Elkstree - ''Uptown Girls'' - Pressure (F-f nc)

4. “ Pressure ”
(F / f nc hard)

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Elkstree

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UPTOWN GIRLS #4

Pressure

Brief Summary: Part four in my UPTOWN GIRLS series – See Part one summary for a more in depth summary of characters and plotlines…

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(RAY’s ROOM – THURSDAY AFTERNOON)

The streets of Manhattan were flooded with the sounds of children playing, street vendors yelling and dogs barking. The sidewalks were scattered with leaves and a mild breeze was blowing through the trees signaling that autumn had once again come to New York City.

Well not quite as the weather for the most part was unusually warm for this time of year and New Yorkers from all of the five boroughs were out enjoying this mild Thursday afternoon.

Except for Ray Schleine.

She had been grounded to her room for the past four days and as her nanny told her, would have to miss out on all the autumn fun.

It wasn’t fair, Ray Schleine thought to herself as she began to write down the events of the past few days in her diary. (There wasn’t much else one could do while they were stuck in their room) After all she was just a victim of circumstance and didn’t mean to cheat off that test (and she certainly didn’t mean to get caught either)

Dear Diary,

The trouble all started when Mr. Felcher my math teacher decided to assign a quiz during the first week of school (that isn’t fair!) Although we had around a week to study for the quiz my friends Jill, Tara and Ellen suggested that it would just be much easier to copy off of Maria Renkin’s test. Although I consider myself to be quite smart nobody is as smart as Maria Renkin (she won some type of award from the state last year in some math contest)

This worked out really great as my friends and I got to go to movies, to the park and even to Coney Island during the first week of school. (It was like an extended summer vacation) The only thing that was really beginning to bug me was that Molly (my nanny) would constantly be asking me why I didn’t have any homework the first week of school. I told her that the homework load doesn’t get too heavy until October (okay so I lied)

Anyhow on the day of the quiz (Monday) everything is going to plan until Mrs. Pierson who is the head of the math department decided to observe Mr. Felcher’s class. (That’s also not fair!) My friends and I all took our seats around so we could copy off his test. Everything was going well as Mr. Felcher usually grades other papers while we are being tested and rarely looks up from his desk, but old Mrs. Pierson spotted Tara leaning too far over Maria’s shoulder and to make a long story short we were all busted and sent down to the principal’s office.

Now I rarely get in trouble at school (except for the time I stole the formaldehyde pig to bury it in Central Park) so I thought I might get off with a light warning and maybe a detention. Wrongo! In Principal Eckland’s words, Bryce Academy has a zero tolerance cheating policy and we were lucky that we didn’t get kicked out of school. Instead Mr. Felcher just assigned us a ton of work to make up for cheating on the test and Principal Eckland called our parents. Well in my case he called my nanny (since my mom works long hours for her record company and this week like so many other weeks is out of town)

I tried to explain to Molly that I didn’t mean to cheat on the quiz but all my friends were doing it and I didn’t want to appear to be chicken and plus the material on the quiz was very hard. She wasn’t hearing any of it though and said she was very disappointed in me and would express how disappointed she was when we got home.

Unfortunately, my nanny likes to “express herself” with her hairbrush on my bare bottom while I’m crying and bucking across her lap. I got one of the hardest spankings of my life while Molly lectured me on not being such a follower and that following a group so blindly could lead to bigger problems later in life and how dare I cheat on a quiz….yada…yada…yada (Its been three days and my bottom still stings like hell)

Then after my spanking was through she again told me how disappointed she was in me and grounded me to my room for the entire school week. (That really isn’t fair) I can’t watch TV, talk on the phone or go outside; about all I can do is stay in my room and work on my stupid make up math assignments. Molly said that I had no right to object to my punishment as I brought it all on myself. I told her that I hated her which was a big mistake as it only got me a mouthful of soap. (That definitely wasn’t fair!) Now I am sorry that I cheated on the test and even more sorry that I got caught but I think Molly is just being mean and unfair here, this whole thing it isn’t fair, It isn’t fair, It isn’t fa…

*KNOCK KNOCK*

Ray was interrupted by a knock on her door as her nanny pushed her way into the room.

“Molly…” Ray squealed “I was writing in my diary!” she continued

“You should have been doing your make up work young lady, never mind its time you got to bed anyhow Ray Schleine” stated Molly Gunn coolly.

