Rogue Review  No. 130 - August 2, 1998

Pump Song by Mat Twassel

M/F

Length: 3,600 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mat tells Laura a story.  Laura sucks Mat's cock.  They both listen 
to the bed springs squeak, on the floor above them, as Annie, their 
daughter, make love to Tom, her husband.


  COMMENTARY

I like the characters in this story.  I like the setting.  It is nice 
and calm, peaceful.  I like the pace.  It is nice and leisurely, not 
rushed.  I like both stories, the one Mat tells Laura and the one in 
which Mat tells Laura a story.

If only most summer nights could be like this one.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12882.txt
