Demoiselle's Demise

By Iron Nick

Disclaimer: This fantasy story is intended for adult readers only.

Jenny had just turned nineteen. She had finished her freshman year at Vanderbilt with a 3.8 grade point average. Just before she left her dormitory for the summer and moved back home, her mother called and informed her that Jenny had been selected for the Clarkston Demoiselle Club. This club selected a small number of nineteen-year-old young ladies each year from prestigious families in the Clarkston area to be a part. Jenny knew her mother had pulled some strings to get her on. Jenny had gone to Sills Prep with some of the other girls her mother read off the list, but Jenny was not the most popular among the elite clique. Her parents were wealthy, and her mother was the consummate socialite, but Jenny preferred books, nature hikes, and Frisbee to cotillions, teas, and country clubs. She was also about twenty pounds overweight, which did not sit well with the dainty lasses she would be in the club with. Jenny at first resisted the idea, but she now knew something that no one else knew. During her months at Vanderbilt, Jenny discovered she had an extraordinary talent: the ability to control minds.

She had discovered this amazing ability one day on campus when she passed a group of students. One female student noticed Jenny's PETA shirt and offered her a hot dog she had just gotten from the cafeteria. "Why don't you just shove it up your ass!" thought Jenny. Remarkably, Jenny watched as the girl pulled down her jeans and panties and proceeded to try to cram the hot dog up her ass. Jenny found the act hilarious, but the horror-stricken look on the girl's face gave her pause. Jenny experimented a few times by having people develop itches on their arms or shoulders, having people feel cold or warm, or having sad looking people suddenly become cheerful. She could get people in the library to change seats, and even had people in movie theaters remain totally quiet if they started talking. She realized she had a power that was incredibly potent, and she kept it to herself. She felt a mixture of fear and exhilaration when she used her power. She had resisted using it "against" people, but the prospect of using it at the Demoiselle Club gave her a sense of guilty glee.

Jenny arrived home a couple of days later. After being lectured by her mother for not honing her "social skills and social etiquette," Jenny prepared for the first luncheon of the club. The first luncheon took place on a Saturday afternoon at the Brockwood Country Club. It was for the girls and their parents. Jenny and her parents arrived promptly at 11:00. The other girls were there or arrived shortly thereafter. There were twelve girls in all. The girls were dressed in either sundresses or sleeveless pastel dresses. They smiled and giggled with each other and the parents doted on the girls. The society reporter from the local paper was there with a photographer. Jenny made polite conversation with some of her ex-classmates. Most of the girls were polite to Jenny with the exception of one: Melissa Vanniston.

Melissa had graduated Sills Prep with Jenny before moving on to Ole Miss. Melissa was Sills homecoming and prom queen her senior year. She was the leader of the most popular clique in school. She was not a stereotypical snooty bitch. She lead her clique, not by domineering or threats, but with charm, will, and confidence. With her friends she was warm, gregarious, and generous, but with people she did not like, she was cold and sometimes cruel. She had looked down on Jenny for the sole reason that she thought Jenny was not living up to her social status. She had once put a sign on Jenny's back that read, "This body bought with food stamps!" Melissa and her friends had a good laugh at that, though few others found it very funny. Melissa was meaner to Jenny than she was to the Sills students who were there on the "work plan" who did chores after school or worked in the lunch room to help pay tuition.

Jenny approached Melissa while the latter was talking to the parents of another Demoiselle. "Be nice, be nice, be nice," Jenny repeated to herself over and over in her head. "Hello, Melissa," she said. Melissa turned around. "I haven't seen you since graduation. How's Ole Miss?"

Melissa gave Jenny a long look then turned back to the parents she was talking to, "Well, it certainly was good to see you both again. I know you're proud of Ashleigh. You'll need to come to my parents' house for dinner some night." The couple thanked Melissa, congratulated her on her selection to the club, and moved on. Melissa turned back to Jenny, "Well, well, I tried to tell them you were NOT Demoiselle material, but your mother has quite a lot of pull. You must be hating all of this."

Jenny shook her head, "Actually, it's quite nice. College has matured some of the girls."

Melissa folded her arms across her chest. She was 5'7 with green eyes and shoulder length hair dyed blonde and swept back over her ears. She was thin and well tanned. "Look, Jenny, you don't belong here, and we both know it. Do you know Shea Colburn wasn't let in because you took her spot?"