“But Molly, its only four thirty in the afternoon, this isn’t fair” groaned Ray.

“Ray Schleine you know very well that you are being sent to bed early every night this week as part of your punishment for cheating on that test” replied Molly as she pulled down the shades and drew the curtains in Ray’s room.

“But it’s still light out!” complained Ray angry that she was being sent to bed like a five year old.

“Ray I am not going to argue with you…” stated Molly “…I want you in bed in five minutes” she continued.

“It isn’t fair” whined Ray folding her arms across her chest.

“You’re right Ray it isn’t fair…” said Molly looking her nine year old charge dead in the eye “…It isn’t fair that someone as smart as you would have to resort to cheating on a test, that’s what isn’t fair here Ray Schleine” she continued

“But I…” whined Ray

“In fact, you’ve been grounded for almost an entire week now Ray Schleine and I still have no idea why you cheated in the first place, do you care to enlighten me?” asked Molly.

“All of my friends were copying off of Maria’s paper and I didn’t want to be a chicken” explained Ray.

“You have to learn to avoid peer pressure Ray as it can get you in much more serious trouble than what you are in right now, also you need to learn that everyone has to accept responsibility for their own actions and that includes you Ray Schleine” lectured Molly pointing at Ray.

Ray Schleine was furious at her nanny, how could Molly not understand that amount of pressure she was under and why she had to cheat on that test. At that moment Ray really hated her nanny and was about to inform her of that fact but remembering what happened the last time she did that thought better of it and kept her mouth shut.

“I don’t see what you are complaining about Ray…” stated the twenty two year old as she turned down Ray’s comforters.

“…When you were caught cheating one of the excuses you gave the principal was that you didn’t have enough time to study for the quiz, well now I’ve cleared your schedule for you, really Ray you should be thanking me” continued Molly with a hint of sarcasm to her voice.

“But it’s not fair, I don’t want to go to bed now” cried Ray.

“Listen Ray…” stated an irritated Molly who was growing quite tired of Ray’s whining “Unless you want another spanking I suggest you put on your pajamas, get under those covers and go to bed, I am through discussing this matter with you” she continued.

“Fine” cried Ray angrily hopping into bed and turning her back to her nanny.

“Also, you better have every last bit of that make up work done by tomorrow afternoon or I’m just going to have to ground you for the weekend as well Ray Schleine” stated Molly matter of factly as she exited Ray’s room.

The door to Ray’s room whooshed shut and the little girl tried hard to close her eyes and fall asleep but it was still too light out and the silence in her room was deafening. At that moment Ray Schleine truly hated her nanny.

(FRIDAY AFTERNOON – OUTSIDE SCHOOL – WAITING FOR THE BUS)

“Hey guys” Ray Schleine called out to her friends.

Ray was elated that not only that it was the end of the school week and that she got all her make up work done early but since it was Friday her time in quiet solitude in her room was almost over.

“Hi Ray” Tara chirped back as Ray was greeted by her friends.

“The bus takes forever to get here and I have things to do today” complained Jill to her friends.

“What sort of things?” asked Ray

“Grown up things that’s what” replied Jill tartly.

“Jill is going to the horror film festival tonight at the mega-plex” stared Thurston Dugray horning in on the conversation.

“Jill aren’t all those movies rated R?” cried Ellen.

“Well, yes but I’m old enough to see them, you guys can come too if you want” Jill hedged not wanting to seem unconfident in front of her friends.

“You aren’t old enough Jillian” said Thurston in an assured tone “My daddy signs a note to give to the guy at the ticket booth so I can get in every week” he continued arrogantly.

“Well Jill how are you going to get in, they won’t let you in without a parent” stated Ellen sensibly.

“You could always sneak in” said Thurston in a self assured manner.

“How do you do that?” asked Tara

“Its easy you just sneak in…” stated Thurston “Me and a bunch of other kids did it several times this summer while we were at camp, you were there Ray you remember.” He continued.

“Yeah I remember we nearly got caught too” said Ray recalling the earlier incident.

“Awww poor baby Ray Schleine is afraid of getting in trouble” teased Thurston.

“I am not!” cried an embarrassed Ray stamping her foot.

“Ray Schleine is just a goody two shoes who is afraid of scary movies” mocked Thurston.

