Rogue Review No. 358 - April 19, 1999

Financial Planning by Anne747

F-solo, F/M

Length: 3,900 words

Objective Analysis: 9.0 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 5/5
  Plot and Characters: 4/5
  Editing: 5/5
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

After getting treated badly by one of the tellers, Sheila has a talk 
with the bank's manager.  He asks her out.  She is too horny to say 
no.  She decides to wear a butt plug to dinner that night.  One thing
leads to another.


  COMMENTARY

This is an extremely arousing story, even though there isn't much 
plot development, before Sheila starts touching with herself.  I 
think that there is more than one thing at work here.  There is 
Sheila's frankness when it comes to sex.  There is the author's 
descriptions that focus not only on what Sheila is experiencing 
physically, but also emotionally.  There is also Sheila "toy" 
collection.  It all adds up to an extremely arousing story.

This is a well written story.  There isn't much to the plot, but it 
does flow nicely.  This is a definite stroke story.  Everything in 
the story feeds into Sheila bedding Joe, the bank manager.  The 
characters seemed realistic enough.  It might have been nice if the 
plot was a bit more involved or the characters were a bit deeper, but
then again this is a stroke story.

Well, I enjoyed this story.  It is extremely arousing, well written 
and well edited.  Unless the idea of sex with "toys" squicks you, I 
think you should enjoy this one.  It makes my A-list.


  LINKS

Anne's Erotic Story Archive

* http://annejet.pair.com/
