Rogue Review No. 158 - August 22, 1998

Rachel's Curse by Phillip Stevens

M/F, F/M, TG, Transform

Length: 19,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Paul is dating Rachel.  What Paul does not know is that because of a 
curse, Rachel exchanges bodies with whomever she has sexual contact 
with.



  COMMENTARY

The writing is a bit stilted and terse, but I like the pacing and the
plot.  I also like the subject matter.  The author deals with the 
issue of sexual attraction after a sex-change, in a semi-serious sort
of way.  There is more to this story than just sex.

Even though these are only the first five chapters of a longer work, 
there is a certain amount of closure within them.  I look forward to 
reading the rest of the story.

There are a number of missing words and grammatical errors in these 
five chapters.  Hopefully the author will re-edit these chapters and 
repost them when he releases the final chapters.


  JUDGMENT

This is a very good story, but it needs to be re-edited.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13657.txt [1/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13660.txt [2/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13594.txt [3/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13659.txt [4/5]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13595.txt [5/5]


