The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
Author: Mesmer Eyezed
Story: Telepathic Mind Controller

Telepathic Mind Controller - Part One

Dave is one of the largest and strongest guys in the gym but he prides himself on also being friendly and helpful. He watches the other guys in the gym throwing weights around and being rude to people and it amazes him. Dave’s thinking is that he used to bench press less than everyone in this room and it took him years to get to where he is. The only difference between him and the other people is years of experience so why not share what he knows.

Maria went to a woman’s only gym for over a year and made some progress but not the kind of progress she wanted to make. She joined the nationally syndicated gym that Dave works out at believing that working out with men in the gym would be better motivation to work out harder and to stick to her diet. She bought the trendy workout clothes and went into the gym to work on legs.

Dave had just finished warming up on leg extensions and threw his towel on the leg press machine while he stretched. Maria, not knowing gym etiquette yet, slid Dave’s towel to one side and proceeded to get on the machine. Dave was on the floor doing a quadriceps stretch when Maria moved his stuff.

Dave: Great, that overweight Hispanic woman just got on my machine. She looks new and she looks unsure of herself so I better be polite but be firm about who was there first.

Dave walked over to the machine and said, “Excuse me but I had my towel on the machine so no one else would get on while I was stretching.”

Maria: Oh my gosh, I just took that huge cute guy’s machine. What do I do now? Think of something to say you idiot because he is just looking at you smiling.
Dave: Oh no, I think I offended her. I don’t want this to be her last day in the gym.

Dave said, “Look, you can work in with me if you want.”

Maria asked, “What does that mean?”

Dave said, “It means I do a set, lower it to your weight, you do a set, I add the weight back on and we keep switching back and forth until one of us is finished.”

Maria said, “You mean share the machine. That seems like an awful lot of work for you but if you’re okay with it then that would be great.”

Dave: Damn, I was hoping she would turn me down. Most people do. I’ll be exhausted from taking off all those weights. I better start her out with one plate and keep a close eye on her just in case it turns out to be too heavy.
Maria: Wow, I can’t believe I am going to work out with this big stud. I wonder if there is a way to hypnotize him without knowing what I’m doing? I don’t think I can pull it off in a gym.

Dave said, “I put a plate on each side so you can start out light. Better safe than sorry.”

Maria: He thinks I’m weak just because I’m new. Maybe I can impress him with my leg strength.

Maria went to use the machine and couldn’t get the machine to budge. Dave looked down and realized she had not released the safety mechanism. He reached down and said, “You just need to move this handle. It is just a safety mechanism that comes on some of the new machines.”

Maria: Boy do I feel stupid. I was pushing as hard as I could and I hadn’t even released it yet. He must think I’m an idiot. It is only a matter of time before he gets tired of helping me.

Maria knocked out twenty fast and easy repetitions as Dave looked on in amazement.

Dave: Wow, her leg muscles are popping out from beneath the fat that surrounds her muscles. I have to admit that I am genuinely impressed with her strength. Now it is time to show off a little bit.

Dave threw four plates on each side and also knocked out a quick twenty reps. As he was working out he saw Maria looking right into his eyes and mumbling something under breath. She wasn’t looking at him, she was looking into his eyes and it almost felt as if she was looking past his eyes and into his mind.

Dave: I wish she wouldn’t do that. I feel like she is up to something but I have no idea what she is doing. I sure as hell hope she doesn’t ask me out on a date. The fat rolls on her stomach just don’t do anything for me. She has a pretty enough face but she has no business wearing that workout outfit.
Maria: I think its working. I am not saying anything but he seems flustered and bothered by me mumbling and staring into his eyes. He might just fall for the telepathy trick.

Each set Dave removed the weights and put them back on. Maria liked the way he so naturally served her and thought he might just be a natural. Dave knew he was slightly submissive towards women but probably would never have used the word submissive to describe himself. He let men and women work in with him, showed them how to use the machine if they were using it wrong but he only ever helped women get the weights on and off.

