Rogue Review No. 471 - December 3, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Teacher's Pets.com
AUTHOR: Lotuseater
LENGTH: 2,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (2 Females)
ORIENTATION(S): Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Roommates
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Dormitory
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jennifer's parents don't have enough money for her 
to continue living in a dormitory, while she attends 
college.  Karen, Jennifer's roommate, comes up with a scheme 
which, hopefully, will earn them enough money so that they 
can continue living together.

COMMENTARY: This is a fun story; very playful.  I like the 
manner in which the author sets it up and then carries 
through on it.  It is very nicely paced.  It isn't 
overloaded with sex.  It would have been nice if the author 
had taken a little more time to flesh out the characters.  
The characteristics that distinguish them seem to have 
little to do with their personalities and more to do with 
their physical attributes or financial positions.  In other 
words, the plot and pacing impressed me, the characters did 
not.

Getting away from the plot and characters, there are some 
spots where a few more details would have helped.  I like it 
when an author gives me enough to visualize the scene, but 
not so much that I feel like every last detail has been 
written in to it.  More often than not, when I perceive a 
problem with the quantity of details, the author falls into 
the latter category.  In this case there is actually a 
detectable dearth of description.  This meant I had to make 
some more imaginative leaps than I prefer to, and although 
this was not an insurmountable task, it bothered me enough 
that I decided to mention it.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 3/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): Teacher's Pets.com

         - http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/21588

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=555108632&fmt=raw

