"Illusion" by Miss Behavin' (missbehavin@sprint.ca). Guest review by Watchful Owl.

I'm annoyed with myself that I didn't see the ending coming. It's pretty predictable, in hindsight.

But I didn't, and I enjoyed every second of this read. It was well written (not a single grammatical or structural error in the whole thing!) and the characters were quite believable.

The plot features an aspiring young lawyer being asked by her boss to sleep with his wife for a large sum of money. She decides to do it, and we're off into a well-done (if somewhat formulaic) plot. However, the ending was a bit of a turnoff, so it doesn't get full points.

Give "Illusion" a read. You won't be sorry.