Rogue Review No. 360 - April 23, 1999

The Transgression by Edbun

F/M, Discipline

Length: 6,700 words

Objective Analysis: 8.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4/5
  Plot and Characters: 3/5
  Editing: 5/5
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Christine has "borrowed" money from the petty cash fund.  Mr. 
Edmonds, the president of the company, wants to fire her and have 
her prosecuted for theft.  Christine doesn't like either prospect.  
Mr. Edmonds offers her a third option, corporal punishment.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  Christine is both scared and excited,
when she discovers that there is a way she can avoid dismissal and 
arrest.  Being torn, as she is, makes her a more interesting 
character and makes the story quite arousing.

This story is well enough written.  The author takes the time to 
situate Christine in her world.  Mr. Edmonds is not as complete a 
character as she is.  The plot is simple.  It flows smoothly for the 
most part, but there are some places where it seems a bit jerky.  

I enjoyed reading this story.  It is very arousing and the story is 
reasonably well written.  I have given it a Very Good, under 
Subjective Analysis.

  LINKS

The Transgression

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=468773956&fmt=raw
