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            Breaking Maria
            (C)opyright 2001 by Richard Bissell
            Free redistribution permitted,
            no commercial use without authorization.
             
            ---
             
             
            10.
             
            I had Becky feed Kristen some normal food and went to check on 
            Maria. She was as I had left her, insensible and limp.  I extracted 
            the needles one by one and disposed of them, then let her down from 
            the rack.  She collapsed on the floor, and I figured it was time to 
            let her rest.  I dragged her over to the bulkhead and chained her up 
            again.
             
            I poked at her abdomen.  Her bladder was swollen but not dangerously 
            so. She could hold it in for a while longer.  I left her there and 
            went back upstairs.
             
            Kristen, after asking my permission, took a nap in one of the other 
            staterooms.  Becky went back to sunbathing, and I returned to the 
            bridge.  I stayed there until I saw Maria start to stir on the 
            monitor. 
             
            I called for Becky.  She appeared a moment later.
             
            "Yes, Master?"
             
            "Get Kristen.  Meet me in the main stateroom."
             
            "Yes, Master."
             
            I went below and removed my clothes.  When Becky appeared with 
            Kristen, the younger girl lost a step in surprise when she saw I was 
            naked.  Her eyes dropped to the floor.  Both of them knelt before 
            me.
             
            "Kristen."
             
            "Yes, Master?"
             
            "You're probably feeling rather sweaty and gross right now, aren't 
            you?" 
             
            She squirmed for a moment.
             
            "Yes, Master."
             
            "We're going to do a repeat of this morning, only I'm going to have 
            Maria clean you up as you both did for Becky.  That means I need to 
            get you ready.  Lie on the bed."
             
            She jumped to her feet and scurried toward the bed, lying on her 
            back. I motioned to Becky.  She moved to the end of the bed and 
            crawled between Kristen's legs.  Kristen just lay still and closed 
            her eyes. 
             
            For a few minutes, Becky expertly warmed Kristen up, flicking her 
            tongue all over the other girl's swollen pussy.  Kristen began to 
            moan and writhe in arousal, and I watched her big tits rolling 
            gently on her chest.
             
            I snapped my fingers, and Becky stopped instantly.  Kristen looked 
            up at us.  Becky came to me and took me in her mouth.  She brought 
            me quickly to erection and then withdrew.
             
            Kristen watched nervously as I approached, but lay open for me.  I 
            climbed onto her body and slipped into her with a single movement. 
            Becky had done an excellent job, and Kristen's pussy was warm and 
            very wet, with the taut tension of youth.  I fucked her smoothly but
            strongly, and she was soon moaning and gripping my arms.  I bent to 
            suckle her full breasts, and the combination of pain and pleasure 
            pushed her to the brink.  I drove the last bit of myself into her, 
            grinding down, and that was enough to knock her over.  She came 
            deeply and quietly, shuddering under me.  I luxuriated in the tight 
            vibrations of her eighteen-year-old pussy, and a moment later 
            spurted off deeply into her body.
             
            "Get Maria," I grunted to Becky.  She leapt to her feet and dashed 
            out into the passageway.  I stayed inside Kristen until I heard her
            returning.
             
            I looked behind myself, seeing Becky dragging Maria into the room.  
            She dragged her right up to the bed.
             
            I withdrew from Kristen and grabbed Maria's collar, pulling her up 
            to where I had been.
             
            "Clean her up.  Start with her pussy but give her a full-body tongue 
            bath like you did with Becky."
             
            She let out a sound that was half sob and half something else, but 
            she complied.  She bent to Kristen's freshly fucked pussy and began 
            lapping up my sperm.  I dropped into a chair next to the bed to 
            watch.
             
            "Kristen has been promoted," I said to her.  "She's advanced to sex 
            slave status.  You, on the other hand, are still nothing but our 
            toy, and right now you're nothing but Kristen's bidet.  If you clean 
            her up right, I'll let you piss.  Otherwise, you'll get the TENS 
            unit again." 
             
