Rogue Review No. 353 - April 14, 1999

Evidence of Betrayal by Anne Arbor

F/M

Length: 1,900 words

Objective Analysis: 9 {out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)
  Stroke: No

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Kathy finds evidence that her husband has been unfaithful.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  Kathy frankly admits that she enjoys 
sex and the author does a wonderful job relating Kathy's fond 
memories of sex.  The tone of the story helps to balance out the 
descriptions of sex.

This is well written.  Kathy develops as a character concurrently 
with the exposition of the plot.  Both are nicely paced.  I enjoyed 
the twists and turns that the story takes.  It is beautifully done.  
The details that the author includes made it feel very realistic.  
This is not stroke material.

This story drew me in because it is well written and because I found 
it very arousing.  Personally, I would have preferred something a bit
longer and more involved.  That is my personal preference.  This 
story works at this length.  I have given it a Very Good, under 
Subjective Analysis.


  LINKS

Evidence of Betrayal

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=324524108&fmt=raw

Anne Arbor's Sandbox

* http://members.tripod.com/~AnneArbor/