"I didn't know these spots were reserved. Anyway, I'm in, and there's not a thing you can do about it."

"We'll see about that." Melissa turned and took a step, but turned back around. She looked up and down Jenny's body, "Oh, and leave some of the buffet for the rest of us." She turned again and walked away.

Jenny was fuming. Melissa had not changed a bit. She watched Melissa walk over to some friends and begin to chat. Jenny looked around for Melissa's parents. She spotted them looking out a window overlooking the club tennis courts. Jenny made her way over to them. She moved to the side of Mrs. Vanniston and telepathically sent a command: "You know you Melissa has grown up to be a snotty bitch. When she is living at home, you will make her do all the maid's chores. You will not fire your maid, but pay her regular salary as a retainer until Melissa goes back to college. You will keep a strict curfew on Melissa. She can stay out no later than ten o'clock weeknights and ten thirty weekends. If she ever disobeys you, does not do a good job cleaning, or talks back to you, you will spank her bare ass good and hard. You will look for any excuse to spank her." Jenny then subtly made her way around to Mr. Vanniston. He gave him the same telepathic command but added that his wife had to do all the spanking, and that he would revoke any credit cards he gave Melissa and restrict her to a summer allowance of twenty dollars a week with no exceptions. When she was finished, Jenny saw the Vannistons look at their daughter with expressions of disgust and disappointment. They then moved aside and talked to one another.

Jenny casually walked over to where Melissa was chatting with a two other dems. She stood to the side of Jenny and sent her a command, "You will live with your parents every summer until you graduate or are married. You will make somewhat of an effort to obey any rules and restrictions they put on you and submit to any punishment they give you."

"Oh, hi, Jenny," said one of the girls. She was Miriam Poteete, another former classmate of Jenny's. Miriam was tall with a well-toned body and thick, silky blonde hair. She had done some modeling. She was Melissa's best friend, but was not as spiteful. "How do you like Vandy?"

"Oh, it's great, Miriam. I love it. How is Tulane?"

The conversation went back and forth for a while until Melissa grew bored, "Hey, let's go see a movie tomorrow night," she said. The other girls agreed. Jenny used her power to have the other girls invite her along. Melissa was not happy, but she was outnumbered. Jenny also made sure the girls would invite their boyfriends and meet at Melissa's house at six o'clock.

Jenny arrived promptly at six. The others showed up soon afterward. Jenny was the only one without a boyfriend as he was back in Tennessee. Jenny the other two girls and their dates waited in the living room with Mrs. Vanniston for Melissa. "Melissa is still busy with some chores," said her mother, "She'll be down shortly." The group made small talk until Melissa came down the stairs. "Remember, be home by ten."

"Tell your mom that's unfair," Jenny telepathically sent Melissa.

"But mom, that's so unfair!" said a whiny Melissa.

"Melissa, you know what you get for talking back. Come here." Jenny made sure Melissa's punishment would be in front of her friends. "Assume the position."

"Not in front of them," pleaded Melissa.

"Would you like to be grounded tonight, Missy?" Her mother patted her lap. Melissa turned bright red, lowered her jeans and panties, and lay across her mother's lap. Her mother proceeded to spank Melissa's ass until it was dark pink. Her friends looked on in shock at what they witnessed. Jenny feigned shock also. When the punishment was over, Melissa redressed and sulked out of the house.

"What the hell was that?" asked Cody, Melissa's boyfriend.

"I don't want to talk about it!" Melissa snapped.

Jenny made sure she rode with Cody and Melissa. The other four rode in a separate vehicle. On the way to the theater, Jenny used her telepathic abilities to make Melissa rather horny. She then made sure Cody had no interest in having sex with Melissa tonight. As they drove, Melissa ran her hand across Cody's back, shoulders, and leg. Cody acted like it was nothing special.

After they arrived at the theater and took their seats, Jenny made sure she and a couple sat behind Melissa and Cody. As the theater darkened, Jenny made Melissa hornier and crave giving Cody a blowjob. She still made Cody uninterested in Melissa's advances and had him become very interested in the movie. Melissa kept whispering in Cody's ear only to be shushed. She even went so far as to bend her head down to Cody's lap and grasp the zipper of his pants. Cody jerked Melissa back up by the shoulders, "Would you control yourself!" he whispered loudly. Melissa's friends figured out what she was trying to do and whispered to one another. Jenny finally had Melissa rush off to the restroom to masturbate for the next thirty minutes; however, Jenny made sure Melissa would not achieve orgasm and crave sex with Cody even more.

