Path: not-for-mail
From: Ernest <deadly@nospam.netspace.net.au>
Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.d
Subject: Re: {ASSD} Self-spotlight, and comment Ed's new Life by E bywater
Date: Fri, 27 Jul 2007 10:51:43 +1000
Organization: is a lost cause
Lines: 1489
Message-ID: <t3fia31plup0cs71u7c67ncsou30s98ac6@4ax.com>
References: <pk1ha3tt32vafa7pcv9c493bnnvbjgft5v@4ax.com> <1185490815.739412.117090@r34g2000hsd.googlegroups.com>
Reply-To: deadly@nospam.netspace.net.au
NNTP-Posting-Host: 220-253-125-17.dialup.netspace.net.au
Mime-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
X-Trace: otis.netspace.net.au 1185497501 29154 220.253.125.17 (27 Jul 2007 00:51:41 GMT)
X-Complaints-To: usenet@otis.netspace.net.au
NNTP-Posting-Date: Fri, 27 Jul 2007 00:51:41 +0000 (UTC)
X-Newsreader: Forte Agent 1.92/32.572
Bytes: 73934
===================
On Thu, 26 Jul 2007 16:00:15 -0700, Bette <bettebates@comcast.net>
wrote:
>On Jul 26, 7:46 am, Ernest <dea...@nospam.netspace.net.au> wrote:
>> Yes, I've recently posted this same 11 pages on ASS, with info about a
>> commercial website. But I've not included that here, as I'm seeking
>> comments here, not clients. I'm doing this due to some recent
>> discussions in another thread.
>>
>> ED'S NEW LIFE
>>
>> by E. Bywater
>
>Seeing Marie's shocked expression, I ask what's wrong. Marie
>replies ...
>
>Ernest, don't do this to me. And ... ?
>I like your plotting, and your characters jump out because you
>make them ALIVE.
>So, you've got me panting. Now what are you gonna say?
>Thanks.
>Bettelicious
Got you panting, but that's wrong, you should be depanting by now.
NB: since depanting means to remove one's pants, panting must nean to
put them on.
I'm sorry I can't post the whole story here as I have it with a
commercial publisher, all 111,220 words of it. However, I do have
their permission to post some snippets to encourage people. I haven't
put the publisher's web site here, as I get the impression (from other
posts) that's not a nice thing to do. Since the publisher has had it
up for three months and only sold two copies (one electronic and one
printed) I thought I might ask here if people liked my style.
Here's a couple of other snippets just for you Bette.
But first the characters, as described in the story's start. And yes,
I leave a lot of the details out, so you can put on ones that match
your favourite fantasy faces, etc.
Quotes start
----------------
DRAMATIS PERSONAE
Dave
Male, age 39, 1.80 m tall, slim build, dark hair, craggy looks.
Single, quiet, intelligent, and loyal. Interests: games and books.
Policeman.
Dad (Howard)
Male, age 41, 1.70 m tall, heavy build, light brown hair, average
looks. Quiet, and intelligent. Interests: family, and books. Marie's
father. Salesman.
Ed (Edward)
Male, age 48, 1.75 m tall, solid build, fair hair, average looks.
Single, retiring, smart, loyal, a leader. Keeps his word to friends
and enemies. Interests: ten-pin bowling, and computers. Working since
15 (when orphaned) in varied jobs, retrenched two years ago.
Independently wealthy, doesn't show it.
Harry (Harold)
Male, age 20, 1.80 m tall, solid build, blond hair, classical looks.
Intelligent, unassuming, easily led. Interests: medicine, and girls.
3rd year medical student, scholarship. Devoted to sister Sandra.
Janey's boyfriend, met through classmate Perc.
Janey
Female, age 19, 1.65 m tall, slight build (32B-22-30), light brown
hair, pixie looks. Smart, quiet, and shy. Interests: movies, and
clothes. Marie's classmate. Parents are successful. Inherited wealth.
Perc's sister.
Jehra
Female, age 20, 1.65 m tall, slight build, (30C-24-26), dark hair,
olive complexion, pretty, and athletic. Very shy, and quiet, Sarai's
sister. Leather worker.
Jock
Male, late twenties. 1.90 m tall, medium build, dark hair, average
looks. Smart, and submissive. Interests: BDSM, leather work, clothing,
and the Internet. Owns leather goods, and BDSM shop.
Judy
Female, age 16, only child. 1.80 m tall, medium build (36D-26-32),
very light brown hair, average looks. Learning challenged, shy,
unassuming, no self image, no self confidence. No interests.
Lisa
Female, late twenties, 1.80 m tall, solid build - statuesque
(40DD-28-30), red hair, pretty. Smart with a good sense of humour.
Policewoman. Interests: domination, BDSM, and girls. Cousin of Lucie.
Lucie
Female, age 18 1/2, 1.75 m tall, medium build (36C-28-34), blonder
hair, average looks. Shy, intelligent, and unassuming. Interests: bike
riding, computers, and cooking. Classmate of Marie.
Manae
Female, age 33, 1.65 m tall, plump build, (42DD-30-36), dark hair,
olive complexion, pretty. Very shy, and quiet. Indian heritage.
Shutra's wife, younger sister of Gumbo's (a useless piece).
Marie
Female, age 18, only child. 1.80 m tall, medium build (36D-26-32),
light red hair, very cute with freckles, and looks younger than she
is, devastating dimples. Very intelligent, shy, unassuming, and
self-assured. Interests: bike riding, and ten-pin bowling. Attends a
church owned school.
Melody
Female, age 36, 1.60 m tall, slight build (34B-24-30), brown hair.
Smart, quiet, and assertive. Interests: soapies.
Mom (Annabelle)
Female, age 39, 1.80 m tall, statuesque build (40D-28-36), brown hair.
Smart, and assertive. Interests: family, and work. Marie's mother.
Nerra
Female, age 28, 1.70 m tall, plump build (42DD-34-38), dark hair,
olive complexion, pretty. Shy, slightly submissive. Sarai's sister,
widowed. Doctor.
Perc (Percival) aka Toy
Male, age 2, 1.6 m tall, slight build, dark hair, average looks.
Smart, domineering, arrogant, bully. Interests: girls, sex, and the
Internet. 3rd year medical student. Janey's brother, and Sandra's
boyfriend. Inherited wealth.
Petra
Female, age 14, 1.50 m tall, average build (28B-20-24), honey blond
hair, pixie looks. Smart and self assured, orphan.
Purra
Female, age 21, 1.60 m tall, solid build (38D-30-34), dark hair, olive
complexion, pretty. Shy, and submissive. Indian heritage. Sarai's
sister. Computer technician.
Sandra
Female, age 18 1/2, 1.65 m tall, medium build (34C-26-34), honey blond
hair, pretty face. Very shy and easily led. Interests: clothes and
music. Classmate of Marie and her best friend.
Sarai
Female, age 23, 1.65 m tall, plump build - Junoesque (40DD-32-38),
dark hair, olive complexion, pretty. Shy, submissive. Indian heritage.
Accountant, pizza waitress.
Shutra
Male, age 54, 1.60 m tall, slim build, dark hair, average looks, olive
complexion. Married (2nd wife), quiet, unassuming, loyal, and hard
worker. Indian heritage. Sarai's father. Gardener.
Therai
Female, age 25, 1.65 m tall, plump build (40DD-34-38), dark hair,
olive complexion, pretty. Shy, slightly submissive, Sarai's sister,
engaged. Seamstress, and clothes maker.
------------
FRIDAY 10th May
(note -I snipped a bit here)
Morning Tasks
Marie and Harry get the rest of the tablets from Perc's car and I lock
them in the study safe. I tell Perc he won't need them, and if he ever
makes more, he'll end up wishing he can kill himself - he blanches.
Getting out mom's Tarago, I hustle everyone into it and lock up.
We go first to Sandra's house, where she and Harry change, getting
clothes for the weekend. While I tell their parents where they'll be.
We do the same at Janey and Perc's house. And over to Lucie's house.
Telling everyone to stay in the car, I go up and knock on the door.
Her mother opens the door and I ask to speak to Lucie. She explains
Lucie isn't feeling well, in bed sick. I ask if I can go up and see
her. She says no. I ask if I can come in and speak to her for a few
minutes, to convince her to let me talk to Lucie. She's very hesitant,
but agrees, showing me into their lounge room and calling her husband
into the room.
