"Party Girl" by Javahead (an217242@anon.penet.fi). "Down boy! Public party first, private party later." Several lines earlier in his disclaimer the author stated "... even as a fantasy, I found it at least as disturbing as arousing.... if it doesn't disturb you, I didn't get it right." So I was approaching this story with a certain degree of trepidation. Threshholds of disturbance vary, and this wasn't alt.sex.altar.boys that I was reading.
When I finished the story I was initially disturbed that I wasn't disturbed. Had I become jaded by reviewing 400 stories over the past month? What was so disturbing about this story? After all, it wasn't about the relatives turning the body of the 9-year-old virgin over to ravenously horny wolves after fucking her to death anally during a sacrifical orgy behind the altar in the Sistine Chapel on Easter Sunday. Actually, this story isn't shocking - just disturbing. What's disturbing about it is that it's actually so plausible. Everything - and I mean everything - that happens in this story really could happen to perfectly sane and sensible people.