Rogue Review No. 322 (1) - March 1, 1999

Pure Strip Poker by MikeCA

Chapters 1 - 3

Exhib, Voy

Length: 25,000 words

Objective Analysis: 6 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Larry, an eighteen-year-old virgin, manages to get himself invited 
to a strip poker game.


  COMMENTARY

There isn't any sex in the first three chapters of this story, but I 
still found them somewhat arousing.  On a slightly different note, 
the story would probably flow more smoothly (and be more arousing) if
it were not for the extreme amount of detail.  The author seems to 
feel that it is necessary to describe every hand of poker that his 
characters play. It got to the point where I felt like I was watching
a sporting event, rather than reading an erotic story.  Some details 
are necessary to set the mood, but too many details result in the 
details dominating the story.

It would also help if the story had been proofread a little more 
closely.  Although, considering the length of the story there aren't 
all that many misspelled words.

Despite finding the first three chapters only somewhat arousing and 
being distracted by the huge amount of detail I enjoyed them enough 
to give them a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis.  This is 
probably because I liked the premise of the story.

If you are looking for stroke material then I would advise you look 
elsewhere.


  LINKS

Pure Strip Poker [Chapters 1 - 3]

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20123.txt [1/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20124.txt [2/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20125.txt [3/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20126.txt [4/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20127.txt [5/5]

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446663572&fmt=raw [1/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446663580&fmt=raw [2/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665140&fmt=raw [3/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665148&fmt=raw [4/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665161&fmt=raw [5/5]


Rogue Review No. 322 (2) - March 2, 1999

Pure Strip Poker by MikeCA

Chapters 4 - 6

M/F, Exhib, Voy

Length: 17,800 words

Objective Analysis: 6 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Larry participates in yet another strip poker game.  His relationship
with Mary continues to evolve.


  COMMENTARY

There is very little sex in chapters 4 - 6, but I still found them 
somewhat arousing.  As with the first three chapters I felt that the 
author focused a bit too much on the mechanics of the poker games.  I
did not find the glut of details quite as distracting, this time 
around; possibly because I expected them.

These three chapters would also have been an easier read if they had 
been proofread more carefully.  In some cases it was a matter of 
misspelled words.  In others it was a matter of words being misplaced
or verbs being in the wrong tense.

Despite the fact that there is a little bit of sex in this story, it 
is still extremely tame, for ASS.

I enjoyed this segment of this story about as much as I did the last 
one.  The story has continued to develop.  The author's depiction of 
Larry is realistic enough.  It is not A-list material, but I am 
enjoying it enough to give it a Very Good.


  LINKS

Pure Strip Poker [Chapters 4 - 6]

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20128.txt [1/4]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20131.txt [2/4]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20129.txt [3/4]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20130.txt [4/4]

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665154&fmt=raw [1/4]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665179&fmt=raw [2/4]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665167&fmt=raw [3/4]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665174&fmt=raw [4/4]


Rogue Review No. 322 (3) - March 3, 1999

Pure Strip Poker by MikeCA

Chapters 7 - 9

M/F, Exhib, Voy

Length: 16,700 words

Objective Analysis: 6 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Mary decides to organize a strip poker game.  Larry and Mary both 
participate in the strip poker game.  They also have a side bet 
going.


  COMMENTARY

In chapters 7, 8, and 9 the story continues to develop.  Some new 
characters are introduced.  Mary learns something about Larry's 
background that she did not know before.  I would not say that there 
is a lot of tension in this story, but there is some and I like it.

I did not find the details of the poker games quite as distracting as
I did in the first three chapters.  This may be because the author is
doing a better job working them into the story.  It may also be 
because I have become accustomed to the author's style.

I enjoyed these three chapters enough to give them a Very Good.  It 
is nothing over the top.  It is rather mild, but I enjoyed it.


  LINKS

Pure Strip Poker [Chapters 7 - 9]

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20132.txt [1/4]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20134.txt [2/4]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20135.txt [3/4]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20133.txt [4/4]

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* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665193&fmt=raw [4/4]


Rogue Review No. 322 (C) - March 3, 1999

Pure Strip Poker by MikeCA

Chapters 1 - 9

M/F, Exhib, Voy

Length: 59,500 words

Objective Analysis: 6 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 3 (out of 5)

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  COMMENTARY

This is not the best story I have ever read, but I did enjoy it.  It 
is long.  I took three nights to read it all.  I do not recommend 
trying to read this entire story in one sitting.  The details of the 
poker games, if nothing else, will bog you down.

The author definitely has an affinity for the mechanics of poker.  I 
do wish that he had integrated the poker details with the rest of the
story a bit more smoothly.  There is nothing wrong with wanting to 
give the reader a feel for what the stakes are and how the game is 
played, but getting too technical can turn some people off.

In all fairness to the author these are just the first nine chapters.
From his notes it appears that he is currently working on the next 
few chapters.  The story may not be complete, but for the most part 
I believe it is both readable and enjoyable.


  LINKS

Pure Strip Poker [Chapters 1 - 9]

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20123.txt [1/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20124.txt [2/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20125.txt [3/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20126.txt [4/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20127.txt [5/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20128.txt [6/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20131.txt [7/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20129.txt [8/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20130.txt [9/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20132.txt [10/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20134.txt [11/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20135.txt [12/13]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20133.txt [13/13]

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* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665205&fmt=raw [12/13]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=446665193&fmt=raw [13/13]

