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The Annex Reviews, 6/17/00
by Lady Cyrrh (ladycyrrh@aol.com)
Website: http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh OR
http://home.aol.com/ladycyrrh
Hi everyone.
I have a question to ask everyone out there. Excuse me for being a little
out of touch, or a little computer-shy lately, but whatever happened to
Dejanews? I recently went there and found the site had been revamped,
and that it now exists as a search site for products. As in things you buy,
like cameras and cars. Bullshit. I want my old Dejanews back. Is this
function performed by a similar site now? Are there other ways to
search newsgroup postings? Please drop me a line.
I also would like to let everyone know I am restructuring my site and
adding an archive to it, which is not operational yet but will be soon. In
the meantime, only the year 2000 reviews will be available.
Please keep those websites coming to me! I am particularly interested at
this time in fanfic porn written about rock stars and if there are any
sites containing Tolkien-inspired porn. There's a movie coming out, you
know.
The stories:
Blowjob from shy Indian Aunt (Sen): M/F, incest, oral, ws
A Story of the Wars - Of Orcs and Elves (KNW): MF, MMF, gang, fantasy
Master Chris Story.50 - Elizabeth's Adventure in Chicago (Master Chris):
M/F BDSM, anal, toys
A Concert Video (Matthew): M solo, hanging, snuff, voyr
Highjacked Sorority Initiation (Gym Dog): M/F, F/F, college
Blowjob from shy Indian aunt [B+/A-]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 5/16/00
Author: Sen
Address: sen84@my-deja.com
The narrator of this story grew up in India, and had a very unusual
relationship with his aunt (non-blood relation.) Because India is in the
backwaters as far as women's rights are concerned, women are still
submissive towards the demands of the men, and male relations, in their
lives, and therefore the narrator is able to get away with a lot of stuff
when his uncle isn't around. Such includes groping, watching his aunt
pee, breastfeed, and undress, and generally harassing her as only a
horny adolescent could.
The narrator (this purports to be a true-life story) called the
relationship consensual, but I don't know. I mean, what's the poor
tradition-bound woman going to do? If she complains, her husband
would likely blame her, and her nephew do something else to put her in
her place...which she will have no choice but to accept.
For this reason I found the story a little disturbing, though I admit it
was interesting. It probably goes on a lot more than anyone wants to
admit.
A Story of the Wars - Of Orcs and Elves [A]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 6/12/00
Author: KNW
Address: hick@main.jetnet.ab.ca
For being such a popular writer, Tolkien has had surprisingly little
impact in neterotica circles, though he can said to be the one of the
originators of the defiled elven maid story, simply because way back
when he came up with the prototypical elven maid. However, most of
the elven porn I've seen has come out of the Dungeons & Dragons school
-- hack n' slash -- and lacks that misty Middle Earth feel.
This story attempts to capture that feel, featuring authentically detailed
orcs that would do Mr. Tolkien proud, or perhaps embarrassed,. Here one
pauses to piss in a bush, discomfiting the elven maid who's spying on
the horde:
She had heard tales of the mythical size of orcish manhood. They
turned out to be true. As she gawked, the orc (an officer by his
uniform), was at least eight inches in length semi-limp, and larger
around than her wrists. He stood almost seven feet tall, and was dressed
only in boots and pants. His deep olive skin shone with a light skiff of
sweat and powerful muscles ripped beneath it. She became aroused
immediately, and hated herself for it...[and] the whiff of juice was
enough to arouse him as well. He looked down with an annoyed look as
his penis swelled to ten inches long and over two inches across. He
stuffed himself back into his pants and struggled away.
The officer remains horny, so a female orcish camp-follower -- a whore
-- is summoned to give him sexual satisfaction. If you read nothing else
in the story, read that part. It's at once fantastically realistic and
hilarious.
Of course the elven maid is found out, and deflowered and gang-banged,
waking up to find "Her nipples had been pierced and small chain links
installed. Orcish tattoos adorned her breasts, her thighs, her
arms...Well-crafted tattoos had been done on her face, a red strip over
each eyebrow, a red 'v' shape in the center of her forehead, white 'v's
under on each cheek, and a red stripe from the base of her chin to her
bottom lip." The last line is a kicker. I know it may not be very
progressive of me to enjoy rape/degradation tales, but as long as the
female enjoys the experience -- as a thrill rather than an affirmation of
her status -- I'm OK with them. It's certainly a healthier attitude than
the women not enjoying it all, or being disgusted by it.
Master Chris Story 50: Elizabeth's Adventure in Chicago [A]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 6/9/00
Author: Master Chris
Address: ferndoc@my-deja.com
Master Chris has written about 100 stories; I'm assuming most are BDSM
because of his name. They're all been posted recently by either the
author or a collector, so I'd thought I'd review one to get an idea of what
this author's output is like. If the other stories are like this one, I think
it's safe to assume the writer is a pretty talented one who knows his
stuff.
