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Find. Check out the new MSN Search! http://search.msn.click-url.com/go/onm00200636ave/direct/01/ <1st attachment, "Laura Ch 22.doc" begin> ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ The following is fiction of an adult nature. If I believed in setting age limits for things, you'd have to be eighteen to read this and I'd never have bothered to write it. IMHO, if you can read and enjoy, then you're old enough to read and enjoy. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ All persons here depicted are figments of my imagination and any resemblance to persons living or dead is strictly a blunder on my part. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Official stuff: Story codes: FF. If stories like this offend you, you will offend ME if you read further and complain. Copyright 2004, by Gina Marie Wylie. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I can be reached at gmwylie98260@hothothotmail.com, at least if you remove some of the hots. All comments and reasoned discussion welcome. Below is my site on ASSTR: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Gina_Marie_Wylie/www/ My stories are also posted on StoriesOnline: http://Storiesonline.net/ And on Electronic Wilderness Publishing: http://www.ewpub.org/ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Laura Alban Hunt Chapter 22 -- The House Later Elena woke up and kissed me. I smiled at her, happier than I could remember being for a long time. "I have to get ready for work," Elena told me. I rolled over and kissed her solidly and she welcomed the kiss and kissed back using her tongue. But in a second, she pushed me away, giggling. "Later, dear Laura!" She wouldn't shower with me either, but then again, she had to run home and change clothes, so I knew she had to rush. "I'll be back," she said, her voice gruff, but not very deep. "You'd better!" I kissed her nose. "Bring a change of clothes and a toothbrush." She looked at me. "Is that what you really want?" I nodded. "That means we're more than friends." I laughed. "Anybody who can get me to do a mile in less than six minutes has to be more than a friend." "Later," she told me and was gone. I was contemplating what to have for lunch, being suddenly famished, when the doorbell rang. Karen Wheeler smiled at me. "Do you have a second?" "I was contemplating lunch," I told her. Karen looked at her watch, and then grinned. "I have an idea! Do you have any time?" "As in how much?" I replied, thinking again about house hunting. "Two hours." I laughed, "My husband used to take two hour lunches. Sure, I just want to be back in time for Susan to get home from school." "Tell you what, we'll leave her a note to go over to our place if she gets home before we do. Let me go and get Gus. We will have a really nice lunch!" The next thing I knew, Karen was driving us in her Saturn, and rapidly ended up on the freeway, heading west. She turned to me. "I bet they don't drive twenty miles to lunch on Manhattan!" "They got excited going four blocks," I told her. She smiled at me, as I sat in the front passenger seat. "I wanted to talk about a couple of things, girl things," Karen went on. "Sure." "June is totally smitten by Carolyn," Karen said baldly. "I think it's a case of frustrated mother syndrome, but Sunday June was excited about getting Carolyn to a proper coach, then when she figured out Carolyn's problems with her mother -- her libido went into overdrive. Now it's cubed again. She's hanging around your house morning and evening, hoping Carolyn comes to visit." I nodded. "Carolyn is twelve," I said, wishing I could meet her eyes. "But I don't think that's a problem. Carolyn isn't as -- practiced -- as June, but I don't think that will be a problem either." I didn't want to offend anyone, but I wanted it said. "June doesn't want you to be jealous," Gus told me. I did glance at her. There was a hint of amusement in her eyes, not anger or rage. I shrugged. "I'm not going to be jealous." "Then we need a way to facilitate my daughter's libido," Karen said. "It's going to be a little hard, Carolyn is under some scrutiny," I informed them. "On the other hand, tough shit!" Gus guffawed and clapped me on my back. "Language! I hear you're a stickler for proper language!" "Except when the conversation turns to social workers." "Damned right!" Karen added from next to me. A while later we whisked into a New Orleans-style Cajun restaurant, Pappadeaux's, a long ways from the house. The food was superb and we talked about light topics and the baseball team. On the way home, I spoke