Rogue Review No. 447 - October 9, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Beyond Tease
AUTHOR: Philip
LENGTH: 5,600 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (2 Females, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Non-specific
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Nightclub
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Philip continues to get himself teased mercilessly 
by Jessica and Ghita.

COMMENTARY: I like the premise behind this story, but I 
don't care for what the author has done with it.  Part of 
the problem is the fact that the characters aren't all that 
interesting.  Another part of it is the fact that the plot 
is very repetitive.  The author has obviously put forth some 
effort, but I have to say that there doesn't seem to be a 
whole lot to the characters or plot that could not be found 
in his previous stories.

If you have not read his previous stories or have not read 
them recently then you may enjoy this one.  On the other 
hand reading his previous stories will help to acquaint you 
with the characters.  Its funny, but I found this story 
rather arousing the first time I read it, but when I tried 
re-reading it I wasn't quite as taken by it.  I think this 
happened because the first time through I didn't know what I 
was in for, but after that I did.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 4/5
        - Plot and Characters: 2/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): Beyond Tease

         - http://www.eroticstories.com/story/4040

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