Message-ID: <55101asstr$1168060202@assm.asstr-mirror.org> X-Original-To: ckought69@hotmail.com Delivered-To: ckought69@hotmail.com X-Original-Path: 6d69fee4!not-for-mail From: Sir Render <i_am_sirrender@nospam.yahoo.com> X-Original-Message-ID: <Xns98AFC4741FE49iamsirrenderyahoocom@199.45.49.11> User-Agent: Xnews/2006.06.28 NNTP-Posting-Date: Fri, 05 Jan 2007 22:18:34 EST X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sat, 06 Jan 2007 03:18:34 GMT Subject: {ASSM} What Some People Will Do - Chapters 47-48 (MF oral exhib ENF) {Sir Render} Lines: 605 Date: Sat, 06 Jan 2007 00:10:02 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2007/55101> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: dennyw, Sagittaria ***** This is a work of fiction. All characters are of no age because they are not real people. This story is intended to be read and enjoyed by consenting adults only. Do not read this story if it is illegal for you to do so. The author will not be responsible for your actions. Do not allow anyone under the age of consent to read this story. Again the author will not be responsible for your actions. Please do not treat this as a guide for real life; it is only a work of fiction. Do not read this story if descriptions of nudity, sex and sexual situations offend you. Do not repost this story in any way which requires payment for access and please do not remove the copyright notice when reposting this story. Thank you. ***** What Some People Will Do (C)2000, 2006 by Sir Render (i_am_sirrender@yahoo.com as of January 2007) Part 16 Chapter 47 Brenda had spent the weekend at the studio with Thomas, Ivan and Rajiv. They were the only people there as the stream to the local cable carrier was all automated by computer. Thomas had wanted to shoot some commercial bumpers and promo spots for the show. With no idea which bits and scenes would be used, Brenda spent hours in various costumes and naked, posing for photos, prancing around, uncrossing and crossing her legs to show off her panties or lack thereof depending on the outfit, bending over and running her hands up over her bare ass or over her breasts, sucking on her fingers, standing, sitting, lounging, lying down and walking. That was on Saturday. Sunday before lunch saw her shooting some talking bits, saying the name of the show, inviting viewers to watch her do naughty things in private and in public and saying things like, "These sponsors help keep me in your bedroom." After lunch they filmed her lying in a generic bed or over the hood of the half car in front of a green screen, playing with herself, licking her fingers, rubbing oil on her tits and spanking her own ass. They also went outside to film some scripted outdoor scenes as a teaser for the real exhibitionism she had been doing for the episodes. Brenda strutted her stuff in the studio parking lot, out back by the dumpster, walking through shrubs between the studio's property and the next one over, getting in and out of her car topless, bottomless and fully nude. The hours were long and the takes were often repeated with different camera angles and lighting conditions. For the first time Brenda felt like an actress rather than a willing slut and she had no problems getting to sleep those nights after wearing herself out at the studio. On Monday morning Thomas Hardcastle addressed the assembled crews of the Channel 69 Studios. "Tomorrow we're making a company outing to a local water park. It will be a bit of a play day but also some work filming scenes for a future episode of 'What Some People Will Do'. Brenda, we'll want you and Wynona to work some of your magic and lose your clothing a few times. We'll arrange some things for you to do but try to get naked as often as possible while making it look legit." "Tomorrow? That's kind of short notice," Brenda remarked. "Is tomorrow not good? We can do it Wednesday if you like." "No, tomorrow's okay with me, I just won't have time to plan anything." Thomas replied, "That's okay, we're looking for spontaneity to make it more believable. We've also rented out a new fitness spa for next Tuesday night. Brenda, this is going to be a night for your fans. We're charging twenty-five dollars a head, and I mean that literally, for them to come and watch you work out nude and semi-nude. We wanted to work more elements of your life into the show, and I know you go to the gym at least once a week." "Who gets the money?" asked Ivan Stanley, the unit cameraman. "And at only twenty-five bucks we should expect a huge mob. Who's taking care of security?" "Well," Thomas laughed, "first off I said twenty-five bucks a head, meaning guys pay fifty and ladies pay twenty-five." He waited with an expectant look on his face for someone to get his joke. Finally Brenda groaned and rolled her eyes. "Two heads," Thomas said, pointing toward his face with one hand and his crotch with the other. "Anyway, we're giving the gym half of the money for the generous exclusive use of their equipment for three hours and we're only selling a hundred tickets. The rest goes to the studio." "I usually only put in about an hour and-a-half at the gym," Brenda said. "What should I do