Rogue Review  No. 84 - July 2, 1998

Private Dancer by Steven A. Black

M/F

Length: 9,300 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Andy hooks up with Sasha, a stripper.


  COMMENTARY

This is a well paced story.  The author teases the reader, but does 
not get down to business too fast.

Neither of the main characters has to make any tough choices.  The 
purpose of the plot seems to be to get them into bed.  The story ends
with them living happily ever after.

The descriptions are good, but there are some instances where the 
author tells the reader how Andy feels, rather than show the reader 
how Andy feels.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but the characters could have had a little more
depth.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12417.txt
