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Subject: {ASSD} Main Character with Genetic Anomalies - Can You Relate?
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Date: Tue, 27 Jun 2006 18:54:24 +0000
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I tend to write gay stories about characters with genetic peculiarities,
such as a male whose kidneys, instead of producing urine, produce pre-cum.
And he may produce semen and sperm to quickly for his body to absorb the
excess, so he has several sudden ejaculations throughout the day. Combined
with his equally anomalous capacity for storing sexual fluids, it can make
quite a large mess in his pants that grows throughout the day. Besides his
bladder being filled with pre-cum, he may have extra "bladders" full of
live sperm. When he ejaculates a load, the sperm from these bladders
quickly refill his epididymis so he's ready to shoot another full load in
mere seconds.
But can readers relate to a character like that? I recently bought an art
book that teaches the methods for drawing manga. An article in the book
mentioned that one of the reasons manga is taking off like a rocket in
America is because the characters, while they are heroic with a few special
abilities, they're not superheroes like Superman. Superman, the article
states, is more difficult to relate to because none of us have the kinds of
powers that Superman has. So I wonder where one should draw the line when
"enhancing" character genetics. Some other traits of my favorite character
are:
- He leaks pre-cum constantly, whether he's horny or
not. The amount given up increases as he becomes
aroused.
- Being startled causes him to have an orgasm and
ejaculate. (Backfiring vehicles, gunshots, and other
loud and unexpected noises, plus walking around a
corner and nearly running into someone may cause an
ejaculation.)
- Fear causes him to get an erection. The more scared
he is, the harder he gets. As the fear becomes more
intense, sperm may flow from his cock. Plus, if he's
already scared, he's on edge and far more sensitive
to startling noises as mentioned in the previous
item. If he's in a haunted house, for example, and
is already scared shitless, even the slightest noise,
or even seeing his own shadow may cause him to
explode in his shorts. These ejaculaions offer no
sexual relief.
- I gave him special penile anatomy, and this is one of
the main points that I thought people might have
trouble relating to. Instead of having a "valve" at
the neck of the bladder to control flow, he would
have an involuntary sphincter-type muscle inside his
dickhead, about a half-inch inside the hole. This
would cause his urethra to be filled with pre-cum all
the time. Once the pressure builds to a certain
point, it would force the sphincter apart and there
would be some leakage. But with this kind of setup,
how could he leak pre-cum constantly as mentioned in
the first item. That's when I introduced an extra
bladder on each side of the main one. These extra
bladders empty into a smaller urethra on each side of
the fatter central urethra. These extra urethras
bypass the sphincter muscle at the tip. His left
bladder works just like our regular human bladders
except it contains pre-cum. When he feels the need
to go, he goes and he pisses pre-cum. His right
bladder is similar to the first, except there are no
flow controls. It's an open system from the bladder
to the outside world. With this system, he would
leak pre-cum constantly, piss pre-cum when he feels
the urge to go, and would burst pre-cum when his
sphincter was overpowered by the pressure from the
largest bladder of the three: the one in the middle.
That one wouldn't have to simply get too full to
burst. Falling down, leaning over, being bumped and
generally moving around would cause pressure
variations. So the result is a constant flow of
pre-cum with occasional gushes of it.
- Anal peculiarities - There are so many things that
can be done with an anus that I have had a hard time
deciding how to handle it. I've thought of having
one that works in reverse so that contracting it
causes it to open instead of close. I've thought of
making the anal muscle involuntary, thinking it'd be
cool not to be able to contract it at all. What the
muscle does would depend on the stimulation provided
to it. I'm still up in the air on it. In my most
recent story, I have simply had a character
"encourage" the guy to exercise his hole with a
special butt plug with servomechanisms and sensors in
it which monitor the variables and provide the most
resistance and stretch. This will result in a strong
and elastic asshole. The fuckee, instead of just
having to get on all fours and accept what's
happening to him, will have to become an active
participant by making an effort to keep his hole
tight, while allowing very large or multiple cocks
inside his body.
- Reflexive displacement - Key reflexes work in
reverse. Instead of closing his legs to defend his
balls from a punishing thrash, they would
involuntarily fly wide apart. Or if he's done
something that deserves a butthole spanking, his
hole, instead of closing in defense, would bloom in
acceptance, much to his chagrin.
- Natural Lubrication of the butt and mouth - I've
considered having glands in his backside that would
constantly produce pre-cum so he's constantly ready
to be screwed, but that would eliminate the
possibility of a dry fuck -- something he's been
threatened with for not keeping himself lubed and
ready at all times. I've also replaced his saliva
with pre-cum. I've thought about getting rid of his
swallowing muscles, but that would be too strange, I
think, having some guy with thick strands of goo
hanging from his lower lip all the time. So I
decided to keep his swallowing ability.
- More penile anatomy - I'm into size. Six or seven
inches won't cut it for me, but 16" is a bit too
much, though if the topic is being able to relate, I
suppose those who are into fisting and having arms
shoved up their backsides might be able to relate to
being screwed by a 16" cock. Twelve inches is about
as big as I like to go. But my main character is
always uncircumcised. When he's soft, the loose
foreskin hangs low enough to keep just the hole
exposed. But the problem comes with the erection.
On one hand, I want him to grow so much during an
erection that the foreskin is drawn tight, but on the
other hand, I'd like for him to have enough skin to
snake up and down, whil keeping the head uncovered.
I could only have it both ways if I had two stages of
erection. Have him grow from his flaccid 6 or 7
inches to 9 or 10 inches. He'd be as hard as iron
there, but still have enough skin to snake up and
down his shaft. I can't figure out what might happen
to give him another couple or three inches to a
maximum of 12-13 inches and stretch the foreskin
tightly.
There are other ideas, but those are the main ones. I just wonder how
people would relate to characters like that since they're so strange.
What do you think?