Rogue Review No. 482 - December 29, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: A Visit from St. Nicholas
AUTHOR: Virago Blue
LENGTH: 4,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Strangers
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Hotel
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Its Christmas and Kristina is at a ski resort with 
her sister, Amanda, and her brother-in-law, Will.  
Unfortunately, Kristina isn't a very good skier.  
Fortunately for her, her heart is set on more than just 
learning how to ski.  That's where a ski instructor named 
Nick enters the picture and...

COMMENTARY: I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  I like the 
manner in which the author builds it up.  I like the 
characters, in particular Kristina.  She seems very 
realistic, primarily because she experiences conflicting 
emotions.  That says a lot about her.  It says even more to 
me about the author's ability.  I also enjoyed the dialogue, 
especially the conversations between Kristina and Amanda.  I 
think that most of you should enjoy this story.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): A Visit From St. Nicholas

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/21832

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=561206161&fmt=raw

         Virago Blue's Home Page

         - http://members.aol.com/mdmvirago/