The other thing that happened after each set was that Maria did the same thing to Dave while he performed his set. She stared deeply into his eyes and mumbled under her breath. Dave finally resorted to closing his eyes just to avoid her stare and even cut his leg press work short to get away from her.

Dave finished his workout an hour later and walked out past the food court to his car. He did not notice Maria following him. He opened his trunk, put his workout bag in the trunk and when he turned around Maria was standing next to him smiling from ear to ear.

Dave: Oh no here it comes. She is going to ask me out. I get this all the time. I am polite, courteous, and helpful and they misinterpret it as a sign that I’m interested. I’ll just tell her I have a girlfriend so I do not hurt her feelings.
Maria: My heart is pounding so hard I think I’m going to puke. If this doesn’t work I will never be able to work out here again.

Dave, “Hi, did you have a question?”

Maria held out her hand to shake Dave’s hand and said, “I actually do have some questions but first I wanted to introduce myself and thank you for your being so patient with me. My name is Maria.”

Dave held out his hand and shook Maria’s hand. Then he said, “Dave. And you’re welcome.”

Maria said, “I guess I can ask you questions when we get back to my place. I’ll probably just have you train me so you can answer my questions as we go along.”

Dave: This lady is absolutely insane. What does she mean, “When we get back to her place?” I am not going anywhere with her and I only train hot women so I can try and date them.

Dave said, “Your place? I don’t understand what you mean. I’m not going anywhere with you. And I am an personal financial planner not a gym instructor.”

Maria: So far this is going according to plan. Instead of him calling me an insane bitch or screaming at me he is asking me questions out of confusion. I will start the induction and see if he bites.

Maria, “Actually you will be going home with me and you will be training me. Would you like to know why?”

Dave: Do I dare ask? She obviously wants me to ask why but I am dying to know why she thinks I am going to her house with her.

Dave said, “Sure, why don’t you tell me why.”

Maria said, “I hypnotized you in the gym and now you have to obey me.”

Dave started laughing and said, “And just when did you do this? I can account for every minute of my work out. I even keep a log.”

Dave: I better pull out the log and show it to her so she knows whatever she thinks she did to me didn’t work. I hope it didn’t work. When the hell did she hypnotize me? I knew she was up to something when she was staring into my eyes mumbling but I sure wasn’t hypnotized.
Maria: This is going better than planned. He is desperately scrambling to prove to he isn’t hypnotized but I can see the fear on his face. He has his doubts and as long as he doubts he will soon be mine.

Dave pulled out the log and said, “See, I can account for every minute I was in the gym.”

Maria pushed the log to the side and said, “Yes you can but I used telepathy to hypnotize you. When you were doing your sets I was sending messages into your mind that would make you obey me when I got you alone. And guess what, we’re alone right now.”

Dave: Holy shit I knew she was up to something. Can you hypnotize someone with telepathy? I wish I had paid attention to my psych teacher when we were discussing Freud.

Dave said, “You did? I knew you were up to something.”

Maria: He bought it. I want to jump for joy but I can’t let him see how excited I am that he thinks he is hypnotized. Now I really need to hypnotize him before he realizes that I did nothing to him in the gym.

Maria said, “Yes, I thought you knew I was up to something but your mind was too open to resist. Now you must do as I command.”

Dave: She says I am hypnotized but I don’t feel any different. Still, I saw her staring into my eyes and speaking softly. How could I have been so stupid as to not realize what she was up to? I am going to tell her I am not hypnotized and see what she does.

Dave said, “If I am hypnotized then why don’t I feel any different? I don’t think I’m hypnotized at all.”

Maria: He thinks its true and he is trying to reason his way out of it. I am going to have this big stud in my home within the hour. This is too good to be true.

Maria took one step towards Dave and said, “Really? You don’t feel any different? You’re not a good liar at all Dave. If you don’t feel any different then why are you finding it impossible to look away from my eyes and why are your eyes beginning to feel so heavy? I’ll tell you why. It is because I want your eyes glued to mine and I want your eyes to feel heavy. Now do as I command and let your drowsy eyes become heavier and heavier.”

