Rogue Review No. 330 - March 14, 1999

The Teaser by Al Steiner

M/F

Length: 7,400 words

Objective Analysis: 9 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

A man reflects on a fling he had with his next door neighbor, when he
was in college.


  COMMENTARY

I found nothing arousing in the first third of this story.  The rest 
of the story is another matter.  The sex play in the final two-thirds
of the story is very arousing.  The author takes his time with it, 
and even when it was obvious that something is going to happen the 
author still managed to surprise me.

This is an extremely well written story.  The beginning of the story 
was not arousing in the least bit, but I still found myself drawn in.
The characters seemed realistic.  The plot was well paced.  There 
isn't as much dialogue as I usually like to see, but that did not 
even occur to me until I was sitting down to write the review.  The 
story as a whole just flows very nicely.

I found this story to be entertaining both when it was arousing and 
when it wasn't.  My subjective opinion is that this is an excellent 
story.


  LINKS

The Teaser

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19914.txt

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=444222183&fmt=raw

