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Date: Mon,  2 Sep 2002 22:10:04 -0400
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The Annex Reviews, 9/2/02
by Lady Cyrrh (ladycyrrh@aol.com)
Website: http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh 




The stories:

The Hunt Girls (David Shaw): M/F, F/F, humil, exhib
The Pony Princess (Leviticus): M/F, ponygirl/boy, fantasy
Outback (Dingo Jay): M best, humor
The Khyromicon: Prologue (Alex Schmallux ): t/b cons, anal, oral, 
     fantasy
The Fellatorim (Shumars): M/F oral
The Legjob (Rick O): M/F femdom spank




The Hunt Girls [A+]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 7/4/02
Author: David Shaw
Author address: david@f-e-mail.com
Author website: http://www.f-e-mail.com
Type: M/F, F/F, humil, exhib

Three young women employed by an English riding school receive the 
shock of their lives when their workplace is invaded by a group of 
masked activists from The League Against Blood Sports, who take 
objection to the school's involvement in that quintessential English 
upper-crust sport, fox hunting. They force the three to strip and 
perform humiliating acts on them with the saddles and tack, taking 
pictures (for later tabloid publication) all the while to send a 'message' to 
other proponents of the sport. If you like that premise you will like this 
story, which is a well-written, detailed, and frighteningly plausible 
account of their experience through one girl's eyes, which is 
uncomfortable and humiliating for her, but not too terribly brutal.

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[All] the guys were offered a chance to come up to the saddles and suck 
on any vacant nipple they could find. The camera girls were shooting 
that as well, all the time it was happening. I don't know how many snaps 
they took of us, no more than I can remember exactly how many mouths 
I had chewing and licking and biting me as I hung on desperately to the 
saddle pegs. I do know that by the time it was over I was cracking a huge 
wet and as ready for a fuck as any of the guys. Sore in the teats and hot 
in the saddle was my situation. Distracting as the attention was, I'd 
glanced over to the other two girls several times to see how they were 
coping.

Sandra's reaction was a surprise. After she'd been double sucked a few 
times she was giggling like a drunken tart. As for Melissa, she sounded 
like a cow that badly needed milking as she bounced up and down on her 
saddle and the hand squeezed in between it and her. She looked over at 
me and gave a kind of 'what-the-hell-else-can-we-do' look. I'd never 
seen her eyes so bright -- or her face so flushed either. 
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Yes, the victims do wind up enjoying it somewhat, even as the action 
moves on to sucking, fucking, and motorized sex toys.

In sum, I found this an excellently written story that had a distinct 
British flavor; hot in the shame/forced-sex arena, though perhaps too 
literary and complicated to act as stroke on the first read (and it did 
require more than one read.) If you have a fetish about women in tall 
boots and horseback riding gear, you will probably like it too.




The Pony Princess [A]
Author: Leviticus
Where found: Writings of Leviticus
URL: http://195.15.95.67/writing-of-leviticus/ThePonyPrincess.htm
Type: M/F, ponygirl, fantasy

Leviticus writes literate bondage stories set for the most part in the 
modern world, but in sheltered, secret communities where BDSM 
practitioners can give full rein to their pleasures. In this story, 
however, he turns to myth, telling us about a faraway kingdom, a curse 
laid on the land, and the king's daughter, who has been turned into a 
ponygirl as part of that curse. Her task is to find the one man who can 
release her from her bondage, otherwise the inhabitants of whole 
kingdom will be turned into horses. She finally does find a candidate 
who goes about it in a unique way (though not so surprising to regular 
readers of ponygirl/boy literature.)

The story was short and spare as a good fairy tale should be, with the 
storytelling conventions of it; I found no fault with the writing. (Though 
I do think the angry wizard, the progenitor of the curse, was somewhat 
petty.) It combined two favorite genres of mine, fantasy and ponygirl, 
into something unique, and for that I recommend it; the author clearly 
has a lot of love for his fetish community, and it shows. I found that 
sweet -- as sweet as the story was, in its final conclusion. 




Outback [A+]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 7/23/02
Author: Dingo Jay
Author address: dingojay@earthlink.net
Type: M best, humor

Sometimes you have to take the things you read on ASSM with a grain of 
salt. Like this story, narrated by an Australian guy who talks about his, 
and his sister's, sexual relations with his three sheep herding dogs. In 
detail. Well, you can either choose to take it as fact and be squicked (or 
turned on, if you're into dogs), or take it as a barbed, extended joke aimed 
at The Crocodile Hunter and other TV hosts of his ilk, which I did.

