The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
Author: Master Miller
Story: Doctor Nechetohontoquatl
(14 of 18)

Doctor Nechetohontoquatl: Season 2

Episode 4:

Early in the morning, out by a busy intersection stood two women. One was painted head to toe in silver bodypaint, and was wearing a silver bikini, while the other wore an oversized trenchcoat. The woman wearing the trenchcoat looked rather embarrassed to be out there.

"All right Keri, time to show everyone what a slut you are." the silver clad woman said.

"P-please! Mistress Karen... Don't make me..." Keri said, on the verge of tears.

The silver clad Karen placed her hand on the back of Keri's neck. Then she leaned forward, her mouth close to Keri's ear.

"Do it now." she whispered.

With a soft wimper, Keri shed the trenchcoat, revealing her naked body. She began to grope her breasts. Tears started running down her cheeks.

The silver clad Karen took out a small remote control that had been hidden between her breasts, and pressed a button on it. Keri cried out, her eyes went blank, and she began to fondle herself more passionately.

One of the drivers failed to notice the red light, he was too busy staring at the two women. His car slammed into the side of another car. There was a screech of tires as another car tried to stop in time, followed by the sound of breaking glass and crumpling metal...

The silver clad Karen stared wide eyed at the growing pile of wrecked cars. "Oh my. Maybe I shouldn't have picked an intersection to do this at..." She turned to Keri, who was still fondling herself.

"Come on Keri. Let's get out of here."

Keri followed her mistress like a docile lamb. Her eyes were still completely blank. She was completely unaware of multi car pileup she had helped to create.

* * *

Meanwhile, the other Karen was heading to work, and saw the car pileup coming at her fast. Thinking quickly, she drove onto the sidewalk, honking her horn at people to get them out of the way. One way or another, she was getting to work on time today.

When she pulled into the parking lot of Doctor Nechetohontoquatl's lab, she saw a woman wearing a jetpack leaving the lab. This was followed by two other women who were carrying the doctor. He was struggling, trying to free himself. Karen got out of the car. However, before she could run over to them, the women activated their jetpacks, and flew off with the doctor.

"SHIT! There goes my future paychecks!" Karen said.

* * *

After being carried for who knows how long, and vomiting on one of the women carrying him as they went through some turbulence, Doctor Nechetohontoquatl found himself at what appeared to be a floating building. A giant baloon inside a steel frame was attached to the building via many thick steel cables. A large door on the building opened, and the women flew inside. They set the doctor down on the floor.

Doctor Nechetohontoquatl stood up and brushed himself off. A tall woman in her late thirties, wearing what appeared to be a costume right out of a comic book, walked over to him.

"Greetings doctor. I am to be known as The Goddess! I have brought you here to--"

"Goddess?! Lady, you're a woman who's pushing 40, and who's wearing a ridiculous costume!" the doctor said.

"DO NOT INTERRUPT THE GODDESS!" the woman said. "Er, anyway, I had you brought here because I want you to build us a weapon!" she added.

"What's with the floating building?" the doctor asked.

"Eh, a few years ago I entered a contest, just for shits and giggles really. I ended up winning a lifetime supply of helium. Had to do something with it. Anyway, that's neither here nor there. I had you brought here to build us a mind control ray. I want it to be large enough, and powerful enough to control an entire city!"

Doctor Nechetohontoquatl paused for a second. "Give me 50 bucks and I'll do it." he said.

* * *

Back at the lab, Karen was busy searching the internet for anything she could find on the women who had taken the doctor. A few forum posts told her everything she needed to know, except for one thing: How the hell would she get up there to rescue her source of future paychecks? Perhaps there was something in the lab she could use. She began to explore the various nooks and crannies of Doctor Nechetohontoquatl's lab.

Upon entering a room she had never been in before, she saw what appeared to be the solution to her problem. Most of a World War 1 Bi-plane sat next to a large garage door. Karen was no aeronautics expert, but from what she could tell, most of the plane was there, with the rest of it in several boxes scattered about the room.

* * *

Doctor Nechetohontoquatl finished writing down everything he would need to build the mind control ray. The Goddess took it, casually glanced at it, then gave it to one of her underlings. "Find the parts on this list, and be quick about it!" she said.

"Yes, Goddess." the woman replied. She activated her jetpack and flew away.

