Rogue Review  No. 65 - June 19, 1998

Closing Pandora's Box by Stephanie

M/F, TG, Transform, NC

Length: 6,400 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Alan works for Carl.  Carl decides to transform Alan into a beautiful
woman.  Alan gets the last laugh, after he transforms Carl into a 
beautiful woman who cannot speak and then transforms himself to look 
like Carl.


Commentary

I am always unsure whether the authors of these sorts of stories want
or expect their audience to be turned on by the sex.  One person 
raping another is not exciting or arousing.

Under the right conditions I can enjoy a transgender transformation 
story.  Those conditions include a plot and some characterization.  
Just because an author introduces a device, in this case 
transformation, into a story does not excuse them from including the 
standard elements that make for a good story.


Judgment

This was not a good story, but the author did say at the end that this 
might just be the beginning of a longer work.


Link(s)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12017.txt [Part 1]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12016.txt [Part 2]