for three hours?" "Some of that time will be filled up with setup for different bits we'll be filming, maybe a little mingling with your fans, signing autographs, that sort of thing. And we'd like to know just how far you are really willing to go that night in front of your fans, because we'd like to offer some prizes; like say the grand prize winner gets fifteen minutes with you in the sauna, runner up gets a hand job. You know, that kind of fan appreciation. Come up with a first, second and third place prizes you'd be comfortable giving and remember these are your loyal fans whose support keeps the show on the air." "I'll see what I can come up with," Brenda remarked, biting her lower lip. Thomas paused a few seconds, looked around then added, "Also, it's time again to spin the Wheel 'o Cum and draw a dare from the bin. You also have to finish up your punishment from last week's shoot. We'll do that on Thursday afternoon if you don't have other plans for that day." Brenda shook her head. "Alright, well if someone would set up some lights and get a camera rolling we can do the drawings. Brenda, why don't you go and change into a costume just to make things a bit more interesting?" Rajiv went to setup some lamps while Ivan and Roger both tended to their cameras. Brenda went to the wardrobe department, in other words the three racks of costumes and clothing near the stage door in the same room everyone was in, to get undressed and then choose something different to wear. Brenda got undressed down to her white cotton panties and simple bra, then began to flip through the various articles of clothing. There were dresses in various colors and shapes, the French maid outfit she'd worn at Ryan's house the previous week, some t-shirts, shorts, skirts and blouses, various pieces of revealing lingerie and swim wear and on the last rack some rather unusual outfits. They were more like costumes for Halloween or silly skits which might be filmed in the studio. Among them were a shiny silver sort of space suit, another of similar design but with large areas cut out to reveal a good deal of skin, a cat suit complete with attached tail and one that caught Brenda's eye -- a pink bunny costume. It was little more than a light pink corset teddy with darker pink bra cups and thong style bottom with a big, white, fluffy cotton tail at the very top of the g-string. Brenda looked for any tags to indicate a size but found nothing. It looked to be about right for her but there was only one way to find out. She stripped out of her bra first and laid it over the rack of clothes, then bent at the waist and pulled her panties to the floor. Standing, she worked the bunny suit off its hanger and bent to step into it. It slid easily up her slender, athletic-tone legs and she had no trouble at all getting it up over her belly, but when she tried to work her ample breasts into the cups at the top she ran into trouble. It was clearly meant for someone less busty. Brenda was able to squish and squeeze her tits into the cups but the amount of breast flesh spilling over the top was more obscene than what had done in the French maid costume. Worse still her dark pink areolae from just above her nipples were peaking out over the tops. Still, this was a show about nudity and near nudity and she liked the outfit, so she strode confidently into the middle of the sound stage and prepared to spin the wheel and draw a slip of paper out of the cage. "Places everybody," Thomas called, bringing the group to attention. He directed Brenda to step in front of the camera and shake her cotton tail for the audience. She was only too happy to oblige, facing away from the main, stationary camera and placing her hands on her knees as she bent forward and wiggled her rump. Roger was walking around from her side to her front with a camcorder and when he was standing directly before her Brenda flashed him a smile, reached up with both hands and lightly rubbed upward over the swell of her tightly constrained breasts, moving her fingertips into her cleavage to demonstrate how deep and wide was that chasm. Thomas wheeled over the table with the wireframe drum. "And now, Brenda Young, please choose at random one of these suggestions from our viewing audience. You must perform this dare on camera at some point this week." He turned the crank to roll the folded papers over a few times to further randomize the suggestions, then unhinged and opened the door to the cage. Brenda looked away while she reached in and fished into the middle of the pack. Her fingers latched onto two slips of paper and she pulled out, then arbitrarily let one of the slips fall back into the cage. Bringing her selection to her face, she unfolded the paper and read aloud, "Give a hand job to a member of the film crew. Okay, who put this in here?" She held the paper out with one hand and put the other hand on her hip. Thomas replied, "All of these suggestions are provided by our viewers at home." "Uh huh," Brenda replied with her tongue pushed into the inside of her cheek. "Okay, well let's spin the wheel." "The Wheel o' Cum," Thomas announced, facing the stationary camera. "If we were a big