True Love

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“You just like me because I love giving you head”

“Whatever babe, there are ten just like you on your squad”

Jenny Smith was fed up with all of this. She was the most popular girl in school and she could not keep a boy interested in her any more than for her to suck his dick or be his trophy.

Her bimbo cheerleader friends had been sincere enough in empathizing with her during her breakup with Brad, star halfback for the school football team. When she was not around though they giggled and laughed, quickly becoming tired of her.

A few years before, the popular girls gave Jenny a makeover. Before that she had been a “freak”, into The Cure and black clothing. She had forsaken sincerity and friendships for manicures and cheerleading practice. These days, Jenny tired of it. Feeling empty and distraught after her fight with Brad, she went to the girl’s locker room to collect herself.

At she sat on the bench in front of her locker, Jenny sobbed softly. She felt like a complete joke. Lauren Collins, her former best friend and lover, walked by and saw her balling on the bench.


Lauren, seeing her former friend balling on the bench suddenly felt bad for Jenny.

“Hey” she said quietly, startling the crying girl.

Jenny looked up at her, “oh hi, god I can’t believe you are seeing me like this”

Lauren sat down and wrapped her arms around her, holding the girl tight like they used to after school each day. Once Jenny had calmed down, she relayed the story of her breakup with Brad. Lauren listened quietly, knowing this might be the opportunity to reclaim what was once hers.

Jenny looked away for a moment and quietly whispered, “I can’t do this anymore”

Lauren smiled and pulled her hair up, showing off a beautiful pale face “I will take care of you ok?” With that, she kissed Jenny’s forehead and held her tight for a few minutes, telling her she would take her back to Laurens house so she could clean up.

Jenny was in no condition to argue and acquiesced. As she walked behind Lauren, she thought about how Lauren would be so nice to her after all that had happened between them. They went through the parking lot quietly and out to Laurens car.


Jenny sat down in the passenger seat of Laurens car completely exhausted. She barely heard Lauren ask her if she was all right, “yeah, I’ll be fine” was all Jenny could get out. Lauren turned on the ignition, and a CD started in the CD player, some sort of Goth rock band.

“Same old Lauren” Jenny sighed and leaned back in her seat, trying to relax.

Lauren looked over towards the girl “This is a CD I made with a friend”. They were quiet after that for a few minutes before she added “…just relax and enjoy, we still have about a ten minute drive. You have had a very long day.”

Jenny did feel more relaxed, she was glad Lauren had found her in the bathroom. They soon approached Laurens house, pulling into the driveway. Lauren led Jenny into the house, going with her to her room. She opened the door and motioned for Jenny to lie down.


Jenny did all of this without really thinking about it. She laid back on the bed, closing her eyes. Lauren told her to try to take a nap for a little while; she would be back in an hour. Jenny had no argument for this, quietly listening to everything Lauren said and falling right asleep.

While Jenny slept, she dreamt of what used to be. At thirteen, she and Lauren had been lovers, spending all of their time together. Both had discovered they like girls instead of boys, and had quickly fallen in love. Jenny’s sudden change in popularity and attitude had separated them. She awoke suddenly, not sure of how much time had elapsed since she had fallen asleep.

After regaining her senses, she noticed the same CD that was playing in the car was now playing again, in the room. However, Jenny didn’t even notice when Lauren crept up behind her and said, “Doll” in her ear, suddenly stopping her in place and putting her into trance.


The moment Lauren said the trigger, Jenny stopped right in place. Lauren had left it in the subliminals that were on the CD that had been playing in both the car and in her room while Jenny slept.

“Jenny, please lay down on the bed”

As soon as Lauren said this, Jenny turned robotically and sat down on the bed. She then turned her body to face Lauren at the front of the bed, lying back down onto the pillows, returning to the same doey-eyed stare from before.

Lauren laid down next to her, running her nails across Jenny’s breasts. She thought back to the old days, remembering what they had been like only a few years before.

“I’m not going to lose you this time my love,” she whispered quietly.


For the next hour or so, Lauren laid curled up to the entranced girl’s body, crying softly to herself. She knew what she had to do next. Leaning in towards the girl’s ear, she spoke

“Jenny, from now on you are going to be with me, like we used to be. The past few years, they have been a bad nightmare, it’s over now, and you will be mine again.”

Lauren snapped her fingers and Jenny woke up, smiling at Lauren as she tried to figure out how long she had been sleeping “Hi, what time is it?” she asked, hoping she hadn’t of missed much time with Lauren.

Lauren smiled at her “Don’t worry about it, how are you feeling, better?”

Jenny thought about it, and yes, she did feel better. She looked up at Lauren “Yes, thank you so much. You were always there for me; I can’t believe I ever left you”

There was silence for a minute before Jenny leaned up and kissed Lauren.