This is clearly a hostile situation. I introduce myself, and say "I
don't know Lucie, but I know some of her classmates. They've noticed
she's become withdrawn and depressed of late They're concerned for
her. Last night, I found out the reason for this behaviour." Lucie's
parents look shocked, concerned, and worried. I say "I can do
something about the people blackmailing Lucie." By their worried
looks, I'm not sure that's the priority issue now.
They looked stunned, saying "Blackmailing Lucie."
I reply "Yes."
Her father says "Yesterday, she found out she's pregnant. We're afraid
of what the parishioners will think."
Angrily, I snap "You should be more concerned about how Lucie feels,
and how Heavenly Father will feel about how you treat your daughter,
than what any snotty nosed parishioners think."
Her mother smiles, saying "I think you better talk to Lucie. You may
be able to help her after all."
I say "I agree, but you best sit in on it, and be prepared to be very
shocked." Her face loses all expression.
We go upstairs to Lucie's bedroom. Entering, I say "Hello." She sits
there looking like she's dead.
I say "Lucie, honey, I know you know you don't know me, sheesh what a
statement. But you bloody well better start talking to me. You're in
deep shit, and I've the only handy dandy shit shoveler in town." She
turns and stares at me. I look at her mother, saying, with concern,
"Shock therapy's needed. I'll be back."
Going downstairs, I go to the van, bringing Marie and Janey to the
room. Lucie looks frightened and starts to snarl at Janey, her mother
becomes frightened.
I say "Lucie, honey, things have changed a lot in the last 24 hours.
There's a way out for you, but I can't help you until you talk to me."
Lucie just looks at me. Turning to Janey, I say "Toy, strip naked."
Tonelessly, Janey says "Yes master." She removes her clothes. Lucie's
mother is shocked, Lucie smiles. This gets her mother's attention,
it's the first smile they've seen in many weeks.
Turning to Lucie, I say "Janey made a very big mistake last night. She
tried to do to Marie, what she did to you. I stopped her, and I'm now
in a position to help you."
Lucie looks at me, and emotionlessly says "Yes, you can help with some
things, but not the most important. I'm pregnant, and the church gets
really down on people in my situation."
I say "That's one attitude I can't understand. The most well known
unmarried pregnant woman in history is Mary, mother of Jesus. The RC
church venerate her and vilify everyone else in the same situation."
This causes shocked looks on all their faces. Lucie's mother laughs,
saying "You're right, it's absurd when looked at like that."
I ask Lucie if there's anyone she loves enough to consider marrying.
Sighing, she says "Yes, but he's not available to me. Even though I am
fairly sure it's his child I carry."
Shocked, her mother says "Fairly sure."
Turning to her, I say "I told you to be prepared to be shocked,
Lucie's been badly used against her will."
Contritely, her mother says "Oh, sorry to interrupt."
I tell Lucie to name her love. She looks at us, saying flatly "Harry."
Happily, I reply "Well that's better than that total arsehole Perc.
After what he did to you, will you still have Harry as your man and
husband if you can?"
Lucie's eyes light up, hopefully, she says "Yes, oh yes please. But
he's Janey's and under Perc's control."
I gently reply "Not any more. He's in reconditioning by me."
Lucie sits up and smiles, hopefully saying "You mean.., are you
sure... oh what if..." I tell Janey to dress.
Smiling, I say "Marie, my love, will you please get toy Harry for me."
Both Lucie and her mother look surprised as Marie says "Yes dear."
Lucie's mother looks at me, saying "You and Marie?"
Joyfully, I say "Yes, she seduced me last night, and with any luck,
we'll soon have to get married. And no, I didn't put up much of a
fight - I'm not that crazy." Lucie, her mother, and Janey laugh.
I say "Janey, speak truth and your own feelings, in answer to these
questions. Do you love Harry, will you stand between him and Lucie?"
Janey says "No and no. Until this morning I didn't know what love is,
or was, but I do now. I love being your sex toy and slave. Lucie is
free to have Harry if she wants him."
Both Lucie and her mother look at Janey with stunned expressions. I
tell Janey to return to the car. I inform Lucie I've the recordings
Perc and Janey made. She needn't fear them any more. Lucie says she's
glad not to have to fear the videos being distributed. Marie returns
with Harry.
I say "Toy Harry, have you every loved anyone in your life, outside of
your family, and is there anyone that you love or like a lot now?"
He replies "I used to think that I loved Janey, but I now know that
was only lust. I like Lucie a lot, but I don't know if you'd call it
love, as I don't know what love is."
I say "Harry, this morning you had an opportunity to cease being my
slave, why didn't you take it?"
He says "Last night, after you caught us, I'd time to think about what
we'd been doing. I realised I wasn't only screwing up my life, but
Sandra's, Lucie's, and almost anyone else I came in contact with. If I
can't manage myself properly, then maybe I should let someone else do
it, and you were there, ready to do it."
Turning to Lucie, I say "At the moment, Harry is more screwed up than
you are. He did it to himself and doesn't know what he did, or how.
You have an advantage, you know who screwed your life and how. Thus,
you can sort it out. Harry needs to be dominated and controlled, do
you think you can do it?"
Smiling, Lucie replies "Yes, I think, no, I know I can."
I tell Marie to close and lock the door, I tell Lucie and her mother
not to yell or scream about what's about to happen. They both look at
me with worried expressions. I say "Harry, suck my cock." He drops to
his knees, undoes my pants, takes out my dick, and sucks on it. He
stops, when I say "Stop, stand up." Putting my dick away, I say "Lucie
do you now understand the level of control and domination I mean?"
Stunned, she says "Yes, yes I can, and will do it."
I've Harry pulls his dick out, and Lucie hand him some tissues. I say
"Lucie there are two very special commands you need to be aware of, as
they have an immediate effect on Harry, they're," Harry looks at me in
horror, Lucie and her mother look concerned, "Cum five." He moans as
he orgasms. I wait a moment and say "And cum cake." Harry moans with
another orgasm. Both Lucie and her mother are shocked. I say "Harry
has no control over these reactions. I've programmed them into him.
Harry put your dick away."
She smiles, and coldly says "Well, I can live with them, and he better
learn to live with them, and me."
Harry looks at me with surprise. I say "Harry, with what you and Perc
have done to Lucie, she's pregnant. She's loved you for some time and
wants you as her slave husband. Well, I'm giving you to her, you're
now Lucie's slave, and you must obey her in all things from this
moment, do you understand?"
He smiles, saying "Yes, I do, Lucie'll be much better than you."
Turning to Lucie, he says "Mistress Lucie, how may I serve you?"
Coolly, with a smile, she says "How ever I tell you to. First you're
never to having anything to do with Perc or Janey again, without my
prior permission. From now on, you'll remember I'm your mistress in
all things and address me as darling. Do you understand?"
Harry says "Yes darling, I understand perfectly".
Lucie snaps "Suck his cock." Harry drops to his knees, draws out my
dick and sucks it. Happily, she says "Stop, put it away." He does as
he's told, staying on his knees until he's told to stand.
Lucie turns to her mother and happily says "Mom, I'm feeling a whole
lot better. I think we all should go and speak to the priest about our
wedding. What do you think about that Harry?"
He says "I think that's the most perfect thing to do, my darling."
Turning to Lucie, I hand her $500, saying "This was Harry's, I don't
let slaves handle money until I feel I can trust them to do so
wisely." She smiles as she takes it, Harry sees it's more than he
gave, he keeps quiet.
Smiling, Lucie gets up to get dressed. Marie and I turn, leaving the
room. Lucie's mother joins us, shaking her head. There's a nice family
photo on the wall opposite the door, with a familiar face - Lisa's.
As we go downstairs, Lucie's mother says, wonderingly, "Even seeing
that, I find it hard to believe." She yells "George, Lucie's now much
better and we need to talk to the priest about a wedding."
Lucie's father shoots into the hall from the kitchen and looks at me.
Hearing a noise, he looks up the stairs at a bright and cheerful Lucie
fairly bouncing down the stairs with Harry in tow.
Turning back to me in awe, he says "Hell, that's a sudden change, can
you fix stopped drains just as quick?"
