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Date: Wed, 16 May 2007 19:26:13 -0700
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It's true for just 9.95 a month, payable in McDonald's gift
certificates. you can have cheerleaders and cops delivered into your
home by our FREE and quick invasive delivery man Harold! Don't delay!
Cheerleaders are standing by!
Don't add curlies to this post! This is SPAM!
Okay ummm...Notes on The cheerleader story "Losers" by me. I mentioned
in the story Calen West and Yes!!! I just got reply and she does give
me permission to use her image on my site as the title picture for my
HTML version of Losers. It can be found here:
www.asstr.org/~rache/losers.htm
I was withholding it until I got her permission, or she said no, in
which case I'd have to find another picture. So I am way happy. I
never wrote a cheerleader story before, so I wanted to do one. And I
had a lot emails asking if I had more interracial and size stories,
after I posted Daddy's Little Whore, and of course I don't. So I
decided to throw that into the mix. I like impregnation, so I did that
too. Otherwise it's just total porn, no redeeming qualities and the
writing is okay, but you know I really wish I could write porn, but I
know I suck at it...no no, it's true. I can't let go of the characters
enough to just let them fuck. But I'm working on it. I am trying.
There's a secret to writing good porn and I'll unlock it yet!
Dani by Rachael Ross
Okay this isn't through moderation yet as I post this, but I'll write
about it anyway so I don't have to spam you too much later... "Dani"
loosely based on Dani California, but only the name.
Author's Note: This story changed drastically as I was writing it, but
thankfully I only had to go back and change a single word as I came to
the conclusion that it wasn't going to be a rape story. That word was
changing this sentence: "I wish. Okay snatch, come on over
here." ...to... "I wish. Okay Dani, come on over here." and I almost
left that word snatch in there, because I really liked the sound of it
and I myself was called "snatch" by a cop once, in a police station,
but I was neither strip searched, nor raped. He was just a bored
asshole...Anyway, so I took a left turn with this from my planned
plot, which was lesbian rape at Juvenile Hall, to an innocent girl's
first orgasm and the beginnings of a lifelong interest in being
humiliated by authority figures. One of my personal favorites.
Obviously I took some liberties with the story. So far as I know they
don't do a cavity search of 13 year old girls. They do strip searches
however, on 13-17 year olds before entering a populated environment,
like Juvenile Detention in Seattle, for instance. But it's very quick,
very painless, and the woman who does it looks like your grandmother
and basically she just watches you change clothes. It isn't really a
strip search at all. That's the biggest deviation from reality, that
and some teenagers deciding to go camping instead of having a huge
party while mom and dad are in Europe....The things I have to imagine
to create a scene...yikes!
Anyway, those are my notes. Thanks for reading. Rachael