Rogue Review No. 384 - May 30, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Obsessions
AUTHOR: Miss Behavin'
LENGTH: 9,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Business Acquaintances
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): At Sea
GENRE(S): Romance
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Lindsay has a couple obsessions.  One involves having 
a baby; the other involves Peter.  Peter has a couple obsessions.
One involves his boat; the other involves...

COMMENTARY: This is a very arousing story.  The first half of the
story consists of plot and character development.  There isn't 
much, if anything, that I would say is arousing in the first 
half.  The second half is another story.  Of course, without the 
first half the story would just consist of a sex scene.  Would 
that have been arousing?  Considering the author's ability, 
probably, but I like to think that the plot and character 
development contributed to the level of arousal that I achieved.

This is a very well written story.  The plot flows well.  It is a
bit predictable, but the ride is fun.  Both characters are well 
drawn, with more emphasis on their personalities than on their 
physiques.  In my opinion the author's real talent lies in her 
ability to describe.  Her words evoked beautiful imagery in my 
head.

This is a fun read.  It is both very arousing and very well 
written.  I think it should appeal to most of you.  I have given 
it an Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Erotic Stories by Miss Behavin'

         - http://www.missbehavin.com

