"Watching" by Alan Mathews (alanmath@hotmail.com). I got lucky tonight. No, not the way you think, although that happened too. I got lucky because my lessons for the rest of the week have been so well prepared over the years that I could afford to blow off about three hours reading this story. Sometimes a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.

The boy and the girl first meet when the school bus breaks down and it gets cold and they have to share his coat. She's 13 and he's 18, but she's beautiful and he has a crush on her. They don't have sex. She falls asleep in his arms, and he doesn't even masturbate. She kisses him gently when she eventually gets off the bus. That's the kind of story this is going to be. But the action picks up quickly. Circumstances require Jenny to leave home; and since Alex happens to live alone most of the time he takes her in. Soon we discover that sleeping together and showering together leads to a certain level of intimacy. The sexual activities come across as both innocent and sexy.

The story includes a genuine, interesting plot. This is a really sexy, romantic story.

A minor problem is that the story contains numerous irritating errors. For example, the author consistently uses "to" instead of "too." Dr. Mathewson becomes Dr. Sampson a few paragraphs later. My advice to you is to ignore the errors and just enjoy the story. It's excellent!