Rogue Review  No. 94 - July 10, 1998

The Inn by Uther Pendragon

F/M

Length: 2,000 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A woman gets very familiar with a stranger she meets at dinner.


  COMMENTARY

This story lacked a dilemma.  I figured out the ending (which I have 
not given away in this review) before I finished reading the story.

There was not enough build up to the sex.  The sex was just two 
bodies going at it.  I got no feel for the individuals involved.

Simple stories can work, but there has to be a little something to 
them.  This one lacked both characterization and plot.


  JUDGMENT

This was not a good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12497.txt
