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VARIATION ON L.W.W [ story 6 ] The Old Magics It was late when I returned to the attic, the trunk was still there and I was going to have to read the next chapter while the light remained. I picked up the envelope, finding no covering letter at the front so I began to read. - - - - - - - - - - The sound of Susan’s horn invaded the Narnian encampment; Peter was talking tactics with Aslan when he looked up. “That was Susan’s horn, she must be in trouble!” Said Aslan but Peter was already running towards the sound. Aslan turned to the watching creatures, “Don’t just stand there our queens are in trouble!” He said which made the crowd realise the danger and they chased off toward the pond. When Peter got to the pond he saw Susan and Lucy perched in the branches of a tree, the wolves were jumping up to bite them, but somehow branches always seemed to get in their way, knocking the wolves back. Without thinking about his actions Peter drew his sword and slashed at a leaping wolf, cutting into the creatures back. “Get away from my sisters!” he said stabbing at another wolf. “Leave the human, he’s mine!” Maugrim said to his pack and he turned to face Peter. “So pup you dare to raise a sword against me, Maugrim?” He snarled at Peter. “Two down, you’re just another wolf!” Peter said simply, he could feel the creatures behind him, watching this battle, unwilling to carry on until Peter had proven himself. “They were the runts of this pack, easy prey … I’m of sterner stuff!” Maugrim snarled and leaped at Peter who ducked from this attack. Maugrim tried to kick back at Peter before he landed but missed. “You’re quick Pup, but I’m larger, older and heavier than you! And I can smell your fear!” Maugrim said. Peter gave a small smile, “I may be frightened of you wolf, but I know that I can overcome my fear, and I will be the king of this land, not you wolf, but I will wear your pelt as a cloak.” He said trying to sound braver than he felt. “I will kill you pup and then have fun with your siblings, like my queen is dealing with your brother!” Maugrim said and bared his fangs. But this taunt had the opposite effect on Peter who felt a red rage take him over, but somehow his brain was still working away! The wolf reached out with its right claw, only to be blocked by Peter’s shield. The left claw was struck with Peter’s sword, bringing pain to the Witch’s lieutenant. “That was luck, Pup! This time you die!” Maugrim said in his pain. He jumped toward Peter, his paws out in front of him in order to pin and then hold him down as Maugrim’s teeth ripped his throat out. But this plan was thwarted as Peter held his sword out in front of him, pushing the blade deep into Maugrim’s chest and piercing the wolf’s heart. This was the signal for the others to help Peter, they swarmed pass the shaken youth and attacked the wolves, tearing them to bits. Then Aslan was there, “Quick! One’s getting away, Eagles, Centaurs follow it! It will lead you to Edmund, rescue him and bring him back to his family!” Aslan said. His orders were quickly followed. Aslan walked to where Peter was still looking at the dead Maugrim, “I wasn’t sure I could do it!” He said to the Lion. “I had faith in you Son of Adam, but Peter your blade is dirty, I think you’d better clean it!” Aslan admonished. Peter took the sword out of Maugrim’s body and, after wiping it on the dead wolf’s fur, cleaned it off with grass. “Son of Adam, would you give me your sword?” Aslan asked of him. Peter did so and somehow Aslan was holding it. “Kneel Peter.” Aslan said, again Peter did as he was told and he felt the sword touch him on his shoulders. “Arise Sir Peter, Wolfsbane!” Aslan said to the cheering of the watching crowd. Lucy and Susan found that their path to the ground was helped by the branches of the trees as they seemed to move to allow them easy steps to the ground. They ran to their brother’s side and hugged him. “Oh Peter, you were so brave.” Susan said kissing her brother. “Yes Peter I was so scared but then you were there.” Said Lucy holding onto his legs. Peter noticed that during their escape they had lost the towels and were both bare and the excitement of the fight had now changed into something else. “I think you’d better take him to your tent and show him your gratitude.” Aslan said with a small chuckle. - - - - - - - - - - Back at the Witches camp a lone wolf came limping back, “Maugrim’s dead! My pack is gone, flee, flee!” He gasped