Rogue Review No. 504 - April 17, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: More Phone Sex
AUTHOR: Paris Waterman
LENGTH: 3,000 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (2 Females)
ORIENTATION(S): Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): Other Stuff

SUMMARY: Rachel teases Lisa, over the phone.

COMMENTARY: This isn't a long story. I don't want to say too 
much about it for fear that I will ruin it for you. On the 
other hand, I should warn you that there are some parts of 
it that may make some of you feel a bit icky. I hope you 
haven't stopped reading yet, because I think I should 
elaborate on that last comment. It isn't entirely clear in 
this story exactly what is going on. Rachel tells Lisa a 
story, but there is no third party narration to confirm that 
what she describes is actually happening. Are you confused 
yet?  Do you want to read the story now? What! I haven't 
even told you whether I enjoyed it or not!

I found this story to be arousing. In part, because of the 
author's ability to write dialogue, and this is a story that 
consists almost entirely of dialogue. The characters sprang 
out at me. I could hear them speaking. In part, because of 
the twists and turns that the conversation takes. I wasn't 
sure if what I was reading was actually happening, and being 
unsure made me that much more aroused. This must all be very 
confusing, given that I have chosen not to reveal where it 
is that Rachel and Lisa's conversation ends up. While I 
could see that Rachel was manipulating Lisa, by telling her 
this fantastic story, I couldn't determine it was an 
enhancement of an actual event or a complete fabrication. 
Not knowing made the story that much better, for me.

The bottom line is that I recommend you read this story. At 
the same time, I hope you will keep in mind that I have 
warned you.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S): More Phone Sex

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/23520 [1/1]
         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=606874884&fmt=raw [1/1]

         Paris' Place

         - http://www.asstr.org/~Paris_Waterman/


