Rogue Review No. 181 - September 5, 1998

Trouble In Paradise by Crimson Dragon

F/F, Exhib, Light Spanking

Length: 8,400 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Dawn and Elizabeth find their relationship altered after an incident 
during their vacation in Mexico.


  COMMENTARY

I like the author's touch.  Crimson Dragon does a nice job of 
balancing the two characters.  They both seem real.  They both have 
depth.

I like the plot.  It is well paced.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINKS

http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=376997830

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13551.txt