Laughing, I say "I'm no good on the mundane things. I only handle
miraculous medical recoveries and similar small matters." They laugh,
we leave.
Busy Afternoon
It's noon, we go to the local McDonald's for lunch. On the way, I
inform everybody of Harry's change of owner and the wedding. Sandra
and Janey are happy for Lucie. Perc isn't sure where that leaves him.
I say he can take himself in hand. The girls have a good laugh. At
Maccas, we run into Lisa and her new work partner having lunch. Her
shift is changed due to the complaint business.
Smiling, I say "If you want to keep tabs on us, you can always go
plain clothes and travel with us. A monokini is acceptable."
She laughs, asking what happened to Harry. I say "Some weeks back, he
had forcible sex with a girl. She didn't report it as she's in love
with him. She's turned up pregnant and still loves him. I gave him to
her as a slave husband. Now I'm down to three sex toys and a beautiful
fiancé. I wouldn't mind giving Perc away if I get a reasonable offer,
interested?" She laughs, saying she'd let me know.
After lunch, we go to a shopping mall, and I've a ball spending some
of Perc's donated money on new sexy clothes for the girls. They model
everything for me, love the ladies underwear. I'd no idea you can get
so many styles of bras, or so small, or so see through. Bought Marie
an engagement ring with my own money. This last item causes her to
make certain promises for the night. If she keeps them all, I may not
be alive in the morning - but what a way to go. We're leaving the mall
at 5.10 pm, when we run into Lisa, wearing a lovely lightweight mini
dress, great legs. She grabs me by the arm and hustled me off to the
side.
She snarls "Alright smart arse, what's the deal?"
I respond "What's up your nose?"
Angrily, she replies "I get off shift and go to see my mom. I find her
sister sitting there with her family, telling us how my favourite
cousin, Lucie, is marrying your missing toy. What's the real deal?"
I respond "Answer my questions, then consider if you want to ask that
question. Did you talk to Lucie, and is she happy with the
arrangements?"
Slowly, she replies "Yes I did, and she's over the moon about getting
married and having his baby."
Softly, I say "If she's happy, what's your beef?"
Lisa replies "I want to know what sort of arsehole she's marrying."
Sighing, I reply "Lisa, if I told you about a crime, would you feel
obliged to report it, even if a police investigation will cause more
harm than the crime itself?" She looks at me dumbfounded for a moment.
Quietly, I say "Do you put the law ahead of justice?"
Querulously, she responds "What do you mean?"
Calmly, I reply "Let's talk about a hypothetical situation, OK."
Sarcastically, she says "Yeah a hypothetical situation - so you can
retain deniability."
I reply "Just so. Mr Arsewipe dominates and controls his sister and
her boyfriend. He knows of a girl who loves his sister's boyfriend,
and knows the boyfriend thinks the girl's hot. He organises for her to
visit his sister and has his sister slip a drug into the girl's drink,
it makes her a zombie. Mr Arsewipe gets his jollies by filming the
girl losing her virginity to his sister's boyfriend, he forces him to
fuck her every way possible. The girl and his sister do the girl /
girl routine. Back to being fucked by the boyfriend. Over the weekend,
the boyfriend deposits about 50 litres of sperm in her. A few weeks
later, he tries the same stunt on another girl, it backfires. He, his
sister, and her boyfriend, end up as sex slaves to someone else.
Abused girl doesn't report it because she loves the guy who fucked
her. When she gets pregnant, she finds out instead of being a pariah
and possibly kill herself, she can have the boy she loves as her very
obedient slave husband. If the matter is reported to the police, the
boy goes to prison, she gets no husband and probably kills herself.
Make your choice officer, the law says send him to prison. Justice
says make him care for her and make her happy. I know which I'd do,
and I did it. You can undo that if you want."
Lisa stares at me, saying "Shit, shit, shit, shit, what a bastard."
Voice dripping with venom, I say "Yes it is, hip deep and smelly. But
the victim's happy and has everything she ever wanted. Who gives a
damn about the rest. Except, maybe, someone close to the family who
knows the full story and can encourage the boy to 'not wander'? Maybe
someone who's strong and in a family portrait in the hall of the
girl's home?"
Lisa stops and stares at me, saying "You knew of the connection,
that's why you spoke at lunch?"
I reply "I knew there was a connection, but not what. And yes, I want
you to monitor the situation. But for heaven's sake, say nothing to
anyone else, and leave them be. Lucie deserves to be happy, and she is
now."
Lisa walks around in circles for awhile, and snarls "OK, but I want Mr
Arsewipe, baaad - you got me?"
I say "You can have him, but not in court, as that matter may come
up."
Angrily, she replies "OK, but I want him."
I smirk, saying "OK, I did offer, but you refused."
She stops and stares at me, turns, looks at Perc. An evil grin crosses
her face, as she icily says "Can I reconsider the offer?"
Laughing, I say "Let's talk price."
Worriedly, Lisa says "How much and of what?"
Smiling, I reply "Depends on what you intend to do with him, and how
much of yourself you're offering."
She stops, giving me a stunned look, saying "What?"
Smirking, I say "You heard me. Whatever we arrange includes time for
you with me and the girls. I also need to know your intentions, as I
can't countenance any permanent physical harm."
Smiling, Lisa licks her lips, saying "As long as it includes the
girls. Let's get dinner and discuss this."
With a laugh, I say "I thought you might appreciate the girls." We
agree to meet at a nearby Pizza Hut for dinner, Perc's shout.
Friday Munchies
Once there, we get a large table in a back corner and order our food.
I explain "Lucie is Lisa's favourite cousin and she knows everything."
Perc goes very white and looks at Lisa, to find her watching him. I
say "Lisa and I are negotiating her purchase of Perc as her sex slave
toy. She wants to punish him for what he did to Lucie." Perc suddenly
looks very green and groans. He stands up, turning to walk away. I
say, in a cold voice, "Toy, sit down."
He stops, turns back with a very frightened look, and sits down.
Trembling, he softly says "Yes, master."
Coldly, I say "Toy, because of what you did to Lucie and tried to do
to Marie, you gave up all rights as a civilised member of this
society. You exist, so you still have a place in society. The only
thing you're suited for is a slave and toy for a master or mistress.
That you'll be, make no mistake about it, do you understand?"
Emotionlessly, he responds "Yes master."
I say "Good, I've no intention of allowing you to be permanently
damaged or extremely harmed in a physical manner. Psychologically is
another matter, as you need to be re-educated and retrained. The price
and limitations on your treatment are what we're negotiating. These
discussions will affect you, but you have no part in them, you're my
property at this time - understand?"
He meekly replies "Yes master, sorry master."
Marie looks worried, I reach out and take her hand in mine, giving it
a gentle squeeze. Quietly, saying "He intended and tried to badly hurt
the person I love more than life itself. Don't expect me to treat him
gently." She smiles weakly and nods. I look at Lisa and snap "OK, out
with it. What're your favourite sexual practices, and what've you in
mind for Toy?"
Lisa's stunned at the sudden switch, takes a deep breath, saying "OK,
I really like girls and accept some boys." This brings smiles from the
girls, she sees them and grins herself. "Regarding Mr Arsewipe, I'd
intended to flog him to death." Perc goes very white and green at the
same time - an interesting trick. "But I'm prepared to accept any
reasonable limitations, provided I do get to use my whips on him. I'm
into BDSM as a dominatrix. I want to see him hurt for hurting Lucie."
I say "I'm sure we can work something out. We need some compensation,
I was just starting to get Toy nicely trained. I'm teaching him how to
get the girls a nice hot breakfast, and next was oral sex lessons. Oh,
he's been learning cock sucking, but isn't an expert yet. As you saw,
he's already responsive to commands."
The waitress had walked up with our drinks at the point I mentioned
compensation. She's looking at us with an odd expression as she hands
out the drinks. She takes orders for more drinks and goes for them.
"We'll also be giving up watching him suffer for his actions. What he
did to Lucie is almost as bad as what he did to Sandra, his girlfriend
until last night, and his sister Janey." Perc is now looking at me
with a shocked expression, but makes no effort to leave.
Coolly, Lisa says "So, it's worse than I thought."
