Rogue Review  No. 149 - August 15, 1998

Incentive by Vickie Morgan

F/M, Teen

Length: 1,500 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Angela, a tutor, inspires Jake, her student, to excel.


  COMMENTARY

This story is direct.  There is some build up, but not much.  It is 
well written, but I prefer that author take a little more time in 
describing the action.

Despite the lack of subtlety I found the story arousing.  


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story, but it seems a bit rushed.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13156.txt