up. "Can I ask you two a personal, practical question?" "Sure," Gus said. "You live next to each other, but why didn't you get one big house?" "Money," Karen said. "Zoning," Gus said. They laughed. "Let's just say the legal infrastructure isn't in place for two families to buy a single family residence, no matter how many bedrooms," Karen said. "And any remodeling changes have to go to the zoning commission. They get snippy with you if they think the reason you want a bigger kitchen is because two families are going to live in a single family dwelling," Gus explained. "I love to cook," I told them with a straight face. "Well, if we had your kitchen, we wouldn't have had to think about remodeling," Karen said drolly. "Could I buy a house and ah, rent out all of the bedrooms?" I asked "That doesn't make much sense," Gus said, looking curious. "I don't know," Karen said. "I'm sure though, if it's a good idea, there's a law against it." We parked in Karen's driveway and she turned to me. "So you don't have a problem with June seeing Carolyn?" "No. Normally I'd suggest another pool party this weekend, but I'm going off for a little R & R. I think it would be best if June dealt with this herself." Karen chuckled at that. "You can be cruel at times, Laura! Not that it won't do my daughter good to defer gratification for a while." "If she gets upset, mention to her that I was a virgin in all ways on my twenty-first birthday," I told her. Gus and Karen both thought that was even more cruel... but they were both laughing. I walked home and found Sherrie waiting for me, wanting to talk. I sat and listened to her worry about how she was sure that our having sex had changed everything between us and that she was sorry and it wouldn't happen again. After about ten minutes she arrived back where she'd started from, starting to repeat herself. "Sherrie," I said, smiling. "I care a great deal for you. But you and I both know that it's never going to work for us." "I know. I just don't want to be kicked out." That, of course, had been the crux of the conversation, even if she hadn't mentioned it before. "Sherrie, if you want to stay, you can stay. I may have to buy a hotel, but you can stay, okay? I don't intend to kick you out of my house, much less my bed. I'm just trying to balance a lot of eggs right now. There are so many people I want to help!" That brought her close to tears, thinking she was interfering. I ended up hugging her for half an hour, until Susan and Jamie got home. To my surprise, they had Carolyn in tow. "My dad said he'd come and get me," Carolyn told me. "He had to go see the lawyer, then Mom. Then he wanted a nap before he goes to work." She looked at me soberly. "They want to take me away again. They say that I shouldn't be home alone." It was on the tip of my tongue to say that for the first time I agreed with a social worker. Then I remembered that Terry had said he worked the graveyard shift. Right in the middle of my musing about that, June, Tony and Sylvia arrived, and the girls all went out to the pool. Sherrie appeared at my elbow as I stood in the kitchen, watching the six girls splashing in the pool, having a good time. "I'm not making this any easier, am I?" I turned to her, leaned over and kissed her nose. "The only person making my life difficult at the moment is myself. Me, me, me. It's the things I want to do that are the issue." I nodded towards the front door. "Elena is coming over after she gets off work. Seven, I think she said. She's going to stay the night." "And what would she say if I wanted to watch?" Sherrie looked like a cat, contemplating whether or not to have goldfish-in-the-bowl or bird-in-a-cage for dinner. I laughed, and to remove the sting, hugged her. "Sherrie, you've never asked me if you could watch that I remember. Marybeth asked for you." She blushed and I hugged her harder. "Sherrie, my love, relax. Enjoy." "Laura, I think you love everyone." "I guess," I replied. The pressure of Sherrie's breasts against mine was rapidly eroding my desire to be platonic. Only an industrial strength bra on her side and a more modest one on mine kept sparks from flying. "I guess it wouldn't be a good idea," Sherrie said softly. "How am I ever going to explain my tastes to Mike?" "The young officer?" I asked and Sherrie nodded. I nodded at the pool. "I've had half the girls in the pool in my bed. It's not something I can explain to myself, much less anyone else. I have no idea." "Life is really complicated," Sherrie observed. "Life is," I agreed. "But, we can reduce it to some basics. Like, having ribs and broccoli tonight