Rogue Review No. 408 - July 8, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Friday Night at Friday's
AUTHOR: G. M. Torrey
LENGTH: 11,400 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
                Twosome (2 Female)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): Voyeurism
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jason is determined to have sex with his wife's friend, 
Daneta.  Fearing that he may be about to lose his only chance at 
scoring with Daneta, Jason plans to rape and murder her.  Things 
don't turn out quite as Jason planned.

COMMENTARY: This story is a bit weird.  The plot twists were just
a bit too dramatic for me to consider them believable.  I had a 
hard time understanding what exactly led Jason to the point that 
he was prepared to rape and murder Daneta.  I also found the turn
events which leads to the outcome of the story to be as 
incredulous as Jason's scheme.

This isn't a bad story, but it is just a bit too much for me to 
accept.  I might have found the story a bit more engaging if the 
focus had been on the motivations of the various characters, 
rather than the course of events.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 5.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 2/5
         - Editing: 4/5
         - Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): Friday Night at Friday's

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=493053553&fmt=raw

