"Rag Doll" by LeAnna (kalika@main.provost.msu.edu). Although it still has a few minor errors {e.g., "had bore" for "had borne"}, this is an extremely creative, well-written story.

In a sense, this is a spouse-watching story. The wife knows her husband has been cheating on her. She has confronted the Other Woman - in fact, she has had sex with the other woman while extracting the details of the liaison from her. Now she has handcuffed her husband and is retelling the those details to him, while she forces him to pleasure her.

What I like best about this story is that it does NOT make the naive assumption that the wife who catches her husband cheating will forgive him, as long as she can join in on the fun. But the way in which the author declines to make this assumption is very creative indeed.

I trust my husband. I really do. But I have jokingly told him that if he ever messes around on me, I'll scratch the other woman's eyes out and then cut off his dick. This lady may have a better idea.

"Rag Doll" by LeAnna (leanna1@hotmail.com). Guest review by Stephen Peters (sxjames@aol.com). This story is archived at the author's site: http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Academy/2194/

She's beautiful and sexy, has a good house in an upscale suburban neighborhood, but her oh-so-successful husband has been up to no good. Specifically, he's been screwing his secretary. What's a gal to do? Well, she gets revenge. And, in 300 or so lines, LeAnna shows us revenge at its sweetest, sexiest -- and its most poignant.

I really liked this story, not the least because of the detailed, lush and very erotic seduction/teasing scene that makes up the bulk of the tale. The un-named wife meets her husband (Todd) in the bedroom after work, but instead of the promised sex Todd ends up handcuffed to the bed post while his wife describes in extended, delicious detail her conversation (and later sex) with the woman he had been fucking on the side. To add to the hot talk she climbs all over Todd's body, mercilessly teasing the poor fool, driving Todd (not to mention this reviewer) to the point of leaking...well, you get the idea. Yes, she lets Todd know *exactly* what he is throwing away by his infidelity. And throw it away he does. You see, the true strength of this story is that Todd never really believes what is coming. He seems to think if he apologizes and gets his cum it will all be better. Poor fool.

Technically, the story rates a 9. There was one typo, (she 'tasted' the tinge of her husbands cum in his lovers pussy, not 'felt') and a few awkward sentences, but this did not seriously distract from my enjoyment. Again, the interplay between Todd and his wife was excellent, and the dialog rang true -- solid 10 for plot and character. All in all, I highly recommend this tale, and hope to read a lot more from this author.