Rogue Review No. 263 - November 17, 1998

Precious by Crimson Dragon

F/M

Length: 7,000 words

Rating: Very Good

Arousal Factor: Nonexistent
Story Factor: High


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Janice has a very bad day.


  COMMENTARY

This is not a happy story.  The ending shows there is some hope for 
the future, but for the most part this story is very depressing.

I liked the first half of this story better than I did the second.  
The first half seemed more alive.  I could feel Janice' 
surroundings.  In the second half, the world around her gave off less
heat.  That was probably due in part to her numbness.

This is not a stroke story, by any stretch of the imagination.  What 
sex there is in this story is not enjoyable.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15530.txt

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=393587728&fmt=raw