Gorgeous sub Elizabeth (aren't they all?) takes a plane trip to Chicago on
the instructions of her dom boyfriend, who's arranged a surprise for
her. Being a sub, she follows all instructions to the letter, beginning
with exposing herself on the jet. At the hotel, she puts on a blindfold
and is tied to the bed:
Liz felt Tom's hands on her wrists as she tried to
digest what he had just said. An examination?, she wondered, by
who? and what would they do? Her mind was a jumble as Tom
attached wrist straps to her and then pulled her hands wide
apart to attach to the corners of the bed. Tom lifted her hips
and pushed several doubled up pillows under her belly and then
had Liz pull her knees wide apart and forward so that she was
straddled on the pillows. More leather straps around her thighs
and ankles made sure she would be staying in position. The
effect of the pose was not lost on Elizabeth who knew that both
her bare pussy lips and her anus were now fully spread and
exposed. Her breasts hung below her so that just her nipples
were touching the bed. The tingling touch of the bedspread on
the sensitive nipples added to Liz's excitement.
Later comes anal play with toys.
This story didn't tell me anything I haven't read before, but it was very
well done, and should set a standard for consensual, slightly romantic
(the boyfriend calls her "Dearest Slave Liz") reading enjoyment.
A Concert Video [B+]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 6/5/00
Author: Matthew
Poster: Damien
Poster Address: anon3a9c@nyx10.nyx.net
I've found another genre of sex stories! It is the hanging or
autoasphyxiation tale. For those not in the know, asphyxiation during
sex supposedly enhances sexual pleasure. Lady Cyrrh would not know
about this, but according the poster "Over 200 people a year die playing
with asphyxia in the USA. That's not counting the rest of the world."
Apparently more than a few people dig the concept, and those who heed
the warnings and don't do it, write about it.
The story is a straightforward depiction of an imaginary event,
competently written, but plotless. At one of Madonna's concerts a fake
hanging with a volunteer from the audience goes wrong. The platform
collapses on top of the singer (justice is served) leaving the poor guy to
dangle and jerk. The narrator has access to the videotapes made of the
accident and tells the story to us as a voyeur, dwelling on the sexual
aspects.
If you want a depiction of someone being hanged, this is it. Though
honestly I am not sure it would be so dramatic -- in free-fall hangings
people usually die from broken necks, not being asphyxiated. And I
really doubt Madonna would have a fake hanging on stage; such tricks
belong to Marilyn Manson and Gwar, despite that in these post-
Columbine times, unfortunately, the whole concept of fake stage
violence seems to be on the way out. Still, if you want to see what the
fuss is about, read this.
Highjacked Sorority Initiation [A-]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 6/5/00
Author: Matthew
Poster: Damien
Poster Address: anon3a9c@nyx10.nyx.net
The given title of this story was "The Beginning of a Legend."
The narrator of this story is a frat boy at an unnamed college
somewhere in the midwest. He's pissed because his girlfriend Sandra ("a
perfect 10") isn't giving him any despite all the cash he's spent on her,
and is also planning on dumping him for a richer frat boy. She's the
rush coordinator of her sorority, so the narrator plans to get a revenge
by botching it up. The pledges are to follow directions on a series of
index cards posted at various places, so the narrator and his buddies
switch them out with their own. Naturally, their directions require the
gals to participate in a series of sexual encounters that increase in
intensity -- getting braless, getting spanked, getting naked, etc. The
stunts culminate in a sexual hoe-down in a barn where the gals are
ritually bathed and given enemas (shades of D/s) then:
Twelve of us got up and went to the girls and spread their legs. We gave
them some oral sex and then had our master of ceremonies explain
when the sister is ready it will be your turn to do it back. We got about
ever other girl and un-cuffed them and placed them between the legs of
another. After a while we switched them back. I was very surprised
nobody really objected. I guess this was the kind of stuff they expected
or wanted to happen.Now we went for the gold. Our master of
ceremonies said, "Our sisterhood unites us, but men are also most
agreeable companions." We have selected some prime examples of
manhood to give you pleasure tonight. When you get up tomorrow, you
and we shall be one of us. Then all of the guys went up and took a girl
and began fucking her.
Surprisingly, none of the pledges are put out by all this (even though
they've also been videotaped for future frat-boy entertainment)
describing it only as "a very exciting night."
This was a very readable story. The author handled a lot of things very
well, such as the mystified attitude of the pledges and how they
gradually get sucked into the explicitness because they genuinely think
their sisters are instructing them. The whole thing kept you buzzing
right along. The writing wasn't anything outstanding, but structure did
the trick -- the reader proceeds from card to card exactly as the pledges
do, while knowing the tricks the boys are coming up with behind their
backs. There are things to be said for a clever plot even in a porn story.
On the other hand, the story didn't try to be anything more than porn.
The girls were all perfect 10s and appropriately airheaded, little more
than packages of tits and ass, and the frat-boy attitude wore on me after
the while...the idea that females are bitches if they don't put out in
exchange for money spent on them...bitches for not being whores, I
suppose...and that sexual activity can only be tricked out of them, 'cos
they're all sorority golden girls and would never give it away for a mere
college man. And following that line of reasoning, that it's also OK to
laugh at them for being duped and also laugh at them for enjoying it.
There's something very 1980s about this, very Animal House -- that
college men and women fight an eternal sexual war -- and it's
annoying. But it's also what made the story arousing.
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