out. Several of her beasts started to turn away infected with his fear. “HOLD!” The Witch’s voice sounded out in the camp, “If one of those thrones is vacant then the prophecy is null, and there is one way to make sure of that.” She said. Ginarrbrik grabbed hold of Edmunds hair and pulled him to his knees. Edmund could hear a noise, it was a rhythmic sound which he’d heard before, and then he realised where! It was in the barber’s shop when they were sharpening the razors; he went to struggle but was held down by the dwarfs’ body. “Pull his head back!” the Witch ordered and Edmund’s hair was pulled to raise his face. “This is the death of all traitors!” The Witch said … - - - - - - - - - - In Aslan’s camp Peter turned to face his sisters, “Lucy…” he began to say but Susan put her hand on his mouth. “It’s her time Peter, she wants you.” Susan said and took her brother’s hand. Lucy was lying on some furs on the ground and she smiled up at her siblings, “Please Peter make love to me.” She said. “Oh Lucy, I could hurt you!” Peter said although other parts of him were showing their appreciation of her offer. “Do it Peter, can’t you see that it’s right!” Susan whispered into Peter’s ear while rubbing his cock. “UUuurrrgggh!” Peter said and then he knelt down between Lucy’s legs, his hands finding her chest and rubbing the small bumps that were there, “But you’re just a child!” He said trying to stop himself. “Not where it matters!” Lucy said with a giggle, “I never told you what I did when I was here, did I?” She said laughing at Peter’s shocked look. Peter looked at Susan who smiled at him and nodded, “Yes Peter! You’re never reluctant with me are you, so why with Lucy?” She said. Peter sighed and then kissed Lucy on the lips, he was surprised when she opened her mouth to kiss him and even more so when her tongue started to investigate his mouth, he pulled back slightly, “Surprise!” Lucy said and then moved his hand down to her pussy, which he found to be moist and yielding. He was again surprised when he felt his britches being dragged down his legs by Susan, he looked at her, “Well you can’t do it with them on!” She said smiling. He didn’t need anymore prompting, his cock was erect and pointing in the right direction, and so it didn’t need Susan’s hand to guide it into Lucy’s pussy but he welcomed her touch anyway. Peter gave a push and entered his sister. Lucy gave a gasp as he entered her, not because he was large but because it was her older brother who was doing it. Peter however found that although Lucy was younger than Susan she did, in fact, feel larger inside than Susan, he looked at Lucy slightly puzzled. “I’ve had some practise.” Lucy said with a giggle as she pushed back onto her brother’s cock. Peter didn’t talk, in a way he’d been wanting to do this with Lucy, but didn’t want to annoy Susan, yet both girls had decided to allow this and who was he to disagree with them? “Turn over Peter!” Susan said suddenly and pushed Peter. This time Lucy was on top of Peter, straddling him. “Ooohhhh! That feels so deep!” Lucy said and she managed to raise herself up so that Peter could look up at his sister, her flatten stomach and barely forming breasts. Then he saw a pair of hands appear from behind Lucy, they held onto his sister’s breasts – Peter realised that they were Susan’s! Susan was helping his sister to accept his cock, was his first thought, but then he realised that he was wrong, she was taking her own pleasure from her sister. At first Peter was concerned but then, as Susan kissed her sister’s lips, he became aroused and started pushing up with his hips. The excitement of the chase and the kill, combined with the visual stimulation that took Peter over the edge, he began pumping his seed into his youngest daughter with such a force that it caused her to climax as well, something that Peter saw just before he blacked out. - - - - - - - - - - Edmund closed his eyes, he didn’t want to see the blade as the Witch cut his throat … he was waiting for the pain … which didn’t come? What did happen was a loud noise as if the whole forest had come alive. The weight on his back vanished but he couldn’t lift himself up, he was too scared! The noise began to recede. Then “Is this the one?” a deep voice said “I suppose so, where’s the Witch?” another voice answered. “I thought you were going after her?” “I was too busy with the wolf! Why didn’t you get her?” “She just wasn’t there! Come on let’s get this ‘manling’ and return to Aslan.” The deep voice said. Edmund found his bonds being untied and then hands were raising him to his feet. He looked up to find men on horses … or rather horses with men’s upper bodies? They were Centaurs! “Climb on me Son of Adam . . . and hold on tight!” The Centaur said as he quickly turned and ran off into the woods. Edmund couldn’t remember much of the rescue and flight from the Witch, his body was aching everywhere and he couldn’t stop himself from blacking out. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Peter opened his eyes, he could see his sisters, they were turned head to tail and sucking on their bald pussys’. Peter blinked, Susan’s pussy was clear of hair, she looked just like Lucy! Peter found his cock getting erect as he moved behind his sister. Lucy was licking out Susan’s pussy and didn’t notice him until he touched her forehead with his dripping cock. She looked up and saw him standing there and knew what he wanted so she moved out of the way to allow him to push his cock into Susan’s pussy. Susan sighed as she felt her pussy being filled with his cockshaft. “Lucy! Where did you get that…” She started to say but Lucy moved back and covered her mouth with her pussy. Peter was sliding his cock into his elder sister’s denuded pussy and then Lucy lowered her face and began licking the shaft, tasting her sister’s juices on her brother’s cock. “Oh Lucy, that’s wonderful!” Peter said encouraging his sister and he moved his hand to rub her back causing her to mew in pleasure from the sight of her brother’s cock and the sensations of Susan on her pussy. All too soon Peter was spurting his seed into Susan’s pussy while Lucy gave a groan and shudder as she spilt her juices into Susan’s mouth, Peter pulled out of Susan’s pussy but then he was attacked by Lucy as she sucked him into her mouth, cleaning him of their combined juices. Even with her ministrations Lucy couldn’t bring Peter back up and so she allowed him to turn her around and to snuggle up with Susan and himself, as they hugged each other Peter said, “I really love you two.” “Me too!” Both girls said in unison and then they fell asleep. - - - - - - - - - - The next day the three children were awoken with the news of Edmund’s rescue, they quickly got dressed and ran out of the tent. On the same promontory that he’d spoken to Peter, Aslan was talking with Edmund, with them were a tall lady and a young girl, Edmund was on his knees and gently kissing the girl who was returning the kiss with vigour. Then Edmund turned and walked with Aslan to where the three were standing. “I have spoken to him and everything is as it should be! There is nothing more to say about the past few days.” Aslan said and walked away from the children. Edmund was standing there, tears in his eyes. “I’m sorry I’ve been such a…” He began but Peter pulled him into a hug. “It was my fault as well, I’m sorry.” Peter said and then the two girls joined in hugging their brothers. Even after all he’d been through Edmund found that he was hungry, so the children went to where a breakfast had been prepared, there was no talking as everyone was wrapped up in their thoughts, after breakfast Peter spoke. “Edmund I want you to take the girls back to the wardrobe and return to the real world.” He said. “But what about you?” Edmund asked. Peter sighed and didn’t look at his siblings, “I’m going to remain here, these people need me and I promised mum I’d keep you safe. So that’s why you have to go.” Susan got to her feet. “No Peter, I’m not leaving! You remember the prophecy all four of us are needed to sit on the thrones! We can’t go! And I won’t go!” She walked to where her bow and arrows were hanging and picked them up. “I’ll be practising while you make up your mind!” She said and walked away. “And I’m not going either!” Lucy said getting up and following her sister. “Edmund?” Peter said. But Edmund was shaking his head as well. “I’m not going either, I haven’t done anything to help here, all I’ve done is made things worse! I see that and I have to remain!” He said. Peter shook his head, “But all I was trying to do was to get you all safely out of here.” He said. Edmund reached out and helped him to his feet, “But now you need to teach me about fighting with swords, I think I’m going to need it.” - - - - - - - - - - It was later that morning while Aslan was talking to the children that a leopard approached them. “Sire, there is a messenger from the enemy who requests an audience.” It said. “Let him