“I am not Thurston!” cried Ray.

“Prove it then, come to the movies with us tonight and sneak into the horror film fest, I dare you” taunted Thurston.

“Fine, you’ll see Thurston Dugray I’m not scared of anything” said Ray as she stuck her tongue out at him.

“Whatever” said Thurston as he stuck his tongue out at Ray and ran to rejoin his friends at the other end of the schoolyard.

“Ray…” whispered Tara “Aren’t you grounded for cheating on the test?” Tara continued.

“Naw I’m sure once I explain the situation to Molly she’ll let me go, what’s the worst she can say?” explained Ray.

(EARLY EVENING - RAY’s APARTMENT)

“No” stated Molly Gunn to her young charge.

“What?” cried Ray.

“I said no Ray, you cannot go to the movies tonight you are grounded young lady” stated Molly coolly as she adjusted her hair in the mirror.

Molly Gunn was dressed in a full length business suit as she was preparing to meet with some very important clients who were interested in marketing some of her fashion designs.

“But Molly, I’m not afraid of any stupid movie and besides everyone else is going” whined Ray.

“Ray, if everyone else jumped off a bridge would you jump too?” asked Molly silently cursing herself after she made this statement as she remember how much she herself hated hearing it as a kid.

“But they aren’t jumping off a bridge, they are just going to the movies” cried Ray tears beginning to fall down her cheeks.

“Yes to an R rated horror film festival that I don’t want you to attend, even if you weren’t grounded I wouldn’t let you attend this as I think you are too young Ray Schleine” explained Molly.

“I am not!” cried Ray angry that she was being treated like a child.

“Ray” Molly stated calmly as she knelt down so she could look Ray right in the eye “You can whine and stamp your feet all you want, but the bottom line is you are not leaving this apartment tonight Ray” she continued calmly.

“It’s not fair Molly, you get to go out tonight why can’t I?” whined Ray.

“Ray Schleine I will have you know that I am not ‘going out’ I am meeting some very important people for drinks at the club, you on the other hand should be getting ready for bed its well past your bedtime” stated Molly.

“Its only five thirty and besides I want to go out I already promised everyone I’d be there” cried Ray.

“Enough Ray, I told you a hundred times already that allowing your actions to be controlled by some group isn’t the brightest idea, look at all the trouble it got you into this week with the math test” said Molly.

“Also I would be acting in a very irresponsible manner if I let you go see that film tonight and besides you have one last early bedtime this week and I’m going to make sure you serve it “ Molly continued growing quite tired of the verbal war with her young charge.

“But its not fair, I finished all my make up work, you are so mean Molly everyone will be there!” whined Ray.

“No they won’t for instance you’re not going” said Molly as she put on her earrings.

“I hate you” cried Ray almost regretting her words the moment she said them.

Molly quickly turned around and shot Ray a very cold look.

“It looks like someone needs their mouth washed out again” stated Molly as she took Ray in hand and began to lead her to the sink.

“No Molly please no” cried Ray trying to struggle away from her nanny’s grasp.

“You will not talk to me like that I…” stated Molly

*DING DONG*

“You are so lucky that Huey is here Ray, now I want you to march your fanny to your room this instant and go to bed and thanks to those last words you said, consider yourself grounded for the entire weekend as well” stated Molly angrily.

“But But…” started Ray.

“Now!” hissed Molly pointing towards Ray’s room

“Fine!” cried Ray stomping off to her room.

*DING DONG*

“Just a minute” cried a frazzled Molly as she ran to answer the door.

“Hey Molly did I come at a bad time” said Huey as Molly opened the door to let him into the apartment.

“No its just that my stomach had butterflies in it due to this meeting but now it officially has a knot in it” stated Molly to her friend.

“Did you and Ray have words?” asked Huey

“No she had all of them” said Ray poking her head out of her bedroom door.

“Go to bed now!” shouted Molly at Ray.

Ray’s bedroom door whooshed shut.

“Molly calm down” stated Huey trying to calm his friend down.

“I’m sorry Huey I know I must sound horrible and I hate having to be so strict with her but I…” cried Molly as tears began to fall from her eyes.

“I know Molly, nobody blames you believe me” said Huey drawing his friend into a hug.

“I mean she really isn’t a bad kid but she just has to learn certain things and she seems to prefer the hard way as oppose to the easy way” explained Molly.

