Rogue Review No. 363 - April 28, 1999

Eager Beaver by Jenny Wanshel

F/F/M, Teen

Length: 10,000 words

Objective Analysis: 9.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4/5
  Plot and Characters: 5/5
  Editing: 5/5

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Themes: girls just want to have fun; size matters

Jenny and Cindy, two cock-hungry sophomores in high school, convince 
Brad, a senior with a reputed monster-cock, to go out with them.


  COMMENTARY

I am usually rather repelled by stories in which the main characters 
seem to be fixated on size, and while that is definitely the case here, 
the narration itself does not focus too much on size.  The result is 
that I was able to enjoy the story without being bombarded with 
comments about how big Brad's cock is.  It also helped that the author 
builds up to the sex and does not begin the story with it.  This is a 
very arousing story.

One thing that I really like about this story is Jenny's runing 
commentary on her own life.  It adds both humor and realism.  Brad 
and Cindy are not quite as vividly painted as Jenny is.  The plot runs 
smoothly.  What makes the story stand out is the main character.  This 
is a very well written story.

Well, I definitely enjoyed this story.  The story is very well written, 
very arousing and very well edited.  As I said before if there is one 
thing about this story that stands out, in my mind, it is not the size 
of Brad's cock (or is that cuck?) but rather Jenny's running commentary 
on her own life.  This is a Very Good story.


  LINKS

Eager Beaver

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=470513613&fmt=raw [1/2]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=470515628&fmt=raw [2/2]