I say "Correct. Limitations on Toy's treatment. Nothing that'll cause
permanent physical harm or damage or death. No deliberate broken
bones, I accept accidents do happen. No severe lash marks or burns
that'll not heal within two days. No bruises larger than the size of
your spread hand, except on his arse, maximum bruised area at any one
time, the equivalent of his arse. No piercing, no bruising of the
genitals. No tattoos, stickers are OK. No public transvestite
activities unless he asks for them." Lisa looks at me strange.
The waitress returns with the extra drinks as I say "I thought you
might get a kick out of having Toy do your housework whilst wearing
one of those sexy French maid outfits with crotchless knickers and his
dick hanging out." Perc goes a nice shade of emerald, the waitress is
looking a bit red faced and licking her lips.
Lisa says "Oh, you're so kinky, I'd never of thought of that, and I
absolutely love it."
I reply "I thought you might. I aim to make his punishment more mental
and emotional than physical. I think it'll have a more lasting effect.
If you have, or have access to, a good dungeon, we'd like to watch
some of his whippings etc and offer some suggestions. Prior to
yesterday, he was used to being in command and having everything his
own way. But, as you can see, is now obedient. Toy loves anal sex with
girls, but doesn't like being the recipient. Nor does he like sucking
cocks, but now readily performs such duties. He still cries when doing
things he doesn't like. Also, he loves watching girls with each other,
but is upset when stopped from joining in. He's to have sex with
someone or something each week. And you may wish to invite Lucie to
some training sessions."
I look up at the waitress, she'd been standing beside the table for
sometime longer than needed. In a no nonsense tone, I say "Write down
your name, address, phone number, date of birth, the time you finish
work today, and give it to me, now." She blushes nicely, does it,
handing me the paper. She goes to check on our pizzas. Her name's
Sarai. Everyone but Perc is smiling and watching Sarai walk away. Not
a fashion model stunner, but pretty, with an olive complexion and a
Junoesque build - nicely padded without being fat.
I write out the trigger phrases on a piece of paper and give it to
Lisa, saying "These two phrases will make him orgasm, regardless of
his wishes."
Lisa smiles, saying "That's nice to know. I know a few gay and
bisexual guys who'll be happy to help me play with Toy, as well as a
few girls. I'm not happy with some of those restrictions, but can, and
will, live with them. Now the price."
I turn to Sandra and Janey saying "Well, you two have suffered the
most and are giving up the most. What do you suggest as a price."
Sandra smiles, saying "Well, it has to include getting to watch some
of his dungeon sessions and occasionally borrowing him and his maid
outfit to do some housework." Everyone but Perc smiles.
Janey says, coldly, "I have to watch him sucking the cock of, and
being fucked by Houdini, our family's Great Dane." We all raise our
eyebrows, Perc jumps up and races for the toilet, we hear him throwing
up. With a grim expression, Janey says "That's what he made me do when
he used me to test the tablets. I just have to see that before I can
put closure on that part of my life."
We all look at Janey, as I coldly say "Well, it's a must, and will be
done. You've no objects do you Lisa?" She shakes her head no. Marie
has nothing to add. We sit and wait in silence for a few minutes.
Perc emerges from the toilet and heads for the door. I call out
softly, but coldly "Toy." He races back to the toilet, throwing up
again. Entering the toilet, I icily, say "Toy, you're very, very lucky
I didn't know about Janey and Houdini before I agreed to the sale." He
looks at me from the corner of he eyes, head still over the toilet
bowl. In a voice as cold as liquid nitrogen, I say "I've agreed to the
sale, I'm committed to giving Lisa a healthy toy. Something I can't do
if I do what I'd now like to do." He blanches further, something I
wouldn't have thought possible. "Now stand up, flush the toilet, and
rinse your mouth out with water. Get used to the idea of an evening
with Houdini as his bitch. Be grateful it's not going to be a lifetime
as his bitch." Ashen faced, Perc does as he's told. We walk out of the
toilet, back to the table, and sit down. We sit in silence for about
five minutes.
Sarai arrives with the first pizza, I tell Lisa to sit on Janey's lap.
A leg either side of her chair, and kiss her as if Janey is a mistress
she's trying hard to please. Sarai's eyes go wide, everybody else just
looks at me. Stunned, Lisa says "Whaaat? What! Oh, what the hell."
She sits astride Janey's lap, causing her skirt to ride up enough to
show her panty covered crotch, and kisses her, locking lips for about
two minutes. Sarai just stands there, staring at them kissing, as the
rest of us share out the pizza. When they break, both gasp for air. I
look at Lisa, smile, and say "Sandra's turn." With a wide smile, Lisa
readily jumps up from Janey's lap, hikes her skirt around her waist
out of the way, and sits astride Sandra. Going into instant lip lock.
Sarai looks at them, looks at me, turns, and goes to the kitchen for
another of our pizzas. Marie and Janey are grinning widely. Sarai
delivers our second pizza and is returning with the third, when Lisa
breaks from her kiss with Sandra. She immediately stands up and sits
on Marie's lap. Laughing, I say "I see you understand the game." While
Marie and Lisa lock lips, Sarai delivers two more pizzas. Oddly, she's
bringing them out one at a time, instead of two or three at once. I
think she's enjoying the show. Sarai delivers the last pizza as Lisa
and Marie break. I say "Lisa, now thank Sarai for delivering our
pizzas." Sarai looks surprised, but quickly enters into the spirit of
the game. Stepping forward, she takes Lisa into her arms and kisses
her. A few minutes later, they break the kiss, Sarai is smiling, she
has a nice smile.
Lisa looks at me, sits astride my lap and opens her mouth. As our lips
touch, her tongue's in my mouth, starting a dance for domination of
the kiss. I slide my tongue to the side and deep into her mouth, so
our tongues pass each other. Her eyes open wide at my avoidance of the
tongue fight. I slip my left hand up to her neck and gently rub along
the top of her spine. My right hand is gently rubbing up and down her
spine in the middle back, while pushing her into my body. Our bodies
rub against each other. Lisa's eyes go wider as she relaxes her
assault on my mouth, and our tongues settle into a dance of pleasure.
They intertwine, moving back and forth between out mouths, as if one
cavern to play in. Breathing through my nose, I keep the kiss going
until Lisa breaks it, gasping for air.
She leans back, smiles, saying "Whooo, now I KNOW I've been kissed."
Causing the girls to laugh and applaud, drawing us looks from the rest
of the dinners.
I drop my hands down to Lisa's buttocks, giving them a squeeze.
Affectionately, I say "You better get back to your seat, eat the pizza
while it's hot, and you better fix your skirt." Lisa looks at her
skirt, pulling it down. But not before I notice a large damp section
on the front of her panties.
Giggling, Marie hands me a slice of pizza saying "You better eat this
slice, that kiss just burnt the pizza on your plate to a crisp."
Dutifully, I take the pizza slice, saying "Yes my darling." Marie
laughs at the private joke from Lucie's.
Everyone but Perc is smiling. He's picking at the pizza slice in front
of him. I say "Toy, Lisa is now your mistress, you must obey her in
all things, fail in this, cause her trouble, or try to run away, and
you'll revert to me. I strongly doubt you want that to happen?"
Perc stares at me, gulps, nods his head, and turns to Lisa, saying
softly "Mistress, how may I serve you?"
Lisa smiles coldly, saying "By giving me instant and immediate
obedience in all things."
Perc nods his head, saying quietly "Yes mistress."
I signal Sarai over, to order more drinks, Lisa looks at me. She says
"Aren't we missing part of the price, I thought we've to make
arrangements for sexual services by me to you."
I reply "No, I don't indulge in sex for pay, or pay for things with
sex, that's too personal for crass transactions. The kissing was the
personal part of Toy's price."
Sarai arrives as Lisa says "I thought that was getting to know you
fun. I don't want things to end there. Can we please make time for
some more interesting and intimate arrangements?"
Laughing, I give Sarai the extra drinks order and reply "I see no
reasons why friends can't get together for mutual fun and pleasure, do
you Sarai?" I look up at her and she blushes.
She's very pretty, when she blushes. Quietly, she says "No reason why
not."
Smiling, I say "Good, are you free to spend the rest of the night with
us if we take you with us when your shift finishes at 7.30 pm?"
Sighing, Sarai says "Yes, once I call my father and let him know I
won't be home tonight. I'm not rostered on again until Monday night."