The Goddess turned to the doctor. "So, after the ray is built, and the city is enslaved, how 'bout you and me have lunch together? I know this really cute restaurant on Belchnik Avenue." she said.

"Sorry, but I have other plans." the doctor replied.

"Another woman?" she raised one of her eyebrows.

"Nah. Just the same thing I do every night. Shower at my lab, then a three mile walk to my car, where I live." he said.

She went over to him, and touched his cheek with her finger. "I can be more exciting then any three mile walk." she said in a low, seductive voice.

* * *

The mechanic looked over the antique airplane sitting in Doctor Nechetohontoquatl's garage. He studied the plane, then opened the various boxes and looked over the parts inside them.

"This thing belongs in a museum, lady." he said.

"I know, but can you put it back together and make it able to fly?" Karen asked.

"Gee, yeah I can do that for ya, but, it'll cost ya." he replied.

"Will you do it if I give you a blowjob?" Karen asked.

"Let me squeeze your tits as well, and you got a deal." the mechanic replied.

* * *

With the parts in hand, the doctor began to assemble the death ray. The women watched silently as he put the various parts and pieces toge--

"Uh, far as I know, I'm building a mind control ray, not a death ray." the doctor said.

With the parts in hand, the doctor began to assemble the mind control ray. The women watched silently as he put the various parts and pieces together. Time passed, and the device began to take shape. It looked like a large square box with a big rectangular screen in the middle of it.

One of the woman turned to look at The Goddess. "Is a mind control ray supposed to look like that?" she asked.

"He's a mad scientist who brainwashes women for a living. I'm certain that he knows what he's doing." The Goddess replied. She then immediately took a close look at the list the doctor had written.

"I don't see the stuff that's written here, SUSAN!"

A woman approached.

"Where is the stuff the doctor put down on the list? What's all this stuff you brought back?"

"Well, he wanted a bunch of vacuum tubes and other stuff that they don't make anymore, so I went to a TV repair shop and brought back what I could find. I figured it would be close enough." Susan replied.

"You are a true idiot Susan. Regardless, I'm certain he knows what he's doing, and that somehow he'll make it work." The Goddess replied.

* * *

Back at the lab, the plane was now assembled. Karen walked around the plane, studying it.

"Wow! That didn't take very long." she said.

"Yeah, well, ya know, when you don't do it right, it don't take as long." the mechanic replied.

He left the lab, and Karen set to work figuring out how to fly the thing. She figured that it couldn't be that hard. Driving was easy, so flying couldn't be that hard to master. She opened the garage door, and set to work figuring out how to start the engine.

* * *

Doctor Nechetohontoquatl added the final set of dials and buttons, and connected the wires to a circuit board, then stepped back with a wide grin on his face. "It's complete!" he said.

The Goddess walked over, likewise, wearing a big grin on her face. "Yes! Okay doctor, how does it work?"

"The big red button turns it on. The rest of the buttons and dials adjust its settings. Um, beyond that, I don't have a clue as to what it does." the doctor said.

"Great! Care to stay around a bit? My offer for dinner still stands."

"Uh, I'd rather be taken back to my lab. I still have women to capture and brainwash." the doctor said.

"Right... Of course. Ladies, please transport the doctor back to his laboratory."

* * *

Karen had managed to get the plane's engine going. She hopped inside the cockpit. The plane began to move forward, picking up speed. It crashed into the side of a nearby building. Right at that moment, several of the women she had seen earlier landed. They had brought the doctor with them.

Karen got out of the wrecked plane and stared at the doctor. "Shit! If I'd have known they were gonna bring you back, I wouldn't have gone through the trouble of trying to save your ass!"

The doctor shrugged.

"Where'd you get that plane anyway?" Karen asked, pointing to the wrecked plane.

"Internet." the doctor replied.

* * *

Back at the floating building, The Goddess activated the contraption that the doctor had built. The screen came to life and displayed a man's face. He was talking about some miracle slicer/blender thing that could apparently save hours in the kitchen when cooking various dishes.

"DAMNIT! This isn't a mind control ray! I got ripped off!" The Goddess stamped her foot on the floor, then looked at her watch. "Ah hell, my favorite show comes on in 5 minutes. Ladies! Figure out how this thing changes channels! Pronto!" she said.

The End

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