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This story is intended for adults only. I should confess that where I live
it is VERY cold and snowy right now, so I decided to write about heat as a
means of escape. Trapped indoors, I wrote this story during the course of
the two football games that were on TV today. I hope you enjoy this off the
cuff effort!
Of Sweat and Semen
By Laura Smith
The great city lay quiet at noon. On account of the fierce heat, few people
were about. The storm, which passed noisily before dawn, had done little to
cool down the sweltering tenements, and now from the damp pavement, steam
was rising, giving the place an unearthly, hellish appearance.
Laura hurried towards the subway, pulling at her dress. The thin fabric
clung damply at her chest, between her shoulder blades and at the small of
her back, but pull at it as she might, it slapped back against her and
stuck, like a clammy, lascivious hand. A hot wind poured up the stairs from
the station, whipping along bits of trash and dust so that it seemed to
Laura, shielding her eyes while descending the stairs, as if she was
entering the mouth of some ungodly cauldron.
Trains on other lines in distant tunnels, boring through the city like
vicious metal worms, shrieked and groaned faintly as Laura waited on the
platform. Because this was not her usual station, Laura mostly used the
uptown lines, she was unsure of where to wait for the train. Down the
platform a couple of men waited, rough looking types, and Laura edged
towards them, staying enough at a distance where she hoped they would pay no
attention to her.
The train rounded the corner in the tunnel like a hissing, grinding devil,
its headlights piercing the dusty, humid air like beacons signaling to ships
far out in the fog. The car was packed and sweltering - no chance for a
seat, and Laura wedged herself in as best she could and reached out for a
strap to hold onto. Before the doors even closed, Laura became aware of the
strong odor of men and their sweat in the car. This line, which ran up from
the docks and beneath the central city to the freight yards, was used mostly
by working men and Laura could almost pick out their trades by what she
smelled - the fishermen, stevedores, and mechanics - had about them, in
addition to their sweat, the smell of fish, tarred rope, and oil. But
pervading everything was the briny smell of the sea.
The doors slammed shut with a whirring of the machinery and the train
lurched forward, jostling Laura against the coarse bodies of the men around
her. Rounding the first corner out of the station, the lights flickered and
dimmed. Laura knew the heat was causing a great strain on the electrical
system in the city. She imagined all the thousands of fans perched near
open windows, uselessly stirring up the muggy air or blowing across the tops
of melting blocks of ice in the homes of the wealthy. Yesterday at her job,
the machinery had spun down. For a moment everything was eerily dark and
quiet before the lights came back on at half power, lighting the cavernous
factory a murky brown. And then the boss strode down the line, telling all
the girls to go home for the day.
Suddenly, the train came to a stop, throwing the passengers against each
other once again. Laura felt a man's muscular thigh press against her hip.
The light flickered and hummed, for a moment holding on to that familiar
faded brown hue before going out all together.
Strangely, no one said a word. The working men all around her stood as
silently as penned cattle. Laura caught her breath and listened for the
slightest sound, but heard nothing, not even breathing. It was so odd to
hear not one voice - not a baby's cry, or a woman's scream. Laura wondered
if she was the only female in the car. She hadn't noticed any other women
before, but thought nothing of it. This was a working man's train. She
imagined the heat had taken its toll on the shipyards as well. Without
power, the machines for loading and unloading the ships would be idle. With
no lights in the great warehouses, the men would be stumbling about in the
dark, and the gaping holds of the ships must be as hot as iron kettles.
Laura supposed the train was packed with men, streaming away from the docks
towards whatever rest and comfort they might find in the tenement blocks
across town.
From far up the tunnel there came a great shriek of metal on metal that
sounded like some ancient, iron bird calling out in agony. The floorboards
rumbled slightly beneath Laura's feet as the sound echoed and died away, and
then once again all was silent. Laura imagined that this was probably the
way the world would end - not in some heroic struggle or in poetic glory,
but in faceless and dark silence, with hordes of the common people waiting
quietly for an unremembered death.