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Luke, as I mentioned, is a wee bit submissive and not quite so keen on 
playing tonsil snooker as his dad is.  He prefers to lie on his back and let 
me do most of his work for him.  I sit by him and roll his lovely bollocks 
between my thumb and fingers.  With my other hand, I stroke the 
hidden bit of his cock that's just under the skin between his sack and his 
arsehole.  I feel it twitch and throb a bit under me fingertips as his knot 
grows inside his sheath and the pointy bit on the tip peeks from the 
opening.  I crouch over him on me hands and knees and take him in my 
mouth, while my own cock bobs about over his face.  He laps at it a bit, 
but quickly loses interest once I begin sucking and stroking him in 
earnest.  He tries to thrust a bit at first, but in his bottom-side-up 
position 
he really can't, so he simply relaxes and enjoys the ride.  Luke is just a 
bit better endowed than his dad is, and he is capable of doling out a 
stunning amount of cum for a smallish dog.  In addition, his spunk is 
rather sweet and lacks the slightly bitter and metallic flavour that 
Bluey's has.
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What can I say? You either are amused or you aren't.

This just might win best bestiality story of the year.




The Khyromicon: Prologue [A-]
Where found: ASSGM
When posted: 8/17/02
Author: Alex Schmallux
Author address: alexschmallux@hotmail.com
Type: t/b cons, anal, oral, fantasy

In this fantasy story Meryn, a young priest, prepares to go out into the 
world to seek five orphans who hold the fate of the world in balance. To 
prove himself fit, he must match himself physically and mentally in the 
rites of Bhaeris with the guidance of his ex-lover and tutor Brynn. The 
story being a pseudo-mystical fantasy many things were left unsaid, a 
convention of the genre, I guess. Nevertheless there was a good first 
time experience between the priest and his tutor, and some imaginative 
descriptions of the five humanoid children the priest must find (they 
correspond to the underground, desert, forest, sea, and normal - urban - 
environments) and I would guess that in later chapters they will be 
grown up enough to have sexual adventures of their own, with or 
without their mentor.

An interesting start for something longer, but I do criticize the 
stodginess of the tone. Though it was literate and 'professional' it read too 
derivatively, despite the sex, of commercial adolescent fantasy -- the 
Dragonlance and Drizzt kind. I'd to see more craziness and personal fire 
from the writer, some more sloppy, unfettered imagination. Come on. I 
know you can do it.




The Fellatorium [B/B-]
Where found: ASSM
When posted: 8/29/02
Author: Shumars
Author address: shumars@verizon.net
Type: M/F oral, fantasy

A young bride-to-be undergoes a special rite in this brief tale, which 
could be described as magic realism erotica, or a daffy off-the-wall 
fantasy. It's a decidedly unglamorous ritual: the girl dresses in 
sweatpants, a t-shirt, and kneels on a shower room floor, which leads me 
to think the "my country" mentioned in the text is in a decaying Soviet-
block nation somewhere. She prepares herself by gargling with oysters, 
egg whites, and salt water before orally servicing seven naked men: "#6 
Ordered me to orally clean the mess the previous man had made. Then he 
masturbated and ordered me to suckle his testicles. His semen landed in 
my hair." Inexplicably, this humiliating treatment makes her eager to 
service her own husband.

The story was interesting in a weird alternate-universe way -- shades of 
Daphne Xu's "Teen Blowjob Tournament" -- but was much less developed, 
without the dry sense of humor the former story had.  It wasn't very 
sexy, either, unless you like reading about a young woman's clinical, 
uncomfortable sexual initiation; it might have been improved by telling 
us more about what the protagonist feels, instead of what happens to her.




The Legjob [A]
Where found: ASSM
When posted: 8/29/02
Author: Rick Oh
Author address: rick_oh@whiteice.com
Author website: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/rick_oh/www/
Type: M/F femdom spank

Rick O is a new writer (as far as I can tell) who specializes in bondage, 
enema, watersport, and D/s tales in clinical settings, the kinkiness and 
"hard" sexuality aspect of them ameliorated by the enjoyment all parties 
take in the activities, and a puckishly lighthearted feel (for example, in 
"Amber in the Milk Room" the vacuum-milked victim turns about out to 
be the milkmaid/nurse's husband, and a fully consenting participant.) 
This story revolves around the protagonist fucking the oily crevice 
between a bound brunette's leggy legs:

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I grasped the fleshy portion of the brunette's calves and pumped my
boner between her legs.  The lotion had imparted a smooth and
lubricated quality to her legs.  I knew I would be ejaculating soon,
as I had been hand-jobbed to the point just short of orgasm twice that
day, and three time the previous day.  This also ensured that I would
have a plentiful supply of semen.  

I felt the brunette's thighs and went back to feeling her legs as I
pumped.  A leg job was a new experience.
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A paddling with a hairbrush follows for one of the "nasty boys who 
squirt on a woman's legs." All in good fun, of course.

A short tale, quick to read, but effective; if you want a friendly 
introduction to enema, pumping, and bondage fic, look no further.


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