Rogue Review  No. 120 - July 26, 1998

Michele by Stephen Peters

M/F, Teen

Length: 10,200 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

John, 34-years-old, starts by comforting Michele, 16-years-old, but 
eventually he jumps in the sack with her.


  COMMENTARY

I thought this was a very well written story.  It does not have an 
"And They Lived Happily Ever After" ending.  It did not seem like 
rape or pedophilia, despite what some courts might say.

This story is well paced.  John shows some hesitation.  The sex takes
up only a fraction of the text.  The purpose of the story was to tell
about a sexual encounter between the narrator and a sixteen-year-old 
neighbor, but there is more to this story than just that.

It would have been nice if the narrator could have worked in a little
bit more about his own life.  I think it would have helped to balance
the story out a little more.


  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12623.txt



