Rogue Review  No. 108 - July 18, 1998

And the Lady Danced 'till Dawn by Sven the Elder

M/F

Length: 3,800 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mike goes to a strip club, where he meets Carrie.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very well written story.  It is well paced and well 
plotted.  The characters seem real, although they are not complex or 
dynamic.  I could not find any awkward sentences or misspelled words.
Maybe some of the paragraphs could have been broken into smaller 
ones.

This is basically a stroke story, but the author obviously put quite 
a bit of effort into it.

  JUDGMENT

This is an excellent story.


  LINK(S)

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/12742.txt

