"Distractions" by Vickie Morgan (artemis55@hotmail.com)
The story starts with a vague description of some sort of bet. Apparently the woman is supposed to do whatever she can to get a rise <g> out of her lover without actually touching him. She does her duty, and in the process she mentally retraces some of her earlier adventures with him.
I really can't tell you much more, can I? I'll just add that there's an interesting twist at the end.
The only thing wrong with the story is that it needs a few more commas. Their absence was distracting, but that may have something to do with the title of this story.
Ratings for "Distractions"
Athena (technical quality): 9
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10
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