approach.” The Lion said gravely. Edmund gave gasp as Ginarrbrik walked up to Aslan; he gave a glance to Edmund and then gave an evil smile before turning back to the Lion. “What is your message son of Earth?” Asked Aslan. “The Queen of Narnia and Empress of the Lone Islands desires a safe conduct to come and speak to you on a matter that concerns the well-being of the land of Narnia.” Ginarrbrik said with a bow. “Queen of Narnia indeed!” Said Mrs. Beaver “Of all the …” “Peace Beaver.” Said Aslan, “Everything will be given their true names in due time. Tell your mistress that I accept her request and grant her safe conduct, however I want her to leave her wand behind.” The Dwarf agreed and turned around to walk out of the camp accompanied by two leopards. “She’s bound to turn them into stone!” Edmund said. Peter shook his head, “It would be alright, Aslan wouldn’t have sent them if there was any chance of that.” Indeed, a few minutes later the Witch came walking along between the leopards, both of whom seemed to have a nasty taste in their mouths, she was wandless. She came up to the Lion and stood tall. “You have a traitor here Aslan” She said. Edmund quivered but stood still, he knew she meant him. Peter held onto his arm. “The offence was not against you so why should it concern us?” The Witch laughed, “Do not pretend that you have forgotten the old magic?” She said. Aslan looked at her, “Let us say that I have!” He said The Witch looked at Aslan in surprise. “May I remind you what is written on that very stone table which stands beside us? Tell you of the words written in letters deep as a spear on the Fire-stones on the Secret Hill, Even of the engravings on the sceptre of the Emperor-beyond-the-Seas? You at least know the Magic that the Emperor put into Narnia at the very beginning! You know that every traitor belongs to me as my lawful prey and that for every treachery I have a right to kill!” The Beavers looked at each other, “So that’s how she became powerful, she was the executioner, with thoughts above her station!” Mrs. Beaver said. “Peace Beavers, Why don’t you come with me and we’ll discuss the matter!” Aslan said to the Witch, and the pair strolled away. Lucy looked worriedly up at Peter, “What’s going to happen? Is she going to have Edmund?” She said quietly. Edmund had heard her and blanched as he remembered just how she had him the previous day. After a few minutes the Witch and Aslan returned, “You will do this?” She said. “I have given my word.” Aslan said. “But what if you…!” The Witch said and was silence by a roar from Aslan, a roar that shook the whole camp. The Witch went even whiter and ran out of the camp followed by the laugher of those watching. Aslan allowed this and then called everyone to attend. “We have to move to another location, we cannot remain here.” He said and then ignored all the questions that were put to him; he looked at Peter and Edmund. “Sons of Adam come with me.” He said. Afterward Lucy would remember how sad and alone he looked during that time, as if a great weight was on his shoulders. - - - - - - - - - - The new setting of the camp was in a better defensible position, and throughout the trek to this placement Aslan was busy outlining battle plans to the two youths. “But you will be there in charge won’t you Aslan?” Peter asked at one point. “Oh Son of Adam, the future is not clear on this, you must be ready in case I am not here.” Aslan said gravely and then carried on with his instructions. That night the four children snuggled together, Lucy with Edmund and Susan with Peter, the two boys pumped so much seed into their sisters that they fell into a dreamless sleep. But for some reason neither Lucy or Susan could settle down, Lucy got up and walked to the opening of the tent, she gave a small gasp as she saw a large shadow slip away from the camp. She beckoned to Susan and then the two followed the shape into the darkness. After a few minutes it stopped moving and then Aslan’s voice spoke out, “Susan, Lucy, why do you follow me?” He asked them. The two girls ran up to the Lion and hugged him, “I’m sorry Aslan, but you looked so lonely that I just had to come.” Lucy said. Aslan licked both girls and then smiled at them, “You may come with me, but when I tell you to remain behind please do as I ask.” He said, both girls agreed and they all walked back towards the Stone Table. As they approached a rise, from which the Stone Table would be visible, Aslan stopped. “Now you must remain