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Date: Thu, 15 Jul 2004 15:48:45 -0400
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Hello all,
This is my first attempt at writing erotica. Could you do me the favor of
reading my first draft of the first two chapters of my new book. All
comments welcomed!
Enjoy!
Family Vacation
Chapter 1 - The Arrival
We were the last to arrive at the condo. My sister-in-law, Melissa, and her
two kids, Jack & Jenny were already there waiting to go to the beach. My
girlfriend Marie and her kids, Andy & Ella, were just happy to be off the
plane! Little did I know how much fun this Florida vacation was going to be.
I had been dreading going for a long time. We were supposed to share two
condos between three families! Marie's mom would be there, along with some
cousin I'd never met. Melissa and her husband Brian were okay to hang out
with, but they didn't drink. Besides, listening to Melissa's voice was like
fingernails on a chalk board!
On the plus side, Melissa was looking especially hot today. She was wearing
her bikini top and a pair of ruthlessly tight shorts. The outline of her
thong bikini bottom was visible for everyone to see. She has the kind of ass
that makes you want to spank her every time you see her. Melissa has the
classic bubble butt that sticks out and tempts every man who has a
heartbeat.
Melissa recently turned 40 years old, but she is looking more and more
fuckable every day. Her 14 year old daughter, Jenny, is another story
altogether. Jenny is a huge flirt. She didn't care that I was 43 with a beer
belly and with gray in my goatee. She constantly flaunted her tiny little
body that was just now beginning to bloom.
Jenny had her bikini on, showing off her A-cup boobs, her round, firm ass,
and her taut, rippling stomach. Her long, curly, blonde hair was flowing
over her soft, tan shoulders. She had it pulled over her tits bringing that
much more attention to them. She came over to give me a hug and it was all I
could do to keep my huge erection from pressing against her hips.
I think she could feel it because she gave me this sly grin after she
released her hug. She said, "Jim, let's go to the beach!" I told her, "Just
a minute, Jenny, let me go change." Melissa, Marie and her kids were on
their way out the door to the beach. Jack & Jenny waited for me.
Jack was Jenny's older brother. He just turned 16 and he drives all the
girls wild. He works out every day and his body shows it. There's not an
ounce of fat on him, and he loves walking around without a shirt. He was
wearing baggy swimming trunks, so it was hard to tell what he was "packing."
He was sitting there playing video games when I came in.
I went into our bedroom and started changing into my swimming trunks. My
hard-on had subsided a little, but not completely. Just as I dropped my
underwear onto the floor, Jenny walked in! I thought I locked the door, but
I must have forgotten. "Jim! I'm sorry, I thought you were in the other
room," She said with a surprised look on her face. "Don't worry about it
Jenny," I told her. I stood there, half-heartedly trying to cover up by
holding my trunks in front of me when I realized Jenny wasn't about to leave
the room.
I dropped my trunks to give her a full view of my now rock hard cock. She
locked the door as she subconsciously licked her lips. "I always wondered if
your cock was as beautiful as I imagined it to be," she said. "Jenny, you're
so young. How many cocks have you seen?" "Just in pictures on the internet,"
she replied. "Would you like a closer look," I asked?
Jenny came over to me and knelt down on her knees. With trembling hands she
got a grip on my throbbing member. "It's so hot, she cried, "and I can feel
your heartbeat in it!" She slowly ran her soft hands up and down the shaft,
admiring my cock. It was like she found a new toy and couldn't believe her
luck
"Kiss it, Jenny" I ordered. "Ewwww, you want me to kiss it," she asked? "It'
s okay, I told her, "just a little kiss right there on the tip." "I don't
know, she objected, "I don't want to get into trouble!" "I promise you no
one will know," I assured her. "Besides, don't you want to know how good it
tastes," I asked? She reached her head closer and puckered for her kiss. Her
big blue eyes were like saucers as she alternated from looking up at me and
down to the prize in her hands. Her lips gently touched the tip of my cock,
now dripping with pre-cum. I could see the trail of my pre-cum from my cock
to her lips as she pulled away. She licked her lips to taste it. "Gosh, Jim,
I didn't know it could taste this good!"
"Put it in your mouth and suck it like a lolly pop, Jenny." She opened her
young mouth and did as she was told without hesitation. I shuddered as I
felt the warmth of her young mouth on my shaft. She must have liked it
because she started moaning. The vibration of her moan felt so good against
the head of my cock. She started sucking and moaning and moving her head
back and forth like a champ. I grabbed the back of her head and took a
handful of her hair to help her. She never let up, sucking harder and
harder.
I could feel my juices beginning to well up in my balls. "Play with my
balls, Jenny," I instructed. She reached up with her young hands and began
caressing my full balls. She was so gentle, afraid to squeeze too hard. "Is
this how you like it, Jim," she asked? I was in heaven as I looked down at
that sweet face with my cock dangling only an inch away from her lips. My
cock was covered with her spit and her lips were now glistening with a
mixture of saliva and pre-cum. She still held my balls in her hand as she
asked her question so innocently. "Yes, Jenny, you're doing great," I
encouraged her. As I looked down at her young face, I could see my cock
throbbing and pulsing and dancing in front of her.