budget production we'd have a drum roll." As if on cue, Roger, Ivan and Kimberly all began to stomp their feet to imitate a drum roll while Brenda stepped up to the Wheel o' Cum and gave it a good spin. The wheel went round and round for about thirty seconds before slowing to the point where Brenda became anxious about where it would stop. It came dangerously close to landing on Drink Cum From Another Woman's Pussy, something which she had kind of agreed in her contract to do but was not yet ready to move up to. But it ticked on space more and landed instead on Use Cum as Hand Lotion. "Well," she announced, "I can work both of these into one deliciously hot scene." She glanced around at the crew; Rajiv the smiling lighting man, Ivan the often grumpy but quite friendly once you got to know him cameraman, Kimberly -- well she was right out for this one anyway. Then there was Roger, the short, balding second unit cameraman. Finally there was Thomas, the only one of the bunch who had the look for an on-air personality. Brenda thought he was more handsome than her husband Jim and equally as supportive, but she had never seen him even partly naked and had never given any thought to how he might be in the sack. Brenda raised her right index finger and motioned for Thomas to approach. He laughed once before realizing that Brenda was serious. He coughed into his fist and looked away, then back at her but not directly into her eyes. Brenda beckoned him forward again and gave him a wicked grin. Professional that he was, Thomas Hardcastle stood tall and proud and strode into the limelight to stand before his starlet. Brenda stood on her tiptoes and gave him a peck on the cheek before running both hands down his broad chest and over his toned abdomen. When she reached his leather belt, she worked for a moment to loosen the buckle and then tried to figure out just how to get his trousers open. A little feeling around with her fingertips revealed a metal hook inside the waistband, similar to but larger than those often found on bra straps. A few moments later his pants were down around his knees. Brenda paused and looked him in the eyes, but he looked away. She saw his face was turning bright red. Brenda knelt before him and used the tips her thumb and index finger on her right hand to very lightly trace the outline of Thomas' stiff prick through his light gray cotton briefs. When she reached the base of his cock and felt the hard balls of his testes, she used her fingernails to lightly scratch his scrotum through the briefs. This has the immediate effect of making his prick twitch and his body briefly convulse. Brenda used both hands to take hold of his waistband and pull his underwear halfway down his hairy thighs. Thomas has a very thick patch of light brown pubic hair covering his crotch and inner thighs with a magnificent, if somewhat average-sized, penis jutting out from the bush. She stood and wrapped one hand, thumb and forefinger closest to the base, around his cock. She began her hand job by clenching and then relaxing her fist, just putting momentary pressure on him every few seconds. She slid her free hand up over his cheek and turned his face toward hers. Then she began to slowly stroke her producer's prick while the cameras zoomed in from various angles. "I guess most girls get the part by doing this," she said. "I'm doing it because I got the part. What a career I have." She laughed. Brenda continued to pull on Thomas' cock until she was satisfied it was as rock hard as it was going to be. She then knelt in front of him and switched hands, holding onto his bare ass with her right hand and stroking the length of his cock with her left. A couple of minutes passed as Brenda worked him over, bringing him closer and closer to orgasm and then letting up. The way that he sucked in his breath told her she was having the desired effect of orgasm denial and making him want it that much more. "You're such a cock tease," Kimberly called from out of the lighted area. Brenda had to admit that she loved the feel of the man's prick pulsing in her palm. The incredible warmth it gave off could heat a small house in winter. And she was teasing his cock. Normally she would have been greatly offended by Kimberly's remark but at that time and place she accepted it as a simple statement of fact. She angled Thomas' penis upward and moved her face in to give it a few lick on the underside toward its base. It twitched hard, almost jumping out of her hand. She licked a long line up the underside of his penis to the head which she took just in between her pursed lips. She kissed his cock head and began to pump along its length now for all she was worth. She redistributed her weight on her bent knees and turned sideways, holding one hand out in front of his cock as she continued to stroke him off. "Oh god, I've had it," Thomas announced after another miute. He grunted and every muscle in his body tightened then released. Brenda's open palm was soon coated with his hot semen. He came four times and the stuff was beginning to run out between her fingers. A few smaller spurts dribbled out from the tip of his penis and she tried to