Rogue Review No. 332 - March 17, 1999

Dinner with Callie by Edbun

M/F

Length: 7,600 words

Objective Analysis: 9 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 4 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Callie lets Greg, her husband, in on something she has discovered.  
It involves butter and anal sex.


  COMMENTARY

This is an extremely arousing story.  I'm not too sure how healthy it
is for a woman to baste her pussy, inside and out, with butter, but I
found the description of it to be very appealing.  I think I was also
turned on by seeing Callie take charge of the situation and not 
relying on Greg to initiate sexual contact.

This is a stroke story, but it is well written.  The author gives 
enough background information about the couple to make them seem like
more than just actors in a porn flick.  The plot is well paced and 
seems to follow a logical progression.  During the course of the 
story the author switches the point of view back and forth between 
Greg and Callie.  I think this is done very effectively.

I definitely enjoyed this one.  It is well written and extremely 
arousing.  I'll admit to at least one bias with this story.  I 
usually enjoy stories that involve characters using food, whether 
that be bananas, butter or whatever else comes off the dining room 
table or out of the refrigerator, in the course of sex play.  I still
think this is one that most readers should enjoy.  I give it an 
Excellent, under Subjective Analysis.


  LINKS

Dinner with Callie

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=455848388&fmt=raw

* news:7cpar2%2489l%241%40nnrp1.dejanews.com