They kissed for a few minutes, interchanging kisses with rubbing their heads together, listening to each other breathe. Lauren looked her in the eyes and smiled “I am going to fix everything they did to you”

Soon after, she turned out the lamp above her bed, and they went to sleep.


In the morning, Lauren woke up before Jenny did. She crawled out of bed and looked Jenny over, sleeping as peacefully as she commanded to after being put back into trance for the evening. Suddenly, there was a knock at her door.

“Come in Kristen”

Lauren knew who would be at the door without even thinking about it. The girl came in and knelt in front of her.

“Good morning Ma’am, I am yours to command”

Kristen had been Laurens first experiment in mind control, having had been reprogrammed about a year ago. Kristen was her slave and plaything, a friend because she had none, and today she would assist Lauren in fixing her only real love.

They went down the hall together into Laurens office room where she kept her computer and other implements. Lauren sat down in her chair and spread her legs slightly.

Kristen knew exactly what she was supposed to do. Kneeling down between her Mistresses legs, she purred out “Yes Ma’am”. She slid off Laurens boxer shorts, slowly starting to lick the hood of her Mistresses clit. Her tongue teased and licked at it quickly, only slowing down to pace her Mistresses orgasm.

After her orgasm, Lauren caught her breathe and petted her slave girl on the head “good girl, I am very pleased by you today Kristen. I do hope you continue this behavior”


Lauren left Kristen to her shower and went back to check up on Jenny. She walked to the side of the bed and kissed her hand, thinking of what the next day would bring. Coming to the front of the bed, she snapped her fingers, ending the trance.

Jenny opened her eyes slowly, looking up at Lauren. She squinted and whispered “hey”, trying to clear the cobwebs out of her head.

Lauren got onto the bed and crawled across it until she was above Jenny. She leaned down and kissed her softly on the mouth, holding her tightly in an embrace afterwards. Breathing in her familiar scent, Lauren whispered to her “are you ready to be saved lover?”

Jenny looked over at her and smiled “can I take a shower first?”

Lauren grinned, “Sure, take your clothes off right now so I may see your body”

Jenny sat up on the bed and started to take off her clothes without any sort of hesitation, revealing her firm breasts and shoulder length blond hair. She had grown so much in the past two years.

Lauren looked her over, very pleased “alright, Jenny, take a shower and then get dressed”


All Jenny could think about was how much she wanted to take a shower. Lauren had said there would be clothes left out for her and that Kristen would assist her in any way needed. She wanted to look good for her, her love for the girl suddenly reborn. It had all happened so fast, but Jenny did not focus on that. For some reason she felt no reason to question any of this.

She got out of the shower and dried off quickly. She barely even noticed Kristen before the slave girl flicked a switch on the wall, starting a set of colorful blinking lights around the room. Before Jenny could react to what happened the lights completely entranced her. The blinking reds, greens, and blues had put her right into a trance. Kristen led her over to a chair, put a set of headphones on her ears, and started to dress her.

The messages on the tapes were programming Jenny to be like her old self again. She would be a lesbian and in love with Lauren. While this was happening, Kristen was methodically dressing the girl in a dark black skirt, ripped up fishnet stockings and low top Doc Martens. She then applied her makeup and gave her a tight black sweater to show off her large breasts.

If Jenny had not been being brainwashed she would have next noticed that her makeup being done. Kristen applied a dark lipstick, making her look like a gothic princess. Kristen took her hand and led her down the stairs to where Lauren was waiting.


Kristen and Jenny made their way down the stairs. At the bottom of the stairs, Lauren met them, a smile on her face. She overlooked the two girls who now knelt at her feet.

“Kristen, please come with me for a moment. Jenny please wait here.”

Both girls quietly obeyed, Jenny remaining on her knees, Kristen following her Mistress. Once they got into the next room, Lauren motioned for Kristen to sit down.

“Did the subliminal work right away?” She asked the girl

Kristen beamed for a moment before pausing, something suddenly felt wrong, but it passed “Yes Ma’am, it worked right away.”

Lauren grinned at her “Good. You did a wonderful job with her outfit”

Kristen looked down at the ground “Thank You Ma’am, I am glad my work has pleased you.”

Lauren sat down next to her and gave her a big hug.


“Jenny, please get up”

This was the big test to see if it had worked. Lauren nearly choked down a tear as Jenny rose to her feet, eyes wide, and a smile on her face. She stared into those beautiful eyes and started to have second thoughts.

“I can’t believe I did this, to take my former best friend and reprogram her for my own whims. I mean, Kristen was different, she was going nowhere, would have amounted to nothing. I fixed her.”

With that, she gazed over at Kristen and smiled softly, remembering the shy, dirty girl she had brainwashed into the perfect girlfriend, or at least the perfect replacement for Jenny.

She snapped her fingers, awakening Jenny. Jenny blinked and looked up at her, smiling.

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