Rogue Review No. 231 - October 19, 1998

Orange County Babylon (Part 4 of 8) by MichaelD38

M/F, F/F

Length: 9,400 words


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please 
do not read what follows.


  NOTES

This is my review of the fourth part of Orange County Babylon.

Part 1 - Rogue Review No. 201
Part 2 - Rogue Review No. 212
Part 3 - Rogue Review No. 221
Part 4 - Rogue Review No. 231

Since reviewing the first part I have decided not to rate the 
individual parts of this story.  I plan on reviewing a part a week, 
until I have read the entire story.  Once I have read the it all I 
will compile all the individual reviews into one big review.


  SUMMARY

Jack's desire to dump Karen has some unforeseen consequences.


  COMMENTARY

There is not much sex in this part of the story.  There is some 
character development, which helps to flesh out some of the main 
characters.

I like the way this part is divided up into sections.  I think it 
works better than Part Three.


  LINKS

http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14854.txt [1/4]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14857.txt [2/4]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14856.txt [3/4]
http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14855.txt [4/4]

http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=386846276&fmt=raw [1/4]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=386853655&fmt=raw [2/4]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=386853640&fmt=raw [3/4]
http://search.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=386853628&fmt=raw [4/4]



