Rogue Review  No. 87 - July 3, 1998

Amy Visits for the Summer (Parts I, II, & III) by Sundance

M/F, Teen

Length: 12,600 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  NOTE

This is only the beginning of a longer story.


  SUMMARY

Married-with-three-kids-Mike, age 38, boinks beautiful-used-to-be-a-
tomboy-Amy, age 17.


  COMMENTARY

I found this story very arousing.  The author does not spend too much
time on the sex itself, but does spend a considerable amount of time 
building up to it.

The main character does admit to being a bit estranged from his wife,
Sarah.  He is ripe when Amy comes along.  This bothered me some.  I 
am curious to see how the author will bring the wife into the story.

The author does a good job of showing the confusion in Mike's head.  
He is not entirely reluctant, but he does have his doubts.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12446.txt [1/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12447.txt [2/3]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12573.txt [3/3]


