Rogue Review  No. 91 - July 8, 1998

Thumper by Dave Read

M/F, Teen

Length: 4,300 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mark, a senior in college, comes home to baby-sit his sister Chris, 
age 16, and ends up fucking one of her friends.


  COMMENTARY

This is a stroke story.  There was a build up in this story.  The sex
did not begin with the second sentence.  It was not unrealistic or 
too formulaic.  The reference to Buddhism made me laugh.  

This story was lacking in at least one area.  The actions of the 
various characters seemed to proceed in a logical order, but they did
not seem to flow.  I found that distracting

The characters are not very deep, but then again, this is a stroke 
story.


  JUDGMENT

This is a good story, but the flow of the action was a little rough.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12454.txt

