Rogue Review No. 348 - April 8, 1999

The Maid by Maria Gonzales

F/M, Exhib

Length: 5,200 words

Objective Analysis: 10 {out of 10)

  Arousal: 5 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Isabel is a maid.  John is a writer.  He is staying in the hotel 
where she works.  After Isabel acts as though she does not speak 
English, John admits that he thinks she's gorgeous and would like to 
fuck her.  Isabel decides to do something about John's crude remark. 
She teases him over the next few days by wearing less and less 
clothing.


  COMMENTARY

This story is extremely arousing, probably because the author takes 
her time in leading up to the sex.  The author does not focus too 
much on physical descriptions and actions.  Instead, she focuses on 
how her characters are thinking and feeling.  I think this also makes 
the story more arousing.

This is a very well written story.  It has a plot.  The plot flows 
nicely.  It seems logical enough.  The characters seem real.  They do
not seem to exist for the sole purpose of having sex.  This is a 
stroke story, but the characters are more interesting than the ones 
you find in your average stroke story.

I definitely enjoyed the story.  I was pulled into it early on and 
thoroughly enjoyed the ride.  It belongs on my A-list and that's why 
I have given it an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis.  Unless a 
story has to be really nasty and disgusting for you to enjoy it, I 
highly recommend that you read this one.


  LINKS

The Maid

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=463415578&fmt=raw

Maria Gonzales' Bibliography

* http://bitbard.pair.com/library/maria/

