Rogue Review No. 382 - May 28, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Library Studies
AUTHOR: a.k.a. nolan
LENGTH: 3,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Fellow College Students
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): College
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Kevin is at the library trying to study.  At first he is
kept from his studies because he is daydreaming about Andrea.  
After she asks him for some help, he is kept from his studies by 
more than just his imagination.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  I liked the 
descriptions of Andrea quite a bit.  They seem more sensual and 
erotic than they do sexual.  The author also makes sure to build 
up to what sex there is in the story and does not linger too long
on any one moment.

The story is well written, although there isn't much to the plot.
It does flow nicely.  I would not say the characters are deep.  
Andrea is more of a body than she is a fleshed out character.  
What make this story so well written are the descriptions and the
author's sense of timing.  He doesn't drag it out too long and he
seems to keep in mind that how Kevin feels is as important as 
what he is doing.

I enjoyed this story very much.  It is very arousing and well 
written.  It wasn't hard to see what the author was describing; 
my mind did not have to work double time envisioning the story as
it progressed in order to keep up with my eyes as they took the 
written words of the story in.  This is a very enjoyable read and
I recommend it to all, but at the same time I can see how it 
might appeal to men more than to women.  I have given it an 
Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): a.k.a nolan's stories

         - http://members.tripod.com/akanolan/home.html

         EroticStories.com

         - http://www.eroticstories.com

