Rogue Review  No. 45 - June 3, 1998

by Lee Vine

Friday by Uther Pendragon

Best

Length: 800 words

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NOTES:

(1)  IF YOU ARE UNDER 18 THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!
(2)  IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURAL ACTS WHICH SOME 
PEOPLE CALL PLEASUREABLE BUT YOU REGARD AS NECESSARY FOR THE 
PERPETUATION OF THE HUMAN RACE THEN STOP READING NOW!!!!!!!
(3)  IF YOU AREN'T SURE IF EITHER (1) OR (2) APPLY TO YOU THEN STOP 
READING NOW!!!!

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Summary

Two people try to shock others by talking loudly about "their" 
personal problems in public.


Commentary

This story is fall down funny.  Its short and there is not much to 
it, but it is definitely good for a laugh.

It is well written.  The dialogue is what makes the story what it is.
A discussion of plot or characters would be either unfair to the 
author or useless for the reader, so I'm not going to bother.

This is not really a story, but it is funny.


Judgment

This was a very good story.  I would not change a thing.