would be yummie." "You are inviting someone over for broccoli?" Sherrie asked, astounded. "Broccoli's good for you," I told her. "Oh, yeah! Right! Green squishy stuff! Ick!" I smiled politely, thinking about a plot to change Sherrie's mind about green vegetables. Only Susan would realize what was going on, because Roger had told me what he thought about Brussels sprouts. After my plot, he agreed they were very tasty. In regards to food, Susan was a proper teenager: when she was hungry, she'd eat anything. If she was hungry enough, she'd chase it down and fix it herself. It was an odd thing. I felt the house change. One second, it was the house, and then it was something more. I was standing and watching the timer on the microwave count off the last few seconds of defrosting the ribs. I tried to put my finger on the change, but I couldn't. Then Elena kissed me on the back of my neck, and then she wrapped her arms around my waist. "Miss me?" I put my hands over hers, hugging them to me. That was how the house felt. Complete. Happy, satisfied. It was how I felt. "Enormously," I told her. "I was a wreck, today," Elena whispered in my ear. "I just wanted to come home to you." I turned to face her. "Please, come with me." I reached out and took her hand, and led her to the pool. Sherrie was sitting at the table, reading a schoolbook. The others were playing some sort of game that involved riding on someone else's shoulders, trying to dunk each other. I stood at the edge of the pool and smiled. "This is my friend, Elena," I told them. "I expect you'll be seeing a lot of her." Sherrie looked away, a smile on her face. Susan and the others in the pool looked at me, looked at Elena... and went back to what they had been doing. Elena patted me on the bottom. "I think that was a sign they are more interested in dinner than anything else." "I guess!" We shared an easy laugh. It was odd, I thought. One minute I was desperately searching for something, and not entirely sure what. Now I'd found it and I was content, even if I still wasn't sure what I'd found. Before dinner, June and her friends left. Linda picked up Jamie and Terry came for Carolyn, leaving just four of us. We talked for a while, then Susan and Sherrie went to study, leaving Elena and I sitting alone, next to the pool. "I brought things for tonight and tomorrow night," Elena told me. "I'll take care of myself over the weekend; I suspect you will be busy enough yourself. Marybeth let me read the good book once. It's a lot to think about." "You're sure it won't be a problem?" I asked. She smiled. "We have our own definition of fidelity, many of us. Some people don't understand; well, maybe most people wouldn't understand. There are people in our lives who are important to us; we love them beyond compare. But we love each other in different ways, to different degrees. Most of the girls who joined the team when I did are happily married now, busy raising families. Divorces aren't as common among us as with most other people. "Yet, we all remember our lives together, no matter how far we go down our own paths. The good times, our unity... coming together as a group and having it mean something special. "Have a good time this weekend; don't think about me... well, maybe a little." I leaned close and kissed her on the cheek. "That won't be hard." Much later we lay together in bed, trading long kisses and occasional caresses. Elena wasn't in a hurry, and in spite of thinking I was, I was content to move at her pace. "You are unusually submissive tonight," Elena whispered into my ear, her tongue then assaulting it furiously. I had to stop for a moment and laugh. And after a few minutes, I still hadn't stopped. "I didn't think it was that funny," Elena said, shaking her head helplessly. "I'm sorry. Of all of the things in the world I feel right now; submissive isn't on the list. Content and happy head the list. I'm enjoying every second we're together." I squirmed, and in spite of her more muscular build, I had no trouble flipping her over on her back, and then pressing down against her. Of course, she wasn't resisting very hard. "Have you ever been with a man?" I asked boldly. "A couple of times. Once it wasn't a disaster, but afterwards he started beating on his chest, telling the world I was his. I wasn't." I smiled at her and kissed her very hard, much more passionately than we'd been kissing. My hands went to her breasts and I tweaked her nipples into hardness. "I was only with my husband, Roger," I said, breathing hard a little later. "I talked to a couple of other women I knew, some of them much more