The car seemed to grow hotter, if that was possible, and the men pressed in
on her from all sides. Laura could feel the hard buttons of a man's
trousers digging into her side. His belt buckle pushed into her hip,
painfully. She tried to shift position but was unable to move. She
considered clearing her throat to politely let the man know he was
intruding, but Laura found the thick air sticking in her throat.
And then it began. The men around her moved back slightly, and Laura
realized they had been pressing in on her from all sides by design, not
because of the overcrowded car. As if moved by a single will, she felt
several pairs of rough hands begin to grope her at once. Laura tried with
all her strength to summon up her voice to cry out against these men, but no
sound would come out. She tried to struggle, but found herself frozen as
the coarse hands passed over her arms and shoulders, across her breasts, and
down her back.
To her horror, Laura realized that wherever the hands touched her clothing,
the thin fabric of her dress simply dissolved. Laura could feel it
sloughing away like a newspaper left out in the rain. The men's hands
continued rubbing over her until she was naked from the waist up, and still
they touched her, on the breasts, under her arms, and she could vividly feel
the thick callused fingers against her skin. When the hands moved lower,
Laura began to tremble, the only movement her body seemed capable of. The
hands passed over her thighs and buttocks with their strange ability to
dissolve her clothing undiminished. A hand slid over her belly and snaked
its way between her legs and Laura felt the last remaining shards of her
dress and the undergarments beneath it disappear until the thick rough
fingers were in contact with her most sensitive flesh.
Strong arms looped under her armpits from behind as large meaty hands
grasped her by the ankles and Laura found herself lifted off the floor.
There were more hands on her now. They seemed to be everywhere - between
her thighs, kneading her buttocks and pressing against her breasts. Many
pairs of hands were holding her by the legs, and they began to spread them
apart.
Laura felt a man positioning himself between her legs. The rough fabric of
his trousers rubbed the insides of her thighs and then she could feel the
hot blunt head of his penis probing at the opening to her vagina. The man
grasped her at the waist, hooking his thumbs over her pelvic bones, and
pulled Laura towards him, thrusting his burning penis into her. Laura was
surprised at how easily the thick organ went into her, but her breath still
caught in her throat and pain shot up her spine from her pelvis. The hands
all over her body held Laura firmly while the man withdrew his penis and
thrust it into her again several more times. He shifted his hands around to
her buttocks, grasping and pulling them apart before pulling her pelvis
against his and holding it against him while inside of her, she could feel
his penis jerking and twitching. The man's grasp became painfully strong,
and then Laura could feel the wet throb of his ejaculation.
After finishing, the first man was replace by another who slid his rigid
organ into her easily. Laura felt something ticklish between her breasts,
and then the sensation of liquid and she realized one of the other men had
relieved himself - squirted his semen between her breasts. She felt some of
the hands release her, only to be replaced with the blunt straining heads of
penises nudging against every part of her body - her breasts, her neck and
face.
The second man ejaculated inside of her, but Laura scarcely noticed. All at
once, she felt the men all around her beginning to ejaculate, spreading
their thick warm semen over her face, into her hair, and across her belly.
She felt as if she was drowning in it - dissolving into the coating of hot
sticky sperm.
The hands that were still holding onto her gradually lowered her feet to the
ground. To her amazement, Laura discovered that clothing had somehow
rematerialized on her body, although everything was soaked and smelled of
fresh semen. The hands at her shoulders released her also, and began
stroking her, smoothing down her dress.
From far up in the tunnel, Laura heard the distant shriek of grating metal
again, and a moment later the train began to rumble and inch forward. The
men had all backed away, so that no one was touching her. Laura's mind
whirled: what would she do when the lights came back on again? What would
happen?
The lights flickered several times before sputtering back to full power. By
now the train was back up to full speed, and Laura discovered that she was
standing just as she had been before, holding a strap in a car full of
sweaty working men. Her clothing was drenched - with sweat. A bead of it
ran down her forehead, stinging her eye.
The large man in greasy overalls, who had been standing beside her the whole
time, holding onto a strap with two gnarled hands, looked down at Laura and
reached into his breast pocket.
"Care for a handkerchief, missy?" he said.
The End
By Laura Smith
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