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Subject: Re: {ASSM} Love Letter by Rache (F/f, First, Rom, Public, Mast)
Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2006 13:56:03 -0700
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Rachael Ross wrote:
>
> Love Letter Copyright 2006 Rachael Ross all rights reserved Story Code:
> F/f, First, Romance, Public
> Note: What's to say?
>
> Love Letter by rache
{ASSM} Love Letter by Rache (F/f, First, Rom, Public, Mast)
I was going to write a long comment about Rache's story Gayle's Scene,
but I must admit it's hard for a straight guy to admit that a story
really made him want to suck cock. Oh well, that being said let me call
out a few lines that struck me in Love Letter:
"...[I]t didn't really taste like very much at all at first, but then
it did, when she moved a little and my tongue was in her, only a
fraction of an inch maybe, but inside her and I could taste her all of
a sudden so strong it made me jerk my head a little. It was like my
tongue was numb almost or burning, like acid from an orange, or too
much soda."
There is a lot of flowery prose about that specific taste and a lot of
raunchy prose about that taste, but Rache gives us pure and simply
accurate description. Under those circumstances, in that bathroom, I
can definitely taste that.
"I felt her finger curling inside, slowly, tickling me as it split my
virgin sex until I could feel her touching something else. It hurt,
just a little, like a pinch."
Perfect. The self depreciating main character is precious, with her
self-esteem-less charm. The older girl is just greedy and human in her
desire to pluck this innocent little fruit.
Rache touches this raw hurt and loneliness that few people can fully
capture. Everyone in her stories is broken and everyone is clinging to
each other with numb abandon. It's rare to get work that is both sad
and hot at the same time, but Rache does it. Her head is a really scary
place, but I like being able to get glimpses inside of it occasionally.
When I see her name on ASSM I can't help but read, even if I know it
will mess up my head. A Rachael Ross story is a scab begging to be
pulled off.