A Review by Lee Vine

Banana Split by DG

M/F

Length: 3,400+ words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

A Woman and a man are shipwrecked on an island.  She fucks him with
fruit.  He fucks her with fruit.  They ditch the fruit and do it the
old fashioned way.

Commentary

I liked this story.  It was creative.  The characters were simple but
believable.  While sex was pretty much the only thing on their minds,
it was not the only thing they did.  The author did include some 
background.  The sex was creative.  This not to say that the story
had much of a plot, just that it did not go over board with the 
descriptions of fucking.

On the down side this story was short.  Since there was no plot its
hard to project where the story would have gone if it had been any 
longer.  The characters were not too well developed.  Aside from male
and female I really cannot say that I remember too much about them.

Despite the short comings I enjoyed this story.

Rating

I give this story a 6.5 on a scale of 10.

-- Lee Vine <santiago@switchboardmail.com>
