Rogue Review No. 393 - June 11, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: The Best Woman
AUTHOR: E. Z. Riter
LENGTH: 3,300 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Husband, Wife & Husband's High School Sweetheart
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): High School Reunion
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jason's wife surprises him after she invites Sharon, his
old flame, to spend the evening with them, in bed.

COMMENTARY: This story is somewhat arousing.  As the narrator 
intimates at one point, "this story isn't about my sexual 
escapades."  There are a few parts that I found arousing.  Some 
involved sex and some only the hint of things to come.

This is a well written story.  It is intelligently written and 
does not center around sex, but rather a relationship.  The story
flows, but at the same time the author seems to be trying to fit 
quite a bit into a rather short story.  The characters remain a 
bit mysterious.  They did not seem unrealistic, but I did not get
the feeling that I knew them all that well by the end of the 
story.

This is an interesting read.  It is well written and somewhat 
arousing.  I wasn't too sexually aroused by it, but it did make 
me think.  I have given it a Good.


OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 3/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): The Best Woman

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=488465067&fmt=raw