Dave: Damn I am in trouble now. I can’t seem to look away from her eyes. And my eyes are starting to feel heavy. What the hell am I going to do now? I don’t want to be hypnotized and go home with this woman.
Maria: He is more suggestible than I originally gave him credit for. He honestly thinks he cannot look away from my eyes. And his eyes have gone from an occasional blink to much more frequent blinks. Oh no, I think I’m getting wet and horny.

Maria said, “That’s right Dave, your eyes are so heavy and you are so sleepy. Don’t be frightened Dave, I want you to notice how incredibly peaceful you feel as you become sleepier and sleepier. My eyes seem to be growing in size as your eyes fall into my eyes causing you to become even more drowsy and more open to my power.”

Dave: I have never felt so peaceful before. This is incredible. I really don’t want to fall under her power but it doesn’t seem like I have any choice so I guess I should just enjoy it. It feels like I can only see her eyes. I wonder what she is going to do to me when she gets me to her house. I wish I could get this silly smile off of my face.
Maria: He is going out quickly. Look at the way he is smiling at me. Oh man am I wet. I can’t wait to get this guy home.

Maria said, “You f eel wonderful now don’t you Dave?”

Dave said, “Yes Maria, wonderful.”

Maria said, “I am your mistress and you will address me as such when no one is around. Now tell me again that you feel wonderful.”

Dave said, “Yes mistress, I feel wonderful.”

Maria said, “Then it is time for me to take you deeper and make you feel even more wonderful.”

Dave: She is so nice. I cannot imagine feeling any better than I do right now but I can’t wait to go there.

Maria said, “You will now notice a heavy sleepy feeling moving up your body starting with your feet and progressing all the way to your neck. As it moves up your muscles will melt and become jelly but your bones will become rigid and stiff so you do not fall. As each part of your body melts into jelly I want you to name the body part followed by the word mistress. You may begin.”

Dave: This is unbelievable. I can actually feel my muscles melting as if I was getting a massage after taking muscle relaxants. Uh oh, I better tell my mistress which muscles are melting.

Dave said, “My feet mistress. My calves mistress. My upper legs mistress. My butt mistress. My stomach and back mistress. My chest mistress. My shoulders mistress. My arms mistress. My neck mistress.”

Maria: Oh my that was easy. He is completely out of on his feet but I have many more tricks up my sleeve. Now I will finish him off and get him into the car so I can deepen his trance.

Maria said, “Very good my submissive muscular stud. Now it is time to sleep for your mistress. That sleepy feeling that has swept through your whole body and stopped at your neck will now move past your neck and into your head. As it does your mind will sleep and you will deeply hypnotized. You will be unable to think for yourself and will need me to think for you. When I count to three you will get into the passenger seat of your car, hand me the keys and then will notice the sleepy feeling move into your head. Your entire body will go limp and you will fall into a very deep hypnotic trance.”

Maria counted to three and Dave immediately moved to the passenger seat, handed her the keys and flopped over like a jelly fish out of water. She reached in, put on his seat belt, went around to the driver side, got in and drove off in Dave’s car. Maria looked over at her prey sitting helplessly in his own car and was very pleased with her handy work.

Maria said, “Your will, your wants, your desires are all back there in the parking lot. As we drive away and leave them behind your only will, your only wants and your only desires will become further and further from your mind until the only will, wants and desires will be the ones that I give you. What will be your will, wants and desires?”

Dave: My will, my wants, my desires are all back there in the parking lot. As we drive away and leave th em behind my only will, my only wants and my only desires will become further and further from my mind until the only will, wants and desires will be the ones that my mistress gives me. My mistress has asked me a question. I must respond.

Dave said, “Mistress, my will, my wants and my desires will be whatever you tell me they are.”

Maria said, “Very good slave. You do realize that as you went dee per under my power that you became my slave don’t you slave?”

Dave said, “Yes mistress, I am your slave.”

