Rogue Review No. 449 - October 13, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Hots for a Hooker
AUTHOR: J. Boswell
LENGTH: 19,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
                Group (1 Female, Many Males)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Prostitute-Customer
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Hotel
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: While on a business trip, Mike get the hots for 
Tiffany, a hooker.

COMMENTARY: I'm not too crazy about this story.  It is 
divided into three parts.  I liked the first part more than 
the second.  I liked the second part more than third.  What 
I liked about the first part is that it was very arousing 
and flowed nicely.  I liked the interaction between Mike and 
Tiffany.  I liked the narration.  The situation seemed 
realistic, and at the same time fantastic.  After the first 
part, the characters became less interesting.  Their actions 
seemed more mechanical.  They didn't seem to have life in 
them.  The sex wasn't as arousing.  I didn't find the sex in 
the third part arousing at all.  The story does have a 
logical flow to it, but the author dragged out some parts 
that did not need to be dragged out.  In a sense the story 
became too predictable.  I'm not too sure what else to say.  
I think what kept me reading, considering the length of this 
story, was the hope that it would stop getting worse and 
start getting better.  

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 3/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): The Hots for a Hooker

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=414434828&fmt=raw [1/3]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=414434838&fmt=raw [2/3]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=415110587&fmt=raw [3/3]

         - http://assm.asstr.org/erotica/assm/Year98/17465.txt [1/3]
         - http://assm.asstr.org/erotica/assm/Year98/17466.txt [2/3]
         - http://assm.asstr.org/erotica/assm/Year98/17522.txt [3/3]

 
