Rogue Review No. 416 - July 22, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Losing It
AUTHOR: Titmouse
LENGTH: 18,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (2 Females)
                Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Friends
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Indoors
            Outdoors
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Marcee remembers how she finally lost it, 
her virginity that is.  

COMMENTARY: This story is well put together, but it 
has a mechanical feel to it.  What I mean by that is 
that I have no problem with the way the story is set 
up, but most of the descriptions seem to be more 
graphical than emotional.  There are some scenes that 
I found arousing, but the story isn't overflowing 
with them.  There are more scenes that have sex in 
them than there are scenes that turned me on.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 6.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 2/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): Losing It

        - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=504213981&fmt=raw

