Rogue Review No. 373 - May 17, 1999

Haircut by Sidney Durham

Code(s): M/F

Theme(s): --

Length: 4,300 words

Objective Analysis: 10.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5/5
  Plot and Characters: 5/5
  Editing: 5/5

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do 
not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Sidney is getting his haircut by Marie, when she brings up the 
subject of blowjobs.


  COMMENTARY

The author takes his time and allows the tension to build between
Marie and Sidney.  Marie teases Sidney.  Sidney is painfully 
aroused.  I felt his pain.  This story is extremely arousing.

This story is very nicely put together.  For the most part, it 
consists of two elements, (a) a running conversation between 
Sidney and Marie and (b) Sidney's nonverbal asides.  Both were 
nicely done; neither of them felt forced.  The conversation goes 
a long ways towards fleshing out the two characters.  The asides 
added a little more to Sidney's character and were humorous at 
the same time.  There is some sex at the end of the story.  This 
is a very well written story.

I loved this story.  It is both extremely arousing and very well 
written.  I like stories with dialogue in them, and this one has 
plenty of it, but it is more than the quantity of the dialogue, 
it is the quality of it.  I have given it an Excellent, under 
Subjective Analysis.


  LINKS

Haircut

* http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=470778986&fmt=raw