The movie finally ended, and they had to get Melissa home before curfew. Melissa was still craving giving Cody head, and Cody was still uninterested. They both grew rather irritable. Jenny made sure the group stopped off for ice cream to insure Melissa would be late and thus receive another spanking. They arrived at Melissa's house at five after ten. Melissa begged Cody to come in with her, but Cody refused. Melissa sulked off to her front door with a suggestion stuck in her head courtesy of Jenny to finger fuck herself for as long as possible, but still be unable to achieve orgasm.

After Melissa went inside, Jenny had Cody invite her to a local coffee house. At the coffee house, the two talked about school and their high school days. Jenny made Cody become very attracted to her sexually. She watched as Cody's became fidgety and looked at her with renewed interest. Finally Cody said, "You've never seen my parent's lake house, have you?"

"No, I don't think so. Why do you ask?"

"Well, it's only about twenty five minutes away on Lake Selbur. Would you care to go see it? It has a dock where you can watch the night sky and look for shooting stars. It's quite peaceful."

"OK, I guess that would be all right." Jenny smiled, as she knew what was on Cody's mind; after all she had put it there.

She followed Cody out to the lake house. The house was vacant. They went inside so Cody could turn on the air conditioner. He took a bottle of white wine from the refrigerator and two glasses, and he and Jenny went out to the dock. They sat on the dock with their feet dangling just above the water. It was a clear night, and the sky was full of stars. "This is beautiful," said Jenny, "you must come out here all the time."

"Yeah, this is the first time I've been here since last Labor Day, though. You know, being away at school and all." The two drank the wine. Cody then leaned over and kissed Jenny. She kissed back. It was quite romantic even though Jenny had engineered the event with her telepathy. The two kissed for some time, and Jenny let Cody slip his hand inside her bra cup. The two then lay back on the dock and made out more passionately.

"Let's go inside," said Cody between kisses. Cody led Jenny by the hand into the house. They went into the master bedroom where Cody had a stash of condoms and stripped. Jenny made sure she would be on top. Cody lay on his back with his erect member at the ready. Jenny put a condom on him, straddled him, grabbed his cock, and lowered herself onto him. She looked down at his tanned, well-toned body, his hazel eyes, and his light brown hair. She started to raise herself up and then lower herself as she rocked gently back and forth. Cody leaned his head back and stared at Jenny. His breath came hot and heavy through his parted lips, and his chest heaved.

Jenny looked down into Cody's eyes. "This is better than any sex you have ever had with Melissa," was the message she telepathically sent him. Cody started to moan as Jenny did. The two rose and fell together until Cody finally came just before Jenny. They continued to go at it until Cody went flaccid again. Jenny rolled off of him and landed next to him.

Cody put his arm around Jenny and let his breathing slow down. "That was wonderful," he whispered in her ear. They made love a few more times that night before they went to sleep. The next morning they decided to keep their tryst a secret. Jenny made sure that for the rest of the summer, Cody would think of her if he made love to Melissa. He would resent the fact that Melissa was not as good in bed as she and want Melissa to deep throat him.

Another Demoiselle event was held the following weekend. This was a Sunday brunch at an upscale restaurant. The girls met on the restaurant's veranda where the newspaper photographer took several photos. Jenny made sure Melissa scratched her nose, closed her eyes, or did some other unflattering thing every time a photo was taken. She also made sure the reporter and photographer would choose the photo with the most unflattering shot of Melissa to use in their article. When it was time to eat, Jenny stood in line next to Melissa and used her telepathy, "You will answer all of Jenny's questions honestly." Jenny nudged Melissa, "So, how's it going?"

"If you must know," Melissa replied gruffly, "It's going awful."

"Why's that?"

"Well, my parents are spanking me at least twice a day, and I can't get myself off, and Cody and I have no time together because of all my chores and curfew, so I'm very horny." Melissa's jaw dropped. She could not believe she had just told Jenny that. She looked around to see if anyone else had heard. "You better not tell a soul, Jenny!" Melissa warned with a stern whisper.