            Maria moaned, pushing her face deeper into Kristen's pussy, licking 
            her frantically.  Kristen moaned as well, though for a different 
            reason. Her back arched at what Maria was doing, and her hands 
            gripped at the sheets.  I said nothing else, wanting to see how this 
            came out.
             
            Kristen came, and came again before she finally pushed Maria away 
            from her pussy.  Maria then began bathing Kristen with her tongue, 
            clearly trying to do a thorough job.  I sent Becky for some water, 
            which I tossed to Maria.
             
            When Kristen rolled over, sticking her butt in Maria's face, Maria 
            didn't hesitate.  She dove in, licking and slurping at Kristen's 
            ass. Kristen buried her face in the pillow and shuddered.
             
            I motioned Becky over and had her suck me gently while I watched the 
            two of them.  Finally, after about half an hour, Maria had licked 
            every inch of Kristen's body thoroughly.
             
            "All right," I said.  "That's enough."  Maria withdrew from Kristen, 
            looking at me in anticipation.  I smiled at Kristen.
             
            "It's your call, Kristen.  Was that good enough?"
             
            Maria gasped at her friend, eyes pleading.  But Kristen turned back 
            to me, and took a deep breath.
             
            "No, Master.  It wasn't."
             
            Maria let out a wail of despair, sobbing and collapsing to the bed.  
            I couldn't help laughing, and I motioned for Kristen to come over to 
            me. She scurried over and knelt beside Becky.  I caressed her head, 
            and she smiled up at me mischievously.
             
            Before Maria could recover herself enough to resist, I rose and 
            bound her wrists behind her back.  With Becky and Kristen following, 
            I dragged her back to the dungeon.  She remained completely limp the 
            entire trip. 
             
             
            She stayed limp as the three of us set her up for the next torture I 
            had planned.  I began by attaching another chain to her wrists and 
            lifting her into the air.  She struggled to her feet, though she had 
            to rise up to her tiptoes.  Becky blindfolded her, and I attached a 
            chain to each nipple ring.  I pulled the chains taut until Maria's 
            tits were standing out in sharp points and she was whimpering in 
            pain, then I attached the chains to the bulkhead.
             
            With her thus restrained, I set up the next part.
             
            I found an enema bag in the workbench and sent Kristen above to fill 
            it up.  I took the biggest dildo in my collection, twelve inches 
            long and three inches thick, and forced it into Maria's battered 
            pussy.  She whimpered and tried to avoid me, but she had nowhere to 
            go.  Kristen returned with the enema bag, and I suspended it from 
            the overhead.  I shoved the nozzle into her ass.  Before opening the 
            nozzle valve, I squirted a few drops of concentrated chili pepper 
            extract into the enema bag.
             
            As Maria's bowels filled with chili-laced water, I slid the crossbar 
            between her legs and mounted it back on the wall.  I positioned it 
            just high enough to let her support herself on her toes.  The last 
            thing I did was fetch the TENS unit.  This time, I connected it to a 
            pressure plate under Maria's feet.
             
            "Lift your feet," I told her.  She didn't move at first, and I 
            reached up and jerked her clit ring.  She cried out in pain and 
            lifted her feet. The act left her essentially balanced on the huge 
            dildo inside her pussy, and she whimpered as it burrowed further 
            into her.
             
            I slid the plate under her feet, and connected the TENS unit leads 
            to her nipple rings.  Maria squirmed on the crossbar as long as she 
            could, but eventually dropped her feet, thinking to lift herself up 
            a little. 
             
            As soon as her toes hit the pressure plate, the TENS unit sent a 
            jolt through her nipples.  She cried out, lifting her feet, and 
            jerking backwards on the crossbar.  Of course, that just drove the 
            dildo deeper into her and further tortured her stretched-out 
            nipples.
             
            With everything else she had to deal with, she hadn't realized what 
            I had done to the enema water, but at last the chili extract began 
            to bite at her innards.  She began to moan and squirm, but there was 
            nothing at all she could do to escape that torture.  All it did was 
            keep her from being able to sit still and forced her to constantly 
            switch from shocking her nipples and torturing her distended pussy.
             
            "Wow," Kristen said quietly as she took all this in.
             