catch them in the center of her palm with her other hand held out below to catch the spillover. Brenda licked his spent cock head and then stood facing the stationary camera. She brought both hands together in a cup and showed the white goo to everyone before folding her hands over and rubbing it into her skin. She worked it into both palms and in between all her fingers. She rubbed what was left over the backs of her hands. Turning to thank Thomas for being such a sport, Brenda found that he was gone. Chapter 48 The end of summer had come and gone and though the calendar said it was autumn and nights were startling to get chilly it was still sunny and warm enough during the daytime for the major tourist attractions to still be on their summer schedules. That would soon change, though, since schools were all back in session and winter was approaching. It was the perfect time for the 'What Some People Will Do' crew to take a trip to the nearest water park which would soon be closing down for six months. There would be people there but not nearly as many as during the summer peak and they would be able to take some risks they wouldn't try when the park was crowded. The smaller crowds also meant there would be less security and fewer lifeguards watching over them. The whole crew arrived at the water park in four vehicles. Brenda rode with Wynona and they chatted about their lives, friends and family and just a little bit about their work. Thomas and Kimberly rode in the Channel 69 news van with Ivan at the wheel and planned out the day's events. Roger and Rajiv drove themselves individually. They parked as close as they could in the lot so they could gather and prepare. Brenda and Wynona were of course asked to strip naked in the parking lot between Wynona's car and the news van, then put on bikinis given to them by the crew. No cover was offered while the women got undressed. Wynona's bikini top was very little more than two wide yellow ovals connected by thin strips of fabric around her torso; it left a lot of breast exposed both above and below her nipples and accentuated the little cleft between her her medium sized breasts and chest wall. For bottoms she had a straight-across-the-top kind of string bikini piece consisting essentially of one strip of yellow fabric two inches wide connected at each end to the black string around her hips. Brenda's swim suit was a bit more basic, with a traditional thin- straps-over-the-shoulder top whose bra cups were cut down at an angle inward to show off her already magnificent cleavage. The top was black with a green and blue floral pattern which was mirrored in her simple bottoms. "Now remember," Thomas said as the ladies adjusted themselves in the rather skimpy bathing suits, "these are made with water soluble threat and will only survive one use, then you'll have to make your way back to the locker for a change of clothes." "Running through the park completely naked, of course," Wynona said with a slight frown. "If they don't throw us out before we get to the locker it's a great idea." "Just play it off as an accident," Thomas said. "Act as surprised as you really would be if your bikini suddenly came off going down a water slide. Be embarrassed. Try to cover yourself and act like you had no idea that would happen. Then hurry along, not too fast but not too slow, to the locker to get a change of clothes. If anyone asks, it was a complete accident." Ivan said, "Kimberly, Roger and I will be positioned around the park filming a documentary about the history of North American water parks. Be sure you happen to run by us and give your viewers a peek." "And what do we do after we change clothes?" Brenda asked. Thomas replied, "Your instructions will be in the locker. Oh that reminds me, I'll be holding onto the locker key so you'll have to get it from me before you go. I'll try to never be too far away from you -- for safety reasons. I am your body guard today. The choice of which slide to go on first is up to you, but the wetter the better to get rid of those cheap bikinis right away. The rest of your outfits for the day will be normal, non-rigged swim wear." Brenda and Wynona exchanged a look. "I guess the speed slide," Wynona said. "It's fast and you come into the pool at the bottom at about mach five. That should be good enough to tear these things right off." "Sounds good. Let's go in," Thomas said. Thomas led the way in and paid the way for Brenda and Wynona who clearly had no place to keep money on them. The rest of the crew stayed behind to gather up all their gear for their big documentary shoot and wandered in later. While Thomas and the ladies picked up a locker to hold their backpack full of clothes, sunglasses and sun blocker, the film crew were held up at the front gate due to the park's policy of no video equipment on the premises. "But we called ahead and arranged this with park management," complained Kimberly in her role as unit director. "We were told it was okay because it's your off season and not many guests would be here." "I don't know," the man at the ticket booth stalled. "Oh come on. It isn't like we're filming secretly with tiny