experienced than I was. Am." I corrected myself. "Roger appears to have been a prince among men. There were times that he spent as much as a half-hour in foreplay. Most times, less. And yes, there were times when the foreplay was in parallel with the sex. With you, sweet Elena, you are content with foreplay." It was her turn to laugh. "Some guys, Laura, will tell you, all we do is foreplay. And if you think I'm going to be content with foreplay..." Her hands wrapped around my bottom and she pulled me tightly too her. Our midsections started grinding together. I went back to rubbing and tweaking her breasts and there was a hard urgency when we kissed. It's a good thing I have a nice-sized bed, because we used it. We rolled over and over, one way or another; kisses and caresses, teasing tongues and breasts rubbing together. Her hand dropped and she started fingering me, first my clit, then inside me. Her technique was different than Marybeth's; Elena wanted me to come, Marybeth wanted to leave your knees shaking before and after you came. After she'd brought me off, I slid down and started licking her inner thighs, then the folds of her pussy, then her clit and then deeper inside her. "Ahhhh!" Elena sighed sibilantly. "I'd forgotten how nice this is bare!" So I did it again, and in the middle of listening to Elena's rising passion, I heard a soft, familiar gasp. I moved slightly, glancing quickly. Sherrie was at the door to my room, her hands between her legs, rubbing furiously. Other than that, she was nude. Elena lifted her head and looked too, then grinned at me. She tilted her head so she could watch Sherrie, as Marybeth had, and I went back to pleasuring her. Later Elena and I lay relaxed in each other's arms, Sherrie gone once again. "You'll be back by Sunday night?" Elena asked, her eyes glowing. "Yes." "And you won't mind if I show up with clothes for a couple of days?" "Not at all." Elena leaned over and kissed my nipple, then pillowed her head on my breast. "I love you," she said softly. "And I love you." We swam with June again the next morning. Afterwards, June said she wanted to talk to me so Elena wandered into the kitchen looking for something to eat. "Laura, did you talk to my mom about Carolyn?" I contemplated things and nodded. "We also talked about Cajun food, zoning, and baseball," I interjected. "It's okay. Sometimes Mom thinks she has to protect me from myself. She gets this look on her face that says everything. "I just wanted to tell you I'm okay about Carolyn. I swear I wouldn't do anything to hurt her." "Can I tell you something, something from one woman to another?" June nodded, suddenly wary. "Moms have concerns about their daughters. Their kids, whatever gender. I'm a friend of yours, your mom, and your friends. June, if I thought for a second you were out to hurt someone, you'd be out the front door so fast, your head would spin." She nodded. "So, you don't have to tell me how you feel about Carolyn, just like I didn't tell you how I felt about Elena. People know these things, June, without having to be told." She grinned. "I figured. She's nice." "She is very nice. "I am not spying on you for Karen -- she told me how she thought you felt about Carolyn. June, Carolyn needs friends desperately." June nodded gravely. "I wanted to have Dad ask her dad if she could come with me to swimming Saturday morning. I told my coach about her and she says she would give Carolyn a tryout." I smiled at June, reached out and squeezed her hand. "You would make Carolyn happier, I think, with that, than anything else." "You're saying I shouldn't..." she waved her hands helplessly. "Make love. June, that's not my choice. It's something the two of you have to decide, one at a time, then together. I don't think it would hurt, but I think a friend would take it slow." June looked at me steadily, an uncanny gaze. Some of the commentators were right, I thought uneasily. Our kids are growing up much faster than we did, than our parents did. But what about kids from times gone past? When girls June's age were married? When boys her age worked just as hard as any adult? It was something to think about. I waved at the house, towards Susan's room. "My daughter and her friends compare it to butterflies, flitting from flower to flower. They enjoy each other's company; they make love and then move on to someone new. I don't think that would be good for Carolyn." "Everybody's different," June agreed. "We are. Which means we have to understand the people we care about better than most, so we don't mess up." June nodded, her eyes bright. "Mom says the same