Rogue Review No. 423 - August 10, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Deep South
AUTHOR: Anthony Matthews
LENGTH: 2,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Brother-Sister
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Hotel
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: A young man and his older sister, Regina, kiss and 
makeup.  This occurs after they have fought over whether he 
should get to sleep in the bed with her or have to sleep on 
the floor.

COMMENTARY: The thing I like the most about this story are 
the details.  The author does a very nice job setting it up.  
The sex is nicely handled.  Both characters seem realistic.  
Their relationship comes across as true-to-life.  If I had a 
complaint, it would be that the beginning sets up this 
beautiful background, which is then hardly used at all in 
the story.  It gives the story flavor, but it also raised my 
expectations.

There are a few places where it seems that words are 
missing.  Considering how short this story is, that seemed 
excessive.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 4/5
        - Editing: 4/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): The Deep South

        - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=510534417&fmt=raw
