to some female readers and elements that will appeal 
to some male readers.  I can also see how some men and women 
could be turned off by this story.  It is a bit convoluted, 
but it works.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Trust

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/21633

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=556359512&fmt=raw