camcorders. These cameras are on tripods and they're as big as a person's head. We'll be out in the open where everyone can see us. Your management already approved this." "Yeah but I'm not allowed to let anyone in with video equipment," replied the man behind the window. Ivan drew his wallet from his back pocket, flipped it open and pulled out a twenty dollar bill. Sliding it through the half circle opening in the window he said, "It says here that a Mr. Jackson gave us authorization to film our documentary here." "You're right. It does. Sorry about that. Go right in." Once they were inside the park and out of earshot of anyone at the gate, Ivan chuckled, "The irony is that I think the guy we arranged this through WAS named Jackson. I'm going to be expecting my twenty refunded by the studio." The crew walked through a covered area with food stands and a video game arcade out onto a kind of veranda looking down onto the water park built into an old lake bed below. They descended a set of wide, rough concrete steps to the hub of the original portion of the expansive park. In front of them lay a sandy beach and the tide pool attraction where wave machines created a rhythmic tide. To the left stood a couple of the original slide flumes and to the right was the locker area and a long, winding cement path to the newer attractions hidden amongst trees and hills. The concrete common area where they now stood was dotted with shower heads on tall poles. "They were heading to the speed slide first," Kimberly said. "So let's set up between there and the lockers over there. I'll go find a spot to shoot them coming down the slide. One of you go that way and the other maybe get some footage around the beach and wave pool, but keep your eyes open for Brenda and Wynona when they come by. Be sure to just happen to get a lot of film on them." Kimberly was the only camera person with a smallish camcorder not on a tripod. She would be the one pretending to do interviews and motion shots while her coworkers took the more general atmosphere shots of people walking and enjoying the sun. As they had agreed, Thomas came down the speed slide ahead of the ladies to let Kimberly know when to be aiming her camera right at the mouths of the side-by-side speed slides. For those who may not know, the speed slides at most water parks are very high and very steep, with just a couple of bits where they go horizontal to slow your descent so you don't kill yourself hitting the pool below. People go down both slides at the same time as a kind of race and as soon as the pool is cleared the next two are sent down. Kimberly didn't recognized Thomas in just a pair of swim trunks. By the time he got out of the pool and came to meet her he was soaking wet with his hair slicked back. "Excuse me sir," Kimberly shouted, "I'm doing a documentary. Can I ask you a few questions?" "Sure, why not," Thomas responded with a shrug of his shoulders. "Could you just... stand right there. That's it." Kimberly went through the motions of explaining how she was filming a documentary about the history of water parks and asking this supposed stranger if it was alright to use his face and voice on film. All the while she was actually aiming her camcorder a little bit around him to get view of the last drop of the slides. They carried on a meaningless banter until Kimberly shouted, "My god, is that woman topless?" The few eyes nearby (the park was underpopulated even for this time of year but there were nonetheless a few people making their way along the path by the speed slides) turned to watch and Kimberly zoomed in on the scene as Wynona shot feet first into the pool, her top following along a second later. Then Brenda splashed down a couple of feet to the right (well, Kimberly's right as she faced them) Wynona stood up and pretended not to know her top had come off. She ran her hands through her dyed purple hair to wring out some water and twirled it into a pony tail which she hung over her shoulder as she waded to the steps up to the walkway. It was then she looked down and saw her bare breasts. "Oh my god!" she shrieked and stood for a few seconds in shock with her arms bent outward. "Aiyee!" Brenda shouted from the pool as she discovered her bikini bottoms had come completely off and her top was hanging by one side, leaving only one of her breasts covered. Wynona wrapped her arms over her chest and clamped her arms down over her fingers in her armpits to keep them there. She turned to face Brenda who was sloshing about in the pool trying to retrieve her lost bottoms, then she waded to the steps and up onto the walkway beside her friend. Wynona wailed, "You too? I lost my top!" "I told you these slides looked too fast!" Brenda shouted excitedly as she held up her bottoms with the strings which would normally wrap around her waist completely gone. "Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod!" Wynona shrieked, bringing more attention to their predicament. "What are we going to do?" Brenda had one hand clamped down over her exposed pussy and the other pointlessly trying to cover her bare ass in back, which left one of her firm breasts, its nipple stiff