Smiling, I reply "By all means, call you father. Also, let him know
we'll be calling round so you can get changed and pick up some
clothes, to stay with us for the weekend."
Sarai blushes, meekly saying "Yes master." This elicits a few looks
from the girls and some smiles, but no comments. I grin at them.
She leaves, I say "Didn't you lot notice the way she's been listening
in and watching us?" They shake their heads no. I say "I think she's a
natural submissive and wants a man who can be both her master and her
lover without being excessively controlling. Add in, nearly every
conversation she's listened to relates to how I'd trained Toy and I'm
providing him to Mistress Lisa. Making it clear everyone at the table
is subservient to Lisa and I, but we're all happy and having fun. When
I order Lisa about, she acknowledges my authority and right to command
her. This only settles the matter of my mastership for her. I'm sure
she's seen many cases of women subservient to men, where the women
have suffered. She sees me here with three female slaves and a female
who is subservient to me, but has a man as her slave, given to her by
me. You're all happy and enjoying yourselves with personal freedoms.
Paradise for a female submissive. Naturally she'll opt in if she can,
and sees me as her new master." Looking at Marie, I humorously say
"The only question now is, will my boss let me keep her? Please,
pretty please, she followed me home and has no where else to go."
Marie laughs, saying "Only if it is sharsies."
Indignantly, I reply "Naturally, what's yours is yours, and what's
mine is yours, we're a partnership now - two that are as one."
Marie smiles and leans against my right shoulder, saying "Hmmm,
heaven."
I put my right arm around her and fondle her breast, as I fed us both
pizza with my left hand. Saying, with a sigh, "Hmmm, heaven." All the
girls laugh heartily.
Signage
A smiling Lisa looks at her watch, gets out her mobile phone and dials
a number, saying "Hi Jock, have you shut up shop yet <pause> you have,
damn. <pause> Oh I wanted a couple of slave collars, yeah a nice big
black, studded one for a tall male, with a name plate saying 'TOY -
property of Lisa' on a nice chrome plate. And three nice light brown
chamois ones, with Sandra, Janey, and Sarai etched in them, can do?
<pause> When can I have them? <pause> Oh, I just started dinner at the
Pizza Hut near your store. <pause> OK." She looks at me and says, with
a smile, "He's just closing shop, but will drop them around in 40
minutes."
I reply "Thank you, but you needn't have done that."
She says "I want to make a clear statement re Toy, and want to get
some friends some nice gifts. Jock does lovely leather gear. You
should see, no you will see, the beautiful dom outfit he designed and
made for me. For years, he's been after me to get a permanent personal
slave - I think he wants the spot." We laugh.
Jock arrives at 7.05 pm, looking like a 2 m tall cross between Easy
Rider heavy leather and Madam Lash, not my style, but suits him. With
a concerned look, Sarai watches him walk towards our table. He must've
looked like her worst nightmare.
He approaches Lisa, drops to one knee, holding out his hands with the
collars in them, saying "Great Queen, here are the things you wanted
of me, how else may I serve you?"
Sarai visibly relaxes. Lisa takes the collars from him, stands, and
hands me the three chamois ones. She turns to Perc, saying "Toy, stand
up, turn around, and accept my badge of ownership."
Perc does as he's told, calmly saying "Yes mistress."
Lisa reaches over his head with the collar between her hands, pulls it
back around his neck, and does up the lock, placing the key in her
purse. The collar is jet black thick leather with lots of chrome
studs, it stands 75 mm high where it runs around the sides and back of
the neck. In front, it widens to 150 mm in height and the top slopes
down to accommodate the chin better, making it look more V shaped at
the front. Most of the front is taken up with a large bright chrome
plate with the name 'TOY' in large wide 100 mm tall letters, they take
up most of the plate, and 'property of Lisa' in small letters below
it.
Jock looks upset, so Lisa asks him what's up. He says "I'd thought,
hoped really, you wanted that for me."
Lisa replies, coldly, "If you ever really, really piss me off, I'll
get you a collar like this. But that's the day your shop closes and
you start wishing you can kill yourself." Jock and Toy go white.
Icily, she says "Toy is getting this collar to become my permanent
slave, because" pointing at me "HE wont let me flog Toy to death as I
want to." Jock and Toy go even whiter, Toy with a distinct touch of
green. In a warmer tone, she says "Jock, I like you too much to make
you a permanent slave. To me, permanent means just that, forever."
He says "Oh, sorry I thought..."
Kindly, Lisa says "I know what you thought. If you wish, I'm prepared
to accept you as my live in head slave and senior servant."
Smiling, I quickly say "Jock, I'd accept that if I were you. I doubt
you'll ever get a better offer."
Smiling, he replies "I know. I am. What are your wishes mistress?"
Lisa smiles, saying "I think we need to see if your quarters will be
acceptable for us all. Come Jock, Toy, time we were leaving."
Lisa leads them out of the restaurant, saying to me, "May we call upon
you tomorrow?"
With a smile in my voice, I say "Yes, anytime after 9 am."
I look at the collars in my hand. They're 50 mm wide bands of soft,
light tan coloured chamois, with 'slave' and the name carved out in 25
mm high letters. Once in place, you can read the person's name, their
skin shows through the letters. Picking up the one reading 'slave
Sandra,' I walk behind Sandra, reach over her head, and drew the
collar around her neck, doing up the buckle. I lean over, kiss her,
and fondle her breasts. I do the same for Janey, with the collar
saying 'slave Janey'. As I return to my seat, I see, from a distance
of 1.5 metres, the collars look like little leather scarfs and the
words aren't readable, very discreet.
Marie says they look very nice, and is upset she doesn't have one. I
say "You can't have one saying you're a slave, you're my partner. I'll
see what we can do about something similar, that's more appropriate."
She smiles. It's 7.20 pm, so I tell the girls to make a toilet run
while I pay the bill. When they come out, I go to the toilet. By the
time I'm ready to leave, Sarai's signing off. When she reaches us, I
show her the new collars Janey and Sandra are wearing, and show her
the one with her name, she looks worried by this.
I say "I am taking you as my slave on trial for 48 hours. About this
time Sunday night, I'll ask you if you wish to be my slave on a long
term basis. If you say yes, I'll place this collar on your neck, it'll
stay there and you'll be my slave until such time as I choose to
remove it. If you say no, you'll cease being my slave and I'll throw
the collar away. In such a case, you may still be our friend, but you
may never again be my slave. Do you understand?"
Sarai looks at me wide eyed, and meekly says "Yes master, thank you."
I lean forward and kiss her. Breaking the kiss, I turn, saying it's
time to leave. Marie takes Sarai's hand, we leave the restaurant.
-----------------------
SATURDAY 11th May
Morning Call
The loudly ringing phone wakes me at 8.05 am. Withdrawing my arm from
Sarai, I reach over Marie and pick up the phone, giving Marie a quick
kiss in the process.
Unhappily, I say "Hello."
Marie's father says "What's this about you raping my daughter?"
Marie's awake and hears the question.
I hand her the phone saying "Here darling, it's your father wanting
details on the rape." Sarai's awake and looking at me with a worried
expression. I put my finger to my lips in the 'shush' sign.
Marie says "Yes daddy, it was terrible. He fought like hell, but I
eventually got his clothes off and made him fuck my brains out."
Dead silence from the phone, then "What's that?"
Marie says "Daddy, please don't be stupid and foolish now. I've loved
Ed for a long time, I finally got around to telling him I love him,
want to fuck him, and have his children. When he stopped gasping for
air, I kissed him and let him know his sole choice was to cooperate or
be raped. Being smart, he chose cooperation on the condition I make an
honest man out of him." <pause> "Yes daddy, if we haven't started a
baby yet, and we've been trying real hard, I am sure we will before
you're back. So you may as well accept the inevitable."
Marie hands me the phone, and I hear her mother say "Sorry about that
Ed, but we got a message saying you'd raped Marie, no sender's
information."
I reply "Don't worry about it if you can sort your end out now."
She replies "Yes, I can now. I think the fact you and Marie are
sharing a bed helped a lot."
Laughing, I say "We are, with Sarai, so they both get a chance to have
some rest."
With a laugh, she says "Hmmm, I don't think we have time for that
now."
