Rogue Review  No. 90 - July 7, 1998

Hot Tango by Nick

M/F, F/F

Length: 4,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

One rose touches the life of many people.


  COMMENTARY

This was a good attempt, but I think the author stifled the
characters.  It seems like he got an idea and then forced the story
in a particular direction.  The plot was there, and I had no problems
with it.  The characters, I feel, were sacrificed for the sake of the
plot.

The Star Trek reference kind of threw me.  It did not do the story in
for me, but it did upset the mood, that I felt had been created.

It is nice if a story can be wrapped up neatly, but it is not
necessary.


  JUDGMENT

This is not a good story, but I like the idea behind it.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12453.txt