"Oh, don't worry, Melissa; it will be our little secret. Jenny and Melissa finished getting their food and joined the others at the table. While Melissa ate, Jenny made the inside of Melissa's nostrils itch, then her armpits, then her anus. Melissa squirmed and tried to discreetly scratch her itching areas, but could not without being too obvious. Jenny made sure Melissa remained at the table until everyone had finished. When everyone finished eating, which took a while thanks to Jenny; Melissa rushed to the bathroom to scratch herself. Jenny followed Melissa to the bathroom. She first made sure the only way Melissa would get off would be if she had sexual intercourse with Cody, and that she would do anything if Cody would fuck her. Jenny then had Melissa tuck the hem of her sun-dress into her panties, forget she did that, then walk back out into the restaurant showing her yellow panties to everyone. Jenny entertained herself for the rest of the brunch by having Melissa develop a rather irritating scalp itch and giving her a very sour taste in her mouth when she talked.

That night Jenny called Cody, and the two met at the coffee shop. Jenny used her telepathy on Cody for another night of hot sex. She was starting to feel guilty about cheating on her boyfriend back in Tennessee, so she decided this was the last tryst between her and Cody. She telepathically commanded Cody not to engage in sexual intercourse with Melissa for two weeks, but he would get her to deep throat him any chance he got. After the two weeks were up, for the rest of the summer, he would only fuck Melissa doggy-style.

After ten days went by, Jenny decided to stop tormenting Melissa, so she visited Melissa at the Vanniston's for one last bit of fun. She had Mr. and Mrs. Vanniston go out for the day then found Melissa scrubbing the kitchen floor.

Melissa was extremely embarrassed to have Jenny discover her on her hands and knees with a bucket of soapy water and a scrub brush. "What the hell do you want?" she demanded.

Jenny commanded Melissa to take a break from her scrubbing. She then had Melissa invite her up to Melissa's bedroom. "So Melissa, how's it going?"

Melissa still had to be honest with Jenny. "Rotten! My fucking parents still spank the hell out of me for any little thing I do, and I haven't gotten off in weeks!" Once again, she could not believe she was telling Jenny this.

"You mean sex with Cody isn't doing it for you?"

"What sex? All he wants is blow-jobs, and he keeps shoving my head down, so I'm all but gagging on his dick." Melissa blushed at her admissions.

Jenny sent out a telepathic command, "You are so horny, you want to experiment. You will beg Jenny to let you eat her out and offer her anything if she lets you."

Melissa looked up at Jenny and blushed again. Her breathing grew heavy, and she could not make eye contact with her. "Uh, Jenny, could you do me a favor?"

"What is it, Melissa?"

"Um, I'm so horny right now. I'll...I'll give you anything if...if...I can.... If you would...."

"What, Melissa?"

"Can I go down on you?" Melissa hung her head in shame.

"What?!" Jenny said in fake shock.

"Please, Jenny, I'll give you anything. Please!"

"Well, I don't know. I'm not a lesbian or bi or...."

"Neither am I, Jenny, but I...it's just that.... I'll give you anything!"

"Well, I do like your turquoise earrings."

"They're yours!"

"OK, you seem so desperate and pathetic, I guess I have no choice. I hope you know what you're doing." Jenny stood up and removed her shorts and panties then reclined on the bed with her legs spread. Melissa moved up between Jenny's legs and tentatively started to probe Jenny's pussy with her tongue. Jenny had had guys go down on her but never a female. She could tell this was Melissa's first time, so she helped her out with a bit of telepathy, "Thrust you tongue in as far as you can. Swirl it around, suck at the pussy and gently nibble." Melissa followed the commands, and Jenny relaxed. As Melissa probed further and further, Jenny came closer and closer to orgasm. After a while, she came and made sure Melissa lapped it all up. After Melissa had cleaned her up, Jenny redressed. She made sure Melissa was completely ashamed at what she had done and offer Jenny anything if Jenny would keep this a secret. Jenny asked for the earrings' matching necklace and ring, which Melissa gladly gave up. Melissa was not only ashamed, she was still sexually frustrated. Jenny on the other hand was satisfied.

As Jenny drove away from Melissa's house, she knew the rest of Melissa's summer would be a trial, but at least she would be having sex with Cody again. Jenny thought she would have Melissa's parents take a week's vacation to give Melissa's ass a rest. It was the least she could do for her old high school chum.