            "You told me she wasn't good enough for you," I said smiling. 
             
            She just nodded, looking down.  "Yes, Master."
             
            I reached over and caressed her lovely tits.  She stood perfectly 
            still and let me.
             
            ---
             
            11.
             
            We left Maria like that for about an hour, although by five minutes 
            into it, she had gone catatonic again, eyes rolled back in her head, 
            body jerking and shuddering.  I sent Becky and Kristen upstairs to 
            do what they liked and sat there watching her.
             
            When the enema bag was empty, I plugged her up with an inflatable 
            butt plug to hold it all in.  Her abdomen was bloated and swollen 
            now, so much that she looked about three months pregnant.  Her legs 
            had gone limp so that the TENS unit was delivering continual shocks 
            to her nipples.  I finally just disconnected the pressure plate and 
            hooked it directly to her nipple rings.
             
            Eventually, though, I got bored with this and took down the 
            crossbar. She hung there like a dead body.  I disconnected 
            everything and dragged her up to the main deck.  Becky and Kristen 
            were sitting in the sun quietly.
             
            "Here's our little pain slut."
             
            I dropped her on the deck and went down to the fantail to get a 
            bucket of seawater.  She was where I left her when I returned, and I 
            tossed the cold water over her.
             
            She coughed and began to stir, squirming on the deck.  Her wrists 
            were still bound, and there was little she could do.
             
            "Get up, slut."
             
            She rose unsteadily to her feet, moaning at the water and piss 
            bulging in her guts.
             
            "I'm going to give you a choice," I said.  "I'll let you empty 
            either your bladder or your bowels into that bucket.  But if you 
            spill a single drop, you'll have to drink back up whatever it is you 
            get rid of." 
             
            Kristen went pale at those words.  Becky sat where she was,
            expressionless.  Maria shuddered before me and began to cry.
             
            "The offer expires in ten seconds, after which you can wait a few 
            more hours before I decide what to do with you."
             
            She dropped to her knees, sobbing.
             
            "Piss.  I have to piss so bad."
             
            I kicked the bucket over to her, pushing it upright and into place 
            between her knees with my foot.
             
            "Remember what I said about being neat."
             
            I reached down and opened the valve.  The piss shot out of her in a 
            torrent, and she gasped in relief.  It went on for almost two 
            minutes, and she tried very hard not to spill anything.  
            Unfortunately, her legs were too weak, and when the boat rolled over 
            a swell at one point, her aim went wide and a spray of piss hit the 
            deck.  She cried out in despair when it happened and began crying 
            again.
             
            When she was done, I closed the valve and picked up the bucket of 
            piss. There looked to be close to a liter of it.
             
            Maria cringed before me, not looking up.
             
            "Clean up that mess you made.  Now."
             
            She bent forward and rapidly licked up her piss, obviously trying to 
            change my mind with her enthusiasm.  She kept licking long after the 
            deck was clean.
             
            I sent Becky into the galley for a empty plastic water bottle.  When 
            she returned, I opened the bottle and poured Maria's piss into it.  
            I was right; it was almost exactly a liter.  Maria watched me in 
            horror, slowly shaking her head.
             
            I held the bottle in front of her.
             
            "We can play lets make a deal again, if you like," I said.  "The 
            piss, or some other torture I can think up."
             
            Her eyes went wide, and she stared me desperately, searching for 
            some clue about which choice to make.  Finally she let out a sob and 
            sagged forward.
             
            "The torture.  Not the piss.  Anything but that."
             
            "All right.  Get up."
             
            She staggered to her feet and I freed her wrists.
             
            "I'm not satisfied with your clean-up job, so I want you to mop the 
            entire deck out here, bow to stern.  Becky will show you what to 
            do." 
             
            I went inside and up to the deck, taking Kristen with me.  I sat in 
            the captain's chair and directed her to suck my cock while I watched 
            Maria and Becky.  Becky led her to the sea locker off the fantail, 
            where the mops and cleaning chemicals were stored.  Maria was soon 
            swabbing the deck like any good slave.
             