-----------------------------------
The Mall
Entering the mall, we go for lunch at the food court. The main topic
of conversation is the first shopping stop, the girls chat rather
loudly and I notice quite a few people, both genders, who're taking
time over their meals as they listened in. A number of men seated near
my beauties have trouble when they get up to leave, crotch adjusting
is a bad disease today. I notice one young fellow staring at, and
drooling over, Sarai. I point him out to her. As she looks over at
him, I say he seems to have a real problem with his clothes,
especially in the crotch. She grins and asks permission to help him. I
agree. She goes over and speaks to him, getting his name and number.
She leans over and kisses him. His expression says he's in heaven. She
reaches into his crotch, playing with his dick, he stiffens and goes
limp. As she returns, he stands up and staggers away with a big damp
stain in the front of his pants. She hands me a piece of paper, saying
he seems nice but not really her type, here's his details if we need a
sign writer. Our Sarai is really blossoming, and I'm beginning to
wonder where it'll end. But I can't fault the fellow, she looks
positively scrumptious in a sari.
First stop after lunch, a store specialising in outfitting female
business executives. With the help of the sales staff, we get one
ripper outfit for everyone, and several for Lisa, damn she looks good
in a killer chair of the board outfit. The store's owner asks Lisa,
Marie, Sarai, and Judy, if they'll model for their next catalogue in a
few months. We say we'll give it consideration and take her card.
Next, a Miss Teen fashion shop, I leave Lisa in charge of the group.
Taking Sarai and one of the duty guards, I walk over to a shop
specialising in eastern fashions, a few of the extras join us. Sarai
seems reluctant to enter this shop. When we're inside, one of the
senior sales staff haughtily approaches Sarai.
She says "Well cousin, I hear you left home to be a white man's slut."
I stiffen, and the duty guard says "Please, no corpses, today." I look
at her, smile, nod, and walk over.
I say "My dear Sarai, you need only two or three traditional outfits
suitable to your new station in my household. I think you can limit
the expenditure at this shop to $6,000. If the staff give you any
trouble, we can easily go elsewhere. Oh, you may also get two or three
outfits for those of your relatives who've agreed to join our domestic
work force, make that a limit of $15,000. I'd appreciate your giving
our staff some advice on their choices as well. Please take your time,
I've all the time in the world for you, my dear."
Sarai smiles, saying "Although there are many low quality items
visible, this shop has always had a few high quality items for the
more discerning clients. I think they may suit our purposes. We'll
see." Turning to another member of staff, she says "Sharla here has
good taste and can be trusted to give good advice while showing us the
best stock. Sharla, we've been invited to a major evening diner affair
later this week, can you please show me what you have that's suitable
for such a formal occasion?" Smirking at the supervisor's discomfort,
Sharla dashes into the back room to get some magnificent outfits of
high quality materials. I test the material, saying I'm not sure it's
of appropriate quality, Sharla's shocked. Sarai says "It's suitable,
you shouldn't judge the quality of a lady's outer garment by the
quality of your silk under shorts." This causes Sharla to blush and
Sarai's cousin to storm off in a huff. Sarai asks Sharla to bring out
everything of this quality and better. Sarai selects four beautiful
outfits for herself, each fit for a queen.
When the shop staff are out of earshot, I say to Sarai "Sorry my
darling, I didn't mean to cause you any trouble. I think you handled
that perfectly, and your budget is unlimited. If it goes beyond the
figures stated, as I think it will with top gear, ad lib an argument
to convince me to pay up, and I will. Got it?"
She smiles, saying "Yes master."
Saying "I think I'll also buy some nice cheaper saris for the other
women in the household to wear around the house." Sarai selects two
nice outfits for each of the girls, three for Toy, and three for Jock.
Thoughtful girl, thinking of Jock like that, he really does seem to
like the girls clothing more and more. Six more for her sisters, and
several more nice quality items for the security people with us. She
also chooses a couple for me. Seeing an outfit for a larger breasted
woman of high quality but of more severe colours than the rest of the
outfits on display. She asks Sharla to bring it over and examines it
closely. Turning to me, she says "I think this'll be ideal for Miss
Lisa to wear to her next board meeting. What do you think?"
The shop staff are stunned, this comment indicates Sarai's making
clothing decisions for a very senior female executive. It means she
has a much higher status than they'd been thinking of.
I examine the outfit, saying "Hmmm, you could be right, my dear." I
turn to one of the security extras, saying "I believe Miss Lisa is
still in that shop across the walk. Please go and tell her to come
here." More staff consternation, I'm ordering a senior executive
around. Lisa enters the shop with Toy at her heels carrying some
shopping bags. She walks up to me. I hold out the outfit, saying "My
darling Sarai thinks you'd look good in this outfit as business wear,
put it on so that we may see."
She hands Toy her purse and takes the outfit to the changing room. She
soon emerges, looking like a cross between an Indian goddess and a
Valkyrie - absolutely no nonsense and scrumptious at the same time. By
now, the rest of the gang have joined us. The way they spread out,
makes me suspect they've been briefed. Lisa stops in front of a full
length mirror to admire herself. Smiling, she says "This is just the
most perfect outfit for next week when I'll be representing you at the
board meeting. It tells them 'Yes, I'm woman, but I'm not YOURS.' Oh
Sarai, we're most fortunate you agreed to join us, you've impeccable
taste." All the sales staff agree, it's perfect on Lisa. It would've
been too severe for most women, but right for Lisa.
Sarai says "Good, best get changed back Miss Lisa, as we're yet to pay
for our purchases." Pointing to our plunder. "Everything else is
packed and piled up ready for us to take."
Jock steps forward, saying "I'll take care of that for you, Madam
Sarai." He directs several girls forward to collect the shopping.
Janey steps towards the cashier, saying "Do you wish it all charged to
the household account, Madam Sarai."
Sarai responds without skipping a beat, "Yes, Janey, please do that."
She turns to me, saying "I believe I've gone over the initial budget
allocation. But I'm sure you'll be happy with the results once you see
the household properly outfitted."
I pat her hand, saying "Sarai my dear, I trust your judgment. What
ever you think's right, is perfect for me."
Lisa returns from the change room, everything's paid for and the bags
distributed amongst the girls. Sarai's cousin is dumbfounded. We
leave, Sarai, Lisa, and I walking like we own the world. Toy scuttling
around Lisa like a personal lackey. Jock working as the overseer of
servants on a royal shopping expedition.
We get down the walk and around the corner out of sight before I burst
out laughing. That sets the whole gang off. Janey says "Sarai love, I
don't care how much of our money you spent in there, I didn't even
look at the docket. It's well worth it to see the expression on that
bitch's face when you walked out like the queen of Sheba with a royal
entourage." We all second that and have a good laugh.
We've just settled down and starting to move on, when Sharla races
around the corner. She stops in front of Sarai, saying "I am on my
break, so I can't stop long. I think I'm the only one who saw through
your little game. I know Constable Lisa. But I want to thank you,
we're on commission and the highest cut is for the expensive items you
bought. Usually only brought out by the supervisors. My cut of this
sale is about a third of last year's earnings, thank you all. I also
want to say Sarai, I don't care what gossip those bitches put around,
when you've found friends that rally round and help as these have at
such short notice. You've fallen into honey favoured by the Gods and
are truly blessed." Sarai's crying as she kisses Sharla, thanking her
for bothering to come and talk to her. Sharla dashes off.
We take our plunder to the centre lock up area where you leave your
shopping while you do more. Hit a few more fashion stores where the
gang make a lot of sales staff happy, large sales commissions do that.
They all gang up and force me into a fashionable men's clothing store.
Marie says "You either cooperate and get a new wardrobe of our choice,
or we strip you and do it anyway." I agree and let them outfit me, I
reserve my comments to matters of comfort. Melody realises I'd not
said a thing about styles etc and asks why.
I say "My sense of style and taste in clothes is limited to 'is it
comfortable' and 'can the other buggers see me sneaking up on them.'
That being the case, I think I'm better off letting those with better
fashion sense make the decisions." They all smile and get on with
redressing me, the sales staff here are also very happy with my gang.
When they finish with me, I make them get a few outfits for Toy and
Jock.
