Rogue Review No. 429 - August 24, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: My Aunt Mattie
AUTHOR: Dude
LENGTH: 6,600 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Solo (Female, Male)
                Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Aunt-Nephew
KINK(S): Voyeurism
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Aunt Mattie comes to live with Danny and his 
parents.  In the cramped apartment that they live in, he has 
to share his bed with her.

COMMENTARY: This story has a very specific feel to it.  It 
doesn't feel generic, but very real.  Danny's descriptions 
of how he sees things and of how he feels seem appropriate 
for a 15-year-old boy.  Some of the terms he uses are not 
ones that I would use, but the general tone that the story 
is told in, is one that is very familiar to me.

This story is about desire.  Some fantasies are realized by 
Danny, but the bulk of the story is about longing and pining 
for Aunt Mattie; someone that is legally off limits to him.  
I found the ending to be a bit anticlimactic, and not quite 
as satisfying as the rest of the story.  I think that I was 
expecting something a little less restrained at the end.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

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