The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
Author: Master Miller
Story: There Is Always a Catch

Do not read if you are under 18. The story and the characters contained within this story are purely fictional. Any resemblance to actual characters or events is purely coincidental.

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There is always a catch

Susan sat in the waiting room. Sitting all around her were other women with similar problems like hers. It was the curse. The curse of living long. She had had her 40th birthday only a few weeks ago and had decided to fight back against the fine lines that were appearing around her eyes as well as the wrinkles that were just starting to become noticeable under her makeup. She was one of those women who had made a fortune as a super model in her early twenty's. Her looks were her ticket to getting just about whatever she wanted out of life. Now at 40 she was at risk of losing her ticket due to aging. For most of her life she got by on how she looked. She got a good paying job as a model because of how she looked. She was desperate to stay beautiful no matter what the cost.

"Miss Hoydt. The doctor will see you now." said the woman at the reception counter. Susan got up out of the plastic chair and was escorted by the woman to the doctor's office. She took a seat in the doctors office. the doctor was busy so the nurse told Susan to wait although she didn't say for how long. She waited almost a half hour before the doctor entered the room. Susan looked up at him. He looked no older than 25. He definitely did not look like a famous plastic surgeon. He looked like a doctor who was just fresh out of college. "Hello Susan. My name is Dr Spek. How are you today?" he asked her. "Fine. Listen Doctor. I am here because I want a solution to my problem. I am sick of having to use makeup to make myself look 20 again. I want my face back. I do not want to become old and gray." she said to him

"Well medical science has not progressed to the point where I or anybody can make a permanent change to your physical appearance. But I can offer solutions that will last several years." he said to her. "I want something more than a quick fix! Somebody told me you had a new kind of secret therapy that could reverse the signs of aging. I want to undergo this new treatment!" she said to him.

"So you know?" he asked her. "Yes" she lied. She really didn't know much about this secret therapy. All she had heard was that it could solve all her aging problems. She had gotten this information from an anonymous phone call. "My technology deals with human cells. First of all it has many more uses than just for beauty. It is actually a drug that alters human DNA. Mainly the parts of it regulating how many times a cell can divide and which cells can't divide. In short: It alters cells so they will be able to divide an infinite amount of times." he said to her.

Susan was dumbfounded. "You mean my body can stop aging?" she asked him. "Yes." he said. "How do I know you are telling the truth?" she asked him. He paused for a second. "Miss Hoydt. How old do I look to you?" he asked her. "25...Maybe younger..." she said. He laughed. " I am 52 years old. Just two years ago I looked like an average middle aged man. Wrinkled skin, going bald, bad back, joint pain, I was a mess. But look at me now..." he said. Susan looked at him. There was no way this man was 52 years old! He didn't have one wrinkle on him. He took out an old picture and gave it to her. It was a picture of him but he looked older. His hair was still black but with a few flecks of gray in it. His face was wrinkled somewhat and his eyes were sunken. "This could have been done on a computer for all I know." She said to him. "Well there is something else about me that I can prove to you right now. What would you say if I cut off my thumb and it grew back?" he asked her. Before she could react he took a large knife and raised it into the air. He brought it down with a swish and in an instant his thumb was severed from his hand.

Susan watched in horror as he took the severed thumb and tossed it aside like it was a piece of garbage. As she stared at the stump where his thumb used to be she saw that it was not bleeding a lot. As she continued to look at it she saw something that she had only seen in movies! The thumb was regrowing! She watched in total shock as skin and bone started to form. In a matter of a minute or two the thumb had regrown. "How- how- how?!" was all she could say. "The short answer is that I can regrow lost body parts. Every time one of my cells dies. it is replaced. Average human cells can divide a limited number of times. Afterward they just die out. My cells can divide and regenerate an infinite number of times and they grow very rapidly. As you just saw in the case of my new thumb here." he said giving her a close look at his newly grown thumb.

"Ok! I'm convinced! How much to do the procedure on me?!" she said eagerly. "It is still experimental." he said. "Don't give me that 'Experimental' crap! It works! You just proved that!" she said to him. He paused for another moment. "Ok...but You will have to sign a contract." he said. He went over to a filing cabinet and opened one of the lower drawers. He took out a piece of paper that had very small print on it. She took it from him and took a pen out of her purse. "Aren't you going to read it first?" he asked her. "No way! I've read plenty of these in my life." she said. He watched her as she wrote her name on the line at the bottom of the contract. "Stupid, stupid woman." he thought as she finished signing the contract.