“I know but you just need to calm down and go meet those people and impress the hell out of them Molly, don’t worry about Ray I’ll keep an eye on her” stated Huey

“Thanks Huey, you are a good friend” said Molly drying her tears with a tissue.

“I’ll try not to be home too late, thanks again” Molly said as she grabbed her purse and made her way out the door.

(RAY’s ROOM)

Ray Schleine sat on her bed writing in her diary.

Dear Diary,

Molly is so mean, I really can’t stand her. She doesn’t understand what its like to be me and why I have to go to the movies tonight. Sometimes I just wish I was older so I could make my own decisions and now on top of everything I’m grounded for the entire weekend.

This is so unfair, I’m old enough to see those movies and I’m not scared and if I don’t go on Monday all the kids especially Thurston will think I’m chicken. I don’t care what Molly says I have to go to the movies tonight.

As Ray wrote the last sentence in her diary she thought about what it meant and she realized that despite the risk of disobeying her nanny she had to go the movies tonight.

If she didn’t everyone would laugh at her and it would also make every statement Thurston made about her this afternoon true. She could just see him taunting her on Monday and couldn’t stand the thought of it.

Besides she could sneak out her bedroom window and sneak back in before Molly even got back. Huey never paid much attention to anything (Ray was right about this in fact at that very moment Huey was already sprawled out asleep on the couch in the living room) and she heard her nanny leave the apartment. This was going to be easy Ray thought to herself.

Ray picked up her small purse, slipped on her platform shoes and began to make her way out the window and down the fire escape.

(MOVIE THEATER 6:00 PM)

“Everyone got their tickets?” asked Thurston Dugray to his entourage.

“Yes” replied Jill, Tara and Ellen.

“Wait a minute…” asked Ellen “Where’s Ray?” she continued.

“Aww I told you that baby princess Ray wouldn’t show up, she is so chick…” Thurston started.

*BUMP*

“Hey watch it!” cried Thurston as Ray Schleine bumped into him causing him to spill his soda on himself.

“You were saying Thurston?” asked Ray with a smile.

“Nothing” groaned Thurston upset that he got soda on his one hundred dollar shirt.

“Five tickets for the cartoon movie” the children chirped handing over their money to the cashier at the box office.

Five tickets for the cartoon movie were quickly dispensed and the five children made their way into the theater.

“Why are we going to see a Disney movie Thurston?” asked Tara as they got their popcorn.

“We aren’t dummy, that’s just a story we told to get in here…” stated Thurston “We are going to sneak into the horror movie.” He continued.

“Ray your nanny really cancelled your grounding” asked a surprised Jill (failing to inform Ray that she herself was also still technically grounded through the weekend for the quiz incident)

“Yeah sorta” replied Ray staring at the floor.

“Come on guys” shouted Thurston leading them towards the theater in which the horror film fest was taking place.

The four girls followed each refusing to admit to the others that they were all very scared of getting caught not to mention of the movie itself.

Luckily there was no usher at the door so the five children just slipped into the theater among the crowd and took their seats dead center.

“These seats are awesome…” said Thurston “Aren’t you excited Ray?” he continued.

“Yeah real excited” said Ray already realizing that this was a bad idea as she took her seat.

(TWENTY MINUTES LATER)

“Ahhh!” cried Thurston as a killer in a hockey mask slaughtered his first victim.

“Its not that bad Thurston” said Ray covering her eyes (If they had been open she would have noticed that Jill, Tara and Ellen also had their eyes closed for the majority of the first feature)

“AHHH MOMMY!!!!” cried Thurston as the killer murdered yet another victim.

That was it for Thurston Dugray as he ran screaming out of the theater.

Although she herself was scared out of her wits, Ray Schleine chuckled to herself as she would have tons of fun teasing Thurston about running out of the theater when she saw him on Monday.

Ray’s smile quickly vanished when she saw some ushers enter the theater with neon light bars. She tried sinking low in her chair not to be noticed but to no avail and she and her friends soon found themselves face to face with several angry ushers.

“You ladies are a bit young to see this feature aren’t you?” the usher wearing glasses asked.

“No” retorted Ellen who still had her eyes covered.

“Well we will just see about that, in fact we will get your parents down here and see what they have to say about all this” stated the usher with a smirk.

“You can’t be serious” complained Tara.

