Rogue Review  No. 62 - June 19, 1998

Janey's May by Janey

F/M

Length: 6,900 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Note

Read Janey's note at the beginning of this story.  A lot of this 
story may not make sense if you do not know the context.  I would be 
interested to hear from someone who does not know most of the inside 
jokes and hear what they thought of this story.


Summary

Sergeant Jane MacDonald is in the hospital after being wounded in 
action.  She meets an intern named Taria, a doctor named BillyG, and 
thinks about her old unit.


Commentary

The author tried to do too much in this story.  There are parts that 
work, but over all it seems too crowded.

The flashback part of the story is littered with references to many 
ASSM authors.  I found many of the references amusing.

The most touching scene was the one with BillyG pleasuring Sgt. 
MacDonald.  

At the beginning of the story Janey says that this story came to her 
in a dream.  I believe her.


Judgment

This is not a good story, but some of the inside jokes were amusing.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11983.txt
