Rogue Review No. 433 - August 31, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: If This World Were Mine
AUTHOR: Anthony Matthews
LENGTH: 3,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Brother-Sister
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: David is shaken up over his breakup with his 
girlfriend.  He manages to find a shoulder to cry on, his 
sister Carmen's.

COMMENTARY: I really like the way this story is constructed.  
There isn't too much emphasis on the sex, but it is 
definitely there.  I like the fact that the story doesn't 
feel forced.  It seems to have a natural flow to it.  There 
are parts of this story that I found very arousing, and 
there are other parts that I found very touching.  David 
isn't the narrator, but he does get a lot more attention 
from the author than does Carmen.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): If This Were My World

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=518709578&fmt=raw

         Stories by Anthony Matthews

         - http://www.mrdouble.com/htm/raauthors/nlsoldier.htm