“Come with me girls” stated the usher as he lead the four children out of the theater and to an office in the back of the theater.

“At least we had the satisfaction of seeing Thurston run out of the theater screaming for his life” whispered Tara to Ray as they made their way down the hall.

“Uh-huh” gulped Ray realizing that she now had much more to fear than some killer in a horror movie.

(MOVIE THEATER – MANAGER’S OFFICE)

“Okay girls, I am going to need names and numbers of the parents I am going to have to call” stated the manager of the theater as he stared down at the four children.

Nobody answered as all four girls were afraid as to what their guardians would do to them when they found out the snuck into an R rated movie.

“Listen girls, I don’t have all night either you give me names and numbers right now or I’m calling security” the manager threatened.

Suddenly Ray had a stroke of genius that might save them all from this terrible fate.

“Um…sir you can call my apartment, someone is there that will pick us all up and the number is 888-555-2969” stated Ray nervously.

“And whom missy should I ask for?” stated the manager growing quite tired of the children.

“Huey” responded Ray with smile knowing that Huey wouldn’t care if they snuck into some horror film.

“Okay…” stated the manager “I have other stuff to do so please call this Huey for me have him pick them up and inform him of what went on and above all keep your eye on these kids we don’t need another incident” he stated to the usher standing next to him.

“What incident sir?” asked the usher.

“We just had a boy about their age run out of the theater screaming, if we get complaints from parents saying that we let minors into R rated flicks we could all be in trouble understood?” stated the manager as he exited the office.

“Yes sir…” replied the usher. “…now you all stay here until you are picked up and don’t anybody move, old eagle eyes got his eye on you” he stated as he exited the office.

Unfortunately for him upon exiting the room he got his foot snagged in the carpet and promptly fell on his face.

Ray laughed.

(TWENTY MINUTES LATER)

Molly Gunn frantically made her way into the theater ignoring the cashier at the box office who was informing her that she had to pay before entering the theater.

When she was eventually stopped by two ushers she stated to the frantically.

“Where is Ray, is she okay?”

“Who is Ray?” they asked.

“She is a nine year old girl, she was probably caught sneaking into some horror movie at least that’s what I was told” cried Molly.

“Oh yeah…” stated the usher. “Four little girls were caught entering the horror fest tonight, there are in the back office and I’ll tell you what those kids got guts I won’t even go see that flick its too way too scary” he continued.

“Thanks for the info” stated Molly sarcastically as she made her way towards the back room.

“Ray where are you?” cried Molly

Inside the office Ray Schleine gulped upon hearing her nanny’s voice this wasn’t working out at all like she planned.

“Ray?” cried Molly frantically.

“I’m right here” said Ray tentatively poking her head out of the office.

“Ray Schleine…” stated Molly in a very serious tone upon seeing her charge “You know it looks like you but I know it can’t be you because unless my memory fails me Ray Schleine is supposed to be grounded to her room and asleep in bed at this moment” she continued coolly.

“But I just…” started Ray.

“And also the Ray Schleine I know was forbidden to go to the movies tonight, let alone to the horror fest but yet you stand before me here.” stated Molly angrily.

“How did you find out I was here?” asked Ray upset that her plan had blown up in her face.

“Huey told me that the manager called him and told him you were down here, something about sneaking into an R rated movie sound familiar Ray Schleine?” asked Molly.

Ray couldn’t answer her nanny so she just stared silently at the floor.

“Just wait till I get you home” hissed Molly taking her young charge in hand as she began to lead her out of the theater.

“Excuse me Miss but where are you taking that little girl” asked the clumsy usher who had previously apprehended Ray and her friends.

“I’m her nanny and I’m taking her home and would like to personally apologize for any trouble she or her friends might have caused you this evening” stated Molly gesturing to Ray’s friends who had exited the office looking as guilt ridden as Ray did.

“Well I’m sorry you can’t just take her home, these girls broke a very important rule tonight and according to theater code I have to call the police” the nerdy usher stated.

“Oh come on Justin…” said an annoyed Molly noting the usher’s name tag “There wasn’t any big crime here, some kids snuck into a R rated movie, you did it when you were their age and so did I, hell your parents probably even did it.” she continued.

“I can assure you Miss that I never…” the usher said.

“Oh come I’m sure you saw Striptease when you were thirteen like everyone else sparky” said Molly with a hint of spice to her voice.

