"Bonnie" by Friar Dave (Friar_Dave@mhbbs.com). Dan has company for the weekend: his older but not-too-close cousin Mark, Mark's sexy sister-in-law Kate, their three nubile and buxom teenage daughters, and Kate's younger sister, the eponymous Bonnie.

Well, on Day One of the visit, Mark reveals to Dan that Kate is insatiable, and he says that he'd like Dan to help out a bit in the bedroom. Dan, of course, declines. Then Dan tells Kate that the 15-year-old daughter has been making a play for him, and she promises to handle the situation. Meanwhile, 11-year-old Penny keeps asking innocent but precocious questions. All this before our eponymous heroine has even arrived on the scene! The action heats up after Bonnie's arrival. As the narrator says, "Broing!"

{I'm working on a Word for the Day program. As you may have guessed, the Word for Today is "Legs." Spread the word!}

One could regard this story as a treatise on ways to deflate an aroused cock - some using cold water and some using more interesting methods. One could also regard this story as an example of semi-responsible hedonism. I wonder if anyone has ever used that term before.

I like Friar Dave. I really do. But as I started reading this story, I couldn't help saying to myself, "Aha! I've got him. This story is too disjointed to earn straight 10's." But alas! He managed to pull it off. That's the breaks, I guess. This is a really sexy story.