We leave the fashion area and go down to the food hall. Sarai directs
us in filling two trolleys of food stuffs. With this organised and
paid for, I ring for the bus. We collect all our plunder together,
ending up with a very full trolley each, and head for the entrance. To
find a grinning Fred with the storage area open, awaiting our plunder.
Even then, we have to put some inside with us. He asks if it's OK to
pick Betty up from work, as she finishes soon. I give approval and
invite them to dinner, he accepts.
---------------------------------------
I look at the time, 9.30 am. Placing Janey on the table, I stand up,
saying all this talk about making love has made me horny, a point
blatantly obvious at the moment, and ask if they'd worked out their
roster on who's supposed to seduce me first today.
Janey says "Simple, Marie gets all the premium sperm loads until she
tests positive."
Marie blushes, so I take her hand and grab Janey's. Dragging them with
me, I say "Well one premium tank load for Marie, and Janey can have
the unleaded refill as appreciation for her efforts on Marie's
behalf." Everyone laughs as we go upstairs.
Getting the Day Under Way?
On the way up the stairs, I slip an arm part way around each girl and
give their bums a gentle squeeze. Moving my hands up to gently squeeze
their breasts. From their wiggles, I think they like it. In the master
bedroom, I move my hands to their backs, undoing their dresses, being
ambidextrous does have its uses. When the zippers are down far enough,
they wriggle to let the dresses fall, and turn to undressing me. Marie
pulls my tee-shirt up, as Janey undoes my pants, and I undo Marie's
bra, I love front clasp bras - one clip and instant access. I must've
been fondling Marie's breasts properly, she smiles and says "Hmmm."
Soon, we're undressed and lying on the bed. Marie in the middle of the
bed, as Janey and I kiss our way down her body. Reaching her breasts,
we give them a thorough kissing, sucking, and licking. Marie has an
orgasm. She says "Two on one is fun, but not fair." Her body quivers
with another, she says "Hmmm, please don't stop." I continue working
her breasts while Janey kisses her way further down. Reaching Marie's
pussy, she sets to. After Marie's fourth orgasm, I tap Janey's head,
she looks up, I say "Janey, please kiss all the way up Marie's body
until she has access to your pussy to return the flavour, err favour."
Both laugh.
Janey starts her slow way up Marie's body, but instead of kissing, as
asked, she extends her tongue into Marie's vagina. Very, very slowly,
she moves up, dragging her tongue out of Marie's vagina, up her pussy,
across her clit, and up her belly one millimetre at a time. Reaching
her breasts, she moves up across the left nipple, sideways to the
right nipple, and up again. Licking up her chin, to her lips and
kissing Marie full on the mouth for some minutes. I'm so engrossed in
watching this travel trick, I sadly neglect Marie for the few minutes
involved. Remembering my responsibilities, I move over to Marie's
right ankle and lick the length of her leg, causing a shiver. This
isn't as easy as it sounds, Janey's lying full length on Marie with
her legs spread and rubbing her body against Marie's. When I look up,
I've the lovely sight of their two pussies together. It looks as if
they were trying to kiss with them as well as their mouths. When Janey
feels my hair tickling both her thighs at once, she breaks the kiss
and kisses her way up Marie's face.
Janey's breasts reach her lips, Marie reaches her arms around her to
stop her and spends a few minutes sucking on her breasts, first the
left, the right, back again, etc. Janey gives a low moan and orgasms.
Marie lets her move upward again, Marie kisses her belly as it moves
by. I can see all this, as I've reached Marie's pussy and start eating
my favourite dessert. From the way Marie shivers, I think she likes
it. Janey reaches a point where Marie has Janey's pussy spread and
licking it as she humps her hips against my face. A few minutes later,
Marie bucks hard with an orgasm. A sort of strangled gurgling sound
comes from the other end as Marie's scream is muffled by Janey's
pussy. Janey's body quivers and she moans loudly.
Janey says "Remind me to take the time to return that favour to you."
Lifting myself from Marie's pussy, I move up the bed more, saying to
Janey "What's up with you?"
She replies "I am very sorry I can't arrange for Marie to scream into
your clit. I'll just have to arrange for her to scream into your dick.
I tell you, it's definitely something else - whoooeeee."
Laughing, I gently push into Marie as I take the opportunity to kiss
Janey's arse, well it's literally right there in my face. Janey jumps
slightly at the contact, before realising what it is. I rest my head
against her arse as I start moving in and out of Marie's pussy. Janey
looks over her shoulder, moves up the bed and gets off it. As she
walks around the bed, I lean down and kiss Marie. Marie just lies
there, giving the occasional quiver and going 'Hmmm'. I strongly
suspect she's pleased with things so far.
I feel Janey's hands caressing my back and hips, they move down my
sides and she caresses Marie's sides. Suddenly, Marie grunts and I
jerk as Janey, the cheeky girl, grasps Marie around the hips, pulling
up and back hard. Changing the angle of entry and causing me to go
deeper into Marie. Marie starts humping faster. I maintain the new
positions and speed up.
Hearing a noise near the door, I look over my shoulder to see Sarai
leaning against the wall at an angle. Her dress is around her waist
with Sandra's face well embedded in her pussy. Melody's standing
beside them playing with her pussy as she points at Sarai's pussy and
whispers something to Judy. I suspect Judy's getting some more pussy
eating instructions.
Feeling movement on the bed, I turn back to find Janey back on the bed
facing me as she spreads her pussy and lowers it onto Marie's face.
Quick on the uptake, Marie starts sucking and licking the offering. I
speed up in response to this erotic scene. Janey leans forward and
kisses me. Our tongues play joyfully with each other as I continue to
pound Marie's velvet love tunnel.
Janey beaks the kiss, smiles, and reaches down to grasps Marie's hips
with both hands. As I start my next forward thrust, she rapidly lifts
Marie's hips at my groin. Our genitals slam together, Marie's body
shakes and convulses as she has an orgasm. Janey quivers as Marie's
muffled scream comes from her groin. Using one hand to keep Marie's
hips in place, Janey pulls the other back to squeeze Marie's clit
between her thumb and forefinger. This triggers a multiple orgasm,
causing Marie to buck wildly. This triggers my own orgasm and I'm
filling her womb with my sperm. This triggers a more violent orgasm
from Marie and she nearly throws us all off the bed. A very audible
sound is heard from the region of Marie's head as she screams her
orgasm into Janey's pussy. Janey jerks about and her eyes glaze over
as her own orgasm washes over her.
I'm still in the warm afterglow of orgasm when I notice Marie seems to
be choking, I try to withdraw but can't. Concerned, I yell to Sarai
and Sandra to pull Janey off Marie. They race over and do so. Marie's
jerking and definitely choking, the actions are also causing her
vagina to clamp on my dick trapping me. I drop flat as best as I can,
hold Marie tight, and roll over onto my back. As soon as I have Marie
above me, a large amount of fluid flows out of her mouth, across me,
and onto the bed. She starts coughing, each cough causes a spasm that
squeezes my dick. Bending my knees and arching my back, I raise
Marie's body up at an angle with her head down most, more fluid flows
out. Sarai slaps Marie hard in the middle of the back, the correct
spot to dislodge an object stuck in the throat. Marie gives up more
fluid, Sarai lifts both our lower bodies as high as she can, causing
more fluid to flow out. Marie soon settles down to light coughs,
nodding her head to indicate she's OK - now. I hold her close and
cuddle her as I cry with relief. Sarai and Sandra lie down beside us
and cuddle us both. Melody and Judy join the mutual cuddle pile up.
Janey's unconscious across the top of the bed. We lie like that for
some time, I fall asleep crying.
Janey's Punishment
I wake to the feeling of being manhandled. Opening one eye, I see
Marie watching me as she directs a nude Sarai and Sandra in dragging
me from the bed. They let go when I start moving of my own accord. I
stand up and would have fallen if Sarai hadn't caught me across her
shoulder. My legs scream with pain as the circulation starts to
return. With Sarai and Sandra taking my weight across their shoulders,
they drag me into the shower. They stand there holding me up while
Judy soaps me up and washes me down with her body. I'm dragged out and
placed on a stool for Marie to dry me while the girls wash each other.
Twenty minutes, and we're all dressed again. My legs still aren't
working right. Sarai supports me as we leave the en suite and head for
the stairs. Passing the spare room, I hear crying and stop. The girls
all look at each other and refuse to look at me. I lurch towards the
closed door, (first time in memory) Sarai sighs,and takes me over. The
door opens to show Janey sitting on the bed weeping while Melody tries
to comfort her.