here, and no matter what you are not to do anything to interfere. This has to be done!” He said and looked at the two as they both promised. “Thank you, I love you both, never forget that!” He said and then strode towards the Table – where the Witch was waiting with her army. - - - - - - - - - - “YOU SEE! THE FOOL HAS COME!” The witch called out and her army began to laugh. As Aslan walked to the table the rabble began to call out, “Pussy want some milk? Hey pussy, pussy, pussy!” And such things. “Hold!” The witch called out. “He needs to be bound and muzzled!” and Ginarrbrik approached the Lion, very carefully, and started wrapping ropes around the snout of Aslan, while others tied his legs together until he couldn’t stand. Finally Ginarrbrik had finished. The Witch wasn’t satisfied, “There’s too much hair, SHAVE IT!” She called out. (“No, no! Haven’t they done enough to him?” Lucy cried as she was held by Susan where they were watching from the rise) After all the hair was removed Aslan was dragged along the ground towards the table where the crowd jeered and berated Aslan, then Ginarrbrik pulled on the Lion’s penis and began rubbing it, “This is the last time you’ll have any fun with this!” He said with a leer as he masturbated the Lion. While this was happening the Witch bent over her prey, “You think that you’ve done something noble? Let me tell you, when I’ve finished here I’ll go on to kill all the children I’ll ensure that my reign never ends, and you won’t be able to stop me, as you’ll be dead!” She said and raised a knife. (“NO!” Lucy cried as Susan pulled her head into her body to stop her sister from seeing the death of Aslan.) The Witch looked down at the lifeless body and then smiled at her troops “PREPARE YOURSELVES! FOR TOMORROW WE ATTACK – LET NONE OF THEM LIVE!” She declared bringing a roar from the throats of the creatures. - - - - - - - - - - I cannot say how long the two girls remained at the rise, they were too scared that someone would come their way, but they realised that the silence was due to the fact that the Witch had left the Stone Table and had taken her army with her. It was with trepidation that the two children walked to the Stone Table which still had its dead victim draped over the edge. “Why did they do that?” Lucy kept saying. “What had he done to deserve it?” They cried when they saw Aslan’s shaved and mutilated body. “It’s not right to leave him like that!” Susan decided and tried to loosen the rope muzzle that had been wrapped around the Lion’s snout, but they were too tight indeed they were biting into the cooling flesh of the corpse. “Oh it’s no use Susan; we must go back to the camp and warn the others.” Lucy said. “But … I … I can’t! I can’t leave him here alone.” Lucy wailed and held onto the Lion’s paw as if she could help him. “Look Lucy there’s nothing we can do … what’s that?” Susan said as she noticed small shapes running over the Table. “Ewww! They’re mice … shoo! Go away!” She said waving at the mice, but they took no notice of her. “Oh why can’t they … Susan. Look!” Lucy said pointing to where the mice’s strong jaws were eating into the ropes holding Aslan. “They’re trying to help him … they don’t understand what’s happened to him.” Susan said tears running down her face. Once the Lion’s face was free of the rope both girls held onto Aslan’s face and began to sob, their tears falling onto the lifeless face of the Lion. When the sun began to rise Susan took hold of Lucy’s hand. “Come on Lucy, Peter will be getting worried and we’ve got to get back.” And still sobbing the two girls slowly moved away from the table. Suddenly there was a loud crack which made the two girls turn around. The Stone table was split in two, but of Aslan’s body there was no sign! “Oh No! What else have they done to him?” Lucy screamed out and pulled away from Susan to return to the ruin of the table. Susan soon joined her and they looked at the remains, then a voice behind them spoke, they turned to find the rising sun in their eyes. “What are you looking for children?” The voice said. Both girls squinted in the light and then Lucy gained enough courage to speak, “Please what happened, where’s Aslan?” She asked. There was a low laugh and the voice seemed familiar as it spoke again, “There is a deeper magic that even the witch doesn’t know about!” It said and the blurred shape strode closer to the girls, “The magic says that should a willing victim who has betrayed nobody is sacrificed on the table then