Rogue Review No. 347 - April 7, 1999

Expert Tease by Philippe Richard

M/F/F

Length: 5,700 words

Objective Analysis: 8 {out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Philip runs into Jessica in the same Paris nightclub where he met her
before.  This time she does more than just tease him.  She tells him 
how she got to be an expert tease.


  COMMENTARY

This story is extremely arousing.  It is worth noting that there is 
no actual sexual intercourse.  I'm not too sure how realistic some of
the action is in this story.  Maybe it is physically possible and 
maybe it isn't.  I'm just not sure.  I do know one thing, I found it 
arousing, extremely arousing.

This story has plot and characters.  The characters are there to 
forward the plot, and not the other way around.  In other words there
is nothing extremely special about any of the characters.  On the 
other hand this is a tale of sexual fantasy.  It is designed to 
entertain, not enlighten.  I did like the format of the story.  The 
author employs flashbacks quite usefully to allow Jessica to reveal 
her past.  I wish the author would write shorter paragraphs.  There 
is nothing wrong with breaking up a paragraph that consists of 22 
sentences and over 500 words down into a few shorter paragraphs.  The
information conveyed did not seem to be superfluous, but the manner 
in which it was conveyed was not entirely pleasing to the eye.

I enjoyed this story a lot.  In particular I liked the author's use 
of flashbacks.  As I mentioned before I found the story extremely 
arousing.  I have placed it on my A-list.


  LINKS

Expert Tease

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=438275619&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19393.txt

