Rogue Review  No. 34 - May 27, 1998

by Lee Vine

The Dare by Michael K. Smith

M/F, Teen, Exhib

Length: 8,500 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Katie issues an Official No-Underwear Dare.  Rebecca and her friends 
agree to the dare.  After giving Charlie Harker an eyeful, Rebecca 
briefly liberates his cock before enveloping it with her mouth.

Commentary

I liked the tension in this story.  I could feel the narrator's 
thrill of doing something verboten for the first time.  Most of the 
story is given away early on, and yet it is still very enjoyable.

The characters were honest and realistic.  The author did an 
excellent job.  He reveals them to the reader rather then tells the 
reader about them.  I think this method is almost always preferable. 
It also fits in nicely with the exhibitionist activities in this 
story.

Judgment

This is a great story.  I would not change a thing.

