Rogue Review No. 381 - May 27, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: The Ski Trip
AUTHOR: Indy
LENGTH: 3,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (2 Females)
ORIENTATION(S): Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Vacation (Mountains)
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Tanya and the nameless female narrator of this story are
pushed together by their friends.  What appears to be an awkward 
situation at first turns into a rather pleasant one for both 
women.

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The author does a 
nice job building up to the sex.  By the time it happens, it 
seems like the appropriate thing.  The balance struck between 
story development and sex certainly makes this a more arousing 
story.  The descriptions of sex are also nicely handled, with 
the focus being on how the characters are feeling not just what 
they are doing.

This is a very well written story.  Told through dialogue and 
narration, the story is nicely paced and flows well.  Both of the
main characters are warm and realistic.  I also like the 
supporting cast.  The author does a nice job setting the scene 
and then having the story progress from there.  It does not feel 
forced.

I really enjoyed this story.  It is very arousing and very well 
written.  I can't think of how the author could improve it.  I 
highly recommend it, unless lesbian stories are a real turn off 
for you. I have given it an Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

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