“Well I…” stated the usher his face blushing a bright red.

“Either way I’m taking these girls home and if you want to file a complaint then file a complaint, but just do me one favor.” Molly stated coolly.

“What?” the embarrassed usher asked

“If we ever happen to have a conversation again would you please not spend the majority of the time staring at my chest, its quite rude” said Molly with a smirk.

The usher was left speechless as Molly Gunn escorted the four girls out of the theater upon exiting Molly heard Tara whisper to Ray that her nanny “was so cool”.

(RAY’s APARTMENT – 9 PM)

“Wow Molly that was so cool, the way you told off that usher” chirped Ray Schleine as the two entered the apartment.

“Yeah well I thought he overreacted and you all are just kids and kids make mistakes from time to time don’t they Ray Schleine?” asked Molly.

“Yep and it was so cool how you didn’t rat my friends out to their parents and just dropped them off in front of their apartments. I thought for sure you would have ratted them out and if you did well I don’t have to tell you what that would do to my reputation in school” Ray rambled on.

“Yeah I guess I am pretty cool” sighed Molly setting her purse down on the counter.

“Okay Ray…” stated Molly changing her tone to a much more serious one “I want your nose in the corner right now.” she commanded.

“What…but I thought” stated a confused Ray.

“Thought what Ray, that I was just going to let you off?” asked Molly angrily.

“But you said that everyone makes mistakes especially kids and…” Ray started.

“That’s right but you need to be held accountable for your actions Ray Schleine, now I want you to put your nose in the corner…but first” stated Molly as she walked towards her young charge and began to unbutton the clasp on Ray’s jeans and pulled them off Ray leaving her just clad in her little pink panties.

“Molly no not a spanking, please not a spanking” cried Ray her eyes beginning to tear up.

“Ray for the third time I want your nose in the corner and your hands on your head and I want you to think about what you’ve done, I’ll be back in ten minutes to deal with you” stated Molly calmly.

Ray walked to the corner in the living room and stood facing the wall fearful about what was to come next.

(TEN MINUTES LATER)

“Okay Ray corner time is over come here please” stated Molly as she sat herself down on the living room couch.

“Molly please no don’t spank me” cried Ray.

“Ray Schleine for a little girl who just told me this afternoon that she wasn’t afraid of anything you sure seem afraid of being spanked” said Molly as she grabbed Ray by the arm.

“No Molly please” cried Ray as she tried to struggle away from Molly’s grasp.

“That’s quite enough of that young lady” said Molly as she simply picked up Ray in her arms and laid her across her lap.

“No Molly please I didn’t mean to…”

“Didn’t mean to what Ray?” stated Molly as she began to slap Ray’s behind

“OWWW” cried Ray as she tried to reach her hand to cover her bottom. Molly anticipating this tactic quickly grabbed Ray’s hand and pinned it behind her back.

“You didn’t <SMACK> mean <SMACK> to <WHACK> defy <SMACK> me and sneak out of this <SLAP> apartment <SMACK> while <WHACK> you <SLAP> were grounded <SLAP> without telling <SMACK> anyone?” <WHACK> asked Molly

“Molly I’m sorry” sobbed Ray whose behind was already sore from the spanking earlier in the week.

“You don’t <SPANK> know the meaning of <SPANK> sorry missy <SLAP> Oh but you will Ray” stated Molly angrily

“I <SMACK> will not tolerate <SPANK> you <SLAP> disobeying me <SLAP> Ray Schleine <SLAP> understood?” asked Molly.

“God yes Molly please stop” cried Ray bucking and kicking across Molly’s lap.

“We <SLAP> are not <SMACK> even near <SMACK> being done Ray <SLAP>“ stated Molly as she continued to bring her hand down hard and fast on Ray’s behind.

“MOLLY!!!” cried Ray.

“Ray I am <SMACK> very worried about <SMACK> how easily <SLAP> you give in <SMACK to peer pressure <SLAP> you <SLAP> really have to <SLAP> stop being <SMACK> such a follower young lady do you understand?” <SMACK> asked Molly.

“Yes” sobbed Ray tears streaming down her face.

“Well <SLAP> I am going to <SLAP> make sure <SMACK> you understand” <SLAP> said Molly as she removed Ray’s panties and picked up one of Ray’s platform shoes.

