## Archive-name: eloise

From: HadleyVBax@aol.com

Subject: Eloise

Keywords: ff teen

Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica

X-Moderator-Review: 3: standard "first time" story with Victorian overlay

The following erotic story involves lesbianism and teenage/adult consensual sex. It is also fiction. Any similarity to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.

This story is copyright 1994 by Hadley V. Baxendale. The author expressly grants permission for this story to be redistributed electronically as long as the text is not altered.

by Hadley V. Baxendale

When Eloise Ann Spencer was sixteen, she had her first sexual experience.

The year was 1884 and the world was in the midst of the Victorian era. A woman's place in society was to be pure and wholesome. Even to mention the word 'sex' in public was a social taboo. Such an indiscretion would be completely unthought of in these formal times. A proper young lady only discussed these private affairs with her lawfully wedded husband.

Eloise was a petite and handsome girl. She possessed long brown hair that she wore pinned up in the fashion of the time. Her dark brown eyes accented milky white skin.

As the only daughter of a wealthy New York attorney, Eloise wore the finest dresses from Paris. She was very beautiful and intelligent. Many of the young men of high social standing in New York saw Eloise as the perfect bride. She was indeed an exquisite little woman.

When Eloise turned sixteen, she met her second cousin from Boston, Nora Spencer Bradford. Nora was twenty-one and had come to live with the Spencer family after her husband had been killed in a freak coach-wagon accident. Eloise's mother had asked Nora to stay with the family until she could recuperate from her husband's death. Nora had been married only two years when she suddenly found herself a widow. She planned to live with the Spencers until she felt well enough to return to Boston. Hopefully, she would meet another man and remarry. But as a widow in the Victorian era, no longer chaste, all Nora could hope for was a man much older then herself.

Nora had long blond hair and blue eyes. She was taller than Eloise and had a well-endowed bosom. Eloise became good friends with Nora. They often shopped along the Ladies Avenue on Broadway and spent the afternoons in Central Park.

Nora slept in the guest room and Eloise would often visit her at night to talk and embroider. Eloise would knock and after a moment, Nora would open her bedroom door and invite Eloise in. Sometimes on cold nights, Eloise would climb into bed with Nora and they would snuggle to keep warm. Nora became like an older sister to Eloise.

One night, very late, Eloise was having difficulty falling asleep. She decided to call on Nora. Putting a nightgown and slippers on, Eloise made her way into the upstairs hall. She carefully closed her bedroom door, being ever so careful not to wake her slumbering father in the room across the way. Stopping outside of Nora's door, Eloise heard a faint moaning inside. She assumed Nora was weeping for her husband. She wouldn't disturb her now. However, she would take a peek through the keyhole to make sure Nora was not too distressed. Leaning down, Eloise peered through Nora's keyhole. She couldn't believe what she saw. Nora was sitting on the edge of her bed, in the nude, touching herself between her legs. With her other hand, she massaged her breasts. Eloise almost couldn't help the urge to giggle. But somehow, this private moment of Nora intrigued Eloise. It made her feel different inside. Longingly, in the back of her mind, she wanted to share this precious moment with beautiful Nora.

As she continued to watch, Eloise felt a tingling sensation between her legs. She touched herself. Her crotch was warm and wet. She liked the feeling.

All of a sudden, Eloise heard a door opening down the hall. It was her father rising to use the toilet. Eloise turned and quickly scrambled back to her bedroom. She closed the door behind her before her father noticed.

Once under the covers of her bed, Eloise pulled down her nightslip. She touched herself as she had seen Nora do. It felt soothing. She fell asleep.

When Eloise came down for breakfast the next morning, she found Nora already at the kitchen table. Eloise blushed slightly when Nora asked her if she had had a good night's sleep.

"Oh yes, thank you for asking, Nora. I slept very well. Thank you." Eloise said, sheepishly.

Nora nodded. But somehow Eloise knew something was different about Nora.

Since it was Saturday, Nora asked Eloise if she would like to go shopping. The two young women quickly finished their breakfasts. Charles, the coachman, brought the carriage around and the women were whisked away to an afternoon of expensive shopping.