"Ok It's signed. When do we start?" she asked him. "Drop by my office around 8:00 PM tonight. And as stated in the contract you tell no one about my procedure." he said to her. "Fine with me!" she said. She left his office and he sat there almost amazed at how stupid this women was. She would become a young beauty again with regenerative powers similar to his, but the price she was going to pay was greater than all the money she had ever seen in her life! As the click clack of her high heels faded he looked at the contract she had so hastily signed. "You have no idea what you have just gotten yourself into..." he thought to himself as he placed the contract back in the file cabinet. "No idea at all..." he thought to himself

Susan got into her car. She was still in mild shock over what she had seen. It was kinda like those science fiction movies that she had seen on TV. That was not entirely true. She had never seen anything like that before. She could hardly wait until she would be able to look forever young and be able to do all that neat stuff. She looked at her watch. It was 4:00 PM. "Damn! what am I going to do for four whole hours?!" she asked herself.

She drove around town looking for some ways to kill time. She mainly drove around for about an hour then decided to have dinner. She ate dinner at a restaurant near the doctors office. She spent the rest of the time just driving around town. Finally at 7:45 PM she decided she could wait no longer and drove back to the doctors office.

She parked her car in front of the building and went inside. The waiting room was empty. Even the woman at the desk was not there. She heard noises coming from the back so she went to check it out. As she was walking down the hallway she bumped into a man. "Oh! Hi Dr Spek! I decided to come a few minutes early if that's all right with you." she said to him. "Fine with me. In fact I am ready to start." he said to her.

He led her into a room filled with strange machines. "I am going to give you a sedative which will knock you out. I know from first hand that the process is very painful." he said as he prepared a hypodermic needle. She felt the needle slide into her arm and quickly felt sleepy. Her vision started to blur and she started to feel very lightheaded. She soon dozed off to sleep... Dr Spek looked at her unconscious form. "There's no going back now..." he said...

Susan woke up in a hospital bed. She looked around the room. It was an all white room with no windows and tiny lights embedded in the ceiling. The only other piece of furniture in the room was a full length mirror. She got out of bed only to realize that she was naked. She walked over to the mirror to examine her body. She was amazed at the reflection that stared back at her! It was her but it was a younger her. She looked no older than maybe 24 or 25. Her breasts were perky again and her face had not one wrinkle or line on it! She stood there in total awe. He had done it! He had made her a young ravenous beauty again! She could go back to modeling now! She could play with men again. She had regained her youth! For centuries people had talked about being young again. She had for many years dreamed of having her looks back and there they were! She continued to stare at her reflection in disbelief.

The doctor entered the room. Susan was still staring at her reflection in the mirror. She was so focused on that reflection that she didn't even know that someone had just entered the room. "Ahem!" He said to her. Susan turned to look at him. "...You did it..." was all she could say. "Yes. Now for your payment." he said to her. "Oh why yes! I can write out a very large check right now." she said to him. "I do not want your money. Didn't you even look at one line on that contract? You are now my legal slave! I am free to do with you whatever I wish!" he said to her.

"What??!" she screamed at him. "You are fucking nuts!" she screamed. Out of anger she punched the mirror. It shattered into a thousand pieces of glass. She picked up one rather large piece. "Let me the fuck go!" she screamed at him. he just stood there smiling. "And what are you going to do with that?" he asked her. She lost it. She approached him and started stabbing him with the piece of glass. He just stood there as she continued to stab him. She stabbed him about twenty times before she dropped to her knees and started to sob.

Dr Spek took the piece of bloody glass out of his chest and dropped it next to his feet. "Utterly pointless" he said as his wounds started to close and heal up. Susan was still crying. "I will never be your little plaything!" she said sobbing. " I will kill myself before I become your love toy!" she screamed at him. He stood there smiling. " I would like to see you try it! Poison yourself or slit your throat it doesn't matter! You will just regenerate and your wounds will heal! You cannot kill yourself. and I can control you. During the procedure I implanted a device in your brain which allows me to take full control of you whenever I wish! I can even reprogram your mind with it!" he said to her. "You should have read the contract!" he said to her. Susan lay there sobbing. "What have I done?!" she thought to herself.