thing. When she says it, I feel like she's trying to control me, make me do things her way. When you say it, it's different." "It's not really different. If I were to say something like that to Susan, she'd probably tell you I was 'going all mother' on her. That's a phrase I heard a few times back in New York. Not so much any more." No, we had reasons why we clung to each other tightly in those days. Even now we have reasons. Even if they were different that what they had been. June nodded, then got up. "Thanks for letting me swim." "You're welcome," I told her. "We need another pool party, I think. Not this weekend, but how about the week after that?" June smiled. "Yeah!" She left and I found Sherrie and Elena sitting in the dining room having just about finished their breakfasts. I went and woke Susan up. Susan smiled at me. "Elena is really cute." "She is. She's going to be staying over a lot." Susan's smile turned to a huge grin. "Gosh!" She hugged me and I kissed her. It started out mother-daughter and then changed to mildly hungry. "Rub me," Susan whispered in my ear. I obliged. She hadn't really had a chance to sample how much I'd learned from Marybeth. It worked really well, and Susan sagged against me. I saw her eyes go beyond me, and I turned, expecting Sherrie. Sherrie was there but so was Elena. Susan giggled, then tossed her nightie into a heap on her closet floor and walked to the shower, wiggling and vamping to our audience. "You're both perverts," I said, laughing hard. "Learning at the feet of the expert," Elena said. "Feet?" I asked, making Sherrie blush. I walked up to her and kissed her lightly. "Stop blushing, Sherrie," I told her gently. "I guess I should. It's not as though you're forcing me to watch." "But I don't mind," I told her. "But if you do it, don't blush." Sherrie looked at Elena. "You know how it works," I said softly. "You might not have been part of it, but you surely know how people felt." Sherrie nodded. "I look at you sometimes and I want so many things..." Elena came close and touched Sherrie on the shoulder. "I want to add to peoples lives, not subtract." Sherrie looked ready to cry. "Sometimes I want to be with Laura. But I don't want to make love to her like you do, like the others want. I wish I was a man so I could..." She wasn't blushing, but she couldn't bring herself to finish the sentence. "I'm tempted to paddle Laura for not mentioning where she met me, Sherrie. In a minute, I'll give you my card. Come see me today or tomorrow. I can help." "How could you help with... that?" I remembered the nook and the contents. I wasn't sure how I felt; I decided that amused was good. "Oh, you'll see. I'd hate to spoil the surprise," Elena said with a smirk on her face. "Does your father know what you do?" I asked. "He knows I work for Cathy. He's never been there, so no, I don't think so." "What do you do?" Sherrie asked, curious. "Toy shop clerk," Elena said, beating me to an answer. My stomach let out a deep growl and all three of us laughed. "I think I've been told it's time to get something to eat myself." We went back to the dining room table, and I fixed small omelets for Susan and myself. When I got back from taking Susan to school, Elena was sitting on the couch, Sherrie was sitting on a hassock in front of her, text book in hand, while Elena was rubbing her back. Both of them were nude. "A quick study," I quipped. Both of them smiled. Sherrie lofted her book. "I have a quiz later today. Elena is helping me relax." "I went through junior high, high school, undergrad university and never had someone to rub my back," I admitted. "Then I met Roger and we had wonderful sex. I kept thinking the time we were spending together would hurt our grades, but it didn't; if anything, they improved. Maybe because there were back rubs, front rubs and all sorts of things to keep me relaxed." "Exactly!" Elena exclaimed. "Cheerleaders know the importance of being relaxed and comfortable at all times. In fact, as many times a day as you can squeeze in the time for." "Squeeze time or each other?" I asked. Sherrie turned and thanked Elena, then headed off to get ready for school herself. Elena looked at the wall clock. "I have to work this morning. I work four six-hour days a week and two eight-hour days." She made a face, "Friday and Saturday for the long days. Cathy gives me Mondays off." I nodded. "I was going to look for a bigger house," I told her. "I do like this one," Elena told. "The kitchen is to die for. The pool..." she came and hugged me and I took her in my arms. "I've wanted a pool since I was little." "We will have