“No Molly No!” cried Ray.

The apartment was filled with the sound of Molly spanking Ray’s bare bottom with the shoe and Ray pleading with her to stop. Molly however was intent on driving her point home and continued to paddle her young charge.

“You <SPANK> will never ever <SPANK> ever <SPANK> sneak into a theater again <SLAP> do I make myself <SPANK> clear Miss Ray?” asked Molly.

“Yes Molly” cried Ray through her sobs and sniffles.

“You <SLAP> will never ever <SLAP> cheat on a test <SLAP> again will you <SLAP> Miss Ray?” asked Molly.

“OWWW YES!!” wailed Ray.

“and <SLAP> and <SLAP> and <SMACK> you will <SLAP> never <SPANK> ever <SMACK> ever <SPANK> defy me again will you <SMACK> Miss Ray?” asked Molly.

“No Molly never I promise” cried Ray unable to take anymore spanks from her platform shoe.

“Good then I want you to get off my lap and march you sore red fanny off to bed young miss” commanded Molly as she pulled up Ray’s panties.

Ray climbed off of Molly’s lap and her hands immediately shot to her behind. It stung like hell and Ray could feel it pulsating.

“Ray I want to tell you that I’m sorry I had to do this but you needed to be taught a lesson” stated Molly as she handed Ray a tissue.

“I would also like to inform you that because of your disobedience tonight you are grounded to your room until next weekend young lady” stated Molly.

“What?” cried Ray not believing that she would have to spend yet another week in her room.

“You heard me” stated Molly calmly.

“That is not fair Molly, you are so mean, I HATE YOU” cried Ray

Molly quickly grabbed Ray turned her sideways, yanked down her panties and delivered five more swats to Ray’s already sore behind.

“Maybe that will teach you not to be so fresh” hissed Molly.

“Its not fair I wasn’t even scared of that movie” Ray lied.

“That is not the point Ray but because I’m tired of fighting with you I will make you a deal, if you don’t cry or complain once this weekend about how scary that movie was then I will cancel your grounding for the rest of the week. But if you do well then I will just have to spank you for lying to me” stated a very tired Molly Gunn.

“Fine I wasn’t scared and I’m not chicken” cried Ray pulling up her panties and stomping off to her room and to bed.

Molly Gunn sighed as Ray Schleine still didn’t understand why she was so upset with her

(MOLLY’S BEDROOM 1 AM)

“AHHHH!!! The monster is after me help” cried Ray Schleine as she ran into her nanny’s bedroom threw herself on the bed and buried her head in the pillows.

“What the heck?” asked Molly awaking from her slumber and flicking on the light.

“Ray what are you doing in here” she asked her young charge who had her head buried in the pillows.

“I mmmph mmmph” mumbled Ray into the pillows.

“In English please” stated Molly turning Ray gently on her back.

“The monster is in the closet in my room” cried Ray tears streaming down her face.

“What monster Ray?” asked Molly.

“The one from the movie that killed all the people he’s in my room.” sobbed Ray

“See I told you that you were too young to see that movie” stated Molly.

“I know and you can spank me or ground me or whatever just please don’t make me go back in that room” cried Ray

“Ray I’m not going to make you go back in your room if you are truly scared but we did have a deal didn’t we?” Molly asked Ray.

“Yeah” sighed Ray.

“Come here Ray” said Molly lifting her nine year old charge across her lap.

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Molly Gunn delivered a single love pat to Ray Schleine’s pajama clad behind and lifted her off her lap and placed her into the bed next to her.

“Is that it?” asked a surprised Ray Schleine.

“Unless you want more” laughed Molly.

“No that’s just fine” said Ray looking up at her nanny.

“Ray I had a feeling you’d be in here at some point tonight, I remember the first time I saw a horror movie called ‘The Shining’ I spent the entire week afterwards sleeping on the floor in my parents’ bedroom” stated Molly with a smile.

“How old were you?” asked Ray

“About your age, a little younger my mother told me that I was too young to see that movie but of course I went anyway, got caught too” stated Molly.

“Did you get in trouble?” asked Ray

“Yeah big time but that’s not the point here, the point is Ray Schleine do you understand why I was so angry at you tonight?” asked Molly.

“Because I snuck into the theater?” asked Ray.