Could I really shoot my load down the throat of my 14-year old niece? Should
I stop her and try to protect her innocence a little longer? All she wanted
to do was please her favorite uncle, and besides, she was such a little
tease it was time to make her come through! Even so, I found myself saying,
"Jess, maybe we should stop . . ." She interrupted me by opening her mouth
and jamming my cock in as far as it would go. She held the head at the back
of her throat and started swallowing. Her tongue was massaging the head of
my cock in a way I've never felt before. It was like my cock was inside a
warm, wet vacuum as she just kept sucking and sucking.
Watching those red lips enveloping my shaft and feeling her tongue vibrating
on the underside of my head had me on the verge of ecstasy. I grabbed the
back of her head and held onto a lock of her blonde hair pulling her closer.
I couldn't hold back any longer and shot the biggest stream of cum I've ever
felt in my life. Jenny started choking but kept swallowing. I could see my
sperm begin dripping out the corners of her mouth. Her swallowing made me
cum even more until finally, I collapsed onto the bed. "God, Jenny, how'd
you learn to do that?"
"I'll never tell," was her vague response. Hmmm, could it be my innocent
little niece wasn't as innocent as she seemed?
Chapter 2 - Little Girl Lost
"You blew me better than anyone! How did you learn to do that? You're only
14, for Christ sake!"
"Well . . .," she began as she licked the remains of my massive orgasm off
the corners of her mouth. She licked her chin and I was in awe as I watched
her glorious tongue stretching down that far. "I've had some 'training' by
one of the best," she finally answered.
"Who!? Who would train someone as young as you? When did you start giving
head?"
"I can't say, but you know her pretty well. She's been training me since I
got my braces off last year. She's a great teacher, just ask Jack!"
"What?!? Jack's only 16! Who's been corrupting you two?"
"I can't tell you now, but you'll find out soon enough. Now let's go to the
beach!"
"Wait, just one more question. Are you still a virgin, or has your 'trainer'
taught you that too?"
"No, I'm still a virgin. For now . . ." she said with a wink.
"Good! Now let's get to the beach before Marie and your mom wonder where we
are."
I quickly threw on my swimming trunks. Jenny never took her bikini off so
she headed out the door to get Jack. He was still playing his video game and
was oblivious to what we just finished doing. The three of us walked to the
beach together. My mind was racing and my legs were like jelly. I was still
in shock over the blowjob my niece just gave me.
Jenny is actually Marie's niece. Marie and I live together with her two
kids. I consider her my niece because she's Marie's sister, MeMelissa's,
daughter. When I first met Marie two years ago, Jenny was a little girl in
braces and pigtails. She always liked sitting on my lap, but I had no idea
at the time how much she liked it! I always felt a little guilty having this
little 12 year old girl sitting on my lap.
It seemed innocent enough at the time, but now that I think about it, she
always had her ass pressed against my lap. She didn't sit sideways on my
thighs like some girls do. No, she would grind her ass into my crotch until
she felt my hardening manhood pressed between her ass cheeks. Then she'd
settle in by leaning back against my chest. She would constantly flirt with
me. I think she was competing against Marie for my affections.
Jenny was our babysitter when Marie and I started dating. I always got a big
hug from her when I came to pick Marie up for our date. For the first six
months or so, Marie would take Jenny home after our date while I waited at
home with her sleeping kids. When Marie came home, we would have some of the
best sex of my life. Sometimes it was because I was imagining being with
other women while we fucked. I imagined being with her sister Melissa, a
step-sister Angie, another step-sister Kristi, three of the hottest women in
Marie's family.
Don't get me wrong, Marie's hotter than all of them. When she's naked and on
her knees as I'm about to enter from behind, I have to pause and admire her
porno quality ass. If her ass was on the cover of an adult video, it would
be a million seller! I even make her kneel in front of a mirror while she's
giving me head just so I can see her ass and pussy.
I didn't start imagining being with Jenny until she got her braces off and
suddenly sprouted boobs. All of a sudden, she became this virginal sex pot I
just had to have! It was at this time that I began volunteering to take her
home from babysitting Marie's kids. She almost always wears shorts in the
summer, so I had a hard time keeping my eyes on the road instead of her tan
legs. I always tried to 'accidentally' brush up against her left leg as I
shifted into 5th gear in my Miata.
Every time I took Jenny home, I came back to Marie's to fuck the shit out of
her. All I could think of as I was drilling her was Jenny's tight, virgin
pussy. Little did I know how soon I'd be experiencing just that. Yes, Uncle
Jim is going to take Jenny's virginity, as soon as I can figure out how to
get everyone out of the house!