death itself will undo and the table will be broken forever!” Aslan said as he stood in front of the girls. “ASLAN! Is it really you … you’re not a …” Susan said and the warm breath of the Lion answered her question. “I’m real but I’m slightly weak at the moment.” Aslan said and shook out his full mane of fur. He took a deep breath and then licked both girls making them shudder in glee. He looked up at them. “Daughters, would you mind raising your skirts and allowing me to drink?” He asked them. The two girls looked at each other and smiled, and then they did as Aslan asked them displaying their naked cunnies to his gaze. “Thank you.” Aslan said and then approached Lucy his tongue coming out and bathing her slit with his juices causing her to moan in pleasure. “Oh that’s so nice Aslan; I wish Peter could do that.” Lucy said only to be nudged by Susan, “Oh alright then Edmund!” Lucy amended before she allowed herself to relax and catch the sensations that were coming from her pussy. Living up to her new nickname Lucy sighed as she gave up her juices to the Lion’s tongue; he lapped up those juices and seemed to get stronger with each drop of moisture. Susan watched her sister feeling slightly envious of her reactions and then she was supporting Lucy as the young girl collapsed into her arms. Then she felt the roughness of Aslan’s tongue on her pussy. The effect on her skin was amazing, it seemed to heighten all the sensations that she normally felt, in fact it was so great that she soon found herself climaxing as well letting out even more juices than she had ever done, she also collapsed back onto Aslan’s paws which were somehow behind her. It was a few minutes before the girls came too, the change over Aslan was amazing, he was vitalised and seemed even realer (‘if anyone could be more than real it was Aslan then’ Lucy would say when she told the tale.) He smiled at the two sisters and then said. “Thank you Daughters of Eve, I feel better than ever, now cover your ears, I’m about to roar!” And before the girls could start to obey him Aslan bowed his head, opened his mouth and then gave such a roar that shook the trees in the bower of the Stone Table. In fact the sound seemed to hang visually in the air. “Now children I have a long way to travel and I want you to join me, climb onto my back and hold on tight, for I have to be very fast indeed.” Aslan said positioning himself so that both girls could get onto him. Then they were off, and Aslan was running so fast that at first everything was a blur, and then he gave a small leap and seemed to take to the air. Susan looked down at Lucy who had her eyes closed; she wondered where they were going and what was happening with Peter and Edmund? - - - - - - - - - - As expected I sent this version into the publishers, although I was already starting a tamer version as I expected it to be returned, indeed a few days later (remarkably quick turnaround I found) the manuscript was returned with the following letter. Dear CS. Please sir I beg you do not ask us to even think of publishing this as it stands! For one thing again you are spending too much time on things that normal children have no concerns about, and also this ending? Why did you do it like that? I am returning this chapter and urge you to amend it as we outlined, I can only assume that you submitted it as a joke to enrage our founder – I have kept it away from his eyes as he would refuse to even print those chapters that we have passed. As your friend please, please submit a version that we can look at and possibly publish, I’m sure that if you concentrate on the fairytale side of this that we would be happy to take the whole book. And even offer to print any others in the series, it could grow on the children you know. Maybe you should write two entries and only submit the second instead of the first, in this manner you will have a version you want and a version that children could read. Yours sincerely… At least he admits that I do have a good story, I wonder if he’s copying the one I send him before he returns it? But I might just give his idea a chance, but I’ve still got one chapter to write on this book, so I might still have some fun. CSL. I put the pages back in the envelope and smiled, so the old man knew what he was doing, and this cliffhanger was the perfect way to get the reader to wait for the next chapter. I checked my watch and shook my head, it was too late to continue now, it would just have to wait until tomorrow. |