He closed the door and left her alone in the room. There were no windows and the only door was the one he had just closed and it was locked. She tapped the door and realized it was made of metal. She couldn't break through that. She sat on the floor wondering how she could be so stupid. That doctor had done something to her and now she was going to become some sort of mutant sex toy for his pleasure. The door opened and there was the doctor with some weird remote control in his hand. He pressed a button on it and Susan's body went limp. "You will come with me now." he said to her. "Yes I will come with you." she said in a robotic tone.

She followed him into another room which held a big cage. He ordered her to get inside it. She walked inside and he shut and locked the door. he pressed another button and Susan stood there alert. "You fucker!" she screamed at him. "You don't get it yet do you?" he asked her. "I get that I am a mutant freak because of you!" she screamed at him. "No, you are not a freak. Neither am I. We are a couple steps above humans in evolution. We lose any body parts they just grow back. If we are poisoned whatever cells the poison damages will just be replaced. We are immune to all diseases! Unlike humans we can be exposed to the worst diseases out there and not even get a cold! We can even survive radiation poisoning!" he said to her. "The bottom line is we are indestructible!!" he yelled. Susan stood there looking at him. It was true that she did like her new body, but she didn't think it was fair that she had to become his slave.

"Doctor...How? how did you do this to yourself?" she asked him. "You mean how did I discover a way to alter cells? My work actually began before you were even born! way back then I was researching cells for a different reason. I was studying cells from many different kinds of cancers. One kind interested me very much. It was called Terato Carcinoma. It was a tumor that had grown bones and teeth. as well as eyeballs and muscle tissue. I later found out that the reason it grew these human parts was because the cancer affected Stem cells. Those are cells that can form any cell in the human body. Over the years I learned how to alter regular cells and turn them into stem cells. A few more years and I learned how to make the stem cells multiply very quickly to replace a body part. Now I have a secret drug that can graft itself to anybody's DNA and start turning their body into stem cells that still perform normal functions but which can regenerate very quickly!" he said.

Susan was in shock. She remembered that work that some doctors were doing on stem cells back in the early 21st century, but she never even thought someone would end up being able to regrow their own body! " So I am nothing more than a mass of cells now?!" She asked him. "All humans are masses of cells! Our cells happen to now be better than other human cells." he said to her. "Like I said we are for most accounts and purposes indestructible. And now thanks to my therapy I now have the perfect woman." he said looking at her with a perverse expression on his face.

"Hell will freeze over before I become your bitch!" she said to him. "No. not quite." he said "The device implanted in your brain is slowly depleting you of your free will. It will have no effect on your body. by tomorrow you should be my happy little bitch" he said to her. He withdrew that remote again and pressed a button on it. Susan felt it take control of her again. "Susan. Walk over to the bars and turn around. Bend over and press your ass tight against the bars." he said to her. Susan did as she was told. She was on her hands and knees with her rear end pressed up against the bars.

The doctor unzipped his pants Susan could do nothing. Her body was complying with the doctors wishes but her mind was screaming inside. She felt him pushing inside her pussy. He thrusted in and pulled out. She was already getting wet. A few more pushes and she was ready. It felt so good fucking such a young tender snatch. It felt even better knowing that Susan would never grow old. She would never become loose with use. Her pussy would remain tight no matter what he did to it.

As he was fucking her Susan could feel something give in her mind. As the pleasure blanketing her body increased she started having flashbacks. Once she had worked for a bondage magazine. She was photographed in many different bondage poses wearing many different kinds of bondage gear. She remembered those collars and corsets she used to wear and she remembered that one part of her mind that liked it...She knew ever since then that she had a submissive streak inside her. Once she had actually realized that she kept it hidden from the world. For years she had tried to destroy that part of her mind only to be reminded of it whenever she had seen a collar or corset or just about anything made out of black leather...

As he continued to fuck her she could feel that small part of her mind growing...She was under this mans control...There was nothing she could do about it... She orgasamed and right at that moment her mind had bent so much that it just snapped in two... Susan felt different...all these new thoughts were being formed in her head...Thoughts that she had sworn to never think again...

The doctor released her from his control and she stood up. He expected her to start ranting or crying or something like that. She stood there looking at him with a loving look on her pretty face. "M-master..." she said slowly. The doctor was indeed surprised! He had not expected her to break for at least a few hours! "Yes. I am your master now. You will obey my every command. I give you orders you obey them. Understood?" he asked her. "Yes master." she said slowly.

He let her out of the cage. She stood there awaiting his next order. "I am going to have some fun with you..." He said to her. Here was a woman. A woman who like him could not be destroyed. A woman who would never grow old. A woman who would love and obey him forever...

End of chapter 1