a pool. I heard a request for tennis courts as well." "Can I ask a personal question, Laura?" "Sure," "Are you wealthy?" I shrugged. "Most people would think so. But to me, it's numbers on bank statements. Like scores in a game that I was watching, but not playing. My father-in-law is a genuinely nice person, but he's been gently hinting even before we moved that I should find something to do. Now I have." "I'm not a gold digger." I smiled. "Elena, it's all paper. A gold digger would just get frustrated." We kissed long and hard, rubbing each other's backs. Since Elena was bare, I definitely had the advantage. We broke apart after a few minutes and she laughed. "Now, I'm going to go get ready for work." "Can I ask you a question?" Elena grinned. "Sure," "Am I too old?" "No. Older than me, sure. But so what? I fell in love with you the first time I saw you. You were so calm, so serene, even doing something you'd obviously never done before. Something that most women, the first time they come in, blush and stammer and frequently turn around and leave. You're different, not like that at all, Laura. You face things. Good, bad, indifferent, you don't shrug and turn away or defer it to another time. You make up your mind and do your best." I kissed her on the nose. "Well, thanks for the vote of confidence." "Later I'll do more than vote!" We parted with a much shorter kiss, but still as sweet. A bit later I was sitting at Susan's computer in her room. I made a mental note to myself. I almost never used a computer and so didn't have one. Roger had one at home and so did Susan. I needed to find the box that contained Roger's, unpack it and set it up. I quickly found the multiple listing service entries for Scottsdale and selected houses with five or more bedrooms. I chuckled when I saw there were more than three hundred entries in the results list. I changed the search criteria to include just the Scottsdale zip code but that barely got it below three hundred. In spite of the plethora of choices, I browsed through some of the entries. In spite of the age of the Internet, most of the entries were bare bones, with a lot of strange abbreviations. When I bought the house I let my father-in-law contact an agent, and the agent had whisked me around to a few homes, hitting pay dirt on the fifth visit. I turned off Susan's computer and went into my room and dug through the small desk I had in a corner and found the card for the agent. It was, I saw, now after nine. Elena came and kissed me goodbye, leaving me contemplating just how early one could decently call a real estate agent. I figured that at worst he could just return my call, or failing that, I could talk to someone else. I dialed the number and asked for Mr. Marshall Soares. The young woman who answered the phone was polite. "I'm very sorry, Mr. Soares is on vacation; he's gone to Europe for six weeks. Could someone else help you?" "He acted as my agent earlier in the year. Now I find I need a larger place. I was quite pleased with Mr. Soares, but if he's not available, I'd be glad to speak to someone else." "I'll connect you to Mr. Wright." A pleasant male voice answered a second later. "Andrew Wright. How may I help you?" "My name is Laura Alban Hunt," I told him, then went on to explain what I was looking for. He'd clearly been taking notes, and when I finished he was ready. "Obviously, there are a lot of properties that fit your general description." I narrowed it down for him and then he asked, "And when would you like to look at some properties?" "Whenever is convenient. Now is okay, later today. Tomorrow morning. I'm booked for the weekend. But I'd rather start sooner than later." "How about you give me your address and give me about an hour to do some research. Then I'll pick you up and squire you around." I told him the address and he said he's see me shortly. I went and changed clothes, wanting to look more like a woman who could afford to spend a little money. I stared at myself in the mirror for a few minutes, before I put on my bra. Thirty-six and not in bad shape at all. My breasts were full, with just a hint of sag. A hint I should pay attention to, I realized. Running around without a bra all the time was sexy and got me a lot of attention. But I was too large not to need the support. When I heard a car in the driveway, I went out, without waiting for him to come to the door. I didn't care if the real estate agent thought I was overeager. In fact, if he did, maybe he'd be eager to help. Andrew Wright was my age, more or less. He was a tall man with black hair, skin that was dark as well. He