Rogue Review  No. 50 - June 10, 1998

by Lee Vine

No Tomorrow by Crimson Dragon

F/F

Length: 4,700 words

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DISCLAIMER:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Rachel is at the beach, trying to get over breaking up with Mark, 
when she meets Sara.


Commentary

I really liked the descriptions in this story.  I could feel the 
water and the sand as they caressed Rachel's body.  I could feel 
Rachel's hesitation as she tried something different.

Both Rachel and Sara felt real.  They both had emotions and showed 
some trepidation.  There was not much dialogue, but the text more 
than adequately conveyed how the two women felt.

This story was both arousing and somewhat touching.


Judgment

This was an excellent story, I would not change a thing.



