Rogue Review No. 355 - April 16, 1999

Black Widow by Miss Behavin'

F/M, F/M/M

Length: 11,000 words

Objective Analysis: 9 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5/5
  Plot and Characters: 3/5
  Editing: 5/5
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Valerie, the black widow, is on the prowl.  Her intended prey is 
Randy, an accountant.  Just when Valerie is ready to pounce, Steve, 
a friend of Randy's, conveniently enters the story.  Momentarily, 
Valerie the Fearless hesitates before...


  COMMENTARY

This is an extremely arousing story.  The author does a nice job of 
building up to the sex.  In particular, I was rather aroused by 
Valerie's lack of inhibitions, when it comes to sex.  There is 
something to be said for the author's ability to describe sex scenes,
both graphically and emotionally.

This is a well written story.  More time is spent on characters than 
on plot.  The point of view is tossed around like a hot potato.  
Often, the focus shifts every other paragraph.  Distinguishing 
between Steve and Randy becomes a challenge, especially during the 
menage-a-trois.

My biggest gripe with this story is the ending.  It is moralistic and
unnecessary.  It gave me the impression that the author was trying to
blame her characters' actions on a higher power.  Maybe I'm reading 
too much into the ending, but the bottom line is that I didn't care 
for it.

There may not be much to the plot and the characters don't seem to 
have much reason to live, other than sex, but I certainly enjoyed 
this story.  It was extremely arousing, well enough conceived and 
very well edited.  I have given it an Excellent under Subjective 
Analysis.


  LINKS

Erotic Stories by Miss Behavin'

* http://over.to/missbehavin/