had large, round brown eyes that made him look rather owlish even if he wasn't wearing glasses. He opened the door for me and I sat down, smoothing my skirt, before he could get back around. "I have three properties for you to look at," he said, when he was seated. He started his Mercedes and the air conditioning kicked on at once. "We'll spend some time later and refine what it is you are looking for, and your schedule. Most of the houses you would be interested in looking at require appointments or have scheduled viewing times." "I understand." He waved at the house. "I glanced at your file. Are you going to be selling this house?" I shook my head. "No, I don't think so. My father-in-law is of the opinion that the way to make money in real estate is to buy it and lease it out, not sell it." "If you have the money to invest," he said, agreeing. "I do." Evidently, I thought, it really had been a short glance if he thought he had to say that. The first house was ghastly. It was a huge pile of stucco adjacent to a golf course. It did have lots of green grass and tall trees, which was nice. What wasn't nice was there was no pool. Andy, as he'd asked me to call him, was apologetic. "A pool was one of the search criteria I used. I'm sorry about that." There had been a woman who'd met us at the door, and who'd accompanied us as we'd toured. She had remained silent throughout, but now she spoke. "My sister is very fond of parties, but the liability issues..." She shook her head. "Then someone mentioned this place. There's a community pool that you can book for parties and the like. They have certified lifeguards and all of that, plus a lot of liability insurance. Spread over several hundred homeowners, it saves a lot of money. The community pool counts as a pool for the real estate people. A lot of people who come to look disagree." "There's a homeowners association?" I asked, honing in on what I thought was essential. "Yes, this development is part of the golf course. There are requirements for grounds upkeep, right down to the color of the grass and the types of trees and shrubs you can plant." I thanked her politely and we went on to house number two. "In your notes," I told Andy as we drove, "rule out anything with a home owner association. When I buy something, it's mine." He laughed. "The city council has all sorts of rules and regulations themselves. Scottsdale isn't the bastion of conservative small government they like to pretend." "Zoning and the like, I can deal with," I told him, making a mental note to myself to get more involved in community affairs; talk to Marybeth about that. "My brother is on the city council," he told me. "I get angry sometimes when they pass yet another stupid law. The problem is, Scottsdale is really two cities." He waved towards the south. "South of Indian School you find middle class families, then further south, things go further south, economics wise. The rich folks that live at this end of town though, think they can legislate one set of rules for everyone." He glanced me. "Sorry, sometimes I get carried away." "That's okay, I get carried away at times too." The second house was desert landscaped and it did have a pool. Nonetheless, it just didn't click with me. The third was a little odd. I mean, it was a Tudor, something I was familiar with from Long Island. There are a lot of Tudor houses on Long Island. But it wasn't set among other Tudors; it was the lone Tudor. The street was a cul-de-sac about a mile away from my house and every house on the cul-de-sac was different. Not just a little different from each other, but vastly different. "This was a demonstration development about six years ago," Andy told me. "Different builders showcasing their work. Twenty different builders, twenty different homes. "On the other hand, it's six thousand square feet in the main house, two thousand square feet of guest house, a four-car garage, a two-car garage, swimming pool, spa and two tennis courts. The swimming pool is Olympic-sized and has a pool house larger than some homes. All sitting on two acres." We'd spent about a half hour on each of the first two houses; the third we spent most of the afternoon looking at. It was amazing, really. You could go through some of the rooms, turn around and go back and it was like an entirely different house. The rooms were large and comfortable, mostly done in wood paneling that was dark, but not so dark that you felt hemmed in or actually in the dark. Warm would be the word I'd use for it. In most ways, I thought, it really was an English Tudor house of the period. A country house