Rogue Review  No. 77 - June 27, 1998

Hush by Brother Cadfael

M/F

Length: 1,400 words

==========

DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

==========

Note

The Summary was written by BC, not me.


Summary

A man meets a deaf woman at the film development store and finds 
his knowledge of sign language to finally be of use.


Commentary

This story was good, but it felt a little rough.  It felt like the 
author was not too sure what he wanted to do with the story.  Maybe 
he had conflicting emotions about how the story would be read by 
others.  Whether he did or did not, he did a good job with the 
characters, plot and descriptions.

The woman in this story, Liea, is deaf.  Her hearing impairment is 
not used as a gimmick.


Judgment

This is a good story, but it could have been more polished.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12324.txt
