Rogue Review No. 344 - April 3, 1999

The Shaver II by Al Steiner

F/F

Length: 5,400 words

Objective Analysis: 10 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Three weeks have passed since Jen got her pussy shaved by Charlie, 
her sister-in-law.  David, Jen's husband and Charlie's brother, was 
excited about his wife's new look, at first, but his interest has 
faded.  Jen starts to think about how much she enjoyed what Charlie 
did to her and decides that she wants more of the same.


  COMMENTARY

This is an extremely arousing story.  Having read the first story in 
the series probably helped.  I had an idea of what was to come.  I 
think it also helped that Charlie does not just jump back into bed 
with Jen.  She has needs too.

This is a very well written story.  I enjoyed reading the verbal back
and forth between Jen and Charlie, as well as Jen's narration.  There
are both internal and external and external conflicts, unlike the 
first story where there just seemed to be an internal one.  In the 
process, Charlie becomes a more interesting character.  The first 
story seemed to revolve, to a large degree, around how Charlie came 
to shave Jen, in other words it was more plot oriented.  This story 
seems to revolve around the characters, Jen and Charlie, what makes 
them who they are and how they see their relationship changing.  Both
stories have plot and both have character development, but that is 
the way I see them when I compare them.

I really enjoyed this story.  It is extremely arousing and well 
written.  Some readers may disagree with me, but it reminds me of 
some of Ann Douglas' better lesbian stories.  It definitely makes my 
A-list.

While it is not essential, I recommend that you read the prior story 
in this series, "The Shaver".  It is also worth noting that the 
author has left the ending open, in other words he might write 
another story about Jen and Charlie.


  LINKS

The Shaver II

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=459282442&fmt=raw

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20784.txt