Sharply, I say "What's up with you?"
Janey turns around, bawls, saying "I nearly killed Marie."
Tartly, I say "Marie step in here and show me the knife or bullet
wound involved."
Softly, Marie says "I've no injuries. But I'm well and truly fucked
and filled with so much of your lovely sperm I can feel it washing
against my back teeth."
Crossly, I say "So what's Janey bullshitting about?"
Morosely, Janey says "Marie nearly choked to death with her mouth and
lungs full of my pussy juices."
Angrily, I say "You planned to kill her this way?"
Indignantly, she replies "Of course not."
I say "Then what the fuck are you going on about, accidents happen. We
now know when sixty nining in a over and under position, both
shouldn't cum at once. I've never heard of this happening before, so
it's not common, but I'd be surprised if this is the first."
Janey says "But it's all my fault, I should be shunned or punished."
Lovingly, I say "Janey, my love, neither Marie or I think you did any
wrong, what happened was one of those things, it wasn't planned or
intended. If you feel you must be punished and can't consider this is
over until you are, we can do that for your peace of mind."
Calmly, Janey says "Yes, please, master."
I send Judy off to find Lisa's big dildo and some ropes. I whisper to
Marie. When Judy returns, I have her give the dildo to Marie, who
stands in front of Janey and rubs KY jelly on the 300 mm (12 inch)
dildo. Janey's eyes are going wide, she can see only one or two uses
for this object. I order Janey to lie on the bed with her legs and
arms outstretched. Judy ties her legs and arms to the corner bed
posts. Grinning evilly, Marie starts sliding the dildo into Janey's
pussy, taking her time, in a bit, out, in a bit more, out, and so on.
Marie's really enjoying herself and takes seven minutes to get the
whole dildo in and strapped into place. Janey doesn't look
comfortable. I ask Janey "Do you feel that's enough punishment?"
Defiantly, she says "No."
I say "All right then, we'll add a new component. You'll stay tied up
like this until you say you feel you've had enough punishment.
Marie'll supervise your punishment, and only Marie can release you. Do
you understand and accept this?"
Contritely, Janey says "Yes I do, but how is this a suitable
punishment for what I did?"
Marie smirks, saying "Cum two, cum two, cum two." Janey has three
convulsive orgasms, she would have enjoyed them a lot more if she'd
not had her legs and arms stretched tight and that huge dildo inside
her. She moans and groans.
Laughing and crying at once, she says "Oh fuck, that was so good and
hurt so much at once, you bastard."
Marie says "No abusing your punishment supervisor, cum two."
Janey's only comment is "Fuuuck." As she shudders with another orgasm.
Smiling, I say "Just let Marie know when you think you've been
punished enough, if she agrees, she'll let you up. If she disagrees,
she'll continue until she's happy. Cum two, cum two." We leave as
Janey bucks and screams her pleasure and pain.
-------------------------------
Breakfast
We reach the dinning room to find the security team sitting down to
cornflakes and juice, they'd arrived at 7.30. They'd started arriving
early last week. It's no charge - they just want time to enjoy a good
breakfast. They inform us zeppelins in a fog will be out soon. We get
stuck into breakfast. Soon after, everyone's finishing breakfast and
it's time for the girls to go to school. They line up to be kissed,
seems the security team like this little exercise too. I assume this
from the enthusiasm they display.
They check guns are loaded and safe before leaving the house, driving
to school in one of the Tarago vans. The gun check is blasé for us but
shocks mom and dad. Mom asks what's going on. I explain about wanting
security coverage for the girls when gorilla started his trouble, and
I decided to keep it on for a while longer after the first brush with
the terrorists. Now, I'm waiting until ASIO give us clearance about
that group. I tell mom and dad I can get extra guards for them and
suggest I do. They say they'll think about it after they got a full
briefing.
Lisa and Jock go to Jock's shop to try and sell the stock out again.
Lisa leaves Toy with Sarai for housework, he has no classes today.
Dave leaves for work. I sit down in the lounge, bringing mom and dad
up to date as Jimbo arrives and starts work. He should finish wiring
the lodge today.
Morning
We have to go shopping. Mom and dad dress casual, the rest wear saris,
including the guard team. What a colourful lot. Sarai dresses me to
match. We take the a van. First stop a jewelery store to get some
jewelery to fit with saris for everyone. Next, the store where we'd
bought our current saris. The bitchy supervisor doesn't recognise us
at first. Sharla has the day off so Sarai chooses one of the other
junior staff and studiously ignores the gossipy senior staff.
We buy some low and top end outfits for mom, dad, Shutra and Manae.
Some middle level outfits for the whole household. A few very high end
ones for Sarai. She surprises me by insisting I get some very high end
outfits. I look at her for a moment, saying "I find the current outfit
quite comfortable."
Sarai replies "My Lord, I realise you don't like to dress as befits
your true status, but there are times you should, and as the head of
your household, it's my duty to see you're properly dressed at such
times. I can't do this if you don't have the proper clothes and don't
let me buy them for you." I concede the point.
She chooses three very lovely outfits and I try them on. Sarai insists
some minor adjustments be made, the shop seamstress does this as we
wait. I try them on again. She makes me keep the last one on. I pay
using my black Amex card, giving the gossips another quiver.
As we turn to leave, the Indian ambassador, his wife and several
others are entering. The ambassador looks us over. One of their
number, who I know as Shamra (he's a very good security type) steps
between me and the ambassador. I slowly raise both hands in a gesture
of peace. Shamra says "So Kartikeya, you still live. I'd heard certain
mutual enemies killed you." The ambassador's walking past, but stops
at this reference to the God of War and watches us.
I reply in a friendly manner "Yes, I live. Those of your people I was
sent to educate, refused to learn and tried to kill me. I showed them
I taught more than one subject. They shook in fear and died as Shiva
walked their camp. I let some live, to tell others about my visit and
teachings. Later, those who trained and armed them, sent many killers
after me, some found me and died. Some killed one of their own and
took the body back claiming it was me - thus they lived. I let the
deception stand. Now, I've returned to my old life." Mom and dad are
wide eyed at this revelation.
Sarai says "My Lord, you're neither Kartikeya, the God of War, or
Shiva, the God of Destruction. You're Rama, the Great Warrior and
Ideal Man, returned to us in human form." While many in the shop are
outraged by this Shutra, Manae, Nerra, Jehra, and Purra nod in
agreement.
Laughing Shamra says "Yes, you're being a reincarnation of Rama makes
so much more sense, there were times I felt you were Saraswathi or
Dharma with a fair bit of Ganesha thrown in. Rama really suits you my
old friend."
I laugh saying "I'm no god, just a man who gets tired after loving."
Melody laughs saying "Yes, tired after loving four or five of us so
much we know we're in heaven and are so tired we can't move for
hours."
Shamra laughs again, and tells me he's now a senior bureaucrat at the
embassy. I give him my current phone number and e-mail address, asking
him to let me know when he has some free time. We can get together to
talk over old times. He says he'll contact me.
I tell him my name and introduce him to my party. He does the same
with his party. I ask the ambassador how his children's charity fund
raising is going. He says they're $30,000 short of the target for the
new medical centre. I pull out my cheque book and write a check for
$50,000 for the charity. I hand it over, saying "It will need some
supplies. Please send the receipt to my business address." As I hand
him my card. He looks pleasantly surprised and thanks me. I say "You
can best thank me by seeing the children got the maximum benefit from
the money." He nods and goes on with his shopping.
With us all properly dressed for the occasion, we go for lunch at the
restaurant where I first met Shutra. It's a splendid meal. The owner
explains he's moved Gumbo and his wife to a one bedroom flat. He put
the excess rent Shutra paid to fixing a few things at the house and
having it cleaned. The remainder is credited to Gumbo's new flat with
the bond being transferred as is. He says what happened to Mahmoud and
his friends leaked to the community. The more troublesome elements now
keep away, the leaked story credits his staff with the deaths. He's
very happy.
---------------------------
end quotes
Now, they should get you depanting yourself.
Regards,
Deadly Ernest
(all typos fault of server or
other gremlins)