            Of course, there was more to this than she realized.  A few hours 
            out there would have her badly sunburned, in addition to further 
            churning up her chili-infused bowels.  I was quite interested in 
            seeing how long she lasted.
             
            Becky came up to the bridge, and I had her make me a drink.  Kristen 
            continued fellating me for about fifteen minutes, until it became 
            clear she was tiring.  I had Becky take over, and she managed to 
            keep me on edge for almost half an hour.  I finally came when I saw 
            Maria drop to the deck in exhaustion, clutching at her agonized 
            belly.  As soon as I had recovered, I sent Becky out there with a 
            whip to give Maria a few motivational lashes across her butt.
             
            Maria finished after about two hours, as the sun was starting to 
            set. Becky dragged her up to the bridge, sweaty, sunburned, and dead 
            tired. She collapsed on the deck in front of me.
             
            "Are you thirsty?"
             
            She whimpered.  I handed her the bottle I'd been carrying around all 
            afternoon.  She grabbed it and began gulping down the contents 
            before she realized what I had given her.
             
            It was, of course, the bottle of piss.  She choked on it after a few 
            gulps but somehow managed to avoid coughing and spraying it all over 
            everything.  She forced down the last swallow and set the bottle 
            down in front of her.  Then she began sobbing inconsolably.
             
            "Becky, take this slut to the head.  She has five minutes to empty 
            her bowels and clean her disgusting self up.  Then she is to present 
            herself to me on the fantail."
             
            "Yes, Master."
             
            Becky dragged Maria's limp form below.
             
            "Master?" Kristen whimpered.
             
            "Yes?"
             
            "How much longer are you going to torture her?"
             
            "As long as she wants me to."
             
            She looked up at me, confused.
             
            "She . . . how do you know she wants you to?"
             
            "When you've been doing this as long as I have, you can tell.  She 
            doesn't know it herself, but this is what she wants."
             
            I stood up.
             
            "Let's go."
             
            ---
             
            12.
             
            We regrouped on the stern.  The sun was setting dead aft of us, and 
            the sky above roiled with tones of fiery orange and blood red.
             
            Kristen knelt in the corner along the gunwale.  She watched in mute 
            horror as I lifted the anchor out of the dinghy strapped to the 
            stern. I uncoiled the rope tied to the anchor chain and began 
            knotting a hangman's noose out of the loose end.
             
            Becky appeared with Maria in a few minutes and pushed her to the 
            deck in front of me.  Maria came up to her knees and looked up.  It 
            took a moment or two to realize what I was holding, and her eyes 
            bulged in their sockets.
             
            "You have disappointed and disgusted me from the moment you set foot 
            on this ship," I said.  "I held out some hope that I could mold you 
            into a decent slave, but you have failed me time and again."
             
            She began slowly shaking her head in disbelief.
             
            "Unlike your friend Kristen, who has rapidly grasped what I wanted 
            and what her role must be, you have blundered along, resisting me at 
            every turn.  Kristen may well make an excellent slave.  You, on the 
            other hand, have become a liability."
             
            I tightened the noose around her neck, and she began to wail in 
            terror. 
             
            "Do you have anything to say before I dispose of your worthless 
            carcass?"
             
            "No!  Oh, God, please, I'll do anything!  Please, tell me what I'm 
            supposed to do!  I want to be your slave!  I'll do anything, I 
            swear!" 
             
            "You had your chance.  I'm sorry."
             
            I reached for the anchor and picked it up.  Kristen, who thought she 
            understood what I was doing, went white in shock.  Maria wailed in 
            despair, lurching forward on her knees, trying to get closer to me 
            to change my mind somehow.  Her wrists were still bound, and she 
            could do nothing but wriggle and squirm.
             
            I pitched the anchor over the stern.  It splashed into the foaming 
            wake about ten yard behind the boat and plunged down into the sea.  
            The chain, then the rope, shot after it.  Maria screamed, struggling 
            for some purchase on the deck to keep from going over, but the 
            weight of it dragged her toward the aft gunwale.
             
