'The Friendly Couples" by Roger Grayson (posted by TheEditor grobert@IDT.NET).
Review by Sven the Elder, who may be contacted at
Sven@brass-neck.demon.co.uk
I guess all of Celeste's guest reviewers get blooded on a 50,000-word, close
to 100 page blockbuster at some stage. {Celestial note:
This is the story of Janet and Greg Richards, and their new friends from the
same Company, Martin and Darleen Kelly.
Martin and Darleen have been planning the introduction of their new friends
into a little bit of swapping. Greg has been working too hard and has been
neglecting his slightly prudish, Midwest wife. Janet, has been starved of her
love and affection, so when the newly promoted Greg has to fly suddenly down
to Dallas on business and miss out on the party the four have arranged.....
You get the picture, Darleen becomes unavailable and the scene is set for
Martin to take a rather intoxicated Janet out on his own.
The twists and turns of a furious seduction, powered by alcohol and 'an
aphrodisiac' are well described, as is the blackmail that follows and the
night of aphrodisiac fuelled sex that follows.
The descriptions are excellent, if a little cliched in the way of other
stories I have read that the 'Editor' has posted in the past. I have to say
that having read those, this story follows in the same lines - wronged wife,
seeking revenge against an uncaring husband, followed by remorse, followed by
blackmail, followed by - well you get the picture and may well have read
others in the genre.
But - and this is a big but, this is a very well written story, in a good
Style that is easy and entertaining to read and has some very sexy scenes in
it. As a story the threads might well be taken from folks fantasies of how
they would like this type of scenario to affect them, or not as the case may
be.
It also shows the downside of such relationship with what can only be
described as a rather fraught homecoming to a very frightened wife, which
changes as Greg admits to the reason for the blackmail.
Now at this point I am not going to expose the plot any further. It twists
and turns and goes deeper than you might imagine. There are dilemmas to suit
all tastes. Sex scenes that come close to being over the top, perhaps they
are, but they are still, in the main, enjoyable. The climax of the story, in
every sense of the word is simply awesome. I enjoyed it all, even if there
were a little more cliches than I would normally care for. Somehow, they
worked.