When the two women arrived back home, they quickly ran upstairs to try on the new clothing that had been purchased on Broad Way. Inside Nora's bedroom, Eloise removed her new dress from its box.

"Isn't it absolutely charming!" Eloise exclaimed as she held the dress up to her body in the mirror.

"Oh, yes, but it would be even more charming on you, dear. Try it on." Nora said.

Eloise took off her hat and laid it on the nightstand. She then asked Nora to help her undo the straps on the back of her gown. Nora obliged and carefully slipped Eloise out of her dress.

Eloise asked Nora what she had purchased. Nora told her that it was silk underwear from Paris.

"Would you like to see it?" Nora asked.

"Oh yes. But ON you, of course!" Eloise answered back.

"I'll have to undress first."

Eloise helped Nora out of her gown. Afterwards, Nora sat on her parlor chair and slowly undid the straps of her leather shoes. As Eloise watched Nora undress, she couldn't help thinking about the night before when she had witnessed Nora touch herself. Once again, Eloise was beginning to experience that warm tingly sensation inside.

Nora undid the laces on her underwear and carefully slipped out of them. She sat staring at Eloise with nothing on except her garter and stockings.

Nora had a very lovely body. Full-figured and well-endowed. Eloise admired her large breasts. Suddenly she realized that Nora caught her staring at them.

"Do you think I have nice breasts?" Nora asked.

Eloise paused for a moment, not quite sure how to answer. "Yes."

Nora caressed her breasts. "Would you like to touch them?"

Eloise looked down at the ground and then at Nora. Again, she wasn't sure what this was leading too. But Nora was so beautiful. Eloise wanted to get closer. "Yes."

"Then come sit by me, dear." Nora said softly.

Eloise sat on the floor next to Nora. Nora took Eloise's hand and touched it to her breast.

Nora whispered into Eloise's ear. "Doesn't this feel...nice...so soft, my little one?"

"Oh, yes, Nora. You have a wonderful bosom."

"You were watching me the other night, weren't you?" Nora said.

Eloise blushed, embarrassed that her peeping had been revealed. With a guilty tone of voice Eloise admitted that she had watched Nora play with herself through the keyhole.

"Well, what do you know, we have a peeping Tom in the house! So, did you enjoy what you saw? C'mon, be honest. I won't tell your father. You did, didn't you?"

Eloise blushed, and then answered softly "Yes."

"My dearest Eloise, I KNEW you were watching me. Those creaky boards in the hall can be heard a mile away."

Nora took Eloise's finger and touched it to her nipple. "You see how hard it gets when you touch it. My husband used to kiss me here. Would you like to kiss me here, Eloise?"

Eloise blushed. She wanted so much to get closer to Nora. "Yes." Eloise moved closer and placed her mouth on Nora's nipple. It was hard and fleshy and Eloise licked it with her tongue. She could feel Nora tense as she kissed and massaged the older woman's large milky white breasts.

"Why don't you show me your breasts, little one?" Nora said.

Eloise turned around on her knees and Nora helped undo her undergarments. Eloise's back was soft and warm and Nora kissed it. Delicately she pulled off her white undergarments. Eloise then turned and faced Nora.

Eloise held her arms over her chest. Nora smiled and pulled Eloise's arms away revealing two tiny, yet firm breasts.

Nora stroked them lightly with her fingers. "Oh, you have wonderful breasts."

The touch of Nora's fingers on her breast felt nice. But Eloise was a bit nervous. "Isn't it wrong to be doing this?" Eloise said, nervously covering her exposed breasts once again.

"Well, you only make love to your husband. And there are so many things a man will want from his wife. I never told you this, Eloise, but when I was fourteen, our younger maid Lucy would sneak into my bedroom at night. She would undress and climb into bed with me. She felt so warm and soft. We would make-believe that we were husband and wife. Lucy would be my husband and I was her willing wife. She made love to me on many winter nights such as this. So, my dear, there is nothing wrong with having a proper lady instruct you in these matters. Would you like me to be your teacher?"

"Oh yes, Nora, I would."

