Rogue Review No. 439 - September 15, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: The Teacher
AUTHOR: Dude
LENGTH: 7,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Teacher-Student (High School)
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Car
            School
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: David, a 34-year-old high school teacher, catches 
one of his students, 17-year-old Bonnie Kelly, cheating on a 
test.  She does her best to get out of the hot water she has 
gotten herself into, by flirting with him.  He does his best 
to ignore her forwardness, but is not very successful.

COMMENTARY: I have mixed feelings about this story.  I 
enjoyed it quite a bit, but it has a rather abrupt ending.  
It seemed as though the author ran out of steam or interest 
while writing it.  Still, it drew me along until the sudden 
ending.  Both characters are interesting and seem plausible 
enough.  They each have their own problems to overcome.  I'm 
not too sure that I buy into their individual reasons for 
getting hot and heavy together, especially David's.  If any 
part of the story seemed a bit shaky to me, that was it, 
other than the ending, of course.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 4/5
        - Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): The Teacher

         - http://www.eroticstories.com/story/2679

