Rogue Review No. 345 - April 5, 1999

Mom's New Love by Roderigo

m/F, Teen, Inc

Length: 9,000 words

Objective Analysis: 6 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mom is horny.  Dad hasn't been too interested in sex lately.  Enter 
teenage son.


  COMMENTARY

I found this story to be somewhat arousing.  In this case that means 
that I found the story arousing at first, but as the story progressed
I found myself wilting away.  The reason for this is probably the 
abundance of sex to the exclusion of plot.

This is a stroke story; no doubt about it.  I had no problems with 
the plot until the author decided that graphic descriptions of sex 
can stand on their own.  In other words once the sex begins it 
doesn't stop for anything, more or less.  The characters were pretty 
standard for a stroke story.  They did not have much on their minds 
other than sex.

If there had been less sex and more plot in this story then I might 
have liked it more.  If the subject matter is something that pricks 
your interest, or you think plot is overrated, then you might enjoy 
this story.  As for me, I have given it a Good, under Subjective 
Analysis.


  LINKS

Mom's New Love

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=240595780&fmt=raw [1/2]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=240596223&fmt=raw [2/2]
