Rogue Review  No. 98 - July 11, 1998

True Love by Greatness

F/M, NC, F/F, Cons

Length: 4,700 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mary Lou has not had much luck with boys, but then she meets Alecia.


  COMMENTARY

This is different.  The first part consists of the narrator 
describing a typical date.  It made my skin crawl.  I think that was 
the desired effect.  The rest of the story does not involve non-
consensual sex.

This was a well written story, but it is also a stroke story.  I 
found it enjoyable and arousing after I got through the first part.

There is tension in this story.  The narrator is a very sensitive 
character and the author does a good job of depicting that.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but the non-consensual element in the beginning
is a bit disturbing.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12544.txt


