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Subject: {ASSM} UG5C "The College Student" (MF MM) by Eli the Bearded
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Author: Eli the Bearded
Title: The College Student
Universe: Up-Goer Five Challenge
Summary: The Up-Goer Five Challenge is to write a story of any 
length using only the thousand (ten hundred) most common word 
roots (words all vetted with http://splasho.com/upgoer5/)
Keywords: MF FF
Date: 30 January 2013

$ wc upgoerfive.txt
      64    1116    5611 upgoerfive.txt
$

That's 64 lines, 1116 words, and 5611 characters in the story,
starting after the line. Line count will change with formatting.

Elijah
------
The College Student

An Up-Goer Five Story by 'Eli_the_Bearded'


There once was a married couple who took a student in for the summer. Mr
and Mrs White needed some more money, and Nod, the student need a place
to be while college was out. Sounds simple enough, but there was a
daughter, too.

One day Rose, the couple's daughter, saw Nod through a crack in his door
to his bedroom. His jeans were down and she saw he was thick as a horse.
She knocked and then quickly said "That's a fine piece you have down
there."

Nod barely knew what to do. Rose was a beautiful blonde girl and had
been in his dreams all week. He bit his lip and asked her in. She took
his offer and then closed the door.

First she helped him all the way out of his clothes and then he took off
her dress. There was no doubt that Rose was the best  surprise of the
summer. Next thing they were fucking and sucking like anything every day
of the week.

Obviously mom noticed what was going on before long. She told Rose "You
need to stop seeing Nod. He is supposed to just be living here. NOT
doing you."

Rose blushed red, nervous, and told her mom, "But he's HUNG and his
balls are so hot. He has a brain and a body, too. It is a perfect
relationship. He can stick me again and again and still be hard. I've
never had a boyfriend like him before.  And he's kind, too."

Mom went pink. "We recognize that you are a young lady now, but really.
Do I have to remind you he is paying to stay here? It is not right."

Rose screamed in anger and went off.

Mom now wanted to get a sense of this guy. She hid in his room and
waited for him to come back. When he came in, Nod settled on the bed to
read. When he put the book down it was to work at his computer. She did
not see him smoke or look at bad pictures and thought to herself, "He
does seem nice." When he went to the bathroom, she slipped out.

The next day, while Nod was at a store, Mrs White went into his room
again. This time she looked at all of his stuff.  She took all his
things out and just searched for anything that might scare her. All
afternoon she was at this and found nothing.

Nod suddenly burst in and asked "Why are you in my room?"

"Well, I didn't want to get into your business, but you crossed into
mine when you started to do my daughter."

Nod got scared now. He loved that girl and wanted more than anything to
avoid losing her. "Calm down," he said, "you are just afraid of seeing
your children grow up. The problem is not me. Relax." He didn't think
he'd have a chance in hell to change her mind, but then she sat on his
bed to listen.

Nod continued, "Rose is a fine girl, not stupid like so many people I
meet. And she seems to like me a lot. More than seems. I'm sure she
loves me. You don't come across as crazy, so I think you should decide
if you want to drive her out over me."

"What do you mean?" she asked in a small voice.

"I could easily move out to another place and I think that Rose would
follow me. She is almost twenty and you have to understand she'd rather
be with me than remain here with no boyfriend."

Mrs White reached out. "I, well, I'm not sure I'm ready for Rose to be a
woman now. But she told me things about you. Things that make me want to
have you instead of you having her. You see, my guy isn't man I once
knew."

She broke down crying. Nod brushed her hair from her face. "What do you
mean?"

"I miss climbing into bed and feeling him hard beside me. He never
touches me any more. He does not look at me the way he once did. He does
not kiss me or show that he loves me."

Nod had to ask, "So Mr White is cold to you? And that is why you want
Rose and me to break up?"

Mrs White took off her top. "Touch my chest. Come and suck them. I want
to feel like a woman again."

Nod was confused for a moment, but did as she asked. Mrs White continued
to take off clothes, from herself and from Nod. "Take me. Use me. Stuff
my throat. Fill my crack. Do my ass. Fuck me hard. Make me come and come
and come."

Nod was there all evening. When Mrs White got dressed again she left
with a happy expression on her face. She made an especially nice dinner
for the family that night and everyone said how great it was.

The next day mom took Rose out shopping to tell Rose about that she had
changed her mind about Nod. While they were gone, Nod went to have a
talk with Mr White.

"Your family is concerned, sir," he said.

"What is this about?"

"They feel that you are far away all the time. Like you have stopped
loving them. I don't want to ignore this because I like your family a
lot."

Immediately Mr White looked serious. "I have never told them. I don't
want to tell myself. But you seem to have been sent to help me. I don't
really care for women, Nod. I tried to once. Now I can only look at men.
I want to be with men. I want to surround myself in a world of men. But
I have a family. And I have a safe life. And I don't want to suddenly
give it all up. Coming out scares me."

Nod smiled. "I'd like to suggest something. Suppose..." Nod did not
finish what he was saying. He took off his shirt. "I understand,  sir. I
think you want me."

Until then, Mr White had never really warmed to Nod, he feared to show
himself. But now he burned for him. They fucked on the table, right
there in the kitchen. It wasn't long before each of them had spent in
the other seven times.  

Eventually everyone found out everything. So now Nod is well settled
with the Whites. He has mornings with Mom, afternoons with Dad, and
evenings and week ends with Rose. Above all Nod has a completely amazing
love life and a family that loves him.

-- 
Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights
reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated.
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