“Well I was upset that you snuck into an R rated movie and defied me but what really has had me ticked off at you all week is how is easy you cave into peer pressure.” Molly said.

“What do you mean?” asked Ray.

“Ray I know you didn’t want to cheat on that test and judging from your reaction right now you probably didn’t want to see that horror movie either so the only reason you did both those things is because your friends pressured you into doing them” said Molly.

“But nobody got hurt really” chirped Ray.

“That’s not the point Ray being part of a group of friends is a special thing Ray believe me I know that but allowing your decision making to taken over by a group is a very dangerous thing Ray Schleine and it can lead to you ending up in jail, involved with dangerous things and maybe even hurt or killed do you understand how serious this peer pressure thing is Ray?” asked Molly looking Ray in the eye.

“I know Molly and I’m sorry I guess I don’t make the best decisions sometimes but I’ll try harder I promise” said Ray sadly.

“Its okay Ray, you are still young and I know you are going to make mistakes but when I tell you do something I want you to do it and if for that moment you hate me for whatever reason I guess that’s something I’ll have to live with” said Molly.

“Molly?” said Ray her eyes tearing up

“Yes?” asked Molly.

“I’m sorry I said I hated you…I love you Molly I’m so sorry” cried Ray,

“I love you too Ray, I love you so much…” said Molly drawing Ray into a hug. “…and I’d also like to tell you that there are no monsters in this apartment as Huey went home hours ago” said Molly with a laugh.

Ray laughed but asked “Either way do you mind if I spend the night in here?”

“Not at all Ray” said Molly as she tucked Ray into bed and flicked off the light.

“Goodnight Ray, sweet dreams” said Molly.

“Goodnight Molly, I love you” chirped Ray

In a few moments Ray was fast asleep feeling totally safe in her nanny’s arms.

THE END...?

Elkstree did something very peculiar in spanking fan fictions: he wrote a deleted scene, one of those additional
rolls of footage that are shot during production of a movie but that somehow do not make it to the final cut.
So here it is, exclusive to this web site. Thanks, Elkstree!

Here goes...

(TWENTY MINUTES LATER)

Molly Gunn frantically made her way into the theater ignoring the cashier at the box office who was informing her that she had to pay before entering the theater.

When she was eventually stopped by two ushers she stated to the frantically.

“Where is Ray, is she okay?”

“Who is Ray?” they asked.

“She is a nine year old girl, she was probably caught sneaking into some horror movie at least that’s what I’m told” cried Molly.

“Thanks for the info” stated Molly sarcastically as she made her way towards the back room.

“Ray where are you?” cried Molly

Inside the office Ray Schleine gulped upon hearing her nanny’s voice this wasn’t working out at all like she planned.

“Ray?” cried Molly frantically.

“I’m right here” said Ray tentatively poking her head out of the office.

“But I just…” started Ray.

“And also the Ray Schleine I know was forbidden to go to the movies tonight, let alone to the horror fest but yet you stand before here.” stated Molly angrily.

“How did you find out I was here?” asked Ray upset that her plan had blown up in her face.

“Huey told me that the manager called him and told him you were down here, something about sneaking into an R rated movie sound familiar Ray Schleine” asked Molly.

Ray couldn’t answer her nanny so she just stared silently at the floor.

“Just wait till I get you home” hissed Molly taking her young charge in hand as she began to lead her out of the theater.

DELETED SCENE

“Molly wait...” cried Ray Schleine trying to stop her nanny from dragging her out the theater.

“What Ray, seriously I am in no mood for games, we are going home,” said Molly.

“But what about my friends, they are still in the manager’s office.” explained Ray.

“Fine, I’ll take them home too but don’t think in any way shape or form that this means that I approve of what all of you did tonight,” stated an irritated Molly Gunn.

“Hey Molly?” chirped Ray.

“What now?” groaned Molly.

“Those people in that poster kind of look like us,” said Ray Schleine pointing to a poster that read UPTOWN GIRLS and indeed showed two actresses who looked very similar to Molly and Ray.

“Nah I’m a heck of a lot cuter than Brittany Murphy could ever hope to be,” stated Molly.

“Whats a Dakota Fanning?” asked Ray.

– The End –

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This story was written by Elkstree, who kindly allowed me to host it on my web site. Please note that my usual disclaimers do not necessarily apply to this story, as it was not written by myself.

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