Maria: Oh wow I am so horny. I can smell my pussy juices now. Hearing Dave call me mistress and admit to being my slave was all I could handle. If I catch one more red light I am going to kill someone.
Dave: I am Maria’s slave.

Maria said, “Dave, you cannot remain in this wonderful hypnotic state forever and will have to awaken soon. Don’t worry my sweet submissive slave, I will hypnotize you again so you can enjoy this feeling but I am afraid it is time to wake up now. When you awaken you will feel very different. I will be the most beautiful woman you have ever laid eyes on. You will know that there is nothing I can’t ask you to do where you won’t know that immediately that you must obey me without question. These feelings of lust, desire and obedience will cause you to fall in love with me. If you are the perfect lover and perfect companion I may fall in love with you too. Do you understand slave?”

Dave: I have to wake up now but I don’t want to. When I wake up I will see that Maria is the most beautiful woman I have ever seen. I will d o anything for her and obey her without question. I will fall in love with her and hope to win her heart some day if I’m a really good lover and companion to her.

Dave said, “Yes mistress, I understand.”

As the car pulled into the driveway Maria said, “Very good slave. I have a few more things for you to remember before you awaken. When anyone can hear us I will refer to you as Dave and you will refer to me as Maria. But in private I am your mistress and you are my slave. You are not my slave out of fear but because you are so in love with me, so smitten by me, so enamored by me that all you can do is obey me and submit to me. Now when I count to five and snap my fingers you will awaken.”

Maria: I would think this is the big test to see if it worked but I am 99.9% sure it worked. I have never seen anyone respond to suggestion like he did. It felt like I was truly inside his head rea rranging his thoughts. Oh well, here goes nothing.

Maria counted to five, snapped her fingers and watched Dave awaken. He looked around confused for a moment and then looked at Maria.

Dave: Where am I? How did I get here? Why am I in the passenger seat of my car? And wh o is the absolutely beautiful woman driving my car? She is the most beautiful woman I have ever laid eyes on. Wait! She told me to think that. That is the woman from the gym. She hypnotized me twice, once in the gym and again standing at my car. It was as if she had crawled inside my head and had rearranged my thoughts. And I think I love her for it. My gosh I can’t think of anything I wouldn’t do for her.

Dave said, “Mistress, you are the most beaut iful woman I have ever seen in my life. I would do anything for you. Just ask and you shall receive.”

Maria: Oh yes, it worked! This guy is mine! I am done hypnotizing mediocre men on blind dates into being my fun for the evening. This one is a keeper.

Maria said, “ Now that you mention it. I want to be made love to. I don’t mean sex either, I want to be kissed, caressed, held and made love to. And of course I want my pussy licked and worshipped. It will be an object of desire and an object of worship for you.”

Dave said, “Yes of course mistress. Making love to you seems like it would be something that goes without saying.”

Maria: Dave is totally mine. Even some of those losers I brought home were never under my spell the way Dave is. I think I am going to get out of the car and take his big buff body upstairs and have some fun.
Dave: Oh shit, my mistress is getting out of the car and I haven’t opened the door for her. I better get out there and open the door.

Dave suddenly slammed the passenger door open and startled Maria. He ran around to her side of the car and opened up the door. He took her hand, kissed it, and assisted her from the car. Maria thought this was so amusing she almost laughed.

Maria: I better not laugh. He is totally serious. My girlfriends are going to be a little suspicious when they see this hot guy falling all over me. I wonder if I should hypnotize him again and tone it down a little.
Dave: I don’t think I can pick this woman up but I better try. If I am going to take her into the house and make love to her I want her to feel special and would like to carry her.

Dave reached down, picked Maria up and put her in a cradle carry. Maria threw her arms around Dave and kissed him as he carried up the stairs to the front door. Maria could feel her panties getting wet and said, “Oh my gosh I want you right now slave. Don’t even bother taking me to my bedroom. Make love to me right here on the family room floor.”

Dave and Maria made out for only a short period of time. Dave thought he was supposed to hug, kiss, caress, fondle and so forth but Maria had been horny way too long. She said, “Undress me and then worship my pussy.”

