Rogue Review No. 391 - June 9, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Every Girl Has Her Price
AUTHOR: Maria Gonzales
LENGTH: 9,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Solo (Female)
                Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
                Twosome (2 Females)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Strangers
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Bar
            Restaurant
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Juana works at a fast food restaurant. Kyle, a customer,
offers her money to expose herself to her coworkers.  Taking Kyle
up on his first offer only leads to additional offers from Kyle, 
which for the most part involve exposing herself further.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The fact that Juana 
was doing things that she normally would not do made this story 
quite arousing.  The fact that I could feel the tension in her 
voice and imagine what was going through her head as she 
considered each offer also made this story rather arousing.

This is a well written story, but I had a couple problems with 
it.  It is well paced and flows well enough.  The author does a 
nice job keeping the story rolling.  She does not allow it to 
slow or bog down.  I'm not too sure how realistic the characters 
are, but the fact that Juana does not leap at every offer that 
Kyle throws her way makes her seem more realistic.  Kyle is more 
of a type; I find him lacking as a main player in the story.  One
more criticism that I have to make is that the story does not seem 
to build to any particular point.  While Kyle's offers do get to 
be more and more challenging for Juana, I got the sense that the 
story could have ended before it did, or could have continued on.
What made the end "the end", was that that was where the author 
decided it would be.

Despite what I perceive as a couple short comings, I enjoyed this 
story.  It is very arousing.  I think most of you should also 
enjoy it.  I have given it a Very Good.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): EroticStories.com

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