"Good, then. It's settled." Nora leaned forward and put both of her arms around Eloise pulling her close. This is how you kiss. Nora met Eloise's lips. A long passionate kiss followed. As she did this, she ran her hand up the back of Eloise's neck and undid the pins in her hair. Eloise's long brown hair dropped to her shoulders.

"Let's lie down on my bed so we'll be more comfortable." After pulling back the sheets, Nora took Eloise's hand and had her lay on the bed. Nora then removed her stockings and garter, undid her hair, and laid down next to Eloise. The older woman then untied Eloise's shoes and pulled the rest of her undergarments off. In the large Victorian room, two beautiful women lay naked side by side on the four posted bed.

Nora leaned over and caressed Eloise's face. "How lovely you are, my pretty one." She kissed Eloise's soft lips once more. "Now I'm going to show you how to make love. In time you'll make love to your future husband. But there is nothing in this world more intimate than the touch of another woman."

Nora climbed on top of Eloise and straddled her waist. She bent down so the tips of their nipples touched. In a circular fashion, she let her nipples rub against Eloise's.

"Doesn't this feel wonderful?" Nora said softly.

"Oh yes, please don't stop."

Nora then kissed Eloise's neck and ran her tongue into her ear.

"Ooooh, that feels like heaven!" Eloise said.

After a minute or so of nibbling on her ear, Nora slid down and began to lick Eloise's breasts. Eloise's nipples were now very hard as Nora nibbled and chewed on them. Eloise closed her eyes and grabbed the pillow behind her with both hands.

"Ooooooooh, Nora, Nora, that feels absolutely delightful. Please don't stop. I wish you could do that forever!"

Nora giggled and then slid down to Eloise's stomach. She ran her tongue into Eloise's navel. Eloise gripped Nora's head. Nora bit on Eloise's stomach leaving a reddened teeth mark on her white skin.

Nora looked up. "And now, my little darling, I'm going to initiate you into womanhood."

She pulled Eloise's legs apart exposing her lightly perfumed womanhood. Nora touched the opening of Eloise's vagina. It was warm and very wet. She pressed her face against Eloise's mound and kissed it. "In a few moments you're going to feel very warm and excited inside. But relax, my little darling. That is a special feeling you will experience when you wed someday. But now, you will feel the touch of another woman."

Nora lightly massaged the opening of Eloise's vagina. Slowly and carefully, she slipped her middle finger in. Eloise's insides were hot and Nora turned her finger as she slid it in and out. She then spread Eloise's vagina exposing a swollen clitoris. Nora lowered her lips and began sucking on Eloise's womanhood. Eloise had never felt anything like this before. Nora nibbled as Eloise writhed and wiggled on the bed. At the same time, Nora massaged Eloise's other opening.

Nora sucked and licked Eloise's virginal opening running her tongue in and out. Eloise clasped Nora's hand tightly. By now, Eloise was very lubricated. At the same time, Nora put her finger inside Eloise's anus. These profound sensations overwhelmed Eloise.

Ooooooo...ahhhhhhhhh...mmmMMMMAHHHHHH...

Nora then repositioned herself on the bed getting into a scissors position with Eloise . With their clitorises touching, Nora pressed against Eloise. Using her clitoris like a small penis, Nora rubbed and bumped it against Eloise's wet opening. Eloise felt tingly all over--as if she were going to explode inside.

"You're going to feel fireworks, my little darling. Feel them inside. Your legs. Your arms. Let your body take over. That's right, dear. Feel it," Nora said as the two women twisted and jerked against one another.

Nora felt explosions inside of her--one after another. She grabbed Eloise's thigh and pulled her closer. Their stomachs and legs were wet with their juices and sweat as both of the women approached climax.

With a euphoric feeling of energy, Eloise felt a charge rush through her body. She let out a cry, but Nora quickly put a hand over her mouth.

Nora leaned over and gave Eloise a kiss on the mouth. Eloise met Nora's kiss with the tip of her tongue. Nora drew Eloise's tongue into her mouth and sucked it passionately. The women embraced.

The younger woman spoke softly as a tear ran from her eye. "I never want to be away from you, Nora."

Pulling her close, Nora stroked Eloise's hair. "Me too, my love. Me too."

Eloise then drifted off to sleep in Nora's tender arms.

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