f/b, f/g, blackmail, first-time, oral, male-dominant, teen 

Babysitter stories have always held a certain appeal to me. I think that's because I used to babysit, and one of my "wards" was a wet-dream in bluejeans (I was 15, he was 12... nothing ever happened!). Fantasies about those situations, combined with my love of the reluctance genre, gave rise to a certain love of baby-sitter-forced-slut in me!

This story could definately have been better, though. At many points of the story the reader gets lost quite easily, since the author (a newbee to the art of erotica) moves too quickly and, I suspect, without direction himself. Furthermore, the victim here is disappointingly boring with how she comes to accept her "punishments" by the younger antagonists of the story...

What makes up for these problems (and a slew of grammatical faults as well!) is the genuine arousal Cygnus gives us at several "hot-spots" of the story. The victim is a lovely young girl trying to go to college, forced to accept the brute commands of the antagonists to keep her scholarship (seeing as their parents are in charge of such things at the college she's attending). The fact that it's their first time is genuinely expressed, as is the victim's distaste at what they want. 

This story is a prime example of why many authors need good editors! Had this story had one, I think, it would have been much better. But it's still *very* arousing, and I reallly hope it leads into a sequal, which I think could make this story even better! I give it three Li'l Toons!