Rogue Review No. 399 - June 22, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: The Blood Pressure Check
AUTHOR: Al Steiner
LENGTH: 4,300 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Doctor-Patient
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Hospital
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Bob goes for a physical.  He doesn't pass the blood 
pressure test.  The doctor tries a rather unorthodox method to 
lower his blood pressure.  In the end, she isn't successful, 
in lowering his blood pressure, but is satisfied enough to 
fudge the numbers on his forms.

COMMENTARY: This is a fun story.  Nothing in particular about it 
sticks out, other than the fact that it is very arousing and very
well written.  I think this is because the author does a nice job
of setting the story up before even hinting at anything sexual.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Blood Pressure Check

         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19356.txt
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=437037419&fmt=raw

         Stories Online

         - http://www.storiesonline.net/
         - http://www.storiesonline.net/authors/Al_Steiner/Default.html

