Rogue Review No. 100 - July 12, 1998

Portfolio Update by Jeff Justice

M/F

Length: 5,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Noelle wants nude photos of herself and wants her former boss to take
them.


  COMMENTARY

I found this story very arousing.  The author does a good job of 
building up to the sex.

The bad part is that the author did not spend enough time proof 
reading or editing this story.  There are misspelled words, incorrect
verb tenses, and run-on sentences.

I liked the tone of the story.  I could feel the tension in the 
narrator's voice.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but it needs to be edited.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12565.txt [1/2]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12564.txt [2/2]