            Just before she was pulled over the side, I stomped my foot down on 
            the rope, stopping it.  In truth, the anchor only weighed about 
            fifteen pounds, and Maria could easily have saved herself had she 
            remained calm. 
             
            She lay at my feet, eyes the size of baseballs almost, face 
            contorted in stark terror.
             
            "You have one more chance.  Submit to me, completely, totally, and 
            without reservation, now and forever after, or I'll lift my foot and 
            let you go."
             
            She sobbed, gasping for breath.
             
            "Yes!  Oh, God yes!  Anything!  Just please don't kill me!" 
             
            I bent down for the rope and began hauling the anchor back in.  
            Maria lay in a heap before me, dazed and motionless.  I removed the 
            noose from her neck, coiled up the rope, and placed it back in the 
            dinghy.
             
            I went over to Kristen, who was still rigid in shock, and patted her 
            on the head.
             
            "It was a game," I said softly.  "I wasn't going to let her go."  
            She relaxed slowly and sagged against the gunwale.
             
            I pulled Maria to her feet.
             
            "All right.  Here are the terms.  Since I can't take you out of your 
            father's house and I still don't trust you, I'm going to turn you 
            over to Kristen.  She's going to be your Mistress when I'm not 
            around.  I trust her, and you are to obey her as if she were me.  
            Otherwise, you have just become a non-person whose sole function in 
            life is as my sex toy.  Is that understood?"
             
            "Yes," she gasped, "yes, Master."
             
            That was it, the moment I knew she was mine.  The look in her eyes 
            said it all.
             
            ---
             
            We got to Bermuda about a day later.  Becky and Kristen went ashore 
            to go shopping and sightseeing, Maria stayed on board with me.  I 
            had spent the intervening time expanding her collection of 
            piercings, so she was in no shape to shop anyway.
             
            I began by giving her a pair of tongue studs, one on the tip for 
            added stimulation during pussy-eating, the other further back for 
            stimulation during cock-sucking.  I gave her six labial rings, three 
            through each side.  By attaching a chain to her clit ring and 
            running it through her labial rings and back to the clit ring, I 
            could close up her pussy when I wasn't using it.  To her clit ring, 
            I also attached a custom-made tag about a centimeter long.  It was 
            made from 18k gold and Becky had gotten it from a jewelry store in 
            George Town after I sent her ashore with the necessary instructions. 
             Etched on it, in tiny letters, were the words "Property of Nicholas 
            S."
             
            The navel ring was an afterthought, but after I put it in, I decided 
            to run another chain from it to each of her nipple rings.  That gave 
            me another idea, and though it took some doing, I put in another set 
            of nipple rings behind the first, and ran another chain from each of 
            the new rings and around her neck to hold up her tits.  Her breasts 
            were small and firm enough that she didn't really need a bra, so I 
            told her that she was to henceforth wear the chains instead of any 
            undergarments. 
             
             
            After all that, she really was in sad shape, so I let her rest for a 
            couple of days to recover.  By then, we were on our way home.  Maria 
            spent the trip in the dungeon; I spent in bed fucking Becky and 
            Kristen or watching them fuck each other.
             
            The night before we got back, Kristen and I went over her 
            instructions for handling Maria in my absence.  During the 
            conversation, I discovered that Maria had been quite a bitch toward 
            her friend over the past few years, and Kristen was looking forward 
            to paying her back.  She also went out of her way to assure me that 
            she wanted to continue on as my slave, as long as I understood her 
            relatively low pain threshold.  Since I was more interested in using 
            her to torment Maria, I had no problem with it.
             
            We pulled into the Boat Basin on Sunday afternoon.  Maria limped off 
            the boat, still mute from her tongue piercings, but I knew from the 
            broken look in her eyes that she was mine for good.  She would be 
            back, and she would take anything I wanted to do to her.  Kristen 
            hitched a dog leash to Maria's collar and led her out of the marina 
            and back to their car. 
             
            I stood on the deck with Becky and watched them go.
             
            "Quite a trip," I said.
             
            "Yes, Master," she said.  "Quite a trip."
             
             
            THE END
             
             
            ---
             
             
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