Rogue Review  No. 23 - May 21, 1998

by Lee Vine

Letters by Darkside

M/F, tg, transform

Length: 7,900 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Jennifer and John's mother passes away.  She leaves some letters for 
them to read.  They discover some startling facts about their 
parents.

Commentary

I enjoyed this story.  It was melodramatic to the point of being 
whole wheat.  The melodrama added humor.  The plot was good, simple 
but entertaining.  The characters were a bit wooden, but then I 
consider that normal seeing as it was a melodramatic story.

There was an occasional sentence with a word out of place.  The sex 
was a bit forced, although the way it was introduced did make me 
laugh.  With a more work I think this could have been an excellent 
story.

Rating

I give this story a 7 on a scale of 10.