from the cold water and light breeze blowing over it, completely exposed. She danced around, switching hands between the three places of exposure and trying to find a way to cover all three with just two hands. "Back to the locker," she suddenly said. "I brought a change of clothes. It's in the locker." "But where's the key?" "I have it," Thomas said. "Here." He held the key out to Wynona but she would not release her grip around her chest. Brenda took the key and the women scurried off trying to keep from exposing too much -- or at least pretending to be trying to keep from exposing too much. "Sorry, I need to go with them," Thomas said to Kimberly. "It was nice talking with you. Hope your documentary comes out well." He turned and strolled casually behind his stars. Brenda was forced to shuffle along in order to keep her thighs clamped together to cover her womanhood as much as possible and Wynona -- God bless Wynona -- kept jogging out ahead and stopping to call back to her friend to hurry up. Thomas could see that Wynona's rigged bikini bottoms were also losing their stitching and coming apart. They were maybe two- thirds of the way back to the locker when they finally gave out and fell in a tattered heap between her feet. She did not notice and continued on with her arms tightly crossed over her chest. Brenda's top, the only scrap of clothing left between the two of them, miraculously held on for the whole trip. Thomas let his pace slow so the girls would get out a bit ahead and be on display all by themselves with nowhere to turn and no one to hide behind. He looked off to his left and was glad to see that Roger had been filming as they passed. He was even happier to see that Roger was by no means the only person on the beach paying attention to the two embarrassed naked females. "You've lost your bottom!" Brenda shouted unnecessarily loud. Wynona turned to face her, looked down and shrieked. She at last let one of her arms fall from her chest, exposing a good amount of one breast but not the nipple while she covered her bald pussy. Brenda had stopped alternating between covering any two of her three exposed regions and left her ass on display while feebly covering her tits and tightly covering her furry pussy. Up ahead Thomas could see Ivan at the head of one of the paths through the trees. He was surveying the area around the outdoor lockers when two beautiful young women with all their naughty bits hanging out shuffled by. The particular spot he had chosen to set up his camera gave him a good vantage point to look up both off-angle rows of lockers. He panned and zoomed as the naked ladies scurried up the second aisle -- the one actually closer to him, "Thank you Thomas for choosing that," he thought -- and scanned along the weather beaten number plates to find their locker. Once behind the relative cover of the four foot high rows of lockers, Wynona and Brenda let their guard down and fully exposed their breasts. As Brenda fumbled turning the key in the lock, Wynona turned slowly to survey the area and gave a full front flash to Ivan just some fifty feet away. Ivan watched as Brenda finally got the locker open but he was not able to get any glimpse inside. It more than made up for it, though, that while both her hands were busy inside the locker her magnificent rack was fully displayed for his viewing pleasure. He felt the familiar strain of his cock against the fly of his pants. It was torture working for this crew, filming a pair of stunning beauties with no inhibitions, but he wouldn't give up this job for anything in the world. Thomas arrived on the scene for protection as a small crowd gathered around the locker area to watch as Brenda and Wynona quickly dressed in a fresh set of bikinis. Brenda's had a dark brown and yellow tiger stripe print, full cups and a simple hook strap around the back. Her bottoms were a straight across the top full panties style which hugged her firm, round buttocks. Wynona's new swimsuit had half cups which just barely covered her perky little nipples, a tie string around the back and a solid string going up around behind her neck. It was two tone pink with little ruffled edges in the lighter shade. Her panties were the more sexy style with a low-cut front, high sides sliding up and around her waist and just a small triangle of material to make her ass be legally covered. To most everyone's delight Brenda put her bottoms on first while Wynona took the opposite approach and put on her top first. Once both women were dressed and the locker closed, which then required another coin before the key could be pulled out -- a coin which Thomas offered as he strolled up to them to finally give them some (now unneeded) cover from the crowd -- Thomas said aloud with a shake of his head, "I warned you the speed slide is terror on bikinis." END OF PART 16 NOTE: If you've missed the story so far, you can download it free of charge at my website at http://sirrender.syntheticdimension.net/. As of January 2007 I am still adding new chapters to "What Some People Will Do" and looking for new ideas and directions for the story. 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