made to be lived in. I finally made up my mind, even though I was sure I could spend another hour or two looking around. We ended up sipping tea in a Mexican restaurant a few blocks away. "Talk to me about the house. Price, availability, everything," I told him. "The owner writes for a living. He's just had a second book on the New York Times Best Seller list. Neither was on top, but he did sell a half million copies of the first and more than that of the second. Now, Hollywood has optioned the first one for a movie, and the Hollywood bug has seriously bitten him. His wife thinks she has a shot at a starring role." He grinned at me. "In my misspent youth, I graduated from UCLA with a fine arts degree in film-making. If she was twenty years younger, his wife might have a shot, but not today. He's going to find that in Hollywood, unless you are a star, a producer or director, you're dog meat. And as a writer, you are at the bottom of the food chain. "He wants to sell quick and has set the asking price at 90% of the assessed valuation. A lot of houses in Scottsdale sell above assessment, so that's a positive. On the other hand, he wants two point seven million. Taxes will run about three thousand a month, insurance about a thousand a month, and the electric bill is about fifteen hundred. Fill the pool and you're out another fifteen hundred for the water. Living in a house like that one isn't cheap." I blinked, and then thought back about what I was looking for and why. "I'd like to come back this evening with my daughter and a couple of friends. Would that be a problem?" "No. The house is currently unoccupied, they've moved on to LA and are staying in someone's guest house in Brentwood." He looked at me, his expression neutral. "Are you thinking of making an offer?" "Barring something untoward, either later this evening or tomorrow." "You're a widow?" "A 9/11 widow." I wanted to close out that line of thought and he reacted as most people would: he didn't want to go there. "This is awfully expensive for a widow with a daughter." "A widow with a daughter, who's about to get at least one foster child, plus I have a boarder and a friend who sleeps over." I waved at him. "What are the rules in Scottsdale about home-based businesses?" "Mostly zoning; if you have customers visit, there has to be parking, that sort of thing. There's about a dozen parking spots on asphalt at the house. But, that's something you should check for yourself with the city council. For instance, even though you aren't cheek and jowl with your neighbors, a rock band might bring some criticism." "No rock bands. I volunteer at Scottsdale High with the cheerleaders. I was thinking of running something like a school for younger girls who aspire to be cheerleaders." "Like I said, you should talk to the city council. I don't know of a reason why not, but they are very creative about finding them, when they want to be." "I'd like to spend a couple more hours there this evening, but I don't want to ruin your home life." "Home life?" He chuckled at that. "I'm a divorced father of two daughters. My favorite movie has always been 'Support Your Local Sheriff.' I understand the girl in that who talks about her dear, departed mother. Departed, not dead." He paused, and then looked at me. "I suppose that sounds crass. I'm sorry." "If we can't laugh at life, it tends to bite us in unexpected and unpleasant places. No offense taken." "So, I have a thirteen-year-old and a sixteen-year-old who tolerate me and hate their mother." "Well, I'll have a huge house-warming party if I buy the house; they'll be invited. You too." "Well, that's still a ways down the road yet," Andy said, trying to be cautious. "Oh yes, I understand. On the other hand, we were talking the other day about a house with more space. This will do. It will definitely do." "Obviously, I should have paid more attention to your financial statement," he told me. I smiled at him. "Indeed so. What time this evening?" "Seven, I think. I have your number and I'll call you." I smiled, and a few minutes I was dropped off at the house a few minutes after four. Elena's pickup was there, so was Sherrie's car. I could hear the sound of voices from the pool area. Everyone, I thought, was there. I smiled a knowing smile, one that I'd had on my face when Susan was first old enough to appreciate Christmas, the same smile I'd had on my face every time I'd given her a present since. <1st attachment end> ----- ASSM Moderation System Notice------ Notice: This post has been modified from its original format. 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