Rogue Review No. 438 - September 12, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Sudden Exposure
AUTHOR: Three
LENGTH: 6,300 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
                Twosome (Female, Female)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Unmarried Couples
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Mac and Pam double date with Rick and Deb.

COMMENTARY: Wow!  This story is hot.  It sizzles.  There 
isn't a whole lot dialogue, and normally that would bother 
me, but this time it doesn't.  The author does a wonderful 
job with describing the scene that involves these four 
people.  The focus doesn't rest for too long in any one 
place.  Also, the author does more than just describe 
physical actions, but also gets into describing the 
emotional state of his characters.

On the down side, there are a number of spelling errors.  At 
times this may confuse the reader as to who is doing what to 
whom.  While the spelling errors are an eyesore, they were 
not so many as to interfere with my enjoyment the story.

...

Okay, I've decided to blab on a little more, so bare with me 
-- er -- bear with me.  I was thinking about this story, 
after rereading it, and I began to wonder about what it was 
that made me like it so much.  I think that it has to do 
with the narration.  Specifically, the narrator, Mac, allows 
Pam to -- er -- pull him into a situation that both arouses 
and distresses him at the same time.  His descriptions give 
the impression that he isn't the only one experiencing mixed 
emotions.  The end result is a wild sex scene involving Mac 
and Pam and Deb and Rick, in which it turns out that his 
anxiety was groundless.  I don't know if I can explain it 
any better than that, but I enjoyed this story so much that 
I felt that I should take another crack at explaining it to 
you.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 4/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding

LINK(S): Sudden Exposure

         - http://www.eroticstories.com/story/2180

