"Raped Teen Burglar" by TEX. This is a fiendishly clever story. TEX has taken another story (by Dachthyus) and has modified it to give it a completely different impact. In the original story, Dan has a good ole time raping a teenage girl whom he catches burglarizing his house; and the story ends with her becoming his permanent sex slave. The new version continues with Dan being arrested and convicted of rape. Almost the moment he enters the prison, "Danny girl" is himself raped and humiliated by another prisoner; and it seems likely that Dan will become his permanent sex slave. I won't ruin it by telling you the ending.

I would never have noticed or downloaded this story, except that TEX sent me a personal copy with a request that I review it. I didn't see the original; and so I'll just accept TEX's word that the first half of his revised story is word-for-word the original. The brilliant thing that TEX has done is that he uses almost *the exact same words* to describe what is happening to Dan as Dachthyus used to describe what Dan was doing to Melissa - and the effect is dramatically different.

I showed this story to my husband, and he remarked that it reminded him of a "real good Death Wish movie." He meant that as one of his highest compliments. (That's right, fans, I'm married to a person who would rather watch a Charles Bronson movie than read an Ann Douglas story!)

I don't know whether TEX is the nom de plume of a moral crusader or just a really good writer. What I do know is that the revised story gives a different insight into the value of raping "little virgin girls with ripe young bodies." Incidentally, if you want to get this one from the current postings, it's listed as TEX Raped Teen Burglar 1/2 and 2/2.