Dave gently undid the clip on her pants and said, “Yes mistress, anything for you.”

Maria: I hope he doesn’t mind that I haven’t showered since my workout. What am I saying? He is my slave and I don’t care if he likes it or doesn’t like it. I own him and he will worship my pussy even if it is that time of the month. I don’t mind if he gets his red wings as long as we are both happy and he is happy when he is serving me.
Dave: There it is. Her pussy is perfect. I love when a woman doesn’t shave. I must give my mistress pleasure. I will start out gently teasing her and increase the pleasure as she responds.

Dave began to gently kiss her and tease her clit. Maria moaned and groaned from the pleasure so Dave knew h e was pleasing her.

Maria: I should be careful what I ask for. I need this guy to make me orgasm.

Maria took Dave’s head, jammed it in between her legs and said, “Make me orgasm slave. Make me orgasm now!”

Two Weeks Later

Maria had set up a lunch to introduce her friends to Dave. When Dave had introduced his friends to Maria they were very nice and cordial but she could see the disbelief in their eyes. Maria had been to Dave’s house, had seen photos of the types of girls he was accustomed to dating, and was not at all surprised by the response. Now it was time to see how her friends reacted.

Dave wore a pair of jean shorts and a tank top as Maria had instructed him to. Dave and Maria got to the restaurant early and had already been seated when her girlfriends came into the restaurant. Maria waved to them, called them over and as they approached the table they were all jabbering away until they saw Dave. Each one of them stopped talking and stared at Dave in an obvious state of awe. Her back stabbing friend Rosa was also there.

Maria: Look at the way Rosa is looking at my man. That bitch thinks she is going to steal my man like she has in the past. Go for it Rosa because this guy is different.

Rosa had huge breasts and big lips and men just loved her. She was used to getting what she wanted. She quickly sat down right next to Dave and said, “Oh wow! Look at these muscles.” As she rubbed her hands on his arms she looked right at Maria and said, “How did you get a cute one like this Maria?”

Maria looked at Dave and said, “Tell them Dave.”

Dave said, “We met at the gym. We were working out on the same machine and then it occurred to me that I had never seen a more beautiful woman than Maria.”

Rosa said, “You’re serious. Take a look at these and then tell me who is more beautiful.”

Rosa undid her top and exposed almost everything she legally could in a public facility and waited for Dave’s jaw to drop. Rosa said, “So, what do you think?”

Dave: What is wrong with this woman? Can’t she see that she doesn’t even compare to my Maria? If she doesn’t put her shirt back on I am going to ask her to move.

Dave said, “I think I would like to sit next to someone who is not so much of a slut.”

Rosa went to slap Dave but his hand came up quickly and blocked her arm. Rosa stormed out of the restaurant and Maria squeezed Dave extra tight. Then Maria’s real best friend said, “Okay Maria, what gives? That witch has been casting spells with her breasts on your boyfriends ever since we’ve known her. Dave didn’t even flinch.”

Maria smiled and said, “Can you two keep a secret?”

They both eagerly shook their head. Maria said, “I hypnotized him.”

They both laughed and said, “Oh come on Maria, be serious. Really, what is your secret?”

Dave said, “That is the truth. She followed me out to my car, told me she was going to hypnotize me and make me fall in love with her and an hour later I was at her house making love to her.”

Maria’s best friend said, “Okay you two, knock it off. If you ever decide to tell us the truth let us know. All that really matters is to see how happy you two are.” She paused for a moment and said, “So Dave, do you have any cute friends you can introduce us to?”

Dave: I better look at Maria to see if she is okay with me offering up my old workout partners.

Dave looked at Maria and she nodded yes. Dave said, “I sure do.”

Maria put her arm around Dave and said, “And if you’d like I can hypnotize him for you too.”

Dave laughed and said, “Worked for me.”

Dave and Maria both laughed as her friends sat in their seats wondering if she was telling the truth. Dave knew and he couldn’t have been happier about her decision to choose him.