Rogue Review No. 451 - October 18, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: What the Fuss Is
AUTHOR: Kelly Adams
LENGTH: 3,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: During the summer after she graduates from high 
school, Kelly learns what the fuss is all about; thanks to 
Tony, a neighbor who has just graduated from college.

COMMENTARY: This is a fun story, even though there aren't 
any twists in the plot.  Actually, that is exactly what I 
like about it; that it is simple.  At the same time it is 
arousing and it also seems realistic.  I suppose that the 
plot is a bit clichéd, but the author has done a very nice 
job with it.  On top of that, if I were going to pick on 
stories for not being completely original, then I would have 
to pick on most of the stories that I review.  Besides, one 
of the things that I enjoy the most is when an author can 
push my buttons in certain ways, even when it is rather 
obvious in which direction she is taking the story.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): What the Fuss Is

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=490446479&fmt=raw [1/1]

         Bedtime Stories with Kelly

         - http://www.asstr.org/~Kelly/

