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Debbie - Draft Version
Steve opened his yes to see Debbie enter the room. She was wearing a silky
full length dressing gown which hugged her figure, but showed just a little
cleavage. In her hand she carried a hot steaming mug and the waft of fresh
coffee filled the room.
'Hi. How did you sleep?'
'Well to be honest I was a little chilly, perhaps I could have done with an
extra blanket.'
'Sorry to hear that, I can't have my guests being cold. How about we get you
warm'
With that she undid the tie to the dressing gown and allowed it to fall to
the floor. Steve's eyes briefly took in her naked body before she slid under
the covers to join him.
'What about...?'
'Oh don't worry about them, they left early to go fishing. They won't be
back till after lunch', said Debbie as she pressed her body against Steve.
Her skin felt hot against his and a glow spread through his body. She leaned
across to him and their mouth met as the kissed. Gently at first, but then
with an increasing intensity.
Steve shifted slightly as he felt his cock starting to stir. Debbie sensed
the movement, her hand went down and she wrapped her fingers around his
rapidly hardening length. He felt so big, certainly bigger than she was used
to, she just had to see. Pushing the covers off completely, she gasped
slightly as she saw that Steve was a good seven, probably eight inches and
thick with it.
A surge ran through her pussy and she just knew she had to taste him right
now. She lowered her head and ran her tongue along the shaft causing Steve
to shudder and utter a soft moan of pleasure. Normally she would tease with
lots of licking, but a urgency within her meant she ran her tongue round the
purple head, she loved circumcised cocks, before quickly taking it deep into
her mouth. She could barely take more than half before she felt full, so she
wrapped her hand round the base and started to bob her head up and down.
Laying back soaking up the pleasure was all he could do. The softness of her
mouth, the pressure of her lips on his shaft as she went up and down and the
gently wanking motion of her hand. The feelings were intense and it had been
a long time. He knew that the stirrings deep in his balls meant he wouldn't
last long. 'Keep that up and I'm going to cum in your mouth', he said. There
was no reply, just a increase in pressure as she sucked harder.
The tingle started to spread through his body, as pressure built deep in his
groin and he found himself rising up to meet the down strokes of her mouth.
A throb in his shaft and an intense rush as he shot spurt after spurt into
her hungry mouth. Orgasms through blow jobs always felt more intense for
Steve and this one was one of the best. Debbie sure knew how to suck a guy.
It felt like all his energy had gone from him.
He lay on his back getting his breath back, when Debbie came up his body and
planted a kiss on his lips. He could taste himself slightly in her mouth,
but didn't mind, as her tongue pushed its way into his mouth. His hands
reached up and started t stroke her breasts, running his finger tips round
first one then the other of her stiff nipples.
It was 'her turn' now, he felt he should give her the same pleasure he'd
received. Pushing her onto her back, he gently sucked on nipples as his hand
strayed down her body, seeking out her hot pussy. His fingers brushed
through her sparse covering of pubic hair and found her hot wet slit. His
finger ran up and down feeling her slickness. His mouth started to water as
he imagined her taste and he started to work his way down her body planting
kisses as he went. Reaching her hips he went lower, to her knees, and then
worked his way up, her thighs parting to allow him access as he went.
He gazed at her pussy briefly, every woman is different and he liked to take
in the beauty of each, her slightly plump, fleshy vulva coated with her
juices. Running his tongue up between each lip, they parted easily and he
was able to push his tongue inside and lap at her sweet, slightly musky
juice. Then he flicked his tongue up towards her clit, it felt large and she
shuddered at his touch. Plunging his tongue back into her pussy he did the
same again. Pussy, clit, pussy, clit, until she started to push against his
face.
Putting his arms under her thighs, he brought them round to hold her hips
and pull her towards him. The fingers of his right hand pulled gently on her
mons, causing her clit hood to stretch upwards and expose her clit fully.
Starting a steady rhythm, it wasn't long before Debbie was really working
her hips towards him, but with his arms round her thighs he never deviated
from his task.
Debbie could feel the heat rising in her, a ball of tension rising, until
she could bear it no longer. Her thighs started to tremble, and then her
whole body as wave after wave of pleasure raced through her. Her orgasm must
have lasted a minute or so and then Steve moved away from her clit. His
tongue just running gently up and down her pussy lips, pleasurable, but
allowing the orgasm to subside. Her breathing started to recover slightly
when Steve moved back to her clit and once again she surged towards orgasm.
She lost count of how many times he did this, 4,5,6 times perhaps more, but
finally she could take no more. 'I need a little rest', she gasped.
Sliding back up her body their mouth met and this time it was Debbie's turn
to taste her herself on Steve's tongue. As they kissed she felt her hard
throb of his cock against her thigh and reached down to stroke it. Running
her hand up and down it long length, her desire began to burn again and she
parted her thighs. Steve positioned himself between them and she guided the
tip of the cock to her waiting pussy. With one smooth motion, Steve's cock
sank deep inside her, filling her totally and making her gasp as she felt so
stretched.
He held himself deep inside her for few moments, allowing her to adjust to
his size, as he continued to kiss her and caress her breasts. He started to
move gently, long slow strokes that took him about three quarters of the way
out, before sliding fully back in. Debbie's pussy felt velvet soft and yet
slick at the same time, he wanted to enjoy the sensations as she gently
writhed beneath him. With a little twist of his hips he caused the motion to
be slightly circular ensuring that her clit benefited from his shaft sliding
against it. Her pussy started to tighten, he could feel it gripping wit each
stroke, time to change rhythm if he wanted last. Pushing deep, he felt the
head of his cock up against her womb, stretching her pussy, while his pubis
nudged against her clit.
Debbie felt the change in tempo and the extra 'fullness' intensified the
sensation riding through her body. Raising her legs round his back, she
pulled Steve deep into her and wrapped her arms round his shoulders. Right
now she was oblivious to anything except the eight inches deep inside her. A
hot rush swept through her and her body began to shake as she cried out in
pleasure. 'Oh that's it! Fuck me harder. Fuck me! Oh god! I'm cumming! Oh!
Ooh! Ooooh!'
His balls slapping hard against her ass, Steve kept up the short, deep, hard
strokes as she held him tight and cried out beneath him. He loved the
sensation of knowing her was almost powerless below him, his cock having
taken over her completely.
Slowing slightly, he turned them onto their sides and continued to slide
gently in and out, as Debbie came down slightly from her orgasmic haze. The
change in position shifted the pressure on his cock and he was able to
switch to longer, slow strokes as he caressed her breasts. Every so often he
could feel her pussy start to tighten slightly and he would push deep into
her pussy feeling the heat of her juices around his cock, before going back
to the slow strokes with only about half of his cock inside her.
Finally when he felt she could bear the teasing no longer, he rolled her
back on to her back and drove deep inside her. Gasping, Debbie drew her legs
back round him and gripped him hard with her arms as his cock pounded into
her. The teasing build up had left her on the edge and she exploded with the
most power sensations racing through her. 'Ooh! Ooh! Ooooh! Fuck Me! Fuck me
hard! Don't stop!, she cried out as her pussy clamped tight around his cock.
His balls tightened a hot rush along his shaft and Steve shot spurt after
spurt deep inside her. The hot sensation insider her triggering yet another
shattering orgasm.
They lay there panting, shuddering with after shocks and completely
satisfied, neither having the energy to speak for a moment. Then finally
Debbie said, 'Your coffee's gone cold, shall I make another?'
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